Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ393PNCQDQWJXC74WCYZ7Y

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Model:
Aion 3.0
Duration:
1m 1s
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the earth like broken teeth, their surfaces worn smooth by centuries of rain and wind. Rory counted seven of them arranged in a loose circle, each one taller than she was, their bark still living — oak trees turned to stone, or stone shaped into trees, she couldn't tell which. "This is it?" Nyx's shadow-form rippled at the edges, their violet eyes scanning the stones with something that might have been recognition. The whisper that served as their voice carried a weight of old memory. "Older than the park. Older than the city." Rory adjusted the strap of her bag and touched the Heartstone pendant through her shirt. The gem had been warm against her sternum since they'd entered Richmond Park, a steady pulse like a second heartbeat. Now, standing at the threshold of the stones, that warmth faded to cool stillness. Whatever portal the pendant responded to, this wasn't it. "So what, we just walk through?" "Wouldn't be much of a hidden grove if the entrance required a key." Nyx drifted toward the stones, their form becoming less defined as they passed between two of the ancient oaks. The shadow that was Nyx folded into the shadows between the stones and vanished. Rory's breath caught. She counted three heartbeats before their whisper returned from somewhere she couldn't see. "Come through. The grove welcomes you." Rory squared her shoulders and stepped between the stones. The world inverted. Richmond Park's December grey vanished. She stood in a clearing bathed in light that had no source — a diffuse golden glow that seemed to emanate from the air itself. The sky above was the warm amber of a late summer evening, though the sun hung nowhere in view. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in drifts of colour she couldn't name: blues deeper than her eyes, reds that shaded into violet, pale golds that shimmered at the edges of her vision. The air tasted of honey and something older, something green and living. "That's not possible." She turned a full circle. The standing stones stood behind her, but from this side they were trees again — massive oaks, their trunks wider than her armspan, their canopies forming a living wall around the clearing. They moved without wind. Their branches shifted and reached, not threatening, but curious. One tendril of oak lowered toward her, and she caught the scent of rain on old wood. Nyx solidified beside her, their shadow-form drawing together into the familiar humanoid silhouette. Even solid, they didn't quite reflect the golden light — it bent around them, leaving their edges soft. "The grove responds to visitors. It's deciding what to show you." "Deciding?" "Everything here is alive. The stones, the trees, the flowers. The ground beneath your feet." Nyx paused, their violet gaze fixed on something beyond Rory's shoulder. "We are not alone." Rory turned. The woman stood at the clearing's edge where the wildflowers grew thickest. Silver hair fell to her waist, pale against a dress of layered moss and spider silk that shifted colour as Rory watched — green to grey to the pale blue of twilight. Her feet rested on the flowers without bending a single stem. When she walked toward them, the wildflowers parted and closed behind her without leaving a trace. No footprints. Not one. "You brought the pendant." The woman's voice carried the weight of centuries, each word measured and careful. Her pale lavender eyes studied Rory with an intensity that made her skin prickle. "And the blade. Good. You listened, even if you did not understand." "Isolde." Nyx's whisper held something like respect. Or wariness. Both. The Half-Fae seer inclined her head. Up close, her face held an ageless quality — smooth skin, sharp cheekbones, ears that tapered to delicate points beneath the fall of silver hair. She could have been twenty or two hundred. She was neither. "The Shadow knows this place. You do not." Isolde circled Rory, and the flowers bent away from her passing. "You feel the grove's welcome. You also feel its warning." Rory's hand went to her chest again. The pendant had gone cold against her skin. Not the absence of warmth — an active cold, like pressing her palm to winter glass. "The Heartstone. It's cold." "It sleeps here. The grove is not of Hel, not of the realms the pendant knows." Isolde stopped in front of her, head tilted. "The blade, however—" Rory reached behind her and drew the Fae dagger from where she'd tucked it through her belt. The moonsilver caught the sourceless golden light and glowed faintly, a luminescence that reminded her of moonlight on snow. The metal bit into her fingers with cold that had nothing to do with temperature. "That blade remembers the Courts. It remembers being forged." Isolde's fingers hovered over the flat of the blade without touching it. "It remembers me." "You made it?" "I forged the intent. Others shaped the metal." Isolde withdrew her hand, and something like pain crossed her ageless face before smoothing away. "It was taken from me when I was exiled. That it found its way to you is... not coincidence." "Nothing here is." Nyx moved to the grove's edge, their form flickering between solid and shadow as they passed through a shaft of amber light. "The pendant, the blade, the Shadow who was once Aldric. You gathered us." "I gathered nothing. I merely pointed." Isolde turned and began walking toward the grove's centre, where the wildflowers grew in a spiral pattern that seemed to shift when Rory wasn't looking directly at it. "If you would know why, follow." Rory fell into step behind the seer. The ground felt strange beneath her trainers — not solid, not soft, something between. Each step sank a centimetre and rebounded, as if the earth itself breathed. The wildflowers released scent when she brushed them: first honey, then lavender, then something sharp and clean like pine after rain. The spiral led them deeper into the clearing. The trees — the living oaks that had been stone — pressed closer, their branches forming a canopy overhead that filtered the amber light into dappled patterns on the ground. Rory heard birdsong, though she saw no birds. The sound came from everywhere and nowhere, melodies that didn't repeat, that seemed to respond to their passage. "The grove sings to visitors." Isolde walked ahead, her feet leaving no mark on the earth. "It has not sung for three decades. Not since the last seeker came seeking answers he did not want." "What happened to him?" "He found his answers. The grove does not judge. It only reveals." The centre of the spiral opened into a small round space, perhaps four metres across. In its middle stood a pool of water no larger than a dinner plate, perfectly still, perfectly clear. The amber sky reflected in its surface, but when Rory looked closer, she saw stars in that reflection — not the sky above, but a night sky full of constellations she didn't recognise. "That's not our sky." "It is a sky. Whether it is yours depends on which world claims you." Isolde knelt beside the pool, her silver hair pooling on the flowers without crushing them. "Look. Tell me what you see." Rory knelt. The Fae blade rested cold against her hip. The pendant lay still and silent against her chest. She leaned over the water and saw— Herself. But not herself. The reflection showed her standing in a doorway made of light, the Heartstone pendant blazing crimson at her throat, the Fae blade in her hand slick with something dark. Her reflection's eyes were not blue. They were gold, the amber of this sky, and they held no recognition. "That's not—" "The grove shows what may come. Not what will." Isolde's voice came from very close. "What you see is a path. Paths can be walked or abandoned." "That's supposed to be reassuring?" Nyx crouched on her other side, their shadow-form rippling. "I see something different." "What?" "A door. A threshold. The same door you stand before in your vision." Their violet eyes dimmed. "And behind it, something waits that should not exist. Something that wears a face I knew when I was Aldric." Rory looked at the pool again. The reflection had changed. The golden-eyed version of herself had turned away, and beyond her, in the depths of the image, she saw a door. Just a door, standing alone in darkness, its surface carved with symbols that made her eyes ache. The pendant blazed hot against her chest. She gasped and lurched back. The vision shattered — the pool showed only water, clear and still, reflecting the amber sky. "The Heartstone." Nyx's whisper sharpened. "It wakes." Rory pressed her hand to her chest. The gem pulsed against her palm, that steady heat returning, stronger than before. Stronger than it had been in Richmond Park. Stronger than it had been since an unknown hand placed it in her letterbox three weeks ago. "You felt that?" Isolde rose, her expression guarded. "The pendant responds to Hel. If it wakes here, something from Hel has touched this grove." "That's not possible. The Veil—" "The Veil thins." Nyx stood, their form pulling together with an effort that spoke of fear. "The solstice approaches. And this grove exists between worlds. If anything could breach the boundary..." "Then it already has." Isolde looked at the standing stones — the oaks — at the grove's edge. The trees had gone still. Their branches no longer reached and swayed. The birdsong had stopped. "The grove has stopped singing."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1589
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1589
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count4
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"carried the weight"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"depths"
count1
12
word"lurched"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"whisper"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
4"warmth"
5"shimmered"
6"familiar"
7"silk"
8"carried the weight"
9"measured"
10"intensity"
11"depths"
12"lurched"
13"shattered"
14"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
99.13% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1603
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1220
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Richmond3
Park3
Nyx10
December1
Rory18
Half-Fae1
Fae4
Isolde10
Herself1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Herself"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"December"
globalScore0.762
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"glow that seemed to emanate from the air itself"
1"quite reflect the golden light — it bent around them, leaving their edges soft"
2"something like respect"
3"something like pain crossed her ageless face"
4"pattern that seemed to shift when Rory wasn't looking directly at it"
5"something between"
75.23% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.248
wordCount1603
matches
0"not threatening, but curious"
1"not the sky above, but a night sky full of constellations she didn't recognise"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean26.72
std21.39
cv0.801
sampleLengths
055
13
232
38
458
56
613
749
86
99
103
1180
1212
133
1467
1531
1611
171
1830
192
2071
214
2243
2310
2442
2529
2631
274
2827
2951
3024
313
3242
3338
3440
3555
3664
3735
384
3912
4066
414
4235
4326
4452
452
4627
475
4813
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs193
matches
0"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences132
ratio0.098
matches
0"Rory counted seven of them arranged in a loose circle, each one taller than she was, their bark still living — oak trees turned to stone, or stone shaped into trees, she couldn't tell which."
1"She stood in a clearing bathed in light that had no source — a diffuse golden glow that seemed to emanate from the air itself."
2"The standing stones stood behind her, but from this side they were trees again — massive oaks, their trunks wider than her armspan, their canopies forming a living wall around the clearing."
3"Even solid, they didn't quite reflect the golden light — it bent around them, leaving their edges soft."
4"Silver hair fell to her waist, pale against a dress of layered moss and spider silk that shifted colour as Rory watched — green to grey to the pale blue of twilight."
5"Up close, her face held an ageless quality — smooth skin, sharp cheekbones, ears that tapered to delicate points beneath the fall of silver hair."
6"Not the absence of warmth — an active cold, like pressing her palm to winter glass."
7"The ground felt strange beneath her trainers — not solid, not soft, something between."
8"The trees — the living oaks that had been stone — pressed closer, their branches forming a canopy overhead that filtered the amber light into dappled patterns on the ground."
9"The amber sky reflected in its surface, but when Rory looked closer, she saw stars in that reflection — not the sky above, but a night sky full of constellations she didn't recognise."
10"She leaned over the water and saw—"
11"The vision shattered — the pool showed only water, clear and still, reflecting the amber sky."
12"\"Then it already has.\" Isolde looked at the standing stones — the oaks — at the grove's edge."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1211
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.023121387283236993
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004128819157720892
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean12.14
std8.32
cv0.685
sampleLengths
020
135
23
319
413
58
615
720
814
99
106
1113
1219
1314
143
1513
166
179
183
195
2025
2119
2231
2312
243
255
2632
274
289
2917
3013
3118
3211
331
3426
354
362
3712
3832
3911
4016
412
422
4317
4414
4512
467
472
481
496
51.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3560606060606061
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners47
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Just a door, standing alone"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences91
matches
0"She counted three heartbeats before"
1"She stood in a clearing"
2"She turned a full circle."
3"They moved without wind."
4"Their branches shifted and reached,"
5"Her feet rested on the"
6"Her pale lavender eyes studied"
7"She could have been twenty"
8"She was neither."
9"She leaned over the water"
10"Her reflection's eyes were not"
11"They were gold, the amber"
12"Their violet eyes dimmed"
13"She gasped and lurched back."
14"Their branches no longer reached"
ratio0.165
25.93% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences91
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Rory counted seven of them"
2"Nyx's shadow-form rippled at the"
3"The whisper that served as"
4"Rory adjusted the strap of"
5"The gem had been warm"
6"Whatever portal the pendant responded"
7"Nyx drifted toward the stones,"
8"The shadow that was Nyx"
9"Rory's breath caught."
10"She counted three heartbeats before"
11"Rory squared her shoulders and"
12"The world inverted."
13"Richmond Park's December grey vanished."
14"She stood in a clearing"
15"The sky above was the"
16"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
17"The air tasted of honey"
18"She turned a full circle."
19"The standing stones stood behind"
ratio0.868
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Now, standing at the threshold"
1"Even solid, they didn't quite"
ratio0.022
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Nyx's shadow-form rippled at the edges, their violet eyes scanning the stones with something that might have been recognition."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in drifts of colour she couldn't name: blues deeper than her eyes, reds that shaded into violet, pale golds that shimmered at th…"
2"Silver hair fell to her waist, pale against a dress of layered moss and spider silk that shifted colour as Rory watched — green to grey to the pale blue of twil…"
3"Her pale lavender eyes studied Rory with an intensity that made her skin prickle."
4"Up close, her face held an ageless quality — smooth skin, sharp cheekbones, ears that tapered to delicate points beneath the fall of silver hair."
5"The moonsilver caught the sourceless golden light and glowed faintly, a luminescence that reminded her of moonlight on snow."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Isolde walked, her feet leaving no mark on the earth"
1"Isolde knelt, her silver hair pooling on the flowers without crushing them"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Isolde's voice (isolde voice)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.02
leniency0.039
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.039
79.9002%