| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His accent wrapped around [around]" | | 1 | "Rory said again [again]" | | 2 | "he said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 74 | | tagDensity | 0.203 | | leniency | 0.405 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.081 | |
| 93.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1535 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.91% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1535 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "navigated" | | 2 | "navigating" | | 3 | "eyebrow" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "implication" | | 6 | "unwavering" | | 7 | "electric" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 154 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1550 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1059 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Channel | 1 | | Chancery | 1 | | Lane | 2 | | French | 1 | | Ptolemy | 6 | | Lucien | 8 | | Old | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Rory | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Chancery" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Brick" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1550 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 85 | | mean | 18.24 | | std | 17.49 | | cv | 0.959 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 63 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 38 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 44 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 62 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 154 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "His mismatched eyes caught the lamplight behind her — one amber, one black as the Channel at midnight." | | 1 | "Someone had done more than punch him — the skin had split, then healed wrong." | | 2 | "That was part of the problem — the man absorbed punishment like a sponge took water, and then kept moving as though it hadn't happened." | | 3 | "The flat swallowed him in its chaos — towers of texts leaned against the sofa, a scroll had unspooled across the kitchen counter, and Ptolemy had already claimed the only clear cushion on the armchair." | | 4 | "Three weeks of silence, and here he stood in a dead woman's flat — well, not dead, just absent, which amounted to the same thing — looking at her as though he'd been counting the hours." | | 5 | "He didn't relax — he never relaxed, not really — but something in his shoulders eased." | | 6 | "\"He needed help with a case. Research, translation, the usual.\" She met his eyes — one amber, one black, both unwavering." | | 7 | "Lucien Moreau, who brokered information between demons and angels and everything in between, who spoke four languages and could lie in all of them — he hadn't known how to ask." | | 8 | "Lucien studied her face for something — forgiveness, maybe, or permission, or just the reassurance that this wasn't another ending." | | 9 | "His footsteps echoed on the stairs — steady, even, unhurried." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1056 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.03787878787878788 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006628787878787879 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 154 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 154 | | mean | 10.06 | | std | 8.98 | | cv | 0.892 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 55.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.35714285714285715 | | totalSentences | 154 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.53% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "His mismatched eyes caught the" | | 1 | "She didn't move aside." | | 2 | "His accent wrapped around the" | | 3 | "She studied the bruise." | | 4 | "He never winced." | | 5 | "She didn't have to." | | 6 | "He paused by a pile" | | 7 | "He didn't touch it" | | 8 | "His fingers hovered, then withdrew." | | 9 | "He didn't relax — he" | | 10 | "She remained standing." | | 11 | "His gaze found it, lingered," | | 12 | "She could tell because something" | | 13 | "He leaned forward, hands clasped" | | 14 | "She'd been there." | | 15 | "She'd watched him sketch the" | | 16 | "Her hands found the counter" | | 17 | "She met his eyes —" | | 18 | "He rose from the chair," | | 19 | "His fingers brushed the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.341 | |
| 12.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt clicked and" | | 1 | "Rory stood barefoot on Eva's" | | 2 | "Ptolemy wound between her ankles" | | 3 | "Lucien filled the doorframe." | | 4 | "Charcoal suit, no crease out" | | 5 | "His mismatched eyes caught the" | | 6 | "A bruise darkened his jaw," | | 7 | "She didn't move aside." | | 8 | "The flat's hallway smelled of" | | 9 | "The question hung between them" | | 10 | "His accent wrapped around the" | | 11 | "She studied the bruise." | | 12 | "Someone had done more than" | | 13 | "Half of what he was." | | 14 | "The corner of his mouth" | | 15 | "He never winced." | | 16 | "That was part of the" | | 17 | "Rory stepped back." | | 18 | "She didn't have to." | | 19 | "The hallway was narrow enough" |
| | ratio | 0.894 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber eye caught her first, then the black one, and together they made her feel seen in a way that made her chest tight." | | 1 | "Three weeks of silence, and here he stood in a dead woman's flat — well, not dead, just absent, which amounted to the same thing — looking at her as though he'd…" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau, who brokered information between demons and angels and everything in between, who spoke four languages and could lie in all of them — he hadn't k…" |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned, hands clasped between his knees" | | 1 | "He retrieved, the ivory handle catching the light" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 74 | | tagDensity | 0.041 | | leniency | 0.081 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |