Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ40HCAEEJWTYKAX7V1CHP1

Run Details

Duration:
53.2s
Cost:
$0.002937
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had followed her all the way from Soho. Aurora stood on the worn doormat outside Eva's flat, water dripping from the hem of her denim jacket onto the welcome mat that read "GO AWAY" in faded letters. She'd walked the forty minutes from Yu-Fei's restaurant, her shift finished at eleven, her feet aching, her mind churning with what she'd seen in the alley behind the casino. The thing with too many teeth that had worn a human face. She lifted her fist to knock, then stopped. The light under the door was on, but that meant nothing — Eva kept lamps burning at all hours, claimed the dark made the shadows restless. Rory could hear the low murmur of a voice inside. Not Eva's. Male. Accented. She should leave. Come back tomorrow. Pretend she hadn't seen what she'd seen, that she didn't need someone to tell her she wasn't losing her mind. The door swung open before she could decide. Lucien Moreau stood in the frame, one hand still on the brass knob, the other braced on his ivory-handled cane. He wore a charcoal suit, tie loosened, top button undone. His platinum hair was slicked back as always, not a strand out of place despite the hour. The amber eye caught the hallway light and gleamed warm. The black one absorbed it. "Rory." His voice carried that Marseille warmth, the vowels slightly stretched. He said her name like it surprised him. "What are you doing here?" He tilted his head, and a ghost of a smile crossed his lips. "Eva called me. She said you were in trouble." "I didn't ask for—" She stopped. Stepped back. "Is she here?" "Went to fetch some things from the shop. Her words, not mine." Lucien stepped aside, gesturing with the cane toward the cramped flat behind him. "She'll be back in an hour. You can wait out here in the hallway, or you can come in and explain why you're soaking wet and shaking." Rory's hand tightened on the strap of her messenger bag. "I'm not shaking." "You are." He didn't say it cruel. Just factual, like he was reading a weather report. "Come in. I won't bite." "Your kind bites." Something flickered in his mismatched eyes — a wince, quickly masked. "Some of us have better manners than others." He held the door wider. She should leave. The thought came again, clearer this time. She should turn around, walk back down the four flights of stairs, and figure this out on her own. That's what she'd been doing for six months. That's what she'd chosen, the morning she'd walked out of his flat in Mayfair with her bag packed and her jaw set. But the thing in the alley had had three rows of teeth, and it had looked at her like she was dinner, and she didn't have anyone else to ask. Rory stepped inside. The flat smelled like sandalwood and old paper, the same as always. Eva's research covered every surface — stacked on the coffee table, piled on the armchair, spilling off the kitchen counter. Ptolemy the tabby lifted his head from his perch on a stack of books, blinked at her, and went back to sleep. Lucien closed the door and turned the three deadbolts one by one. The clicks echoed in the small space. "Tea?" he asked, moving past her toward the kitchenette. "Don't put anything in it." He paused, his back to her. "I wouldn't." "You did before." He turned, and there it was — the thing she'd been avoiding for half a year. The weight of what they'd barely started before she'd run. His amber eye caught the lamplight, earnest in a way that didn't match his reputation. "That was a drought of clarity. To help you see clearly what you were running from. I told you what it was before you drank it." "You told me after." "Would it have changed anything?" Rory didn't answer. She dropped her messenger bag by the door and walked to the window, looking down at the wet street below. Brick Lane was quiet at this hour, the curry houses closed, the bagel shop still glowing at the corner. "I saw something tonight," she said. "Something that doesn't exist." "Many things that don't exist in your world exist in others." "Don't." She turned to face him. "Don't do the cryptic fixer thing. I need—" She stopped, pressed her palm to her forehead. "I need a straight answer. Just once." Lucien set the kettle to boil and leaned against the counter, crossing his arms. The movement pulled his jacket open, revealing the harness beneath. She'd seen it before. Knew the knife that sat under his arm, the one he'd shown her once, how to grip it, how to drive it upward into soft tissue. "What did you see?" "A man. Looked normal. Expensive suit, good shoes, cufflinks." She dropped her hand. "Then he opened his mouth to laugh, and his jaw unhinged like a snake's. Three rows of teeth. Going all the way back." Lucien's expression didn't change. "What happened then?" "I ran." "Smart." "He looked at me. Before I ran. He knew I saw." "Then he'll come looking." Lucien said it flat, like he was commenting on the weather again. "You'll need protection." "I don't want your protection." "Didn't say you'd get it from me." He pushed off the counter and walked toward her, the cane tapping a rhythm against the floorboards. He stopped a foot away, close enough that she could smell his cologne — something dark and woody, with a hint of smoke. "But you came here. To Eva's. And Eva called me before she left. So you're going to get it whether you want it or not." Rory held his gaze. The black eye was hard to read, but the amber one was not. It held concern and something else she didn't want to name. "I didn't come here for you." "No." His voice softened. "You never do. But you keep ending up in my orbit regardless." She should have stayed outside in the rain. Should have walked the other way, found a cheap hotel, called in sick tomorrow. Made this someone else's problem. "Tell me what it was," she said. "A ghoul. Low-ranking. They serve higher powers in the city. Scavengers, mostly. They clean up what the others leave behind." He reached out, slowly, giving her time to pull away. When she didn't, his fingers brushed a strand of wet hair from her face. "You crossed paths with the wrong one at the wrong time." "And now?" "Now you stay here tonight. We talk to Eva when she gets back. Tomorrow, we figure out why a ghoul was in Soho when they're supposed to keep to the river districts." "We." "Yes." His hand dropped. "We." Rory's chest tightened. She looked away, at the books, the cat, the rain-streaked window. "I can't do this again, Luc." He didn't pretend not to understand. "I'm not asking you to stay. I'm asking you to survive until morning." She let out a breath she hadn't realized she was holding. It shook on the way out. She hated that it shook. "Fine." The kettle clicked off. Lucien turned to pour the water, and Rory watched the muscles move beneath his suit jacket, watched the careful precision of his hands. The same hands that had once traced the crescent scar on her wrist and told her it meant she was lucky. The same hands she'd pushed away three months ago because she was too afraid of what she felt when he touched her. He set a mug on the table. "Milk, no sugar. You used to drink it that way." "You remember." "I remember everything." She wrapped her hands around the warm ceramic and didn't say anything at all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.309
leniency0.618
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.036
88.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1305
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"quickly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1305
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"churning"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"churning"
1"warmth"
2"flickered"
3"echoed"
4"weight"
5"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1310
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount921
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Eva4
Yu-Fei1
Moreau1
Marseille1
Stepped1
Rory7
Mayfair1
Lane1
Lucien7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Stepped"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Soho"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Marseille"
3"Mayfair"
4"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like sandalwood and old paper, the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1310
matches(empty)
85.37% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences123
matches
0"seen, that she"
1"carried that Marseille"
2"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean21.83
std20.79
cv0.952
sampleLengths
010
170
248
326
48
562
619
75
822
911
1052
1113
1221
133
1424
1559
1630
173
1854
1919
209
215
228
233
2467
254
265
2742
2810
2911
3029
3154
324
3336
347
352
361
3711
3819
395
4072
4128
426
4316
4427
457
4655
472
4832
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"was slicked"
49.34% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs177
matches
0"wasn't losing"
1"was reading"
2"was commenting"
3"was holding"
26.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences123
ratio0.041
matches
0"The light under the door was on, but that meant nothing — Eva kept lamps burning at all hours, claimed the dark made the shadows restless."
1"Something flickered in his mismatched eyes — a wince, quickly masked."
2"Eva's research covered every surface — stacked on the coffee table, piled on the armchair, spilling off the kitchen counter."
3"He turned, and there it was — the thing she'd been avoiding for half a year."
4"He stopped a foot away, close enough that she could smell his cologne — something dark and woody, with a hint of smoke."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount919
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.030467899891186073
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004352557127312296
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean10.65
std7.98
cv0.749
sampleLengths
010
129
229
312
48
526
610
72
81
91
103
113
1220
138
1420
1510
1617
1710
185
1911
208
215
2213
239
246
252
263
2725
2827
2910
303
317
329
335
343
3511
3613
373
387
3919
408
4122
4230
433
4412
4520
4622
4712
487
499
61.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3902439024390244
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners48
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Just factual, like he was"
ratio0.013
40.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences78
matches
0"She'd walked the forty minutes"
1"She lifted her fist to"
2"She should leave."
3"He wore a charcoal suit,"
4"His platinum hair was slicked"
5"His voice carried that Marseille"
6"He said her name like"
7"He tilted his head, and"
8"He didn't say it cruel"
9"He held the door wider"
10"She should leave."
11"She should turn around, walk"
12"he asked, moving past her"
13"He paused, his back to"
14"He turned, and there it"
15"His amber eye caught the"
16"She dropped her messenger bag"
17"She turned to face him"
18"She stopped, pressed her palm"
19"She'd seen it before."
ratio0.449
11.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences78
matches
0"The rain had followed her"
1"Aurora stood on the worn"
2"She'd walked the forty minutes"
3"The thing with too many"
4"She lifted her fist to"
5"The light under the door"
6"Rory could hear the low"
7"She should leave."
8"The door swung open before"
9"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
10"He wore a charcoal suit,"
11"His platinum hair was slicked"
12"The amber eye caught the"
13"The black one absorbed it."
14"His voice carried that Marseille"
15"He said her name like"
16"He tilted his head, and"
17"Lucien stepped aside, gesturing with"
18"Rory's hand tightened on the"
19"He didn't say it cruel"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She'd walked the forty minutes from Yu-Fei's restaurant, her shift finished at eleven, her feet aching, her mind churning with what she'd seen in the alley behi…"
1"His amber eye caught the lamplight, earnest in a way that didn't match his reputation."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"His voice carried, the vowels slightly stretched"
1"He pushed, the cane tapping a rhythm against the floorboards"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.145
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.6477%