| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1523 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1523 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "streaming" | | 4 | "framework" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 147 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 152 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1513 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.89% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1449 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 18 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Wardour | 1 | | Street | 2 | | Old | 2 | | Compton | 1 | | Empty | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Rain | 3 | | Three | 4 | | Things | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Rain" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Wardour" | | 3 | "Street" | | 4 | "Old" | | 5 | "Compton" | | 6 | "Three" |
| | globalScore | 0.879 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite track" | | 1 | "seemed deeper than they should have been" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.661 | | wordCount | 1513 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the sickly fluorescent of maintenance crews, but something warmer" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 34.39 | | std | 19.35 | | cv | 0.563 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 53 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 70 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 65 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 57 | | 40 | 49 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 22 |
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| 98.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "been green" | | 1 | "been given" | | 2 | "were meant" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 266 | | matches | | 0 | "were going" | | 1 | "was hunting" | | 2 | "were walking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 152 | | ratio | 0.072 | | matches | | 0 | "A figure emerged—hood pulled low, moving with purpose." | | 1 | "When she emerged onto Old Compton Street, the suspect was still visible—a dark shape against the blur of taxi headlights and restaurant signage." | | 2 | "She rounded the corner and found—" | | 3 | "The suspect hadn't vanished—they'd gone underground." | | 4 | "The tunnel opened into what she recognized immediately—an abandoned Tube station." | | 5 | "Beyond them, the tunnel continued—but someone had hung fabric across the entrance." | | 6 | "Not damp the way cloth should be in a tunnel—something else." | | 7 | "Stalls lined either side of a narrow corridor cut through the darkness—tables draped in cloth, their surfaces covered with objects Quinn's mind struggled to categorize." | | 8 | "More people emerged from the shadows—figures in heavy coats, faces obscured, watching her with expressions she couldn't read." | | 9 | "Not holstered it—lowered it." | | 10 | "Of the question he'd asked her the night before he died—whether she believed some doors were meant to stay closed." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1464 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.020491803278688523 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00273224043715847 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 152 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 152 | | mean | 9.95 | | std | 6.77 | | cv | 0.68 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 61.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.40789473684210525 | | totalSentences | 152 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 50.51% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard it." | | 1 | "Somewhere in the dark, water" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "She counted to three and" | | 1 | "Her shoes struck the wet" | | 2 | "Her hands gripped wet iron." | | 3 | "She landed in a crouch" | | 4 | "She matched the pace." | | 5 | "Her fingers flexed at her" | | 6 | "Her boots slapped against wet" | | 7 | "She rounded the corner and" | | 8 | "Her hand moved to the" | | 9 | "She scanned the alley from" | | 10 | "She moved toward it, rain" | | 11 | "She lifted the grate with" | | 12 | "She looked back at the" | | 13 | "Her radio sat heavy in" | | 14 | "She'd seen things she couldn't" | | 15 | "She couldn't let this one" | | 16 | "She descended rung by rung," | | 17 | "She moved forward along the" | | 18 | "Her feet found the gaps" | | 19 | "She approached the curtain and" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 77.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 101 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her" | | 1 | "The worn leather watch on" | | 2 | "The door swung open." | | 3 | "A figure emerged—hood pulled low," | | 4 | "This was someone who knew" | | 5 | "The figure glanced left, then" | | 6 | "She counted to three and" | | 7 | "Her shoes struck the wet" | | 8 | "The figure ahead maintained a" | | 9 | "Quinn kept half a block" | | 10 | "The rain worked in her" | | 11 | "Nobody looked up in a" | | 12 | "Nobody made eye contact." | | 13 | "The suspect's dark jacket blended" | | 14 | "Quinn adjusted her angle, cutting" | | 15 | "Her hands gripped wet iron." | | 16 | "She landed in a crouch" | | 17 | "Quinn's breath came steady, controlled." | | 18 | "The suspect picked up speed." | | 19 | "She matched the pace." |
| | ratio | 0.765 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.17% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Things that made her partner's death look less like an accident and more like something that had been waiting for him." | | 1 | "Something that flickered like firelight and moved against the tiled walls in patterns she couldn't quite track." | | 2 | "Her feet found the gaps between broken tiles, avoiding the puddles that would announce her presence." | | 3 | "Glass bottles filled with liquids that shifted color as she watched." | | 4 | "A woman sat behind one table, her face half in shadow, weighing something on a brass scale that looked older than the tunnel itself." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |