Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ37KKG21T2C2QCSK04B5BN

Run Details

Model:
Aion 3.0
Duration:
55.9s
Cost:
$0.017649
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked and the door swung inward. Rory stood barefoot on Eva's worn hardwood, a mug of tea going cold in one hand and a dog-eared copy of something medieval in the other. Ptolemy wound between her ankles and slipped past the threshold into the hallway, tail flicking with indifference. Lucien filled the doorframe. Charcoal suit, no crease out of place, ivory-headed cane tucked beneath one arm. His mismatched eyes caught the lamplight behind her — one amber, one black as the Channel at midnight. A bruise darkened his jaw, just below the left ear, partially hidden by the line of his jaw. "You're not Eva." "No." She didn't move aside. The flat's hallway smelled of old paper, cardamom, and the particular mustiness of a place where books had been piled too long. Behind her, every surface in the main room wore its coat of manuscripts and half-open scrolls. "May I come in?" The question hung between them like the steam from her forgotten cup. Three weeks. Twenty-one days since she'd walked out of his office on Chancery Lane without a word, without a note, without anything but the echo of the door pulling shut behind her. "It's Eva's flat." "I'm aware. She's in Glasgow until Thursday. Conference on runic variations in Northumbrian burial sites." His accent wrapped around the words, French vowels softening the consonants. "You're housesitting." "I'm cat-sitting." "Same difference." She studied the bruise. Someone had done more than punch him — the skin had split, then healed wrong. Supernatural work. Demonic, maybe, given what he was. Half of what he was. "Does it hurt?" "Throbs when I smile." "Then don't smile." Too late. The corner of his mouth had already turned up, and the bruise purpled against his pale skin, but he didn't wince. He never winced. That was part of the problem — the man absorbed punishment like a sponge took water, and then kept moving as though it hadn't happened. Rory stepped back. She didn't have to. The hallway was narrow enough that the gesture brought her close enough to catch his scent: gunpowder, rain, and something underneath that she'd spent three weeks trying to forget. Sandalwood and smoke. He entered. The flat swallowed him in its chaos — towers of texts leaned against the sofa, a scroll had unspooled across the kitchen counter, and Ptolemy had already claimed the only clear cushion on the armchair. Lucien navigated the mess with the grace of someone accustomed to navigating worse. "The Clavis Demonica." He paused by a pile near the window, one platinum eyebrow raised. "First edition?" "Eva's proud of it." "She should be. The illuminations alone are worth a year's rent." He didn't touch it. His fingers hovered, then withdrew. "You've been reading it." Rory set her mug on the only available square inch of counter. "Is there something you need, Lucien?" He turned. The amber eye caught her first, then the black one, and together they made her feel seen in a way that made her chest tight. Three weeks of silence, and here he stood in a dead woman's flat — well, not dead, just absent, which amounted to the same thing — looking at her as though he'd been counting the hours. "The Moreau job." "You said it was finished." "I said what I needed to say to keep you out of it." Ptolemy jumped from the armchair. Lucien took the seat, crossing one leg over the other, the cane resting against his thigh. He didn't relax — he never relaxed, not really — but something in his shoulders eased. "Sit down, Rory." "Don't tell me to sit down." "I'm asking." She remained standing. The kitchen doorway framed her, arms folded, the crescent scar on her left wrist pale against her skin. His gaze found it, lingered, moved on. "You left." The words came out quieter than he'd intended. She could tell because something shifted behind his expression, a tightening around the eyes that anyone else would have missed. "You left without a word." "What was I supposed to say?" "Anything. Something." He leaned forward, hands clasped between his knees. "You walked out of my office, past my secretary, down four flights of stairs, and into the rain. I watched you from the window. You didn't look back." "I never look back." "I know." A pause. "That's what frightened me." Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill, scattering a stack of index cards. Neither of them moved to pick them up. "The Moreau job," Rory said again. "What about it?" "The demon we bound — Veraxiel — he's loose. Someone broke the containment circle three nights ago. The signs point to someone with knowledge of Goetic arrays." Lucien's jaw tightened. "Someone who was in my office when I drew the original." The implication settled between them like a third presence. She'd been there. She'd watched him sketch the sigils, had asked questions about the geometry, had even suggested a modification to the northern quadrant that he'd adopted because it was elegant and she was clever. "You think I did it." "I think you could have." "Why would I?" "That's what I'm here to find out." Rory unfolded her arms. Her hands found the counter behind her, gripped it. The formica edge bit into her palms. "I was in Cardiff." "Visiting your father." "He needed help with a case. Research, translation, the usual." She met his eyes — one amber, one black, both unwavering. "I took the train Friday morning. I came back Tuesday. Your containment circle broke on Sunday night. I have receipts, witnesses, and the burnt offering my father's housekeeper left on the altar for Brigid that I couldn't avoid if I tried." Lucien exhaled. The sound carried more relief than he probably wanted to show. "I didn't want to believe it was you." "But you had to check." "But I had to check." He rose from the chair, and the movement brought him close enough that she could see the faint scar tissue where the bruise met his jaw. Old wound. Weeks old, maybe more. "Someone with your knowledge, your access — it had to be someone who'd seen the working." "Who else was there?" "Silas. But Silas can't draw a straight line, much less a Goetic array." Lucien's mouth twisted. "Eva, but she was in Glasgow by then. That leaves you, or someone who got to you." "No one got to me." "I know that now." The silence that followed had texture. Rough. Heavy. Like the moment before a storm breaks and the air goes still and electric. Rory's breath caught when he lifted his hand. His fingers brushed the edge of her jaw, light as a scroll page turning, and the touch sent something through her that she'd spent three weeks trying to bury. "You left," he said again. "You didn't ask me to stay." "I didn't know how." The confession cost him. She could see it in the way his jaw worked, the muscle tightening beneath the bruise. Lucien Moreau, who brokered information between demons and angels and everything in between, who spoke four languages and could lie in all of them — he hadn't known how to ask. "You could have called." "I did. Seven times. You blocked my number." "I needed space." "And now?" The question sat between them, fragile as old parchment. Ptolemy had settled on the windowsill, eyes closed, tail wrapped around his paws. Outside, Brick Lane hummed with the sound of late-night curry houses and the distant wail of an ambulance. Rory reached up. Her fingers found the bruise on his jaw, traced the edge of it with a touch so gentle he shuddered. Half-demon. Thirty-two years old. And still, a simple kindness undid him. "Now I need to know about Veraxiel. Everything. The binding, the containment, whoever broke it." She dropped her hand. "I need the original array, your notes, and access to whatever scrying tools Eva has stashed in the second bedroom." "That's not what I asked." "It's what I'm giving you." Lucien studied her face for something — forgiveness, maybe, or permission, or just the reassurance that this wasn't another ending. Whatever he found, it made him nod. "I have the notes in my car." "You parked on Brick Lane at midnight?" "I parked three streets over. The BMW attracts attention." Rory almost smiled. "The BMW or the driver?" "Both." He retrieved his cane from the chair, the ivory handle catching the light. At the door, he paused. "Rory." "I'm not going to run." "I wasn't going to ask that." He opened the door. The hallway beyond was dark and smelled of cooking spices from the curry house below. "I was going to say that your tea went cold." "Make me a fresh one when you get back." The door closed behind him. His footsteps echoed on the stairs — steady, even, unhurried. Rory pressed her back against the counter and let out a breath she hadn't realized she'd been holding. Ptolemy opened one eye. "Don't," she told the cat. He closed it again, entirely unconcerned, and Rory stood in the middle of Eva's cramped, book-filled flat and waited for a half-demon with a bruised jaw to bring her notes on a demon that someone had deliberately set loose.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"His accent wrapped around [around]"
1"Rory said again [again]"
2"he said again [again]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.203
leniency0.405
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.081
93.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"navigating"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"implication"
count1
6
word"unwavering"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"navigated"
2"navigating"
3"eyebrow"
4"silence"
5"implication"
6"unwavering"
7"electric"
8"traced"
9"footsteps"
10"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1550
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1059
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Channel1
Chancery1
Lane2
French1
Ptolemy6
Lucien8
Old1
Moreau1
Brick1
Rory10
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
places
0"Chancery"
1"Lane"
2"Brick"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1550
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences154
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean18.24
std17.49
cv0.959
sampleLengths
09
143
253
33
41
542
64
744
83
928
102
112
1232
133
144
153
1651
1739
1850
1917
204
2124
2218
2363
243
255
2613
2737
283
296
302
3128
3235
336
3438
354
368
3719
389
3941
4044
415
425
433
447
4520
464
473
4862
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"been piled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences154
ratio0.065
matches
0"His mismatched eyes caught the lamplight behind her — one amber, one black as the Channel at midnight."
1"Someone had done more than punch him — the skin had split, then healed wrong."
2"That was part of the problem — the man absorbed punishment like a sponge took water, and then kept moving as though it hadn't happened."
3"The flat swallowed him in its chaos — towers of texts leaned against the sofa, a scroll had unspooled across the kitchen counter, and Ptolemy had already claimed the only clear cushion on the armchair."
4"Three weeks of silence, and here he stood in a dead woman's flat — well, not dead, just absent, which amounted to the same thing — looking at her as though he'd been counting the hours."
5"He didn't relax — he never relaxed, not really — but something in his shoulders eased."
6"\"He needed help with a case. Research, translation, the usual.\" She met his eyes — one amber, one black, both unwavering."
7"Lucien Moreau, who brokered information between demons and angels and everything in between, who spoke four languages and could lie in all of them — he hadn't known how to ask."
8"Lucien studied her face for something — forgiveness, maybe, or permission, or just the reassurance that this wasn't another ending."
9"His footsteps echoed on the stairs — steady, even, unhurried."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1056
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03787878787878788
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006628787878787879
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean10.06
std8.98
cv0.892
sampleLengths
09
126
217
34
413
518
618
73
81
94
1022
1116
124
1312
142
1530
163
1726
182
192
202
214
2215
232
246
255
263
274
283
292
3021
313
3225
333
344
3529
363
372
3835
3913
4015
412
424
4315
445
454
4612
476
482
4925
55.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.35714285714285715
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners55
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences85
matches
0"His mismatched eyes caught the"
1"She didn't move aside."
2"His accent wrapped around the"
3"She studied the bruise."
4"He never winced."
5"She didn't have to."
6"He paused by a pile"
7"He didn't touch it"
8"His fingers hovered, then withdrew."
9"He didn't relax — he"
10"She remained standing."
11"His gaze found it, lingered,"
12"She could tell because something"
13"He leaned forward, hands clasped"
14"She'd been there."
15"She'd watched him sketch the"
16"Her hands found the counter"
17"She met his eyes —"
18"He rose from the chair,"
19"His fingers brushed the edge"
ratio0.341
12.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences85
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked and"
1"Rory stood barefoot on Eva's"
2"Ptolemy wound between her ankles"
3"Lucien filled the doorframe."
4"Charcoal suit, no crease out"
5"His mismatched eyes caught the"
6"A bruise darkened his jaw,"
7"She didn't move aside."
8"The flat's hallway smelled of"
9"The question hung between them"
10"His accent wrapped around the"
11"She studied the bruise."
12"Someone had done more than"
13"Half of what he was."
14"The corner of his mouth"
15"He never winced."
16"That was part of the"
17"Rory stepped back."
18"She didn't have to."
19"The hallway was narrow enough"
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The amber eye caught her first, then the black one, and together they made her feel seen in a way that made her chest tight."
1"Three weeks of silence, and here he stood in a dead woman's flat — well, not dead, just absent, which amounted to the same thing — looking at her as though he'd…"
2"Lucien Moreau, who brokered information between demons and angels and everything in between, who spoke four languages and could lie in all of them — he hadn't k…"
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He leaned, hands clasped between his knees"
1"He retrieved, the ivory handle catching the light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.041
leniency0.081
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.6054%