Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ4A047BCQ5FE6DQFE3121Q

Run Details

Model:
Aion 3.0
Duration:
52.0s
Cost:
$0.017020
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairs descended into darkness. Water dripped somewhere ahead, each drop echoing against tile walls that hadn't seen maintenance in decades. Detective Harlow Quinn clicked on her torch and swept the beam across the abandoned Tube station below. Police tape crisscrossed the platform. A uniformed officer stood near the entrance, his face pale beneath his hi-vis jacket. He lifted the tape without a word when Quinn held up her warrant card. "Down there, Detective. CSIs are already bagging evidence." She descended the final steps, her worn leather watch catching the torchlight as she adjusted her cuff. The platform stretched before her, tiled walls covered in grime and the faded ghosts of vintage advertisements. A body lay near the edge of the track, surrounded by numbered evidence markers and the methodical movements of two forensics officers in white suits. Detective Sergeant Ojo crouched beside the body, his broad shoulders hunched as he examined something on the ground. He looked up when her footsteps echoed. "Quinn." He stood, brushing dirt from his knees. "Glad you could make it. This one's strange." "Strange how?" She approached the body, her eyes cataloguing details before she reached it. Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a tailored charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly salary. No visible wounds. No blood. His expression held something between surprise and peace, eyes half-closed, lips slightly parted. "Victim's name is Marcus Fell. Thirty-four. Works in finance, according to the wallet we found." Ojo gestured toward an evidence bag containing a leather wallet and a mobile phone. "No signs of trauma. No defensive wounds. Toxicology will take weeks, but the pathologist's initial assessment is cardiac arrest." "In an abandoned Tube station at—" Quinn checked her watch "—two in the morning?" "That's not the strange part." Ojo stepped aside, letting her get closer to the body. "Look at his hands." She crouched beside the victim. His hands rested at his sides, palms up, fingers curled loosely inward. But his fingertips were black. Not bruised. Not dirty. Black, as if dipped in ink that had soaked into the skin and spread beneath the nails. "Burn marks?" "Don't think so. No charring, no blistering. CSIs sampled it, but initial field test came back negative for any known substance." Quinn leaned closer, angling her torch. The blackness extended past his fingertips, creeping up his fingers in thin veins that disappeared beneath his cuffs. She reached out with a gloved hand and lifted his wrist. Cold. Not the cold of death—she'd felt that enough times—but cold as if he'd been lying on ice. "How long since he was found?" "Call came in at one-forty. Uniform response was here by one-fifty-two. Rigor hasn't set in, so the pathologist estimates death within the last three hours." Quinn stood and swept her torch across the platform. The station had been closed since 1991, according to the brief she'd received on her way here. The Northern line had rerouted, leaving this stretch of tunnel to decay. But the dust patterns on the platform told a different story. "Someone's been using this station." She walked toward the east end of the platform, where the dust had been disturbed in patterns too deliberate for vermin. "Look at these marks." Ojo followed, his own torch joining hers. Scuff marks led away from the body toward a maintenance door that should have been rusted shut. Instead, its hinges gleamed with fresh oil. "Got forced entry, maybe? Someone came in this way with the victim?" "No forced entry." Quinn pushed the door with two fingers. It swung open smoothly. "Someone's been coming and going regularly. Look at the threshold—worn down, no debris." Beyond the door, a narrow corridor stretched into darkness. The walls had been reinforced with fresh brickwork, the floor laid with clean stone tiles. Electric lights lined the ceiling, though they were currently switched off. "This goes somewhere." Ojo's voice carried the cautious tone of a man who'd watched too many horror films. Quinn stepped through. The corridor curved to the left, then opened into a wider space. Her torch found walls covered in shelves—shelves stocked with jars, bottles, and items she couldn't identify. Some of the jars held liquids that shifted colours when her light touched them. Others contained dried substances sealed in wax. "What the hell is this?" "Black market, maybe? Drug stash?" "Not with these." Quinn picked up a small brass compass from a nearby shelf. Its casing had a green patina, and the face was etched with symbols she didn't recognise. The needle spun as she held it, pointing deeper into the space. "Drug dealers don't use antiques." "Could be stolen goods." "Maybe." She pocketed the compass and continued further in. The corridor branched again, and the air grew warmer. A faint smell reached her nose—herbs and something metallic. Blood, maybe, but older. Stale. They emerged into a circular chamber that had once been a ventilation shaft. Someone had converted it into a meeting space of sorts. Chairs surrounded a central table, and candles—recently extinguished—sat in iron holders around the perimeter. "Quinn." Ojo's voice had gone quiet. He stood by the table, staring at something carved into its surface. She joined him. The wood was old, blackened with age, and covered in intricate carvings that spiralled inward toward the centre. At the heart of the spiral, a shallow depression held a residue that glistened in the torchlight. Dark. Viscous. She touched it with a gloved finger. The substance clung to the latex, thicker than blood. And her finger tingled where it made contact. "This is where he was killed." She rubbed the substance between her fingers. "Not out on the platform. Here." "Cardiac arrest, remember? This doesn't look like a murder scene." "Then why move the body? Why drag a dead man out to the platform instead of leaving him here?" Ojo didn't have an answer for that one. He moved around the table, examining the carvings. "These symbols. I've never seen anything like them." Quinn had. Three years ago, in a basement in Whitechapel, where her partner DS Morris had died. The same spiralling patterns. The same sense of wrongness that prickled at the back of her neck like a static charge. She crouched, studying the carvings more closely. "There's a second set of marks here." Her torch revealed fresher scratches cut into the wood—hasty, uneven, overlaying the older carvings. "Someone tried to add to this. Recently." "Add what?" "A warning, maybe." She traced the scratches with her light. They formed letters. Crude, hurried, but legible. "'She comes,'" Ojo read aloud. "What's that supposed to mean?" "I don't know." But her mind had already made a connection she didn't want to acknowledge. The black fingertips. The cold skin. The compass needle pointing deeper. "Did the call come from a witness?" Ojo checked his notes. "Anonymous. Male voice. Brief. Just gave the address and said someone needed help." "Trace?" "Disposable. We're running the tower data now." Quinn stood and walked back toward the platform. At the threshold, she paused. The dust patterns she'd noticed earlier had another story to tell. Two sets of footprints led from the corridor toward the body—but only one led back. "Someone carried him out. Someone strong enough to move a man Fell's size without dragging. Look at the stride length on the return journey. Shorter. Burdened." "So we're looking for a second person. Someone who was here when he died and moved the body afterward." "Someone who wanted us to find him." Quinn turned back toward the chamber. "But not enough to leave him where he actually died. Why?" "Maybe they panicked." "Someone who oils door hinges and lays fresh tile panics?" She shook her head. "No. This was deliberate. The body was a message." "A message saying what?" She didn't answer. Instead, she pulled out the brass compass again. The needle spun, then steadied, pointing not toward the chamber but toward a spot on the platform wall. She walked toward it, following the direction. The wall looked like any other—dirty tile, faded advertisements—but when she pressed her palm against it, she felt warmth emanating from beneath the surface. "There's something behind this wall." "Utility access, maybe?" "Maybe." But the compass needle didn't waver. Whatever was behind that wall, the compass had found it. She slipped the device back into her pocket. "I want everything documented. Every mark on that table, every footprint, every jar in that corridor. And I want to know who Marcus Fell was meeting tonight." "We're pulling his phone records now. First look shows a lot of calls from a blocked number in the past week." "Good. And one more thing." She looked back at the body, still lying on the platform with his blackened fingers reaching toward nothing. "I want to know what that substance on his hands is. Not from our lab. I want someone who deals in the unusual." Ojo frowned. "What does that mean?" She thought of Eva Kowalski. Red hair, round glasses, a satchel full of books on subjects most people dismissed as fantasy. Quinn had crossed paths with her twice before, both times on cases that turned out to be stranger than expected. She had contacts. Knowledge. Access to archives that didn't appear in any official catalogue. "It means I need to make a phone call."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
64.41% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Ojo stepped aside [aside]"
1"Ojo read aloud [aloud]"
2"But her mind had already [already]"
3"Quinn turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.339
leniency0.678
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.136
93.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1563
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"loosely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1563
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"methodical"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"electric"
5"etched"
6"intricate"
7"sense of"
8"traced"
9"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1551
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1071
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn12
Tube1
Sergeant1
Ojo10
Male1
Northern1
Whitechapel1
Morris1
Eva1
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Ojo"
4"Morris"
5"Eva"
6"Kowalski"
places
0"Whitechapel"
globalScore0.94
windowScore1
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something between surprise and peace, eyes half"
1"looked like any other—dirty tile, faded a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.645
wordCount1551
matches
0"not toward the chamber but toward a spot on the platform wall"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean25.02
std16.67
cv0.666
sampleLengths
038
133
28
359
425
516
647
748
814
919
1043
112
1221
1353
146
1525
1649
1730
1831
1912
2027
2135
2218
2352
245
255
2647
274
2832
2937
3018
3140
3224
3319
3410
3519
3624
3738
3835
392
4017
4110
4234
4317
441
457
4639
4726
4819
4924
89.46% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences111
matches
0"been closed"
1"been disturbed"
2"been rusted"
3"been reinforced"
4"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs193
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences150
ratio0.053
matches
0"\"In an abandoned Tube station at—\" Quinn checked her watch \"—two in the morning?\""
1"Not the cold of death—she'd felt that enough times—but cold as if he'd been lying on ice."
2"Her torch found walls covered in shelves—shelves stocked with jars, bottles, and items she couldn't identify."
3"A faint smell reached her nose—herbs and something metallic."
4"Chairs surrounded a central table, and candles—recently extinguished—sat in iron holders around the perimeter."
5"\"There's a second set of marks here.\" Her torch revealed fresher scratches cut into the wood—hasty, uneven, overlaying the older carvings."
6"Two sets of footprints led from the corridor toward the body—but only one led back."
7"The wall looked like any other—dirty tile, faded advertisements—but when she pressed her palm against it, she felt warmth emanating from beneath the surface."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount556
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02877697841726619
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.007194244604316547
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean10.34
std6.55
cv0.633
sampleLengths
05
116
217
35
414
514
68
717
817
925
1018
117
128
138
1414
1515
163
172
1813
1929
2019
2114
2215
234
245
2512
265
272
282
2917
302
3121
326
3318
3411
351
3617
376
3825
399
4017
4112
4211
4326
444
457
4617
477
4812
4910
76.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.48
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners72
66.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"Instead, its hinges gleamed with"
1"Instead, she pulled out the"
ratio0.02
97.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences101
matches
0"He lifted the tape without"
1"She descended the final steps,"
2"He looked up when her"
3"He stood, brushing dirt from"
4"She approached the body, her"
5"His expression held something between"
6"She crouched beside the victim."
7"His hands rested at his"
8"She reached out with a"
9"She walked toward the east"
10"It swung open smoothly."
11"Her torch found walls covered"
12"Its casing had a green"
13"She pocketed the compass and"
14"They emerged into a circular"
15"He stood by the table,"
16"She joined him."
17"She touched it with a"
18"She rubbed the substance between"
19"He moved around the table,"
ratio0.307
54.06% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences101
matches
0"The stairs descended into darkness."
1"Water dripped somewhere ahead, each"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn clicked on"
3"Police tape crisscrossed the platform."
4"A uniformed officer stood near"
5"He lifted the tape without"
6"She descended the final steps,"
7"The platform stretched before her,"
8"A body lay near the"
9"Detective Sergeant Ojo crouched beside"
10"He looked up when her"
11"He stood, brushing dirt from"
12"She approached the body, her"
13"His expression held something between"
14"Ojo gestured toward an evidence"
15"Quinn checked her watch \"—two"
16"Ojo stepped aside, letting her"
17"She crouched beside the victim."
18"His hands rested at his"
19"Quinn leaned closer, angling her"
ratio0.812
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
9.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Water dripped somewhere ahead, each drop echoing against tile walls that hadn't seen maintenance in decades."
1"Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a tailored charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly salary."
2"The blackness extended past his fingertips, creeping up his fingers in thin veins that disappeared beneath his cuffs."
3"Not the cold of death—she'd felt that enough times—but cold as if he'd been lying on ice."
4"Some of the jars held liquids that shifted colours when her light touched them."
5"The wood was old, blackened with age, and covered in intricate carvings that spiralled inward toward the centre."
6"At the heart of the spiral, a shallow depression held a residue that glistened in the torchlight."
7"The same sense of wrongness that prickled at the back of her neck like a static charge."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She approached, her eyes cataloguing details before she reached it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Her torch revealed (reveal)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.017
leniency0.034
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.034
82.6204%