Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ47T22WEMPP7Q97GEXJCF7

Run Details

Model:
Aion 3.0
Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.022365
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Wednesday crowd at The Raven's Nest had thinned to three regulars nursing their pints in the corners. Silas wiped down the mahogany bar with practiced efficiency, his silver signet ring catching the amber light each time his hand passed beneath the pendant lamps. He'd closed the bookshelf door to the back room hours ago—no meetings tonight, just the quiet rhythm of glassware and aged wood. The green neon sign outside cast its familiar glow through the front window, illuminating the drizzle in brief electric flashes. The door swung open. Silas didn't look up from the glass he was polishing. "We're open." "I can see that." The voice stopped his hand mid-motion. A woman stood in the doorway, shaking rain from a charcoal coat. She was smaller than he remembered, or perhaps he'd inflated her over the years the way memory does to people who once mattered. Her hair had gone silver at the temples, and the laugh lines around her eyes had deepened into something permanent. She wore the rain like she'd once worn danger—with a kind of reluctant grace. "Maggie." "Hello, Si." Margaret Chen stepped inside and let the door fall shut behind her. She surveyed the room—the maps pinned to the walls, the black-and-white photographs of cities she might have recognized, the modest collection of bottles behind the bar. Her gaze lingered on his left leg, the way he favoured it as he moved along the bar toward her. "You look well." "Liar." She smiled, and for half a second the years collapsed. Then the smile settled into something more cautious, more guarded. She draped her coat over the barstool and climbed up. "What brings you to Soho?" She ignored the question. "I was in the neighbourhood for a thing. Saw the sign. Green neon—I always told you that was tacky." "You told me a lot of things." The silence that followed had weight. Silas poured two fingers of whiskey into a glass and set it in front of her without asking. She stared at it. "You remembered." "Macallan. Neat. You used to drink it like water." "Used to do a lot of things." She wrapped her hands around the glass but didn't drink. "How long have you had this place?" "Six years in November." "Six years." She turned the glass a quarter rotation. "Six years, and you never called." "You never called either." "No." She lifted the glass to her lips, paused. "I didn't." Above the bar, a vintage map of Prague yellowed under the pendant light. Maggie's eyes found it, and something tightened in her jaw. She looked away. Silas busied himself rearranging bottles that didn't need rearranging. His signet ring clinked against the glass as he worked. "You've changed," she said. "Time does that." "No, I mean—" She gestured at him, at the bar, at the room. "This isn't you. The Si Blackwood I knew would never have settled behind a bar. You were going to run the whole department. You were going to be Deputy Director by fifty." "Plans change." "Is that what you call it? A changed plan?" He met her gaze. "What would you call it?" The question sat between them like a third presence at the bar. Maggie's fingers tightened around her glass. "I'd call it what it was. Prague was a complete fucking disaster, and we both know it." "You're the first person who's said that word to my face in six years." "Someone should have said it sooner." The regulars in the corners paid them no attention. One of them signalled for another round. Silas pulled a pint with mechanical precision, delivered it, and returned to his place across from Maggie. She'd finished half her whiskey. "Your leg." "What about it?" "Is it—" "It's fine. Same as it was. Better than the alternative." "Silas." "Maggie." She exhaled through her nose. "I read the after-action report. Not the sanitized version. The real one. The one they buried." "And?" "And there were things I should have—" She stopped. Swallowed. Started again. "The intelligence I passed to your team. The source reliability assessment. I marked it confirmed when it should have been probable. If I'd flagged the uncertainty, you would have had backup. You would have had options." "You did your job." "I did my job wrong." "The review board—" "Sod the review board." Her voice cut through the bar's quiet hum. One of the regulars glanced over. She lowered her tone. "The review board cleared me because the source had been reliable for eighteen months prior. They said any analyst would have made the same assessment. But I wasn't any analyst, Si. I knew that city. I knew those players. I should have seen the shift." "You couldn't have—" "I could have." She drained her glass. Set it down too hard. "I should have." Silas took the glass and poured her another. His hand was steady. Hers wasn't. "Is this why you came in? To confess?" "I came in because I saw a green neon sign and I wanted to know if you were still alive." She picked up the fresh glass. "The confession is a bonus." "I'm alive." "I can see that. Running a bar. In Soho." A ghost of her old smile flickered. "You always did hate Soho." "Things grow on you." "Like what?" He didn't answer. He moved to the sink and rinsed a glass that was already clean. The water ran clear. "There was a girl in here last week," Maggie said. "Young. Twenty-something. Black hair. Blue eyes. She came in looking for you." Rory. Silas kept his expression neutral. "I have customers." "She seemed like more than a customer. She knew where the back room was." "Maggie." "I'm not asking you to explain. I'm just—" She rubbed her forehead. "You've built something here. I can see that. I just didn't expect to find you building anything." "What did you expect to find?" "Honestly?" She looked at him—really looked, the way she used to when they'd been posted together, when reading each other had meant the difference between extraction and a body bag. "I expected to find nothing. I expected the bar to be a name on a lease, and you to be gone." "Gone where?" "Anywhere. Everywhere. The Si I knew couldn't stay still. That's what made him good." "That's what got my knee shattered." "So you stayed still." "So I stayed still." Maggie turned on her barstool and surveyed the room again. The maps. The photographs. The worn wood and the brass fittings. The green light from outside painting everything in soft, unnatural colour. "Is it enough?" "It pays the bills." "That's not what I asked." He leaned against the back counter and crossed his arms. The signet ring glinted. "What do you want me to say, Maggie? That I miss it? That I wake up some nights and reach for a phone that doesn't ring anymore? That I look at that map—" He nodded toward the Prague map above the bar. "—and think about every decision that led me there?" "Do you?" "What do you think?" "I think you wouldn't have hung that map if you didn't want someone to ask about it." He said nothing. She was right, and they both knew it, and the knowing filled the space between them with something that couldn't be taken back. "I retired," she said. "Two years ago. Officially. Took the pension, moved to the countryside. Bought a cottage in Surrey." "Surrey." "I know." "You hate Surrey." "I'm learning not to." One of the regulars stood and shrugged on his coat. He raised a hand to Silas on his way out. The door opened, let in the sound of rain, and closed again. Two regulars left. The bar felt larger without them. Maggie lifted her glass and studied the whiskey through the light. Her reflection warped across the curve of the tumbler—distorted, stretched, unrecognizable. "I should have come sooner." "Yes." "I should have called." "Yes." "I should have done a lot of things, Si." He reached across the bar and touched her hand. Just for a moment. The silver ring pressed cold against her knuckles. "You're here now." "Is that enough?" "It's a start." She turned her hand over so their palms met. Held on. Let go. The rain picked up outside, hammering against the window in sheets. The green neon flickered once, steadied, and continued its quiet glow. Maggie finished her second whiskey and set the glass down with a soft click. "Tell me about the girl." "Which girl?" "The one with blue eyes. The one who knows about your back room." Silas began to speak.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences95
tagDensity0.147
leniency0.295
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1449
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Chen"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1449
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"electric"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"mechanical"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count2
6
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"electric"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"mechanical"
5"flickered"
6"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1442
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.04% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount790
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Maggie"
discoveredNames
Wednesday1
Raven1
Nest1
Chen1
Prague2
Maggie7
Swallowed1
One3
Set1
Rory1
Silas9
persons
0"Nest"
1"Chen"
2"Maggie"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"Prague"
globalScore0.93
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1442
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs102
mean14.14
std16.26
cv1.15
sampleLengths
066
134
22
34
475
51
62
758
83
91
1030
115
1223
137
1428
152
169
1724
184
1915
204
2111
2226
2319
244
253
2645
272
289
299
3018
3117
3214
336
3438
352
363
372
3810
391
401
4121
421
4348
444
455
463
4767
483
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"been posted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"was polishing"
40.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences168
ratio0.036
matches
0"He'd closed the bookshelf door to the back room hours ago—no meetings tonight, just the quiet rhythm of glassware and aged wood."
1"She wore the rain like she'd once worn danger—with a kind of reluctant grace."
2"She surveyed the room—the maps pinned to the walls, the black-and-white photographs of cities she might have recognized, the modest collection of bottles behind the bar."
3"\"Honestly?\" She looked at him—really looked, the way she used to when they'd been posted together, when reading each other had meant the difference between extraction and a body bag."
4"\"—and think about every decision that led me there?\""
5"Her reflection warped across the curve of the tumbler—distorted, stretched, unrecognizable."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount696
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.028735632183908046
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0028735632183908046
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean8.58
std7.75
cv0.903
sampleLengths
018
126
222
320
44
510
62
74
86
912
1023
1120
1214
131
142
1512
1626
1720
183
191
2010
2110
2210
235
244
2519
267
276
2818
294
302
319
3217
337
344
359
366
374
389
392
4013
4110
423
439
4410
454
463
4713
4832
492
48.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3273809523809524
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners55
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then the smile settled into"
1"Just for a moment."
ratio0.026
32.99% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences77
matches
0"He'd closed the bookshelf door"
1"She was smaller than he"
2"Her hair had gone silver"
3"She wore the rain like"
4"She surveyed the room—the maps"
5"Her gaze lingered on his"
6"She smiled, and for half"
7"She draped her coat over"
8"She ignored the question."
9"She stared at it."
10"She wrapped her hands around"
11"She turned the glass a"
12"She lifted the glass to"
13"She looked away."
14"His signet ring clinked against"
15"She gestured at him, at"
16"He met her gaze."
17"She'd finished half her whiskey."
18"She exhaled through her nose."
19"Her voice cut through the"
ratio0.468
11.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences77
matches
0"The Wednesday crowd at The"
1"Silas wiped down the mahogany"
2"He'd closed the bookshelf door"
3"The green neon sign outside"
4"The door swung open."
5"Silas didn't look up from"
6"The voice stopped his hand"
7"A woman stood in the"
8"She was smaller than he"
9"Her hair had gone silver"
10"She wore the rain like"
11"Margaret Chen stepped inside and"
12"She surveyed the room—the maps"
13"Her gaze lingered on his"
14"She smiled, and for half"
15"She draped her coat over"
16"She ignored the question."
17"The silence that followed had"
18"Silas poured two fingers of"
19"She stared at it."
ratio0.896
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences95
tagDensity0.032
leniency0.063
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.4110%