Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ406D2VYZ3PNTFQ5SZWCJ6

Run Details

Duration:
2m 43s
Cost:
$0.007964
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven's Nest bleeding through rain-slicked glass was the only honest light in the room. Midweek, just past eleven, when the stragglers had gone home and the floorboards could breathe again. Aurora had been alone with her whiskey for an hour, watching the clock hands crawl toward closing, when the bells above the door chimed. The woman who stepped through shook rain from her coat with practiced economy, and everything about her was tailored to precision. Dark wool fell from shoulders that knew how to carry a briefcase. Heels that cost more than two months of rent clicked against the scarred floorboards. The hair that framed her face was cut into a bob that screamed efficiency, success, the kind of life that woke up early and never doubted itself. Recognition came in stages. The tilt of the chin. The way she scanned a room like she owned it. The hands that checked the collar of her coat as though checking for dust. Megan Price. The name landed in Aurora's chest like a stone dropped into still water. "Rory?" Megan's voice cut through the dim light. Her mouth fell open. "Jesus Christ." Six years since Cardiff. Six years since the mouldy flat on Colum Road and the cheap wine that tasted like regret and possibility in equal measure. Six years since Aurora had seen a woman who remembered who she was supposed to be. "Meg." Aurora's voice came out rougher than she intended. Megan crossed the room without waiting for permission. Her heels made steady counts against the wood, and she pulled out the stool beside Aurora's like she'd been sitting in this bar every night for the past decade. Her coat fell open to reveal a cream blouse unbuttoned at the collar, gold at her wrist, an air of having arrived. "What are you doing here?" Megan asked. "I live upstairs." The crease between Megan's eyebrows deepened. "Above a bar." "It's a long story." Megan laughed, and the sound was hollow, the laugh of someone who had walked into the wrong room and was trying to make it polite. "I'm in London for a case. Deposition tomorrow at the Royal Courts. Saw the sign, thought it looked like a dive." She gestured around the dim room, at the maps with curling edges, the black-and-white photographs fixed in their frames. "Didn't expect to find Cardiff's most promising dropout." Aurora set her glass down. The whiskey sloshed against the sides. "I dropped out." "I know." "I mean I dropped out. Entirely. I'm not a lawyer, Meg. I'm not anything." The mask slipped. For a moment Megan was twenty years old again, sitting cross-legged on a stained sofa with a napkin spread between them, Griffin's cheapest pinot grigio swimming in their glasses. They'd written the whole thing out in smudged biro. Plans. Promises. A future with sharp corners and defined edges. "Do you remember the napkin?" Aurora asked. Megan's face did something complicated. "I found it last year. Going through boxes in my parents' attic." "You kept it?" "I tried to throw it out. Couldn't bring myself to." Megan's voice dropped. "It said we'd open a firm together. Price and Carter. Criminal defence and civil rights. We'd get an office with a harbour view." "Don't let life get in the way." Aurora spoke the last line from memory. The silence between them stretched like cooling metal. Megan looked at Aurora properly then, really looked, and Aurora watched her take in the delivery jacket draped over the stool beside her. The grease mark on her jeans from a dropped order of salt and pepper chips. The crescent scar on her wrist that she'd never explained to anyone who hadn't been there when she got it. "What happened, Aurora?" Megan's use of her full name felt like a door closing. Aurora thought of Evan. The way his voice had gone flat. The way he'd started counting her mistakes on his fingers. The night she'd left with a suitcase that held the wrong clothes and thirty-one pounds and Eva's number scribbled on a receipt. "Life happened." Megan waited, but Aurora didn't fill the silence. "I've asked myself," Megan said slowly, turning her glass, "if I ever really knew you. The version of you that existed in my head. The one who was going to be a barrister. Who was going to fight for the people no one else fought for." She met Aurora's eyes. "I don't know if that person was ever real." "It was real." Aurora's throat tightened. "She just didn't survive." The words hung between them. Megan's hand was still on her glass, and she traced the rim with her thumb the way she used to do in their flat when she was thinking about something she didn't want to say. "I remember the night you left Evan." Megan's voice was careful. "You called me from the station. You were crying so hard I could barely understand you. You told me you were going to London. That you were going to disappear and become someone else." "I remember." "I waited for you to call back. For weeks. Months. I thought..." Megan stopped. "I thought you'd forgotten me. That I was part of the life you wanted to leave behind." Aurora closed her eyes. "I didn't forget. I couldn't face you. You had the life we'd planned for. The firm. The harbour view. What was I supposed to say? I'm delivering noodles in Soho and living above a bar?" "You could have said anything." "I didn't know how." Megan checked her phone. The screen was dark, and Aurora recognised the gesture for what it was: an exit dressed as a necessity. "I should go," Megan said. "Early start." "Of course." Megan stood, and for a moment she was framed by the green neon, caught between the warm dimness of the bar and the cold wet street. She reached into her coat and pulled out a card. Laid it on the bar beside Aurora's glass. "If you ever want to use it," she said. Aurora looked at the card. White. Clean. The firm's name embossed in silver. Megan Price, it said. Solicitor. Partner. "Goodbye, Rory." "Goodbye, Meg." The bells chimed. The door swung. The green light cut a path through the rain and then snapped shut. Aurora picked up the card. She turned it in her fingers, watching the silver catch the dim light. She could picture the office. The view of the bay. The framed degrees on the wall. The life she had written on a napkin and abandoned on a train platform. She slipped the card into her pocket without reading it again. At the far end of the bar, Silas moved out of the shadows. He set a fresh glass beside her elbow, refilled it from a bottle she hadn't seen him open, and limped back to his corner without a word. Aurora drank. The rain kept falling. The green neon kept burning. And somewhere in the city, Megan Price was walking through the wet streets toward the life they had planned together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
42.11% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She gestured around [around]"
1"full name felt like [like]"
2"Megan said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.158
87.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1184
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1184
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"silence"
2"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1184
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Megan Price, it said."
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount862
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.44
worstName"Megan"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Megan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Price3
Aurora20
Cardiff1
Colum1
Road1
Megan21
Griffin1
Evan1
Eva1
Silas1
Six3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Price"
3"Aurora"
4"Megan"
5"Griffin"
6"Evan"
7"Eva"
8"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Colum"
2"Road"
globalScore0.282
windowScore0.167
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as though checking for dust"
1"tasted like regret and possibility in equ"
2"felt like a door closing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1184
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean22.77
std20.84
cv0.915
sampleLengths
059
174
233
32
413
514
642
79
859
97
103
119
124
1373
1414
152
1614
1751
187
1917
203
2136
2214
238
2458
2514
2643
272
288
2959
3010
3140
3245
332
3431
3539
365
374
3823
397
402
4144
429
4319
442
452
4619
4748
4811
4940
92.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"was tailored"
1"was supposed"
2"was framed"
57.14% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was trying"
1"was thinking"
2"was walking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences109
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount867
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.020761245674740483
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0057670126874279125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean10.86
std9.61
cv0.885
sampleLengths
019
116
224
321
412
514
627
74
85
910
1014
112
1213
138
144
152
164
1722
1816
199
208
2129
2222
237
243
256
263
274
2825
2940
308
315
326
333
342
3514
363
3729
389
391
401
418
427
435
4412
453
4613
4723
4814
498
41.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.3577981651376147
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences72
matches
0"Her mouth fell open."
1"Her heels made steady counts"
2"Her coat fell open to"
3"She gestured around the dim"
4"They'd written the whole thing"
5"She reached into her coat"
6"She turned it in her"
7"She could picture the office."
8"She slipped the card into"
9"He set a fresh glass"
ratio0.139
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences72
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Midweek, just past eleven, when"
2"Aurora had been alone with"
3"The woman who stepped through"
4"Heels that cost more than"
5"The hair that framed her"
6"Recognition came in stages."
7"The tilt of the chin."
8"The way she scanned a"
9"The hands that checked the"
10"The name landed in Aurora's"
11"Megan's voice cut through the"
12"Her mouth fell open."
13"Aurora's voice came out rougher"
14"Megan crossed the room without"
15"Her heels made steady counts"
16"Her coat fell open to"
17"The crease between Megan's eyebrows"
18"Megan laughed, and the sound"
19"She gestured around the dim"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Six years since the mouldy flat on Colum Road and the cheap wine that tasted like regret and possibility in equal measure."
1"Megan laughed, and the sound was hollow, the laugh of someone who had walked into the wrong room and was trying to make it polite."
2"The crescent scar on her wrist that she'd never explained to anyone who hadn't been there when she got it."
3"The night she'd left with a suitcase that held the wrong clothes and thirty-one pounds and Eva's number scribbled on a receipt."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.053
76.3215%