Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ3MFV7Z6Q2YK0NNDQ9CR30

Run Details

Model:
Aion 3.0
Duration:
32.7s
Cost:
$0.013599
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the earth like broken teeth. Rory passed between two of the ancient oaks, their bark twisted into shapes that resembled faces caught mid-scream. She'd come because the pendant told her to. Three days now it had burned against her sternum, that deep crimson gem pulsing with a rhythm too steady to be her own heartbeat. Yu-Fei had noticed her wince when she reached for a delivery bag, had told her to take the night off. Eva had texted twice, worried. Rory ignored both of them and followed the warmth. The grove opened before her. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colours she couldn't name — not quite purple, not quite blue, something between that existed only in dreams. Richmond Park sat on the other side of those stones, joggers and dog walkers and the distant hum of London traffic. She could still see the lights of the city through the trees, could still hear a car horn blare somewhere beyond the boundary. But inside the grove, those sounds came through wrong. The horn stretched into a wail. A dog's bark became a child's cry. Then silence swallowed both. Rory touched the pendant. It throbbed against her fingertips, warm as a living thing. "Right then." Her voice sounded small. "What am I looking for?" The grove didn't answer. But the wildflowers turned toward her, all at once, like sunflowers following the sun. She took a step back. The flowers returned to their original positions, petals swaying in a breeze she couldn't feel. Rory pressed her palm flat against her chest, feeling the Heartstone's pulse through her shirt. The silver chain had grown warm too, warm enough that she could feel it without touching it. She'd read about the grove in her father's old journals — the ones she'd stolen from Brendan Carter's study before she left Cardiff. He'd written about the standing stones, about the way time behaved strangely within their circle. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside, he'd noted in his precise barrister's hand. Do not linger. Rory checked her phone. 11:47 PM. The signal had died the moment she stepped between the stones. The moon hung fat and low above the clearing, casting light that turned the wildflowers silver and the shadows deep. She could see the full extent of the grove — perhaps fifty metres across, circular, bounded by those twisted oak stones on every side. In the centre, a pool of water reflected the moon without rippling. Perfectly still. Too still. Wind moved through the clearing — she could feel it now, cold against her neck, stirring her black hair — but the water didn't so much as shiver. Rory approached the pool. The pendant blazed hot against her skin. She gasped and grabbed the gem through her shirt, half-expecting it to burn her. It didn't. The crimson glow intensified, painting her fingers red. The water reflected her face back at her. Blue eyes, pale skin, the crescent scar on her wrist visible where her sleeve had ridden up. Normal. Herself. Then the reflection smiled. Rory wasn't smiling. She stumbled backward, her heel catching on a root. The ground caught her, but the image stayed — her reflection in the still water, grinning with teeth that looked too numerous, too sharp. The smile stretched wider than any human mouth could stretch. She scrambled to her feet and put distance between herself and the pool. Twenty metres. Thirty. The pendant's heat faded as she moved away, settling back into that steady, watchful pulse. The reflection in the water returned to normal. Just her face. Just the moon. But when she looked away, she caught something at the edge of her vision. Movement. A shape stepping behind one of the standing stones. Rory turned. Nothing. Just the oaks and their tortured bark faces. "Hello?" Her voice echoed. That was wrong — it shouldn't echo in an open clearing. The sound bounced between the stones, multiplying, each repetition softer and somehow more wrong. By the seventh echo, it didn't sound like her voice anymore. It sounded like someone else asking the same question, someone with a deeper register, someone standing much closer than she was. The wildflowers turned toward her again. Rory's breath came fast and shallow. She forced herself to stop, to think. She'd come here because the pendant led her, because something was wrong and the Heartstone wanted her here. Brendan's journals mentioned the grove as a place of power, a threshold between worlds. If there was a reason she'd been pulled here tonight, she needed to find it. She needed to not run. The temperature dropped. Not gradually — all at once, like someone had opened a door to winter. Her breath clouded the air. The wildflowers didn't wilt. They frosted over, crystal patterns spreading across petals that had no business blooming in November. And then the sounds began. Not from any direction. From everywhere. A whisper that wasn't quite words, a language she almost understood. It scraped against her skull, pulling at memories she didn't have — places she'd never been, faces she didn't recognise, a name that tasted like ash when it formed on her tongue. "Malphora." The word left her mouth. She hadn't meant to speak. The pendant exploded with heat. Rory cried out, clutching at the gem, and this time it did burn — a sharp, sudden pain that spread from her palm up her arm. The crescent scar on her wrist glowed white. The pain vanished as quickly as it came. The pool in the centre of the grove began to move. Not a ripple. Not a disturbance from wind or stone. The water rose, defying gravity, forming a column that twisted as it climbed. The moonlight caught it and for one heartbeat Rory saw something inside — a shape, human-sized, suspended in the water with its arms outstretched and its head thrown back. The column collapsed. Water slapped against the pool's surface, spraying droplets across the frosted wildflowers. Rory stood frozen. The pendant pulsed against her chest. Her phone showed 11:48 PM. One minute. One minute inside the grove and she'd already seen the pool smile at her, heard her voice echo wrong, spoken a name she didn't know. The whispering returned. Closer now. The language resolved into English, syllables sharpening. "Aurora." Her name. Her actual name. Not Rory, not Carter. The name on her birth certificate that she'd only ever heard in her mother's voice and in court documents. "Aurora Carter." She turned in a slow circle. The standing stones watched her with their carved faces. The wildflowers remained frozen, their petals white with frost. "You're not alone, are you?" The question left her before she could stop it. The pendant answered — one sharp pulse, hot and bright, as if confirming what she already knew. Something moved behind the nearest oak stone. Not at the edge of her vision this time. Directly in front of her. A shadow peeled away from the bark, darker than the darkness around it, and stood in the moonlight. It had no face. It had no face, but it was looking at her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1184
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1184
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count3
4
word"could feel"
count2
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"echo"
count3
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"silence"
2"throbbed"
3"pulse"
4"could feel"
5"echoed"
6"echo"
7"crystal"
8"whisper"
9"pulsed"
10"resolved"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1196
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.87% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1179
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
London1
Heartstone2
Brendan2
Carter2
Cardiff1
November1
Rory13
English1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Brendan"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"November"
4"English"
globalScore0.949
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"something between that existed only in dreams"
1"not quite purple, not quite blue, something between that existed only in dreams"
2"sounded like someone else asking the same"
3"quite words, a language she almost understood"
4"tasted like ash when it formed on her ton"
5"as if confirming what she already knew"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1196
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean24.92
std21.08
cv0.846
sampleLengths
010
184
272
326
414
511
618
75
847
957
1017
1158
1230
1325
1410
1527
164
173
1843
1931
2014
2124
2211
231
2460
256
2660
275
2841
295
3049
311
3210
3347
3411
3552
3615
3741
3812
391
4028
412
4224
435
4426
4539
464
4710
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"been pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs195
matches
0"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences128
ratio0.086
matches
0"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colours she couldn't name — not quite purple, not quite blue, something between that existed only in dreams."
1"She'd read about the grove in her father's old journals — the ones she'd stolen from Brendan Carter's study before she left Cardiff."
2"She could see the full extent of the grove — perhaps fifty metres across, circular, bounded by those twisted oak stones on every side."
3"Wind moved through the clearing — she could feel it now, cold against her neck, stirring her black hair — but the water didn't so much as shiver."
4"The ground caught her, but the image stayed — her reflection in the still water, grinning with teeth that looked too numerous, too sharp."
5"That was wrong — it shouldn't echo in an open clearing."
6"Not gradually — all at once, like someone had opened a door to winter."
7"It scraped against her skull, pulling at memories she didn't have — places she'd never been, faces she didn't recognise, a name that tasted like ash when it formed on her tongue."
8"Rory cried out, clutching at the gem, and this time it did burn — a sharp, sudden pain that spread from her palm up her arm."
9"The moonlight caught it and for one heartbeat Rory saw something inside — a shape, human-sized, suspended in the water with its arms outstretched and its head thrown back."
10"The pendant answered — one sharp pulse, hot and bright, as if confirming what she already knew."
99.13% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1171
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.04099060631938514
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005977796754910333
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean9.34
std7.2
cv0.77
sampleLengths
010
118
28
324
420
55
69
75
823
921
1023
119
126
137
144
154
1610
176
185
194
2014
215
2215
2315
2417
2523
2615
2716
283
294
302
3111
3220
3324
3412
352
362
3728
384
397
4014
412
428
438
4417
451
461
474
483
499
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.375
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences107
matches
0"Then silence swallowed both."
1"Then the reflection smiled."
2"Just her face."
3"Just the moon."
4"Just the oaks and their"
5"Directly in front of her."
ratio0.056
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences107
matches
0"She'd come because the pendant"
1"She could still see the"
2"It throbbed against her fingertips,"
3"Her voice sounded small"
4"She took a step back."
5"She'd read about the grove"
6"He'd written about the standing"
7"She could see the full"
8"She gasped and grabbed the"
9"She stumbled backward, her heel"
10"She scrambled to her feet"
11"Her voice echoed."
12"It sounded like someone else"
13"She forced herself to stop,"
14"She'd come here because the"
15"She needed to not run."
16"Her breath clouded the air."
17"They frosted over, crystal patterns"
18"It scraped against her skull,"
19"She hadn't meant to speak."
ratio0.234
67.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences107
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Rory passed between two of"
2"She'd come because the pendant"
3"Yu-Fei had noticed her wince"
4"Eva had texted twice, worried."
5"Rory ignored both of them"
6"The grove opened before her."
7"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
8"Richmond Park sat on the"
9"She could still see the"
10"The horn stretched into a"
11"A dog's bark became a"
12"Rory touched the pendant."
13"It throbbed against her fingertips,"
14"Her voice sounded small"
15"The grove didn't answer."
16"She took a step back."
17"The flowers returned to their"
18"Rory pressed her palm flat"
19"The silver chain had grown"
ratio0.785
46.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"If there was a reason"
ratio0.009
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rory passed between two of the ancient oaks, their bark twisted into shapes that resembled faces caught mid-scream."
1"The moon hung fat and low above the clearing, casting light that turned the wildflowers silver and the shadows deep."
2"The ground caught her, but the image stayed — her reflection in the still water, grinning with teeth that looked too numerous, too sharp."
3"They frosted over, crystal patterns spreading across petals that had no business blooming in November."
4"It scraped against her skull, pulling at memories she didn't have — places she'd never been, faces she didn't recognise, a name that tasted like ash when it for…"
5"The pendant answered — one sharp pulse, hot and bright, as if confirming what she already knew."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.5255%