| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 26 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.342 | | leniency | 0.684 | | rawRatio | 0.038 | | effectiveRatio | 0.026 | |
| 94.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1896 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1896 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "resolved" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "measured" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "flicker" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 232 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 232 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 276 | | gibberishSentences | 168 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 168 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 1 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 71 | | ratio | 0.609 | | matches | | 0 | "<br>" | | 1 | "<br> He looked exactly the same." | | 2 | "<br>" | | 3 | "<br>" | | 4 | "<br>" | | 5 | "<br>" | | 6 | "\"Rory.\" <br>" | | 7 | "<br>" | | 8 | "<br>" | | 9 | "<br>" | | 10 | "\"What are you doing here?\" <br>" | | 11 | "<br>" | | 12 | "<br>" | | 13 | "<br>" | | 14 | "<br>" | | 15 | "<br>" | | 16 | "\"I wasn't certain you'd open the door.\" <br>" | | 17 | "<br>" | | 18 | "\"I wasn't certain I would either.\" <br>" | | 19 | "<br>" | | 20 | "<br>" | | 21 | "<br>" | | 22 | "\"What do you want, Lucien?\" <br>" | | 23 | "<br>" | | 24 | "\"But more than that, I want to talk to you. There are things you need to know.\"<br>" | | 25 | "<br>" | | 26 | "\"You had three years to tell me things I needed to know. You left a note. A note, Lucien. On the fucking kitchen counter.\"<br>" | | 27 | "<br>" | | 28 | "<br>" | | 29 | "<br>" | | 30 | "\"I know.\"<br>" | | 31 | "<br>" | | 32 | "<br>" | | 33 | "<br>" | | 34 | "\"I know.\"<br>" | | 35 | "<br>" | | 36 | "\"Say something else.\"<br>" | | 37 | "<br>" | | 38 | "<br>" | | 39 | "<br>" | | 40 | "<br>" | | 41 | "<br>" | | 42 | "<br>" | | 43 | "<br>" | | 44 | "\"You?\"<br>" | | 45 | "<br>" | | 46 | "\"My father found me. The real one. From Avaros. He made it clear that anyone I cared about was a lever he could use.\"<br>" | | 47 | "<br>" | | 48 | "\"So you ran. Like you always do.\"<br>" | | 49 | "<br>" | | 50 | "\"I came back.\"<br>" | | 51 | "<br>" | | 52 | "\"Why now?\"<br>" | | 53 | "<br>" | | 54 | "\"Because he's dead. My mother's husband, not my father. Not the demon. The man who raised me, who taught me the violin and how to hold a knife. He passed three weeks ago. I've been…" | | 55 | "<br>" | | 56 | "<br>" | | 57 | "<br>" | | 58 | "<br>" | | 59 | "<br>" | | 60 | "\"So am I.\"<br>" | | 61 | "<br>" | | 62 | "<br>" | | 63 | "<br>" | | 64 | "<br>" | | 65 | "<br>" | | 66 | "\"Probably.\"<br>" | | 67 | "<br>" | | 68 | "<br>" | | 69 | "<br>" | | 70 | "<br>" | | 71 | "<br>" | | 72 | "\"Tea?\" she asked, because she didn't have a script for this, because making tea was what you did when you didn't know what else to do.<br>" | | 73 | "<br>" | | 74 | "\"Please.\"<br>" | | 75 | "<br>" | | 76 | "<br>" | | 77 | "<br>" | | 78 | "<br>" | | 79 | "<br>" | | 80 | "\"Don't.\"<br>" | | 81 | "<br>" | | 82 | "\"It's the truth.\"<br>" | | 83 | "<br>" | | 84 | "\"Is that something you're doing now? Telling the truth?\"<br>" | | 85 | "<br>" | | 86 | "\"I'm trying.\"<br>" | | 87 | "<br>" | | 88 | "<br>" | | 89 | "<br>" | | 90 | "<br>" | | 91 | "<br>" | | 92 | "\"I walked through your door. I told you where I've been. I'm not running.\"<br>" | | 93 | "<br>" | | 94 | "\"You could start again tomorrow.\"<br>" | | 95 | "<br>" | | 96 | "\"But I won't.\"<br>" | | 97 | "<br>" | | 98 | "<br>" | | 99 | "<br>" | | 100 | "\"You broke my heart, Lucien.\"<br>" | | 101 | "<br>" | | 102 | "<br>" | | 103 | "<br>" | | 104 | "\"I know, and there is no version of this conversation where I deserve your forgiveness. But I'm going to ask for it anyway. Not because I've earned it. Because I need it.\"<br>" | | 105 | "<br>" | | 106 | "\"Need it?\"<br>" | | 107 | "<br>" | | 108 | "\"Rory, I have done terrible things. I have traded information that cost people their lives. I have lied to everyone who ever trusted me. But I have never—not once—stopped thinking …" | | 109 | "<br>" | | 110 | "<br>" | | 111 | "<br>" | | 112 | "<br>" | | 113 | "<br>" | | 114 | "\"What?\"<br>" | | 115 | "<br>" | | 116 | "\"I used to wake up and think about the way it would catch the light. Like polished obsidian. And I'd think—I'd think maybe I imagined it. Maybe I imagined all of it.\"<br>" | | 117 | "<br>" | | 118 | "\"I am exactly what you remember. Half demon. All liar. And completely, irrevocably in love with you. I have been since the night we met.\"<br>" | | 119 | "<br>" | | 120 | "<br>" | | 121 | "<br>" | | 122 | "\"You chose the worst possible moment to say that.\"<br>" | | 123 | "<br>" | | 124 | "\"I've always had terrible timing.\"<br>" | | 125 | "<br>" | | 126 | "\"Remember the night you showed up at my door with a stab wound and I had to stitch you up on the kitchen floor?\"<br>" | | 127 | "<br>" | | 128 | "\"I remember.\"<br>" | | 129 | "<br>" | | 130 | "\"You spent the whole time telling me about the history of Marseille.\"<br>" | | 131 | "<br>" | | 132 | "\"To distract you.\"<br>" | | 133 | "<br>" | | 134 | "\"God, it worked so well. I was so busy trying to remember the date of the Treaty of—whatever—that I didn't notice I was falling in love with you until you were already gone.\"<br>" | | 135 | "<br>" | | 136 | "<br>" | | 137 | "<br>" | | 138 | "\"I'm not going anywhere.\"<br>" | | 139 | "<br>" | | 140 | "\"You can't promise that.\"<br>" | | 141 | "<br>" | | 142 | "\"No. But I can promise that if I leave again, it will be with you. Or not at all.\"<br>" | | 143 | "<br>" | | 144 | "<br>" | | 145 | "<br>" | | 146 | "<br>" | | 147 | "<br>" | | 148 | "\"An inheritance. My stepfather's signet ring. And a key to a safe deposit box in Marseille that contains things I want to show you.\" <br>" | | 149 | "<br>" | | 150 | "\"Show me.\"<br>" | | 151 | "<br>" | | 152 | "\"Eventually. If you let me stay long enough.\" <br>" | | 153 | "<br>" | | 154 | "<br>" | | 155 | "<br>" | | 156 | "\"But not because I trust you.\"<br>" | | 157 | "<br>" | | 158 | "\"Then why?\"<br>" | | 159 | "<br>" | | 160 | "\"Because I want to see if we can build something better than what we broke.\"<br>" | | 161 | "<br>" | | 162 | "<br>" | | 163 | "<br>" | | 164 | "\"I think I can do better.\"<br>" | | 165 | "<br>" | | 166 | "\"Prove it.\"<br>" | | 167 | "<br>" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1877 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 26 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1228 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.73 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Lucien | 5 | | Moreau | 1 | | London | 3 | | Flat | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Old | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Empress" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Flat" | | 4 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 7.14% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed smaller somehow, and larger all at once—the breadth of his shoulders, the angle of his jaw, the way he held himself like a man bracing for impact" | | 1 | "sounded like they cost him something" | | 2 | "felt like to press her cheek against hi" | | 3 | "tasted like rain" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1877 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 276 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 1 | | mean | 0 | | std | 0 | | cv | 0 | | sampleLengths | | |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 232 | | matches | | |
| 94.74% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 190 | | matches | | 0 | "was entering" | | 1 | "were shaking" | | 2 | "were shaking" |
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| 39.34% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 276 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, and even in the dim light of the hallway's single buzzing bulb, she could see his eyes—one amber, one black." | | 1 | "She had not heard it spoken in that particular way—with that particular weight—in three years." | | 2 | "Lucien's mouth quirked—that half-smile that had always meant he knew something she didn't." | | 3 | "He was good at that—letting the space between them do the work that words could not." | | 4 | "He took in the flat in a single sweep of his mismatched gaze—the stacks of books on every surface, the scrolls spilling from Eva's desk, the takeaway containers from Golden Empress stacked by the sink." | | 5 | "Without it, he seemed smaller, somehow, and larger all at once—the breadth of his shoulders, the angle of his jaw, the way he held himself like a man bracing for impact." | | 6 | "It was a small thing—a tightening of his jaw, a barely visible flicker in his amber eye—but it was real." | | 7 | "His fingers brushed her cheek, and the touch was like lightning through water—every nerve she had lit up, remembered, responded." | | 8 | "And she was tired—so tired—of living in the space between what she wanted and what she was afraid to want." | | 9 | "And for the first time in three years, Rory let herself believe that maybe—just maybe—some things came back." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1039 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.02791145332050048 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0028873917228103944 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 276 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 276 | | mean | 6.8 | | std | 9.03 | | cv | 1.327 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 34.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 44 | | diversityRatio | 0.2028985507246377 | | totalSentences | 276 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 37.45% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere below, the curry house" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 1 | "Her name on his lips" | | 2 | "She had not heard it" | | 3 | "She heard the flatness in" | | 4 | "She'd practiced it." | | 5 | "It made her want to" | | 6 | "He reached into the inner" | | 7 | "He let the silence stretch." | | 8 | "He was good at that—letting" | | 9 | "He gestured with his cane" | | 10 | "It was hard to tell" | | 11 | "It had always been hard" | | 12 | "She heard her voice crack" | | 13 | "She'd been so careful." | | 14 | "He stepped forward, and the" | | 15 | "He held her gaze, and" | | 16 | "He held up the velvet" | | 17 | "She remembered the story, told" | | 18 | "She stepped back and pulled" | | 19 | "He took in the flat" |
| | ratio | 0.618 | |
| 16.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain had turned Brick" | | 1 | "Rory stood in the doorway" | | 2 | "The man on the landing" | | 3 | "<br> He looked exactly the" | | 4 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 5 | "Her name on his lips" | | 6 | "She had not heard it" | | 7 | "She heard the flatness in" | | 8 | "She'd practiced it." | | 9 | "Lucien's mouth quirked—that half-smile that" | | 10 | "It made her want to" | | 11 | "He reached into the inner" | | 12 | "He let the silence stretch." | | 13 | "He was good at that—letting" | | 14 | "The stairwell smelled of curry" | | 15 | "Something that clung to Lucien" | | 16 | "Briar, and ash, and the" | | 17 | "He gestured with his cane" | | 18 | "The smile faded." | | 19 | "It was hard to tell" |
| | ratio | 0.888 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien's mouth quirked—that half-smile that had always meant he knew something she didn't." | | 1 | "Lucien crossed the threshold with the measured grace of a man who knew he was entering hostile territory." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 26 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "he repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.171 | | leniency | 0.342 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |