Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ4EZVFNZMX64CDYH5FNB87

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1m 35s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Through the worn floorboards the bass of Silas's Thursday night crowd made its way up, a vibration that settled in her bones. The place had its own heartbeat after dark. Rory had learned to sleep through it. The knock cut through cleanly. Three raps. Precise. Not the drunken fumbling of a lost punter from the bar below. Not the impatient pounding of a copper on a case. She knew. The space between her ribs told her. The deadbolts slid back one by one. The chain rattled against the frame. She opened the door to the narrow landing and the single bulb that flickered when the wind caught it. Lucien Moreau stood in the spill of that light. Charcoal suit. No tie. The first two buttons of his shirt undone, the skin there pale against the dark wool. His ivory-handled cane rested against his shoulder, gloved fingers wrapped around its length. "Rory." Soft. French-soft on the edges. She started to shut the door. His hand caught it. Not hard. A suggestion of force. "We need to talk." "We had our talk. Three years ago. Great talk. Very thorough." "That wasn't a talk." His voice dropped. "That was a door slamming." She opened the door wider. Let him see the cramped flat behind her. The stack of takeaway menus on the counter. The single plate in the drying rack. The life she'd built in the space he'd helped her find. "Looks like the door stayed open." His mouth did something that wasn't quite a smile. "May I come in?" "No." "Fair." Neither of them moved. The wind carried the smell of the curry house two doors down. Someone on the street below laughed, sharp and careless. "How did you find me?" she asked. "You know how I find people." "Right." She crossed her arms. "The great Lucien Moreau. Half-demon fixer. Knows everything about everyone. Must be boring, knowing where everyone sleeps." "Not everyone." His gaze settled on her face. "Just the ones I care about." The words sat between them. Heavy. Familiar. "That's a new line." "It's not a line." He shifted his weight, and for a moment the cane bore his full weight. "Rory. There's a reason I'm here." "There's always a reason with you. There's a favour. A trade. A debt to be called in." "This isn't business." "Then what is it?" He didn't answer. The amber eye caught the light, warm and human. The black one drank it, gave nothing back. "You should have stayed in Cardiff," he said. "Bit late for that." "I know." He reached into his jacket. Her muscles tensed. He pulled out nothing more threatening than a folded piece of paper. "This came across my desk this morning." She didn't take it. "What is it?" "A photograph." He unfolded it. Held it up. Her own face stared back at her. Grainy. Taken from a distance. She was unlocking her bike outside the restaurant, hair pulled back, apron still on. Yu-Fei's sign visible in the background. "Where was this taken?" "Golden Empress. Day before yesterday." "You're having me followed." "No." The word came out flat. "Someone else is." The photograph trembled in his grip. No. Her hands were shaking. She pressed them against her thighs. "Who?" "A name you know." He folded the photograph, returned it to his jacket. "Evan made bail six weeks ago. His lawyer found a technicality. Something about the restraining order filing." Six weeks. Six weeks of unlocking her bike. Six weeks of walking home after dark. Six weeks of not knowing. "He doesn't know where I am. I covered my tracks. I did what you said." "You did." His voice gentled. "You did everything right. But he's been asking questions. Putting pieces together. The Cardiff network is small, and old loyalties die hard." "I don't want to hear this." "I know." "Then why are you telling me?" "Because I won't let him touch you again." The words came out raw. Unpolished. Not the polished fixer speak she was used to. "Not while I'm breathing." The corner of her mouth twitched. "Big words from a man who let me walk away." "I didn't let you do anything." His hand tightened on the cane's handle. "You left. You chose the restaurant over—" "Over what? Over you? Over the man who deals in secrets and lies and half-truths?" "Over the man who loved you." Silence. The bass thrummed through the floor. Somewhere a siren wailed and faded. "You never said that." Her voice came out thin. "I'm saying it now." "Three years too late." "Probably." He stepped forward. The landing was narrow enough that he filled her vision. "But I'm here now. And I'm not leaving you alone with this." "I've been alone for three years." "Your choice." "My survival instinct." "Same thing." His head tilted. "Eva's flat. Brick Lane. You could have gone there. You didn't." "Eva's flat is hers. This is mine." "This is above a bar. No security. A fire escape any child could climb." "It's what I could afford." "It's what I could provide." He held her gaze. "I knew you'd take the minimum. I knew you'd refuse anything more. So I found something you'd accept." The floor shifted under her. "You arranged this flat." "Silas owes me a dozen favours. The rent's low because I made it low." "And the job?" "Yu-Fei needed a delivery driver. I mentioned your name." Her hands uncurled. Curled again. "You've been watching me." "Keeping distance. There's a difference." "What's the difference?" "Watching means I know you take your tea with milk and two sugars now. You switched from black two years ago. You limp when it rains. Your left wrist, the old break, still aches when the pressure drops." He paused. "You talk in your sleep. You didn't used to." She stepped back into the flat. The door stayed open. "The flat," she said. "The job. The distance." "Yes." "You've been protecting me." "Yes." "And now you're here. In person. At my door." Her voice steadied. "Which means the protection isn't working anymore." "Evan made bail. He's asking questions. He's finding answers." Lucien's jaw tightened. "The arrangement I had with a contact in Cardiff police—it's gone cold. Someone burned that bridge." "You have contacts everywhere." "Everywhere except where it matters most." He stepped through the doorway. The flat swallowed him. Too small for a man like him. "He's in London. I confirmed it this evening." The room went still. The bass faded. The street noise dimmed. "Where?" "Elephant and Castle. A hostel near the station." "He's here." The words tasted like copper. "In my city." "Your city now." He set his cane against the wall. "Mine too. And I protect what's mine." "I'm not yours." "You are." He closed the distance between them. Slow enough that she could step back. She didn't. "You have been since the night I found you in that Cardiff safe house, bleeding from a split lip and still trying to throw a punch." "That was exhaustion. Not romance." "That was the moment I knew." His hand rose. Stopped an inch from her face. "May I?" She nodded. Once. His fingers brushed the scar on her left wrist. The crescent-shaped one. The one she'd had since childhood. "I know every mark on your skin," he said. "Every story behind them." "That's creepy." "That's love." She pulled away. "You don't get to say that and disappear for three years." "I didn't disappear. I stepped back. There's a difference." "I don't see it." "Because you refuse to." His hand fell to his side. "I am half-demon. My father rules a realm of deals and debts. Every connection I make is a weapon someone could use against me. Against the people I—" He stopped. Swallowed. "Against you." "And now?" "Now Evan is in London. Now someone is feeding him information. Which means someone wants him to find you." His voice dropped. "Which means someone wants to hurt me through you." "I'm a pawn." "You're leverage." He shook his head. "No. You're everything. And I will not let you burn for my mistakes." Through the floor, the bar crowd roared. A glass shattered. Someone whooped. Rory stared at the man in her flat. The impeccably dressed half-demon who'd found her bleeding and broken and had given her a new name. A new city. A new life. "Why now?" she asked. "Why tonight? What changed?" Lucien's mismatched eyes held hers. "I saw him this morning." The words came out ragged. "He was buying flowers. Red roses. The kind you used to buy from the vendor on St. Mary's Street." The floor dropped away. "Every Friday," she whispered. "Every Friday after my shift." "He's been watching Golden Empress." Lucien's voice tightened. "He knows your route. Your schedule. Your habits." The door to her flat suddenly felt thin. The locks felt fragile. "What do I do?" "You come with me." "Where?" "Somewhere safe. Somewhere he can't find you." "And then?" "And then we end this." His hand found hers. Warm. Steady. "Together." Her fingers curled around his. Three years of distance collapsed into a single point of contact. "Together," she repeated. The knock came at the door. Three raps. Precise. The same rhythm from the landing. Lucien's grip tightened. His eyes went dark—both of them, the amber swallowed by black. "Stay behind me," he said. The knock came again. Harder. And then a voice she'd tried to forget. "Rory? I know you're in there, love. Open up." The floor trembled under her feet. The bass from downstairs seemed to slow, to deepen, to match the sudden pounding of her heart. "Lucien—" "Quiet." His cane was in his hand. The blade slid free with a whisper of steel. The third knock splintered the frame.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags36
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The words tasted like [like]"
dialogueSentences132
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.028
effectiveRatio0.015
93.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1629
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1629
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pounding"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"trembled"
count2
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"pawn"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"flickered"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"trembled"
5"silence"
6"pawn"
7"shattered"
8"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences150
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"tried to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences243
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1627
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount807
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Six"
discoveredNames
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Thursday1
Moreau1
French-soft1
Held1
Six4
Unpolished1
Silence1
Lucien5
Slow1
Stopped1
Swallowed1
Through2
Warm1
Three3
persons
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1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Stopped"
places
0"Slow"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1627
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences243
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs134
mean12.14
std10.67
cv0.879
sampleLengths
037
130
29
332
442
56
66
714
811
912
1039
116
1213
131
141
1525
167
176
1822
1914
207
214
2224
2317
243
254
2620
278
284
2929
307
318
3232
334
345
354
369
3717
381
3930
4020
4115
4227
436
442
456
4627
4716
4820
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"was used"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs146
matches
0"was unlocking"
1"were shaking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences243
ratio0.004
matches
0"His eyes went dark—both of them, the amber swallowed by black."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount813
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03198031980319803
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0036900369003690036
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences243
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences243
mean6.7
std5.28
cv0.789
sampleLengths
022
18
27
35
42
51
612
710
82
97
107
116
1219
139
142
152
1616
1713
182
194
206
214
222
234
244
2511
267
275
285
298
308
317
3211
336
349
354
361
371
384
3912
409
417
426
435
4417
458
466
475
481
491
43.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats33
diversityRatio0.34156378600823045
totalSentences243
uniqueOpeners83
57.97% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences115
matches
0"Somewhere a siren wailed and"
1"Too small for a man"
ratio0.017
70.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences115
matches
0"She opened the door to"
1"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
2"She started to shut the"
3"His hand caught it."
4"His voice dropped"
5"She opened the door wider."
6"His mouth did something that"
7"She crossed her arms"
8"His gaze settled on her"
9"He shifted his weight, and"
10"He didn't answer."
11"He reached into his jacket"
12"Her muscles tensed."
13"He pulled out nothing more"
14"She didn't take it."
15"He unfolded it"
16"Her own face stared back"
17"She was unlocking her bike"
18"Her hands were shaking."
19"She pressed them against her"
ratio0.374
38.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences115
matches
0"The place had its own"
1"Rory had learned to sleep"
2"The knock cut through cleanly."
3"The space between her ribs"
4"The deadbolts slid back one"
5"The chain rattled against the"
6"She opened the door to"
7"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
8"The first two buttons of"
9"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
10"She started to shut the"
11"His hand caught it."
12"A suggestion of force."
13"His voice dropped"
14"She opened the door wider."
15"The stack of takeaway menus"
16"The single plate in the"
17"The life she'd built in"
18"His mouth did something that"
19"Neither of them moved."
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The impeccably dressed half-demon who'd found her bleeding and broken and had given her a new name."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags36
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences132
tagDensity0.061
leniency0.121
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.03
88.7427%