Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ409V4Z0111EFC7WD8E66H

Run Details

Duration:
1m 15s
Cost:
$0.004331
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park sprawled under a heavy grey sky, the last of autumn's leaves rattling across the damp grass. Aurora pushed a strand of black hair behind her ear and checked the crumpled napkin in her hand one more time. Eva's handwriting looped across the paper: *Third oak from the gate. Count the rings on the fallen branch. Walk nine paces north. The air will taste different.* "Third oak," she muttered, counting the massive trunks along the treeline. Nyx drifted beside her, their shadow-form barely visible against the overcast afternoon, a faint violet glow flickering where their eyes should be. "There," Nyx whispered, their voice like dust settling. The oak stood gnarled and ancient, its bark ridged with centuries of London weather. A fallen branch lay at its base, silvered with age, rings visible in the cracked wood. Seven rings. The oak had fallen seven winters ago. Aurora counted them twice, then straightened and walked nine deliberate paces north. The air changed on the seventh step—a metallic sweetness coated her tongue, like ozone before a storm. The temperature dropped five degrees in a single breath. "Feel that?" she asked. Nyx solidified slightly, their silhouette sharpening. "The Veil is thin here. Someone has been pulling at its threads." The space between two ordinary-looking trees shimmered. Not a visible shimmer—more like a pressure change behind her eyes, a sense that the air itself had become thicker, more charged. Aurora reached out and her fingers met resistance, a film of warmth against her skin. "Through here," she said, and pushed. The world folded. On the other side, sound died first. The distant traffic, the wind through leaves, the calls of startled birds—all of it vanished into a heavy, watchful silence. Aurora's boots sank into grass that felt deeper than it looked, softer than any lawn she'd ever walked. The light shifted from grey daylight to something older, filtered through a canopy that didn't exist from the park side. Amber and green and gold swirled above them like stained glass caught in a slow current. Nyx inhaled—a rustling sound, like curtains stirring in an empty room. "This place remembers older things." The grove opened before them. Ancient oak standing stones ringed a clearing maybe forty feet across, their surfaces carved with spirals and curves that seemed to move at the edge of vision. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells that should have finished blooming months ago, foxglove standing tall and untouched by frost, tiny white stars of flowers Aurora couldn't name. They bent in a breeze she couldn't feel. "This isn't right," she breathed, but she kept walking forward. The air smelled of honey and wet stone and something metallic beneath it. Time felt wrong here—not slow exactly, but layered, like walking through a song being played in multiple keys at once. Aurora's shadow stretched the wrong direction, casting toward the standing stones instead of away from them. When she glanced down, she noticed the wildflowers growing through her own footprint moments after she'd stepped. Not crushed. Unfazed. Nyx moved to one of the standing stones and pressed their palm against its surface. Violet light pulsed where shadow touched stone. "This stone remembers wind that hasn't blown in a thousand years. It remembers the first bell." "First bell?" "The first sound that woke this place. Before the Fae Courts. Before humanity learned to name what they feared." Nyx's form rippled, their voice dropping to something almost reverent. "This grove is a wound that never healed. A place where one world bled into another and the skin grew back wrong." Aurora's Heartstone pendant pulsed with warmth against her chest—a steady, beating heat that had nothing to do with Hel portals. It recognized something here. Or something here recognized it. She moved toward the center of the clearing. The grass there was different: silver-tipped, whispering against her ankles even when she stood still. A circle of mushrooms ringed the center, their caps a deep violet shot through with veins of gold. When she crouched to look closer, the mushrooms *moved*, their gills curling inward like shy fingers. "Don't touch them," said a voice like worn silk. Aurora straightened and turned. A woman stood at the edge of the standing stones. Silver hair fell to her waist in an unbroken sheet. Her eyes were pale lavender, the color of twilight sky just before stars appear. She wore a dress that seemed woven from spider silk and morning mist, and she cast no shadow despite the amber light pouring down. Isolde. "You found the seam," the half-Fae said, and her voice carried a weight that had nothing to do with volume. "The place where your world and mine breathe on each other's glass." She walked forward, her bare feet leaving no impression on the silver grass. "Most humans walk past this spot their whole lives. Their eyes slide off it the way water slides off oil." "How did you know we were coming?" Aurora asked. Isolde smiled, and it was not a kind expression. "Because I saw you arrive three days ago. And because you haven't arrived yet, from one perspective. The grove does not obey the same clock as your Cardiff flat, daughter of Brendan." Her lavender eyes flicked to Nyx. "And you bring dangerous company, even for a place that remembers danger like an old friend." Nyx inclined their head, a gesture of respect Aurora had never seen them offer anyone. "Half-blood. You walk the boundary well." "I was born on it," Isolde replied. "And I have been bleeding into it for three centuries." She turned back to Aurora, her gaze dropping to the Heartstone pendant. "You wear a piece of Hel's appetite around your neck, little mortal. And you have come to ask me to look further. To trade your present clarity for a future I may or may not show you truly." "I came because Eva said you help people." "People." Isolde's laugh sounded like wind chimes breaking. "I help patterns. I help the shape of things that will be. People are just the vessels that carry those shapes forward." She gestured, a flick of her wrist that scattered motes of silver light from her fingertips. "But I can look. If you're willing to accept what I see." The grove held its breath. The wildflowers stopped their silent motion. The light overhead dimmed, then brightened, then settled into a steady gold pulse that matched Aurora's heartbeat. Even Nyx seemed to grow still, their violet eyes fixed on Isolde. Aurora touched the pendant at her throat. The stone was warm, almost hot now, and it thrummed with a frequency she could feel in her teeth. "Show me," she said. Isolde's pale eyes flashed silver, and the grove answered.
created_at"2026-07-07T20:23:39.638Z" 7/7/2026, 8:23:39 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.593
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
91.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1130
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1130
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"silk"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"charged"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"pulsed"
5"silk"
6"weight"
7"flicked"
8"pulse"
9"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences75
matches
0"d with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords22
totalWords1123
ratio0.02
matches
0"Third oak from the gate. Count the rings on the fallen branch. Walk nine paces north. The air will taste different."
1"moved"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount839
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.55
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Park1
Nyx9
London1
Aurora13
Heartstone2
Hel1
Isolde6
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Heartstone"
globalScore0.725
windowScore0.667
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed woven from spider silk and morning mist, and she cast no shadow despite the amber light pouring down"
1"sounded like wind chimes breaking"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.89
wordCount1123
matches
0"not slow exactly, but layered, like walking through a song being played in multipl"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean33.03
std25.07
cv0.759
sampleLengths
066
133
247
338
44
518
644
76
83
981
1016
1169
1210
1369
1438
152
1651
1729
1857
199
204
2158
221
2365
249
2563
2621
2767
288
2958
3040
3126
324
339
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"being played"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences86
ratio0.081
matches
0"The air changed on the seventh step—a metallic sweetness coated her tongue, like ozone before a storm."
1"Not a visible shimmer—more like a pressure change behind her eyes, a sense that the air itself had become thicker, more charged."
2"The distant traffic, the wind through leaves, the calls of startled birds—all of it vanished into a heavy, watchful silence."
3"Nyx inhaled—a rustling sound, like curtains stirring in an empty room."
4"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells that should have finished blooming months ago, foxglove standing tall and untouched by frost, tiny white stars of flowers Aurora couldn't name."
5"Time felt wrong here—not slow exactly, but layered, like walking through a song being played in multiple keys at once."
6"Aurora's Heartstone pendant pulsed with warmth against her chest—a steady, beating heat that had nothing to do with Hel portals."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount850
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02235294117647059
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0035294117647058825
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean13.06
std8.31
cv0.636
sampleLengths
018
121
211
37
44
55
611
722
88
914
1016
112
127
1312
1417
159
164
176
1812
197
2022
2115
226
233
247
2520
2618
2720
2816
2911
305
315
3227
3329
348
3510
3613
3720
3816
3917
402
411
4215
437
4416
452
4629
4722
4820
494
78.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences67
matches
0"she muttered, counting the massive"
1"she said, and pushed"
2"They bent in a breeze"
3"she breathed, but she kept"
4"It recognized something here."
5"She moved toward the center"
6"Her eyes were pale lavender,"
7"She wore a dress that"
8"She walked forward, her bare"
9"Her lavender eyes flicked to"
10"She turned back to Aurora,"
11"She gestured, a flick of"
ratio0.179
42.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences67
matches
0"Richmond Park sprawled under a"
1"Aurora pushed a strand of"
2"Eva's handwriting looped across the"
3"The air will taste different.*"
4"she muttered, counting the massive"
5"Nyx drifted beside her, their"
6"Nyx whispered, their voice like"
7"The oak stood gnarled and"
8"A fallen branch lay at"
9"The oak had fallen seven"
10"Aurora counted them twice, then"
11"The air changed on the"
12"The temperature dropped five degrees"
13"Nyx solidified slightly, their silhouette"
14"The space between two ordinary-looking"
15"Aurora reached out and her"
16"she said, and pushed"
17"The world folded."
18"The distant traffic, the wind"
19"Aurora's boots sank into grass"
ratio0.836
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Even Nyx seemed to grow"
ratio0.015
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells that should have finished blooming months ago, foxglove standing tall and untouched by frost, …"
1"Aurora's Heartstone pendant pulsed with warmth against her chest—a steady, beating heat that had nothing to do with Hel portals."
2"The light overhead dimmed, then brightened, then settled into a steady gold pulse that matched Aurora's heartbeat."
31.25% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Nyx's form rippled, their voice dropping to something almost reverent"
1"She walked, her bare feet leaving no impression on the silver grass"
2"She turned back, her gaze dropping to the Heartstone pendant"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.222
80.3152%