Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ41EWNF7GK59YM9BVY6WPJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.003361
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid home with a satisfying thunk. Rory Carter pulled the chain from its track, twisted the knob, and pulled the door open on a cloud of stale curry fumes and damp London air. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim glow of the hallway bulb, rain glistening on the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair lay slicked flat against his skull, darker at the temples. The ivory handle of his cane caught the light as he shifted his weight, and that's when she saw the split in his bottom lip. Dried blood traced a thin brown line to his chin. "Lucien." The name came out flat, a brick wall. "Aurora." He said it carefully, like the word had history to it. He didn't lean on his cane but she could see the slight cant of his hip, the way he favoured his left leg. "You've changed the colour of your deadbolts." "I had them powder-coated." She didn't move from the doorway. "What are you doing here?" He reached inside his jacket and she tensed, ready to swing the door into him. Instead, he pulled out a cream-coloured envelope, bent corners bleeding from the rain. "Your correspondence came to my office. The sender didn't update their records when you moved from Silas's establishment." She recognised the heavy vellum stock. The embossed seal of the spinward registry. Letters she'd stopped reading the moment she understood what they were asking her to verify. "Put it on the side table inside," she said. "I'll deal with it later." Lucien glanced past her into the flat. Ptolemy the tabby had already padded to the threshold, tail hooked like a question mark. The cat sniffed at Lucien's polished shoes and sneezed. "He remembers you," Rory said. "Cats have excellent recall for those who've betrayed their trust." His heterochromatic gaze — amber and black — locked onto hers. "I was hoping we might speak." "About the letter?" "About what happened after I gave you the last one." The air between them thickened. Three months since she'd slammed the door of her flat above Silas's bar and told him she never wanted to see him again. Three months of ignoring his calls, burning his letters in the cast iron stove, and pretending the hollow ache in her chest meant nothing at all. "You look like someone dragged you through Hackney Wick by your collar," she said. "I've had a difficult evening." "With your mouth or your wallet?" He touched the split in his lip with two fingers, inspecting the blood. "The peculiar thing about periodic tables in Islington is that certain mages use them to conduct negotiations that are neither civil nor honest. One forgets that wine glasses can be shattered and repurposed as weapons." "Come inside before you bleed on Eva's welcome mat." She stepped back, leaving the door ajar. Ptolemy fell into step beside Lucien as he crossed the threshold, rain-slick leather and bitter cologne trailing behind him. Rory closed the door and shot the three deadbolts home. The flat was tight with him in it. Books rose in leaning towers from every surface, their spines cracked and dog-eared. Research notes covered the kitchen counter in overlapping circles, held in place by coffee mugs and candle wax. A single armchair, a narrow bed in the corner, and the smell of cardamom from the curry house below. Lucien stood in the center of it, not touching anything, not sitting down. He placed the letter on the side table next to a stack of Eva's annotated alchemical texts. "I didn't know where else to send it," he said. "You know where I live. You've known for three months." "I was under the impression that my presence would not be welcome." "Then why are you here now?" He turned to face her fully, and something shifted behind that composed mask of his. The demon half of him — the black eye — seemed to deepen, absorbing the low light of the room. "Because I received word tonight that the spinward registry has flagged your name for formal summons. If you ignore this letter, they will not send another. They will send hunters." "I know what they'll send." "Then you understand why I couldn't let another night pass without—" "Why you couldn't let another night pass? You let three months pass, Lucien. Three months of silence. And now you're here, bleeding on my friend's floor, pretending that your concern is anything but information you plan to sell to the highest bidder." His jaw tightened. The tendons in his neck stood out against the crisp white collar of his shirt. "I never sold anything about you." "No. You just stood in that registry office and watched them catalogue me like livestock." "I explained the procedure." "You explained what it would cost. And then you watched me walk out with the weight of that information crushing my chest, and you didn't follow. You didn't call. You didn't—" She stopped herself, cutting the sentence off with a sharp exhale. "Forget it." "I couldn't call." His voice came out quiet. Almost rough. "Because if I called, I would not have stopped. And I am not permitted to want you the way I do." The words hit her like cold water. She stared at him, searching for the lie in the set of his shoulders, the cast of his expression. But his face was open, stripped of its usual polish. He looked tired. He looked like a man who had spent three months doing exactly what he said — keeping his distance because the alternative was too dangerous. "You're not permitted," she repeated. "I am half of Avaros. The registry classifies my existence as a diplomatic compromise between realms. I cannot form bonds without authorisation from both houses. If I had followed you that night, if I had pressed the matter—" "They would have revoked your standing." "Yes." She thought about that. The way he'd watched her with those mismatched eyes from across the registry floor. The way his hand had hovered near her elbow but never touched. The way he'd said her name like a prayer before she walked out. "Does that still matter to you?" she asked. "Your standing?" He set his cane against the armchair and stepped closer. Rainwater dripped from the hem of his jacket onto the floorboards. He was close enough that she could smell iron beneath his cologne. The blood from his lip, or someone else's. "My standing is meaningless if I have no one to stand beside." He reached for her hand, slow enough that she could pull away, and when she didn't, he turned her wrist over. His thumb traced the crescent scar on her skin, the one she'd had since childhood. "I have spent three months constructing a way around the restriction. An exemption." "For what?" "For you." He lifted his gaze to hers. "If you'll still have me."
created_at"2026-07-07T20:24:17.572Z" 7/7/2026, 8:24:17 PM
model"aion-labs/aion-3.0-mini-20260707"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1239
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time65666
tokens_prompt1034
tokens_completion2390
native_tokens_prompt938
native_tokens_completion2051
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning655
native_tokens_cached321
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier(null)
usage0.00336108
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"0ad7ab68-a351-4a96-b2ef-fa8fe13adae3"
id"fb008486d8124c6dbef9e850df6beccc"
is_byokfalse
latency1238
model_permaslug"aion-labs/aion-3.0-mini-20260707"
provider_name"AionLabs"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.18.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1783455857-60qHMpGXCniFDNVTZLdK"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1783455857-mQxfO666jQNhwORSzTws"
upstream_id"fb008486d8124c6dbef9e850df6beccc"
total_cost0.00336108
cache_discount0.00016692
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"AionLabs"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.295
leniency0.591
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1152
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1152
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"glistening"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"traced"
count2
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"glistening"
1"weight"
2"traced"
3"shattered"
4"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1157
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount714
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
London1
Moreau1
Lucien5
Silas1
Eva1
Rory3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
5"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a man who had spent three mon"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.864
wordCount1157
matches
0"neither civil nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean25.15
std19.94
cv0.793
sampleLengths
036
168
29
342
415
546
628
714
831
95
1027
113
1210
1354
1414
155
166
1748
189
1936
2058
2130
2210
2310
2412
256
2665
275
2811
2942
3024
3115
324
3344
3431
3564
365
3738
386
391
4043
4110
4241
4361
442
4513
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs118
matches
0"were asking"
48.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences91
ratio0.033
matches
0"\"Cats have excellent recall for those who've betrayed their trust.\" His heterochromatic gaze — amber and black — locked onto hers."
1"The demon half of him — the black eye — seemed to deepen, absorbing the low light of the room."
2"He looked like a man who had spent three months doing exactly what he said — keeping his distance because the alternative was too dangerous."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount712
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02247191011235955
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004213483146067416
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean12.71
std8.85
cv0.696
sampleLengths
09
127
220
313
425
510
69
712
823
97
1010
115
1215
1313
1418
156
167
1715
189
195
207
2115
229
235
2421
256
263
2710
285
2923
3026
3114
325
336
3413
3535
369
377
3819
3910
408
4113
4218
4319
4413
4517
4610
4710
4812
496
63.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4175824175824176
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners38
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Instead, he pulled out a"
ratio0.019
49.63% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences54
matches
0"His platinum hair lay slicked"
1"He said it carefully, like"
2"He didn't lean on his"
3"She didn't move from the"
4"He reached inside his jacket"
5"She recognised the heavy vellum"
6"His heterochromatic gaze — amber"
7"He touched the split in"
8"She stepped back, leaving the"
9"He placed the letter on"
10"He turned to face her"
11"His jaw tightened."
12"She stopped herself, cutting the"
13"His voice came out quiet"
14"She stared at him, searching"
15"He looked tired."
16"He looked like a man"
17"She thought about that."
18"He set his cane against"
19"He was close enough that"
ratio0.426
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences54
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid home"
1"Rory Carter pulled the chain"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"His platinum hair lay slicked"
4"The ivory handle of his"
5"The name came out flat,"
6"He said it carefully, like"
7"He didn't lean on his"
8"She didn't move from the"
9"He reached inside his jacket"
10"She recognised the heavy vellum"
11"The embossed seal of the"
12"Letters she'd stopped reading the"
13"Lucien glanced past her into"
14"Ptolemy the tabby had already"
15"The cat sniffed at Lucien's"
16"His heterochromatic gaze — amber"
17"The air between them thickened."
18"He touched the split in"
19"She stepped back, leaving the"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Three months of ignoring his calls, burning his letters in the cast iron stove, and pretending the hollow ache in her chest meant nothing at all."
1"He looked like a man who had spent three months doing exactly what he said — keeping his distance because the alternative was too dangerous."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.159
leniency0.318
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.045
86.7469%