Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ3NAP4YEF4S3B6TPXGNT35

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Duration:
1m 51s
Cost:
$0.008098
Provider:
AionLabs

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three sharp knocks rattled the door of the Brick Lane flat. Rory set down her takeaway menu and crossed the cramped living room. Through the peephole, a distorted figure resolved into tailored charcoal wool and slicked-back platinum hair. *You have got to be joking.* She didn't open it. "Go away." "I need five minutes, *ma chérie*." Lucien's voice filtered through the wood, smooth as aged cognac. "I've got no interest in whatever you're selling." "Then consider it a gift." A pause. "I've found Evan." Her hand stilled on the deadbolt. *Bastard.* He knew exactly which nerve to press. The chain scraped as she slid it free. She cracked the door wide enough to see him, keeping her shoulder braced against the frame. Lucien looked precisely as he always did: impeccable in that effortless French way, like he'd stepped out of a tailored suit advertisement rather than her guilty memories. The amber eye caught the hallway's dim light. The black one swallowed it. "Let me guess. He's dead. You're here to collect payment." She kept her voice flat. "Alive, unfortunately. And no." He leaned on his ivory-handled cane. "May I come in? The hallway's developing a rather aggressive draught." "It's a three-minute walk to the tube station. Talk and walk." "Or we could have this conversation inside, where Mrs. Patel isn't recording it for her podcast." He nodded toward the flat across the hall. "She's upgraded her equipment. High-definition audio, according to her grandson." Rory bit back a curse. The last thing she needed was her private mess broadcast to true crime enthusiasts. She stepped aside. Lucien glided past her into the flat. That familiar scent hit her — sandalwood and ozone, like the air before a thunderstorm. Her chest tightened, unwanted heat blooming beneath her ribs. He surveyed the cluttered living room with that assessing gaze. Books stacked on every surface. Research notes pinned to the wall. The worn Persian rug she'd found at a charity shop. "You've redecorated." "I rearranged the chaos." "Indeed." He set his cane against the bookshelf, within reach but not threatening. "Evan's been hiring. Someone with particular skills. They happen to share a mutual acquaintance of mine." "Cut the cloak-and-dagger nonsense, Lucien." "Someone's been tracking you. Following the breadcrumbs you left behind. Cardiff, Bristol, London." His mismatched eyes pinned her. "They're very good at finding people who don't want to be found." Ice crawled down her spine. "How long do I have?" "A week. Perhaps less." He reached into his jacket pocket and withdrew a slim folder. "I have files, locations, patterns. Things that would take days to gather on your own." "What's the price?" "A conversation." He held the folder out. "A real one. No walls." "You're joking." "I never joke about leverage." His lips curved. "You want the information. I want your time. An hour, that's all. We talk about what happened. Why I left." "How about you leave again?" she snapped. "That seems to be your speciality." "I deserve that." "You deserve worse." But she didn't slam the door in his face. Her hand reached for the folder on its own accord. "One hour. *One.* Say the wrong thing and I'm gone." "Agreed." His voice went softer, rougher at the edges. "I've missed you, Aurora." "Don't." "You asked for honesty." "I asked for information." She clutched the folder to her chest. "You can keep your sentiments." His hand moved, slow and deliberate, and brushed a strand of hair from her cheek. Her breath caught. His fingers lingered, tracing down her jawline with that familiar tenderness. "You're still angry with me." "You left without a word. Without explanation. I woke up and you were gone." Her voice cracked despite herself. "Don't pretend that's nothing." "I was protecting you." "From what?" "From me." He stepped closer, and the heat of him seeped through her shirt. "My father's world. The *things* I had to do. You were the only decent thing in my life, and I was dragging you into filth." "So you decided for me." "I made a mistake." His thumb brushed her lower lip. "I've been making them ever since." She should pull away. Should tell him to leave and take his complicated history with him. But her body remembered this — the way he looked at her like she was the only solid thing in his fractured existence. "You're doing it again," she whispered. "Doing what?" "Deciding for me." A sharp knock cut through the moment. Three raps. Faster than before. Louder. Lucien's expression shifted, all softness evaporating into cold calculation. "That's not Mrs. Patel." Rory turned toward the door. Through the peephole, a man in a dark coat stood with his back to her flat. He was speaking into his phone, but she caught the reflection in the hallway mirror: the phone camera pointed directly at her door. "He's photographing the flat." Lucien was already moving, his cane in hand. "Time's up. We leave through the window." "There's a fire escape." "How many stories?" "Three." "That'll have to do." He grabbed her wrist — that familiar grip, strong and sure. "Your choice, Aurora. You can stay here and find out what he's planning, or you can trust me. Just this once." The man in the hallway turned. His eyes met hers through the peephole. He smiled. "Window it is." Rory grabbed her bag and followed Lucien into the bedroom, heart hammering as she unlatched the fire escape. Behind them, something heavy slammed against the front door.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.633
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount912
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount912
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"resolved"
count1
1
word"effortless"
count1
2
word"the last thing"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count3
4
word"down her spine"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"tenderness"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"resolved"
1"effortless"
2"the last thing"
3"familiar"
4"down her spine"
5"tracing"
6"tenderness"
7"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords11
totalWords915
ratio0.012
matches
0"You have got to be joking."
1"ma chérie"
2"Bastard."
3"One."
4"things"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount538
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
French1
Rory4
Persian1
Ice1
Lucien6
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ice"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"French"
globalScore0.942
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount915
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean15.25
std12.12
cv0.795
sampleLengths
011
127
26
36
416
58
610
714
824
940
1015
1121
1211
1334
1419
153
1631
1733
184
1929
205
2130
2210
2330
243
2512
262
2728
2813
293
3032
3113
321
334
3416
3529
365
3723
384
392
4039
415
4216
4339
446
452
463
4713
4813
4944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
51.85% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs90
matches
0"was speaking"
1"was already moving"
59.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences103
ratio0.029
matches
0"That familiar scent hit her — sandalwood and ozone, like the air before a thunderstorm."
1"But her body remembered this — the way he looked at her like she was the only solid thing in his fractured existence."
2"\"That'll have to do.\" He grabbed her wrist — that familiar grip, strong and sure."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount537
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.020484171322160148
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0074487895716946
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean8.88
std6
cv0.675
sampleLengths
011
112
215
36
44
52
616
78
87
93
106
118
128
1316
1427
158
165
1715
1810
1911
2011
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2210
235
2414
253
267
2715
289
2910
305
316
3210
332
344
3513
3616
375
3818
3912
405
415
4215
4315
443
457
465
472
488
4920
70.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.46601941747572817
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences57
matches
0"*You have got to be"
1"She didn't open it."
2"Her hand stilled on the"
3"She cracked the door wide"
4"She kept her voice flat"
5"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
6"He nodded toward the flat"
7"She stepped aside."
8"Her chest tightened, unwanted heat"
9"He surveyed the cluttered living"
10"He set his cane against"
11"His mismatched eyes pinned her"
12"He reached into his jacket"
13"He held the folder out"
14"His lips curved"
15"Her hand reached for the"
16"His voice went softer, rougher"
17"She clutched the folder to"
18"His hand moved, slow and"
19"Her breath caught."
ratio0.491
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences57
matches
0"Rory set down her takeaway"
1"*You have got to be"
2"She didn't open it."
3"Lucien's voice filtered through the"
4"Her hand stilled on the"
5"*Bastard.* He knew exactly which"
6"The chain scraped as she"
7"She cracked the door wide"
8"Lucien looked precisely as he"
9"The amber eye caught the"
10"The black one swallowed it."
11"She kept her voice flat"
12"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
13"He nodded toward the flat"
14"Rory bit back a curse."
15"The last thing she needed"
16"She stepped aside."
17"Lucien glided past her into"
18"That familiar scent hit her"
19"Her chest tightened, unwanted heat"
ratio0.842
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory grabbed, heart hammering as she unlatched the fire escape"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.033
leniency0.067
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.067
81.7318%