Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ3Z9AQNYTEVVQ2N9BCQWYG

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.003624
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobblestones, each droplet catching the amber glow of streetlamps before shattering against stone. Harlow Quinn's boots slapped the wet pavement as she rounded the corner, her breath coming in measured bursts despite eighteen years of doing this dance. The figure ahead was just a shadow cutting through the light, a fleeting shape that knew these alleys the way she knew evidence bags and interview rooms. "Stop! Metropolitan Police!" The words were empty ritual. Nobody running through Soho at half past midnight with a face like a wanted poster stopped for words. Her suspect—Cormac, the name came to her between footfalls—glanced back, rain streaming off the brim of his cap. Young face, scared eyes, the kind of fear that made people do stupid things. Like running into the maze of alleys behind Old Compton Street. Quinn followed, her coat clinging to her shoulders, water trickling past her collar. The leather watch on her left wrist was probably ruined. She didn't care. Three months of surveillance, of watching the comings and goings at that bar, of building a case brick by brick. She wasn't about to lose him now. He vaulted a metal barrier, landing hard on the other side. She followed, her body moving on autopilot, every joint protesting the impact but obeying. The alley opened onto a wider street, and for a moment, she thought he'd cut left toward the main road, maybe lose himself in the crowd of club-goers braving the weather. Instead, he stopped. Quinn pulled up, her hand going to the radio at her shoulder. He was looking at something she couldn't see, his head tilted like a dog catching a high-frequency sound. Then he moved again, not toward the clubs or the bright lights of the main thoroughfare, but toward a doorway set into the brickwork. A doorway she'd passed a hundred times without noticing, its arch filled with shadow deeper than the night around it. "Hey!" She was running again, closing the distance. "Cormac! There's nowhere to go!" He didn't look back. He vanished into that darkness, swallowed whole. Quinn reached the doorway and stopped. The air changed here—cooler, older, carrying a smell of wet earth and something metallic. The rain didn't seem to touch the threshold, as if the darkness itself was pushing back against the weather. She pulled her flashlight from her belt, clicked it on, and aimed the beam into the space beyond. A staircase descended. Stone steps worn smooth by generations of feet, spiraling down into a darkness that didn't quite behave like ordinary darkness. Her light should have reached the bottom, should have shown her every corner and crack. Instead, it pooled and scattered, absorbed by the shadows in a way that felt almost deliberate. The radio crackled. "Quinn, what's your twenty? We've lost visual." She lifted it to her mouth. "Suspect entered a subway access at the junction of—" She paused, looking up at the street sign. The letters seemed to swim, refusing to resolve into something she could read. "—I'm not sure. Sending coordinates now." "Copy that. Hold position until backup arrives." Her thumb hovered over the transmit button. Five minutes. Backup in five minutes. The suspect would be long gone, swallowed by whatever network of tunnels lay beneath her feet. Three months of work, dissolving into the dark. But the darkness hummed. It wasn't a sound so much as a pressure, a vibration she felt in her teeth. The steps called to her, promised answers to questions she hadn't known she was asking. She thought of Morris. Of the way he'd looked at her in his final moment, his hand reaching for something she couldn't see. The case file had called it an unexplained cardiac event. She'd called it bullshit then, and she called it bullshit now. "Quinn? Did you copy? Hold position." She clicked the radio off. The stairs curled down for what felt like a mile but was probably only three stories. The stone gave way to older brick, the brick to rough-hewn rock shot through with veins of something that glittered when she swept her light across it. The air grew warmer, thicker, carrying a cacophony of smells—incense and sweat and copper and something floral she couldn't identify. The tunnel opened into a cavern. Quinn stopped at the edge of it, her rational mind trying to process what her eyes were showing her. It was a market. That was the only word for it. Stalls and carts and tables arranged in a chaotic spiral, lit by lanterns that burned with flames of green and blue and deep, pulsing red. The ceiling arched overhead, lost in shadow, but she could hear water dripping somewhere, and the rumble of something that might have been a train or might have been entirely different. People moved through the aisles. Some looked like the punters she saw on any given night in London—jeans and hoodies, office clothes splashed with rain. Others... others didn't. A woman with skin like polished obsidian, her eyes burning with an inner light. A man whose arms ended in hands with too many fingers. A figure draped in grey that seemed to flicker at the edges, never quite staying in focus. This was the Veil Market. She'd heard whispers, rumors, dismissed them as the fantasies of informants who smoked too much strange stuff. But here it was, real and breathing, the air itself electric with something that wasn't quite natural. And there, weaving between the stalls, was Cormac. He was heading deeper into the market, past the rows of jars that held things she couldn't name, past cages of small creatures with too many eyes. He knew this place, moved through it like a fish through familiar waters. If she lost him here, in this labyrinth of the impossible, she'd never find him again. But the path between her and him was crowded. She'd have to push through, and these people—these things—they'd notice. She'd be an intruder, an outsider, a woman with a badge and a gun in a world where neither might mean anything. A stallholder, his face a mask of scar tissue that spelled out words in a language she didn't recognize, looked up and met her eyes. His mouth curved into something that might have been a smile. "Lost, love?" She didn't answer. She was watching Cormac disappear around a corner, past a curtain of beads that clacked like bones. Five steps. She could take five steps and be in the market proper. Or she could turn around, climb the stairs, wait for backup like a good detective, and spend the rest of her career wondering what she'd missed. Morris's hand, reaching for something she couldn't see. Quinn stepped forward. The market swallowed her. The heat hit first, the smell of it, the press of bodies that weren't quite bodies. The sound of a hundred conversations in languages that twisted and shifted, words that seemed to slide past her understanding just as she grasped them. The light—those impossible flames—painted everything in colors that hurt her eyes. She pushed through the crowd, her hand on her weapon, not drawing it but wanting the contact, the familiar weight. A being with skin like bark reached for her sleeve, and she sidestepped, her heart hammering. "Sorry, love, just a reading—" His voice trailed off as she moved past. The beads rattled as she pushed through them. Beyond was a corridor lined with doors, each one a different shape, a different material. Some were wood, some metal, one seemed to be made of solidified shadow. Cormac was at the far end, fumbling with a key at the final door. "Cormac! Police! Stop right there!" He turned, and in the green-tinged light of the corridor, his face was a mask of terror. "You don't understand. You can't be here. They'll—" The door behind him swung open. Not because he'd unlocked it. It swung open as if something on the other side had decided to answer. A hand reached out. Pale, long-fingered, the nails painted black. It gripped Cormac by the collar and pulled him backward into the darkness. The door slammed shut. Quinn stood in the corridor, her breath loud in the silence, her hand frozen on her weapon. The market hummed behind her, a living thing that had noticed her presence and was deciding what to do about it. She looked at the door. Looked back at the bead curtain, where shadows moved and watched. The decision was already made. It had been made the moment she'd stepped onto those stairs. Some doors, once opened, couldn't be closed again. She walked toward the door and raised her fist to knock.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1457
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1457
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"dance"
count1
2
word"fleeting"
count1
3
word"streaming"
count1
4
word"resolve"
count1
5
word"cacophony"
count1
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"electric"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count2
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"tinged"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"dance"
2"fleeting"
3"streaming"
4"resolve"
5"cacophony"
6"chaotic"
7"flicker"
8"electric"
9"familiar"
10"weight"
11"tinged"
12"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
66.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1447
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1388
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn7
Soho1
Cormac5
Old1
Compton1
Street1
Morris2
London1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Cormac"
2"Morris"
3"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"Old"
2"Compton"
3"Street"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
4.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"quite behave like ordinary darkness"
1"felt like a mile but was probably only"
2"looked like the punters she saw on any gi"
3"quite bodies"
4"words that seemed to slide past her understanding just as she grasped them"
61.78% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.382
wordCount1447
matches
0"not toward the clubs or the bright lights of the main thoroughfare, but toward a doorway set into the brickwork"
1"not drawing it but wanting the contact, the familiar weight"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean32.16
std24.27
cv0.755
sampleLengths
068
13
255
311
453
556
63
774
813
911
1057
1154
1210
1342
147
1537
164
1775
186
195
2063
216
2286
2370
2439
258
2656
2741
2838
2920
3039
318
323
3356
3449
3550
365
3725
3825
3923
404
4138
4216
4324
4411
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"been made"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs252
matches
0"was looking"
1"was running"
2"was pushing"
3"was asking"
4"were showing"
5"was heading"
6"was watching"
7"was deciding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences120
ratio0.058
matches
0"Her suspect—Cormac, the name came to her between footfalls—glanced back, rain streaming off the brim of his cap."
1"The air changed here—cooler, older, carrying a smell of wet earth and something metallic."
2"\"—I'm not sure. Sending coordinates now.\""
3"The air grew warmer, thicker, carrying a cacophony of smells—incense and sweat and copper and something floral she couldn't identify."
4"Some looked like the punters she saw on any given night in London—jeans and hoodies, office clothes splashed with rain."
5"She'd have to push through, and these people—these things—they'd notice."
6"The light—those impossible flames—painted everything in colors that hurt her eyes."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount512
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.033203125
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001953125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean12.06
std7.2
cv0.597
sampleLengths
016
125
227
33
45
518
618
714
811
913
1010
113
1220
137
1411
1514
1631
173
1812
1918
2024
2120
228
235
244
257
266
2714
2819
2918
303
3120
3215
3316
343
357
366
3717
3813
396
407
417
422
434
4416
458
464
4716
4815
494
48.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.36666666666666664
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences108
matches
0"Instead, he stopped."
1"Then he moved again, not"
2"Instead, it pooled and scattered,"
3"Pale, long-fingered, the nails painted"
ratio0.037
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences108
matches
0"Her suspect—Cormac, the name came"
1"She didn't care."
2"She wasn't about to lose"
3"He vaulted a metal barrier,"
4"She followed, her body moving"
5"He was looking at something"
6"She was running again, closing"
7"He didn't look back."
8"He vanished into that darkness,"
9"She pulled her flashlight from"
10"Her light should have reached"
11"She lifted it to her"
12"She paused, looking up at"
13"Her thumb hovered over the"
14"It wasn't a sound so"
15"She thought of Morris."
16"She'd called it bullshit then,"
17"She clicked the radio off."
18"It was a market."
19"She'd heard whispers, rumors, dismissed"
ratio0.333
47.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences108
matches
0"Harlow Quinn's boots slapped the"
1"The figure ahead was just"
2"The words were empty ritual."
3"Nobody running through Soho at"
4"Her suspect—Cormac, the name came"
5"Quinn followed, her coat clinging"
6"The leather watch on her"
7"She didn't care."
8"She wasn't about to lose"
9"He vaulted a metal barrier,"
10"She followed, her body moving"
11"The alley opened onto a"
12"Quinn pulled up, her hand"
13"He was looking at something"
14"A doorway she'd passed a"
15"She was running again, closing"
16"He didn't look back."
17"He vanished into that darkness,"
18"Quinn reached the doorway and"
19"The air changed here—cooler, older,"
ratio0.824
46.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"If she lost him here,"
ratio0.009
6.30% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"Harlow Quinn's boots slapped the wet pavement as she rounded the corner, her breath coming in measured bursts despite eighteen years of doing this dance."
1"The figure ahead was just a shadow cutting through the light, a fleeting shape that knew these alleys the way she knew evidence bags and interview rooms."
2"Young face, scared eyes, the kind of fear that made people do stupid things."
3"Quinn followed, her coat clinging to her shoulders, water trickling past her collar."
4"She followed, her body moving on autopilot, every joint protesting the impact but obeying."
5"Stone steps worn smooth by generations of feet, spiraling down into a darkness that didn't quite behave like ordinary darkness."
6"The stone gave way to older brick, the brick to rough-hewn rock shot through with veins of something that glittered when she swept her light across it."
7"Stalls and carts and tables arranged in a chaotic spiral, lit by lanterns that burned with flames of green and blue and deep, pulsing red."
8"The ceiling arched overhead, lost in shadow, but she could hear water dripping somewhere, and the rumble of something that might have been a train or might have…"
9"But here it was, real and breathing, the air itself electric with something that wasn't quite natural."
10"He was heading deeper into the market, past the rows of jars that held things she couldn't name, past cages of small creatures with too many eyes."
11"The heat hit first, the smell of it, the press of bodies that weren't quite bodies."
12"A being with skin like bark reached for her sleeve, and she sidestepped, her heart hammering."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.3519%