Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ3Y1T3T20DN1C2DJ72XCC7

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
She had walked this path a hundred times in daylight. Rory knew the turnoff — a gap between two rhododendron bushes that looked like a dead end until you pushed through the branches. The deer track beyond wound through brambles and bracken before opening into the clearing the locals called the Fae Grove. She'd come here as a child, dared by schoolmates to step inside the stone circle and prove she wasn't scared. She'd never come at night. The pendant lay warm against her sternum, a steady pulse of heat that had grown insistent as she crossed Richmond Park. The moon hung low and full, casting the park in shades of silver and black. Streetlamps petered out a quarter mile back. The last bench sat empty. The last jogger had passed her twenty minutes ago, earbuds in, eyes fixed on the path ahead. He hadn't looked at her. She pushed through the rhododendrons. The branches scraped her cheeks. The leaves were wet — not with dew but something thicker, tacky. She wiped her face and her fingers came away clean. The sensation lingered, like the memory of stickiness. The deer track was narrower than she remembered. Brambles had grown across it, thorny tendrils catching at her jeans. She stepped over them, ducked under a low-hanging branch, and emerged into the clearing. The Grove was wrong. That was her first thought, immediate and visceral, before she could reason herself out of it. The standing stones rose in their familiar circle — seven oaks twisted into rough pillars, their bark grey and smooth as river stones. Wildflowers covered the ground in a carpet she remembered as white and blue. At night they looked black, except for the ones that caught the moonlight and glowed phosphorescent green. She counted seven stones. Then she counted again. Seven, like always. But when she looked away and back, she could have sworn there were eight. The pendant flared hot against her chest. She pressed her palm to it, feeling the thrum of energy beneath the silver. Whatever had called her here, it was close. She took a step into the clearing. The grass crunched. Not the soft give of living turf — the brittle snap of frost. She looked down and her boots stood on grass that was grey and crystalline, each blade coated in rime that glittered in the moonlight. The wildflowers around her feet were frozen solid, their petals shattering as she brushed past them. The air had been mild when she left the flat. Now her breath fogged in front of her face. Something moved at the edge of her vision. She snapped her head to the right. One of the standing stones stood in stark silhouette, its surface smooth and uninterrupted. Nothing crouched behind it. Nothing clung to its shadow. But she had seen something — a flicker of movement, pale and quick, too fast for her eyes to track. She held her breath and listened. The Grove was silent. Not the quiet of night, but the silence of a held breath. No wind rustled the leaves. No insects chirred in the grass. The distant hum of London traffic had vanished, swallowed by something that pressed against her eardrums like cotton wool. She took another step. The frozen grass broke beneath her boot with a sound like cracking ice. She felt it through the sole — the snap of individual blades, each one a small sharp death. The pendant burned now, close to painful, and she slipped a finger beneath the chain to lift it away from her skin. The gem was glowing. A deep crimson light pulsed from within the heartstone, casting red shadows across her palm. She'd seen it glow before, faintly, when she passed certain alleys in Soho. But never like this. Never with a pulse that matched her heartbeat. She looked up. The moon was wrong. It hung in the same place, full and silver, but the shadows it cast didn't match. Her silhouette stretched east while the stones cast their shadows west. She turned, following the direction of the moonlight, and found herself facing a gap between two stones that didn't exist before. The circle had an eighth stone now. It stood at the northern edge, shorter than the others, its surface darker, almost black. It hadn't been there a moment ago. She was certain of it. The heat from the pendant surged, and the stone pulsed in response — a ripple of blackness across its surface, like oil sliding over water. Rory took a step back. The grass crunched. She took another. The sound that came from behind her was not a crunch. It was a whisper, soft and sibilant, formed from syllables that had no business in a human throat. She spun, fists raised, heart hammering so hard she felt it in her temples. Nothing. The clearing was empty. The stones stood in their circle, seven now, the eighth gone as if it had never been. The wildflowers swayed in a breeze she couldn't feel. The moon cast shadows that all pointed the same direction. She was alone. But she wasn't. The certainty settled into her bones like cold water. She could feel it in the weight of the air, the pressure against her skin. Something stood behind the stone to her left. Something watched from the gap between the oaks. Something breathed in rhythm with the pulse of the heartstone against her chest. She didn't turn around. She didn't run. She stood in the centre of the Fae Grove, frozen grass cracking beneath her boots, and waited for whatever had called her here to show itself. The whisper came again, closer now, brushing against her ear like a lover's breath. She felt the warmth of it on her neck, the ghost of lips against her skin. The words meant nothing — a language she didn't know, sounds that belonged to a mouth with too many teeth — She squeezed her eyes shut. *It's not real. It's not real. It's not —* When she opened them, the eighth stone was back. It stood directly in front of her, close enough to touch. Close enough that she could see the veins of darker black running through the obsidian smoothness of its surface. Close enough that she could see the shape within it — a figure, trapped in the stone, its features blurred by the darkness that surrounded it. The figure moved. One hand pressed against the inner surface of the stone, palm flat, fingers splayed. The stone rippled like water. The hand pushed through. Rory's breath caught in her throat
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1094
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1094
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"crystalline"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"familiar"
2"crystalline"
3"stark"
4"flicker"
5"silence"
6"pulsed"
7"whisper"
8"could feel"
9"weight"
10"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords9
totalWords1104
ratio0.008
matches
0"It's not real. It's not real. It's not —"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1104
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.36
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove4
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Soho1
Rory3
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"London"
5"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a dead end until you pushed t"
18.84% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.812
wordCount1104
matches
0"not with dew but something thicker, tacky"
1"Not the quiet of night, but the silence of a held breath"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean22.53
std21.2
cv0.941
sampleLengths
010
163
25
370
45
535
633
74
869
925
1029
117
123
1353
1419
158
1650
176
1846
194
2053
214
2240
233
244
2548
2634
2725
285
293
303
3111
3232
331
3440
353
363
3753
384
393
4026
4151
425
439
449
4556
463
4723
486
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was glowing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences106
ratio0.094
matches
0"Rory knew the turnoff — a gap between two rhododendron bushes that looked like a dead end until you pushed through the branches."
1"The leaves were wet — not with dew but something thicker, tacky."
2"The standing stones rose in their familiar circle — seven oaks twisted into rough pillars, their bark grey and smooth as river stones."
3"Not the soft give of living turf — the brittle snap of frost."
4"But she had seen something — a flicker of movement, pale and quick, too fast for her eyes to track."
5"She felt it through the sole — the snap of individual blades, each one a small sharp death."
6"The heat from the pendant surged, and the stone pulsed in response — a ripple of blackness across its surface, like oil sliding over water."
7"The words meant nothing — a language she didn't know, sounds that belonged to a mouth with too many teeth —"
8"It's not —*"
9"Close enough that she could see the shape within it — a figure, trapped in the stone, its features blurred by the darkness that surrounded it."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1095
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay warm against her"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.0182648401826484
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018264840182648401
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean10.42
std6.46
cv0.62
sampleLengths
010
123
220
320
45
521
615
77
85
917
105
115
125
1312
1410
158
168
1711
1814
194
2016
2123
2213
2317
244
254
263
2714
287
2914
308
317
323
3313
3424
3516
3610
379
388
397
4014
414
425
4320
446
454
4612
475
486
4919
30.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.2358490566037736
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners25
31.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"Then she counted again."
ratio0.01
79.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences105
matches
0"She had walked this path"
1"She'd come here as a"
2"She'd never come at night."
3"He hadn't looked at her."
4"She pushed through the rhododendrons."
5"She wiped her face and"
6"She stepped over them, ducked"
7"She counted seven stones."
8"She pressed her palm to"
9"She took a step into"
10"She looked down and her"
11"She snapped her head to"
12"She held her breath and"
13"She took another step."
14"She felt it through the"
15"She'd seen it glow before,"
16"She looked up."
17"It hung in the same"
18"Her silhouette stretched east while"
19"She turned, following the direction"
ratio0.352
45.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences105
matches
0"She had walked this path"
1"Rory knew the turnoff —"
2"The deer track beyond wound"
3"She'd come here as a"
4"She'd never come at night."
5"The pendant lay warm against"
6"The moon hung low and"
7"Streetlamps petered out a quarter"
8"The last bench sat empty."
9"The last jogger had passed"
10"He hadn't looked at her."
11"She pushed through the rhododendrons."
12"The branches scraped her cheeks."
13"The leaves were wet —"
14"She wiped her face and"
15"The sensation lingered, like the"
16"The deer track was narrower"
17"Brambles had grown across it,"
18"She stepped over them, ducked"
19"The Grove was wrong."
ratio0.829
47.62% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"Now her breath fogged in"
ratio0.01
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The pendant lay warm against her sternum, a steady pulse of heat that had grown insistent as she crossed Richmond Park."
1"At night they looked black, except for the ones that caught the moonlight and glowed phosphorescent green."
2"She looked down and her boots stood on grass that was grey and crystalline, each blade coated in rime that glittered in the moonlight."
3"She turned, following the direction of the moonlight, and found herself facing a gap between two stones that didn't exist before."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.1438%