Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ386V21BX92T7EPGVXF6V6

Run Details

Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.004409
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory was wiping down the bar when the door opened. The November wind slipped in before the man did, carrying the wet smell of London rain and exhaust. He shook an umbrella, collapsing it with practiced efficiency, and looked up. She knew the shape of him before she saw his face. The way he held himself. The slight tilt of his head when he scanned a room. Danny Pierce. He'd put on weight. Not much—fifteen pounds, maybe twenty—but it settled around his middle like a man who'd traded youth for comfort. His hair was shorter, neater, the curls she remembered tamed into something corporate and acceptable. He wore a navy overcoat that cost more than her monthly rent. Their eyes met. Recognition dawned slow, like morning light through fog. Then his face cracked open with a smile that didn't quite reach his eyes. "Rory Carter." She set down the glass. "Danny." Seven years. Seven years since she'd seen him, since she'd left Cardiff dragging her broken heart and busted illusions behind her. Danny had been there for some of it. Not the worst parts. He'd moved to London before Evan showed his true colors, before she became a ghost in her own life. He crossed to the bar, sliding onto a stool with the ease of someone who'd sat in a thousand bars before this one. "I don't believe it. I was just thinking about you last week." "Good thoughts?" "Always." He gestured at the bottles behind her. "What's good here?" "Silas keeps a decent whiskey. The Guinness is proper—he has it shipped from Dublin." "Whiskey, then. Neat." She poured it, set it in front of him. He didn't pick it up right away. Just looked at her, his eyes tracing the changes she knew were there—the sharper angles of her face, the shadows beneath her eyes that never quite faded. "You look different," he said. "So do you." He laughed. It came out flat, a sound without real humor. "Yeah. I guess I do." The bar was quiet for a Tuesday. Silas had gone upstairs an hour ago, claiming he needed to balance books but really wanting to escape the damp that settled in his knee. A couple sat in the corner, heads bent together, speaking in whispers. A man nursed a pint at the other end of the bar, lost in his phone. Rory wiped a spot that didn't need wiping. "How long have you been in London?" "Five years now. I work in Canary Wharf." He said it like an apology. "Asset management." "You were going to be a painter." His jaw tightened. Just a flicker, there and gone. "People change." "Do they?" "Some of us couldn't afford not to." He picked up the whiskey, finally, and took a sip. Closed his eyes. "God, that's good. I forgot what real whiskey tastes like." She watched him. The Danny she remembered wore paint-stained jeans and lived on instant noodles. He spent his last ten pounds on canvas and swore he'd rather starve than work in an office. He talked about Paris like it was a religion—the galleries, the light, the way the city breathed art through its streets. This man in front of her wore a wedding ring. Gold. Simple. His hands were clean, nails trimmed, no trace of oil paint or turpentine. "When did you get married?" "Three years ago. Her name's Sophie. She's a solicitor." He swirled the whiskey. "We have a daughter. Elara. She's eighteen months." "Congratulations." "Thanks." He said it like the word tasted wrong. "What about you? Still running from life?" The question landed harder than he probably meant it to. She let it sit, let the silence stretch. "I'm not running," she said finally. "I'm living it." "Same Rory. Always with the sharp answers." "You're the one who walked in here looking like you stepped out of a catalogue, Danny. Don't pretend you didn't know what you were giving up when you put on that suit." He set down the glass. The sound was sharper than she intended. "You think I wanted this? You think I woke up one day and decided to bury everything I was?" "I think you made choices." "I made choices because I had to. My mother got sick. Remember my mother? Lung cancer. Treatment cost money. Rent cost money. Food cost money. Painting doesn't pay for any of that." Rory felt the words settle into her chest, heavy and uncomfortable. She hadn't known. She'd been gone by then, already in London, already licking her wounds and building her walls. She hadn't kept in touch. "I didn't know," she said. "No. You didn't." He finished the whiskey in one swallow. "I'm not blaming you. We all got lost in our own lives. But don't sit there and judge me for surviving." She poured him another, pushed it across the bar. "I'm not judging." "You are. I can see it in your eyes. You're looking at me like I'm a ghost of someone you used to know." "Aren't you?" He didn't answer. He picked up the second glass, held it without drinking. "I still paint," he said quietly. "In the garage. Late at night, after Sophie and Elara are asleep. I set up a canvas and I try to remember what it felt like to believe it mattered." "Does it?" "Painting? Or believing?" "Both." He took a drink. "I don't know anymore." The door opened, letting in another gust of cold air. A group of young professionals stumbled in, laughing, shaking rain from their coats. Rory nodded at them, signaled she'd be over in a minute. Danny looked at her hands, at the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. "I heard about Evan." She stiffened. "From who?" "Word gets around. Small world, Cardiff. Someone saw you at the train station, looking like you'd been through a war. Said you had a black eye." "People talk too much." "He hurt you." It wasn't a question. She didn't answer. "I should have been there," Danny said. "I should have... I don't know. Done something. But I was so wrapped up in my own shit, my mother dying, my job, my... I didn't even call." "You didn't know." "I should have known. I should have felt it. We were friends, Rory. Real friends. You and me against the world, remember?" She remembered. She remembered nights on the roof of his flat, passing a bottle of cheap wine between them, talking about everything and nothing. She remembered him holding her hair back when she drank too much. She remembered the way he looked at her sometimes, like she was something precious, something to be protected. "What happened to us?" she asked. "Life." He set down the empty glass. "Life happened. And we let it." The group at the other end of the bar called for service. Rory glanced at them, then back at Danny. His eyes were red at the edges. "I miss you," he said. "I miss who I was when I knew you." "Who was that?" "Someone who believed things could be beautiful. That art mattered. That love was worth the risk." He stood, pulled out his wallet, left a twenty on the bar. "I don't know that person anymore." "Maybe he's still in there. Somewhere." Danny smiled. It was sad and knowing and full of years. "Maybe. But I don't have the map to find him." He turned to leave. The group was getting louder, demanding drinks, their laughter sharp and thoughtless. Rory watched him walk toward the door, his shoulders squared, his walk the careful gait of a man carrying responsibilities he never wanted. "Danny." He stopped, hand on the door handle. "Her name's Elara, you said?" He turned. "Yeah." "It's beautiful. She's lucky to have you." "You don't even know me anymore, Rory. Not really." "I know you paint in the garage. I know you still believe it matters, even if you say you don't. I know you left a twenty for a drink that cost twelve. You're still in there." He stood in the doorway, rain spattering the pavement behind him, the neon sign casting green shadows across his face. For a moment, he looked like the boy she'd known—the one with paint under his nails and stars in his eyes. "I'm glad you got out," he said. "I'm glad you're okay." He walked out. The door swung shut. The rain swallowed him. Rory stood behind the bar, the glass in her hand warm from her grip, and wondered if she'd ever see him again. And if she did, whether either of them would recognize the people they'd become.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.225
leniency0.451
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.056
93.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1447
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1447
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"weight"
2"tracing"
3"flicker"
4"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences98
matches
0"was sad"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1441
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount888
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Danny"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Danny"
discoveredNames
November1
London3
Pierce1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Tuesday1
Closed1
Danny7
Paris1
Rory7
persons
0"Pierce"
1"Evan"
2"Danny"
3"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Paris"
globalScore1
windowScore1
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
1"looked like the boy she'd known—the one w"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1441
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean17.57
std15.4
cv0.876
sampleLengths
010
130
227
32
449
53
622
72
86
952
1035
112
1211
1314
143
1543
165
173
1816
1960
2015
2116
227
2311
242
2530
2654
2725
285
2921
301
3116
3218
339
347
3532
3631
375
3832
3935
405
4131
4212
4323
442
4513
4636
472
483
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"been gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was wiping"
1"was getting"
68.16% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences153
ratio0.026
matches
0"Not much—fifteen pounds, maybe twenty—but it settled around his middle like a man who'd traded youth for comfort."
1"Just looked at her, his eyes tracing the changes she knew were there—the sharper angles of her face, the shadows beneath her eyes that never quite faded."
2"He talked about Paris like it was a religion—the galleries, the light, the way the city breathed art through its streets."
3"For a moment, he looked like the boy she'd known—the one with paint under his nails and stars in his eyes."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount895
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.027932960893854747
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0067039106145251395
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean9.42
std7.62
cv0.809
sampleLengths
010
118
212
311
45
511
62
74
818
915
1012
113
128
1314
142
155
161
172
1819
198
204
2119
2223
2312
242
258
263
2714
283
299
307
3127
325
333
342
359
365
377
3825
3912
4016
418
427
4314
442
457
463
476
482
492
48.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.35947712418300654
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"Then his face cracked open"
1"Just looked at her, his"
2"Just a flicker, there and"
ratio0.036
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences83
matches
0"He shook an umbrella, collapsing"
1"She knew the shape of"
2"He'd put on weight."
3"His hair was shorter, neater,"
4"He wore a navy overcoat"
5"Their eyes met."
6"She set down the glass."
7"He'd moved to London before"
8"He crossed to the bar,"
9"He gestured at the bottles"
10"She poured it, set it"
11"He didn't pick it up"
12"It came out flat, a"
13"He said it like an"
14"His jaw tightened."
15"He picked up the whiskey,"
16"She watched him."
17"He spent his last ten"
18"He talked about Paris like"
19"His hands were clean, nails"
ratio0.566
14.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences83
matches
0"Rory was wiping down the"
1"The November wind slipped in"
2"He shook an umbrella, collapsing"
3"She knew the shape of"
4"The way he held himself."
5"The slight tilt of his"
6"He'd put on weight."
7"His hair was shorter, neater,"
8"He wore a navy overcoat"
9"Their eyes met."
10"Recognition dawned slow, like morning"
11"She set down the glass."
12"Danny had been there for"
13"He'd moved to London before"
14"He crossed to the bar,"
15"He gestured at the bottles"
16"She poured it, set it"
17"He didn't pick it up"
18"It came out flat, a"
19"The bar was quiet for"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.141
leniency0.282
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.1457%