Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ3AWB94EXGH3CM3QF8S2XM

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Model:
Aion 3.0
Duration:
48.7s
Cost:
$0.017988
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the earth like broken teeth, ancient oak transformed into something far older than wood. Rory traced her fingers along the nearest one, bark giving way to smooth stone beneath her touch, warm despite the December chill. The Heartstone pendant against her collarbone pulsed once, twice, a heartbeat finding its rhythm. "This is the place?" Nyx coalesced from the shadow of the stones, their violet eyes catching what little moonlight filtered through the bare branches above. They tilted their head, listening to something Rory couldn't hear. "The boundary thins here. I can taste it." "Comforting." Rory stepped between two of the stones. The air changed. Not temperature, not wind, but something fundamental shifted in the space between one footfall and the next. She blinked, and the park was gone. The clearing spread before them, bathed in light that belonged to no sun she recognized. Soft, diffuse, it seemed to emanate from the wildflowers themselves, the air thick with the sweetness of jasmine and something else, something that tasted silver on her tongue. Flowers carpeted the ground in spirals, their petals shifting colours as she watched, blue to violet to white and back again. No wind moved them. They swayed on their own, breathing. "This isn't Richmond Park anymore." Nyx moved past her, their form more solid here, the shadows that made up their body dense and defined. They reached for one of the flowers, their fingers passing through it. The blossom didn't wilt. It turned toward their touch the way a plant turns toward light. "The Grove exists between." Nyx's whisper carried despite the open air. "Between your world and theirs. I remember this place. Or places like it." "You've been here before?" "Not here. But the architecture of such places remains constant." Rory crouched, her delivery jacket scraping against nothing as she knelt on ground that wasn't quite ground. The soil beneath the flowers felt warm, almost alive, and when she pressed her palm flat she could have sworn she felt a pulse. The pendant flared warm against her chest. She pulled it out, the deep crimson gem catching that sourceless light, its faint inner glow stronger now, a heartbeat in stone. "The pendant's reacting." "To the proximity of the Fae realm. The Veil is thin here. This place sits in the wound." She stood, wiping soil from her hands. Her palms came away clean. The dirt didn't stick. She looked closer at the ground beneath her feet, the spirals of flowers, and noticed the pattern wasn't random. The spirals wound inward, toward the centre of the clearing, where the wildflowers grew densest and the light pooled brightest. They followed the spiral. The air thickened as they walked, not unpleasant, but heavy with scent and something else, a pressure against the skin the way humidity presses before a storm. Rory became aware of sounds, or the absence of them. No traffic. No sirens. No distant rumble of London's arteries pumping. Instead, a hum lived beneath the silence, a single sustained note that existed at the edge of hearing. She couldn't tell if it came from the ground or the air or somewhere inside her own skull. "Does time move differently here?" Nyx paused, their shadow-form rippling. "You've heard the stories." "Isolde mentioned it. Or implied it. Hard to tell with her." "The Fae don't measure time the way mortals do. An hour here might be minutes there. Or days." Nyx turned their head, those violet eyes scanning the treeline. "The standing stones mark the boundary, but the boundary moves. We could walk out and find a week has passed. Or a minute." Rory checked her phone out of habit. Dead screen. No signal, no power, the device as inert as a stone. "Great." The spiral led them deeper into the clearing. The flowers grew larger here, some blossoms the size of her palm, petals translucent enough to see the veins running through them. Light pulsed along those veins in slow, rhythmic waves. She knelt beside one, a bloom the colour of pale lavender, and watched the light travel through it. The Fae blade at her hip radiated cold through its sheath, the moonsilver reacting to its native environment. She drew the blade. The metal caught the light and threw it back altered, luminescent in a way that had nothing to do with reflection. The leaf-shaped dagger hummed in her grip, a frequency she felt in her bones. "It's louder here." "It remembers," Nyx said. "The blade was forged in a place like this. Perhaps this very place. The Fae don't craft weapons often. When they do, the weapon remembers its birth." Rory turned the blade in her hand. The edge looked keen enough to split shadow from substance. The cold of the metal bit into her palm, sharp and clean, a sensation so distinct from the warm, living air of the Grove that it grounded her. The spiral tightened. The flowers here grew to her waist, their stalks thick and fibrous, their petals enormous. Some had closed around something, shapes moving inside the translucent blooms. She watched one bud pulse and shift, the silhouette within curling and uncurling. She stepped back. "What's inside them?" "Memory. The Fae don't write. They store." "That's—" A sound cut through the hum. Footsteps. Not hers, not Nyx's, who left no footprints and barely touched the ground. These were deliberate, measured, the tread of someone who walked with purpose. And they left no mark on the earth either. Rory turned, the blade raised before she thought about it. Silver hair caught the light first, a cascade that fell to the waist of a woman who appeared from between two flowering stalks the way a flame appears when struck. Pale lavender eyes found Rory's blue ones, and the woman smiled without warmth or cold, a smile that existed for its own sake. "You carry my gift well." Isolde. The Seer. The half-Fae exile who had pressed the blade into Rory's hand three weeks ago in the back room of Silas' bar, speaking in riddles about doors and the people who walk through them. Rory lowered the blade but didn't sheathe it. "You said to come when the pendant pulsed." "And it pulses." "It's been pulsing for two days." "Two days." Isolde tilted her head, the way Nyx did, the gesture uncomfortably similar. "And how long has it been since you entered the stones?" "Ten minutes. Maybe fifteen." Isolde's smile didn't change. "It has been three hours. The Grove breathes, and time bends with its breath. You'll learn the rhythm." Nyx shifted beside Rory, their form rippling. "The Veil weakens as the solstice approaches. You asked us here for a reason." "I ask nothing. I invite. What follows from invitation is choice." Rory looked at the Seer, at the Grove, at the flowers that stored memories and the light that came from nowhere. The pendant pulsed against her chest, the blade hummed in her hand, and somewhere in the distance, deeper in the Grove where the spirals converged, something else pulsed in answer.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1181
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1181
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count5
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"footfall"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"almost alive"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"pumping"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"measured"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"chill"
2"pulsed"
3"comforting"
4"footfall"
5"whisper"
6"almost alive"
7"pulse"
8"pumping"
9"silence"
10"scanning"
11"rhythmic"
12"footsteps"
13"measured"
14"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1181
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount910
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
December1
Heartstone1
Rory13
London1
Fae2
Grove3
Nyx9
Seer2
Isolde3
persons
0"December"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Grove"
2"Seer"
globalScore0.786
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite ground"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.54
wordCount1181
matches
0"Not temperature, not wind, but something fundamental shifted in the space between one footf"
1"not wind, but something fundamental shifted in the space between one footf"
2"not unpleasant, but heavy with scent"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean25.13
std23.17
cv0.922
sampleLengths
055
14
231
38
41
534
674
75
847
924
104
1110
1270
133
1418
1555
164
1784
185
199
2011
2151
2220
231
2475
2539
263
2731
2845
2945
303
317
321
3341
3410
3553
365
3736
3816
393
406
4125
424
4322
4421
4511
4651
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences103
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount890
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.016853932584269662
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011235955056179776
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean11.47
std8.1
cv0.707
sampleLengths
019
122
214
34
421
510
68
71
87
93
1017
117
1215
1328
1421
154
166
175
1819
1912
204
2112
2211
2313
244
2510
2617
2724
287
2922
303
3118
327
335
344
3519
3620
374
3827
3910
402
412
427
4318
4418
455
465
474
4811
4928
44.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.33980582524271846
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners35
49.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Instead, a hum lived beneath"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences68
matches
0"They tilted their head, listening"
1"She blinked, and the park"
2"They swayed on their own,"
3"They reached for one of"
4"It turned toward their touch"
5"She pulled it out, the"
6"She stood, wiping soil from"
7"Her palms came away clean."
8"She looked closer at the"
9"They followed the spiral."
10"She couldn't tell if it"
11"She knelt beside one, a"
12"She drew the blade."
13"She watched one bud pulse"
14"She stepped back."
ratio0.221
40.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences68
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Rory traced her fingers along"
2"The Heartstone pendant against her"
3"Nyx coalesced from the shadow"
4"They tilted their head, listening"
5"Rory stepped between two of"
6"The air changed."
7"She blinked, and the park"
8"The clearing spread before them,"
9"Flowers carpeted the ground in"
10"They swayed on their own,"
11"Nyx moved past her, their"
12"They reached for one of"
13"The blossom didn't wilt."
14"It turned toward their touch"
15"Nyx's whisper carried despite the"
16"Rory crouched, her delivery jacket"
17"The soil beneath the flowers"
18"The pendant flared warm against"
19"She pulled it out, the"
ratio0.838
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Soft, diffuse, it seemed to emanate from the wildflowers themselves, the air thick with the sweetness of jasmine and something else, something that tasted silve…"
1"Instead, a hum lived beneath the silence, a single sustained note that existed at the edge of hearing."
2"Pale lavender eyes found Rory's blue ones, and the woman smiled without warmth or cold, a smile that existed for its own sake."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx turned, those violet eyes scanning the treeline"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.031
leniency0.063
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.0186%