| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1163 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1163 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "eyebrow" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1148 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Ripples spread outward, but instead of distorting her reflection, they revealed something else: a sky of amber, fields o…" |
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| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 790 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.65 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | December | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Standing | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Juice | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Juice" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.677 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "quite sky: deep violet shot through with veins of gold, like a bruise healing into sunrise" | | 1 | "felt like a memory of a dream" | | 2 | "moons that seemed to shift when Aurora looked directly at them" | | 3 | "not quite insects, not quite birds—flitted between blossoms, trailing light that faded as quickly as it flared" | | 4 | "not quite birds—flitted between blossoms, trailing light that faded as quickly as it flared" | | 5 | "seemed woven from mist, and when she smiled, the Grove breathed with her—flowers turned toward her face, leaves tilted to catch her light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 28 | | std | 20.76 | | cv | 0.742 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 70 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 59 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 52 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 76 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 59 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "Between two ancient oaks whose bark twisted in spirals, the world looked wrong—colors bled into each other, edges softened, and the distant hum of Richmond Park traffic died into nothing." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance—bluebells and foxgloves blooming alongside roses and chrysanthemums, flowers that should never share a season." | | 2 | "The world she’d left—the car park, the jogging path, the distant sound of planes heading into Heathrow—felt like a memory of a dream." | | 3 | "Beneath her hand, a pulse beat—slow and deep, like the heartbeat of something vast sleeping underground." | | 4 | "Tiny winged creatures—not quite insects, not quite birds—flitted between blossoms, trailing light that faded as quickly as it flared." | | 5 | "Aurora stopped at a pool of water so clear she could see every pebble at the bottom, each one carved into the shape of a tiny animal—fox, hare, owl, wolf." | | 6 | "Each leaf bore a different color—silver, copper, bronze, gold—and they rustled even though no wind stirred." | | 7 | "She wore robes of pale grey that seemed woven from mist, and when she smiled, the Grove breathed with her—flowers turned toward her face, leaves tilted to catch her light." | | 8 | "“It never is. That’s the point.” Isolde rose without standing—she simply floated upward, her feet hovering an inch above the roots." | | 9 | "Isolde laughed—a sound like crystal bells dropped into silk." |
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| 99.31% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 809 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.0407911001236094 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003708281829419036 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 12.62 | | std | 9.91 | | cv | 0.786 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 83.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5054945054945055 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped through." | | 1 | "She approached the nearest stone" | | 2 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 3 | "They moved deeper." | | 4 | "She knelt and touched the" | | 5 | "She looked older in the" | | 6 | "She took their hand and" | | 7 | "Her fingertips tingled where they’d" | | 8 | "Its trunk was wide enough" | | 9 | "She wore robes of pale" | | 10 | "She circled Aurora, close enough" | | 11 | "She turned and drifted back" | | 12 | "She snapped her fingers." | | 13 | "She hadn’t realized how hungry" | | 14 | "It pulsed again, warm and" | | 15 | "Her lavender eyes darkened to" | | 16 | "She set the apple down," |
| | ratio | 0.274 | |
| 16.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary shimmered like heat" | | 1 | "Nyx pressed forward, their shadow-form" | | 2 | "Aurora touched the Heartstone at" | | 3 | "The pendant pulsed once, warm" | | 4 | "She stepped through." | | 5 | "The world inverted." | | 6 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 7 | "Nyx said, their voice carrying" | | 8 | "Aurora turned back." | | 9 | "The oaks still stood behind" | | 10 | "The world she’d left—the car" | | 11 | "Nyx gestured ahead" | | 12 | "Moss grew in patterns that" | | 13 | "She approached the nearest stone" | | 14 | "The rock was warm." | | 15 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 16 | "The stone kept pulsing." | | 17 | "They moved deeper." | | 18 | "The wildflowers grew taller, brushing" | | 19 | "Some released spores that glittered" |
| | ratio | 0.887 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 27.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance—bluebells and foxgloves blooming alongside roses and chrysanthemums, flowers that should never share a s…" | | 1 | "Moss grew in patterns that spelled something she almost recognized, like a word on the tip of her tongue." | | 2 | "Some released spores that glittered like crushed emeralds when she disturbed them." | | 3 | "Isolde’s silver hair pooled around her like water, and her pale lavender eyes tracked Aurora’s approach with the patience of something that had been watching fo…" | | 4 | "A table appeared between two standing stones, laden with fruit that glowed from within, bread still steaming, and cups of wine that smelled of honey and somethi…" |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, their voice carrying that familiar whisper-on-wind quality" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.171 | | leniency | 0.343 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |