| 64.41% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Ojo stepped aside [aside]" | | 1 | "Ojo read aloud [aloud]" | | 2 | "But her mind had already [already]" | | 3 | "Quinn turned back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.339 | | leniency | 0.678 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.136 | |
| 93.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1563 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1563 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "methodical" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "intricate" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 150 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1551 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.98% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1071 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 12 | | Tube | 1 | | Sergeant | 1 | | Ojo | 10 | | Male | 1 | | Northern | 1 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Sergeant" | | 3 | "Ojo" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Kowalski" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.94 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 85.90% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something between surprise and peace, eyes half" | | 1 | "looked like any other—dirty tile, faded a" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.645 | | wordCount | 1551 | | matches | | 0 | "not toward the chamber but toward a spot on the platform wall" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 25.02 | | std | 16.67 | | cv | 0.666 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 39 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 89.46% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "been closed" | | 1 | "been disturbed" | | 2 | "been rusted" | | 3 | "been reinforced" | | 4 | "was etched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 150 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "\"In an abandoned Tube station at—\" Quinn checked her watch \"—two in the morning?\"" | | 1 | "Not the cold of death—she'd felt that enough times—but cold as if he'd been lying on ice." | | 2 | "Her torch found walls covered in shelves—shelves stocked with jars, bottles, and items she couldn't identify." | | 3 | "A faint smell reached her nose—herbs and something metallic." | | 4 | "Chairs surrounded a central table, and candles—recently extinguished—sat in iron holders around the perimeter." | | 5 | "\"There's a second set of marks here.\" Her torch revealed fresher scratches cut into the wood—hasty, uneven, overlaying the older carvings." | | 6 | "Two sets of footprints led from the corridor toward the body—but only one led back." | | 7 | "The wall looked like any other—dirty tile, faded advertisements—but when she pressed her palm against it, she felt warmth emanating from beneath the surface." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 556 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.02877697841726619 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007194244604316547 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 150 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 150 | | mean | 10.34 | | std | 6.55 | | cv | 0.633 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 76.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.48 | | totalSentences | 150 | | uniqueOpeners | 72 | |
| 66.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, its hinges gleamed with" | | 1 | "Instead, she pulled out the" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 97.23% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "He lifted the tape without" | | 1 | "She descended the final steps," | | 2 | "He looked up when her" | | 3 | "He stood, brushing dirt from" | | 4 | "She approached the body, her" | | 5 | "His expression held something between" | | 6 | "She crouched beside the victim." | | 7 | "His hands rested at his" | | 8 | "She reached out with a" | | 9 | "She walked toward the east" | | 10 | "It swung open smoothly." | | 11 | "Her torch found walls covered" | | 12 | "Its casing had a green" | | 13 | "She pocketed the compass and" | | 14 | "They emerged into a circular" | | 15 | "He stood by the table," | | 16 | "She joined him." | | 17 | "She touched it with a" | | 18 | "She rubbed the substance between" | | 19 | "He moved around the table," |
| | ratio | 0.307 | |
| 54.06% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairs descended into darkness." | | 1 | "Water dripped somewhere ahead, each" | | 2 | "Detective Harlow Quinn clicked on" | | 3 | "Police tape crisscrossed the platform." | | 4 | "A uniformed officer stood near" | | 5 | "He lifted the tape without" | | 6 | "She descended the final steps," | | 7 | "The platform stretched before her," | | 8 | "A body lay near the" | | 9 | "Detective Sergeant Ojo crouched beside" | | 10 | "He looked up when her" | | 11 | "He stood, brushing dirt from" | | 12 | "She approached the body, her" | | 13 | "His expression held something between" | | 14 | "Ojo gestured toward an evidence" | | 15 | "Quinn checked her watch \"—two" | | 16 | "Ojo stepped aside, letting her" | | 17 | "She crouched beside the victim." | | 18 | "His hands rested at his" | | 19 | "Quinn leaned closer, angling her" |
| | ratio | 0.812 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 9.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Water dripped somewhere ahead, each drop echoing against tile walls that hadn't seen maintenance in decades." | | 1 | "Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a tailored charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly salary." | | 2 | "The blackness extended past his fingertips, creeping up his fingers in thin veins that disappeared beneath his cuffs." | | 3 | "Not the cold of death—she'd felt that enough times—but cold as if he'd been lying on ice." | | 4 | "Some of the jars held liquids that shifted colours when her light touched them." | | 5 | "The wood was old, blackened with age, and covered in intricate carvings that spiralled inward toward the centre." | | 6 | "At the heart of the spiral, a shallow depression held a residue that glistened in the torchlight." | | 7 | "The same sense of wrongness that prickled at the back of her neck like a static charge." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She approached, her eyes cataloguing details before she reached it" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Her torch revealed (reveal)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.017 | | leniency | 0.034 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.034 | |