| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory repeated flatly [flatly]" | | 1 | "they said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.476 | | leniency | 0.952 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |
| 90.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1566 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 80.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1566 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "intensity" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "crystalline" | | 5 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.84% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1584 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1099 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.73 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 3 | | November | 3 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Richmond | 3 | | Isolde | 9 | | Rory | 19 | | Heartstone | 1 | | English | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | London | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Yu-Fei" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "English" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "November" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.636 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "something between amber and gold and the partic" | | 1 | "looked like glass" | | 2 | "looked like heat haze, like the surface o" | | 3 | "appeared ahead and beyond them, the grey November sky of Richmond Park" |
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| 73.74% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.263 | | wordCount | 1584 | | matches | | 0 | "not the dull green of English moss but something luminous, something" | | 1 | "not broken, but it's stretched" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 39.6 | | std | 28.1 | | cv | 0.71 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 82 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 97 | | 9 | 72 | | 10 | 73 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 103 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 100 | | 25 | 58 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 63 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 51 | | 34 | 41 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 44 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 53 |
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| 92.73% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "was swayed" | | 1 | "was covered" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | | 0 | "were looking" | | 1 | "was being" | | 2 | "was wrinkling" | | 3 | "was watching" | | 4 | "was already moving" | | 5 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.123 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory traced her fingers along the bark of the nearest one — oak, not granite." | | 1 | "It hit her like walking into a greenhouse — warm, humid, thick with the scent of things growing and dying and growing again." | | 2 | "She left no footprints in the soft earth — Rory had been watching for it, and yes, the wildflowers sprang back uncrushed where the half-Fae walked, as if the ground itself was being careful not to mark her passage." | | 3 | "The deep crimson gem was warm against her fingers — warmer than it should have been, warmer than body heat could account for." | | 4 | "Their eyes narrowed — or performed the gesture that passed for narrowing in a face made of darkness and memory." | | 5 | "Moss covered everything — not the dull green of English moss but something luminous, something that cast the forest floor in an ethereal glow." | | 6 | "When the breeze picked up — and there was a breeze now, carrying the scent of honey and wet stone — the flowers chimed." | | 7 | "Not the grey of London, not the blue of day, not the black of night — it was a color she had never seen before, something between amber and gold and the particular shade of honey when light passes through it." | | 8 | "Her reflection looked back at her — black hair, bright blue eyes, the small crescent scar on her left wrist — but there was something else in the reflection." | | 9 | "But she could see, now, a faint shimmer in the air behind her own image — a distortion that looked like heat haze, like the surface of the world was wrinkling at the edges." | | 10 | "The Fae-Forged Blade at her hip — a slender, leaf-shaped dagger of moonsilver that Isolde had given her — was cold against her thigh, a counterpoint to the pendant's heat." | | 11 | "Rory felt the hair on her arms stand up, felt the certainty settling into her gut that something was watching them — something old and patient and very, very hungry." | | 12 | "Only the heat of the pendant against her chest remained — proof that it had been real, that something in that impossible place knew her name, and that the winter solstice was coming faster than she was ready for." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 968 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.025826446280991736 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006198347107438017 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 14.94 | | std | 9.72 | | cv | 0.65 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 62.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.41509433962264153 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 96.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she stepped between the" | | 1 | "Only the heat of the" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back the way" | | 1 | "It hit her like walking" | | 2 | "She stopped, turned in a" | | 3 | "Their violet eyes swept the" | | 4 | "they agreed, their voice like" | | 5 | "She left no footprints in" | | 6 | "Her hand found the Heartstone" | | 7 | "She'd been noticing that more" | | 8 | "Their eyes narrowed — or" | | 9 | "They stopped, their form rippling" | | 10 | "She gestured toward the path" | | 11 | "They moved deeper." | | 12 | "She had stopped ahead of" | | 13 | "they said quietly" | | 14 | "Her reflection looked back at" | | 15 | "Her hand went to the" | | 16 | "It was hot now, almost" | | 17 | "It was fear." | | 18 | "They moved back through the" |
| | ratio | 0.275 | |
| 25.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory traced her fingers along" | | 2 | "The distinction, she suspected, didn't" | | 3 | "She glanced back the way" | | 4 | "Richmond Park stretched behind them," | | 5 | "The kind of world where" | | 6 | "The air changed first." | | 7 | "It hit her like walking" | | 8 | "Pollen drifted in lazy spirals," | | 9 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 10 | "Foxgloves taller than she was" | | 11 | "She stopped, turned in a" | | 12 | "Nyx materialized at her left" | | 13 | "Their violet eyes swept the" | | 14 | "they agreed, their voice like" | | 15 | "Isolde moved past them both," | | 16 | "She left no footprints in" | | 17 | "Isolde said, pausing at the" | | 18 | "Her hand found the Heartstone" | | 19 | "The deep crimson gem was" |
| | ratio | 0.87 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 9.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath her boots was soft, carpeted with wildflowers that shouldn't have been blooming in November." | | 1 | "She left no footprints in the soft earth — Rory had been watching for it, and yes, the wildflowers sprang back uncrushed where the half-Fae walked, as if the gr…" | | 2 | "The pendant's inner glow pulsed faintly, a slow rhythm that reminded her of a sleeping heartbeat." | | 3 | "The path wound between trees that grew in spirals, their trunks twisting upward in ways that made Rory's eyes water if she looked at them too long." | | 4 | "Moss covered everything — not the dull green of English moss but something luminous, something that cast the forest floor in an ethereal glow." | | 5 | "Tiny, crystalline notes that merged into a melody just below the threshold of comprehension." | | 6 | "But she could see, now, a faint shimmer in the air behind her own image — a distortion that looked like heat haze, like the surface of the world was wrinkling a…" | | 7 | "For the first time, her voice carried an edge that wasn't riddle or prophecy." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "They stopped, their form rippling with what might have been unease" | | 1 | "Nyx said, their voice sharp" |
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| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they agreed (agree)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Rory repeated flatly (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.381 | | leniency | 0.762 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |