| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1457 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.96% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1457 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "dance" | | 2 | "fleeting" | | 3 | "streaming" | | 4 | "resolve" | | 5 | "cacophony" | | 6 | "chaotic" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "electric" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "tinged" | | 12 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1447 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1388 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 7 | | Soho | 1 | | Cormac | 5 | | Old | 1 | | Compton | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | London | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Cormac" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Market" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Old" | | 2 | "Compton" | | 3 | "Street" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 4.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "quite behave like ordinary darkness" | | 1 | "felt like a mile but was probably only" | | 2 | "looked like the punters she saw on any gi" | | 3 | "quite bodies" | | 4 | "words that seemed to slide past her understanding just as she grasped them" |
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| 61.78% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.382 | | wordCount | 1447 | | matches | | 0 | "not toward the clubs or the bright lights of the main thoroughfare, but toward a doorway set into the brickwork" | | 1 | "not drawing it but wanting the contact, the familiar weight" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 32.16 | | std | 24.27 | | cv | 0.755 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 74 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 75 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 86 | | 23 | 70 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 56 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 56 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 50 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 252 | | matches | | 0 | "was looking" | | 1 | "was running" | | 2 | "was pushing" | | 3 | "was asking" | | 4 | "were showing" | | 5 | "was heading" | | 6 | "was watching" | | 7 | "was deciding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "Her suspect—Cormac, the name came to her between footfalls—glanced back, rain streaming off the brim of his cap." | | 1 | "The air changed here—cooler, older, carrying a smell of wet earth and something metallic." | | 2 | "\"—I'm not sure. Sending coordinates now.\"" | | 3 | "The air grew warmer, thicker, carrying a cacophony of smells—incense and sweat and copper and something floral she couldn't identify." | | 4 | "Some looked like the punters she saw on any given night in London—jeans and hoodies, office clothes splashed with rain." | | 5 | "She'd have to push through, and these people—these things—they'd notice." | | 6 | "The light—those impossible flames—painted everything in colors that hurt her eyes." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 512 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.033203125 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.001953125 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 12.06 | | std | 7.2 | | cv | 0.597 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 48.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.36666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he stopped." | | 1 | "Then he moved again, not" | | 2 | "Instead, it pooled and scattered," | | 3 | "Pale, long-fingered, the nails painted" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Her suspect—Cormac, the name came" | | 1 | "She didn't care." | | 2 | "She wasn't about to lose" | | 3 | "He vaulted a metal barrier," | | 4 | "She followed, her body moving" | | 5 | "He was looking at something" | | 6 | "She was running again, closing" | | 7 | "He didn't look back." | | 8 | "He vanished into that darkness," | | 9 | "She pulled her flashlight from" | | 10 | "Her light should have reached" | | 11 | "She lifted it to her" | | 12 | "She paused, looking up at" | | 13 | "Her thumb hovered over the" | | 14 | "It wasn't a sound so" | | 15 | "She thought of Morris." | | 16 | "She'd called it bullshit then," | | 17 | "She clicked the radio off." | | 18 | "It was a market." | | 19 | "She'd heard whispers, rumors, dismissed" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 47.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn's boots slapped the" | | 1 | "The figure ahead was just" | | 2 | "The words were empty ritual." | | 3 | "Nobody running through Soho at" | | 4 | "Her suspect—Cormac, the name came" | | 5 | "Quinn followed, her coat clinging" | | 6 | "The leather watch on her" | | 7 | "She didn't care." | | 8 | "She wasn't about to lose" | | 9 | "He vaulted a metal barrier," | | 10 | "She followed, her body moving" | | 11 | "The alley opened onto a" | | 12 | "Quinn pulled up, her hand" | | 13 | "He was looking at something" | | 14 | "A doorway she'd passed a" | | 15 | "She was running again, closing" | | 16 | "He didn't look back." | | 17 | "He vanished into that darkness," | | 18 | "Quinn reached the doorway and" | | 19 | "The air changed here—cooler, older," |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 46.30% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 6.30% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn's boots slapped the wet pavement as she rounded the corner, her breath coming in measured bursts despite eighteen years of doing this dance." | | 1 | "The figure ahead was just a shadow cutting through the light, a fleeting shape that knew these alleys the way she knew evidence bags and interview rooms." | | 2 | "Young face, scared eyes, the kind of fear that made people do stupid things." | | 3 | "Quinn followed, her coat clinging to her shoulders, water trickling past her collar." | | 4 | "She followed, her body moving on autopilot, every joint protesting the impact but obeying." | | 5 | "Stone steps worn smooth by generations of feet, spiraling down into a darkness that didn't quite behave like ordinary darkness." | | 6 | "The stone gave way to older brick, the brick to rough-hewn rock shot through with veins of something that glittered when she swept her light across it." | | 7 | "Stalls and carts and tables arranged in a chaotic spiral, lit by lanterns that burned with flames of green and blue and deep, pulsing red." | | 8 | "The ceiling arched overhead, lost in shadow, but she could hear water dripping somewhere, and the rumble of something that might have been a train or might have…" | | 9 | "But here it was, real and breathing, the air itself electric with something that wasn't quite natural." | | 10 | "He was heading deeper into the market, past the rows of jars that held things she couldn't name, past cages of small creatures with too many eyes." | | 11 | "The heat hit first, the smell of it, the press of bodies that weren't quite bodies." | | 12 | "A being with skin like bark reached for her sleeve, and she sidestepped, her heart hammering." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |