Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ4HN82ETZVC25STJ5D4EK4

Run Details

Duration:
58.4s
Cost:
$0.003298
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt scraped against brass as Rory slid it back, the chain rattling next. Three locks. Eva's paranoia had rubbed off on her. She pulled the door open and the smell of curry houses and wet pavement washed in from Brick Lane below. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, one hand resting on his ivory-handled cane, the other tucked into the pocket of his charcoal suit. Rain clung to his platinum blond hair, darkening it at the temples. "Rory." Her name in that Marseille drawl still did something to her chest. She hated that. "Luc." She kept her voice flat and her grip on the door edge tight. "You're a long way from Soho." "May I come in?" "No." He didn't flinch. His amber eye—the human one—held her gaze while the black one remained unreadable, a polished obsidian bead in the dim hall light. "I've been looking for you." "Found me." She shifted her weight, blocking the doorway with her body. "Congratulations. Now leave." Behind her, Ptolemy yowled from the stack of books on the kitchen counter. The cat hated strangers. Good instinct. Lucien's jaw tightened. A micro-movement, barely there. She'd learned to read those tiny tells during the three months they'd worked together. The way his knuckles whitened on the cane's handle when he was holding back something sharp. "I wouldn't be here if it weren't important." "You're always important, Luc. That's your whole thing." She crossed her arms. "What do you want?" He looked past her into the flat—the chaos of scrolls pinned to the walls, the chalk diagrams on the hardwood floor, the overflowing ashtray on the windowsill. Eva's research had expanded since the last time Rory slept here, covering every surface like a strange, obsessive garden. "You're staying with Eva." "Observant as always." "She's running something dangerous." Rory laughed, the sound hollow and sharp. "And you're the authority on what's dangerous? You, the fixer who trades secrets like poker chips?" Lucien's shoulders straightened. The rain dripped from the hem of his coat, pooling on the worn floorboards between them. "I didn't come here to argue." "Then why are you here?" A beat stretched between them, long enough for the question to settle into something heavier than she'd intended. His gaze dropped to her wrist—to the small crescent scar peeking out from under her rolled-up shirtsleeve. She pulled her arm back, tucking it behind her. He remembered. Of course he remembered. "I made a mistake," he said quietly. "Three months ago. When I let you walk out of that warehouse." Her breath caught, but she forced the air out slow and steady. "You didn't *let* me do anything. I walked because I had to. Because I found out what you were hiding." "Vauquelin's grimoire." "Don't say his name like it's casual." Her voice dropped, low and sharp. "You were feeding information to a demon-backed crime lord while pretending to help me. You used me to get to Eva's contacts." Lucien's hand moved from his pocket, fingers splayed in a gesture of surrender. "I was trying to protect you." "Bullshit." "Vauquelin had eyes on you from the moment you started asking questions about your father's death." His voice stayed even, but something flickered in his amber eye—a fracture in his composure she'd only seen once before. "I fed him enough to keep him satisfied. The real intel I buried." Rory shook her head, stepping back into the flat. "I don't believe you." He moved forward, and the door swung wider. "Then read my correspondence. I kept every letter, every coded message. You'll find nothing that could have led him to you or Eva." "And you just happened to keep proof of your innocence." "I keep proof of everything." He smiled, but it was tired, worn thin at the edges. "I'm a half-demon fixer in London's underworld. Trust isn't a currency I can afford to lose more of." Ptolemy jumped off the counter and wound between Rory's ankles, purring. A traitorous gesture. The cat liked him. Eva's cat liked everyone who smelled of secrets and foreign places. She didn't step aside, but she didn't close the door either. "Say I believe you. Why now? Why show up here after all this time?" "Because I've been watching the network around Eva's research. There's a player she doesn't know about. Someone feeding information to the same faction that burned your father's case files." The mention of her father hit low in her stomach. She'd been ten when Brendan Carter died. A car accident, they said. But the inconsistencies had gnawed at her for fifteen years. "What player?" "A woman called Solenne. No surname. She's been tracking your movements for two weeks." Rory's skin went cold. "And you're just telling me this now?" "I'm telling you this in person because I wanted to see your face when you heard it." His voice dropped, softer now. "I wanted you to see mine and know I'm telling the truth." She studied him—the sharp cut of his jaw, the way his fingers curled around the cane handle, the rain still dripping from his collar. He looked like he'd come straight from wherever he'd been, no time to compose himself. No time to build the careful mask he wore like armor. For a moment, neither of them spoke. The flat hummed with the distant sound of traffic from Brick Lane, the hiss of steam from the curry house below. "Come in," she said, stepping back. "But if you're lying, I'll gut you myself." Lucien crossed the threshold, and the door clicked shut behind him.
created_at"2026-07-07T20:33:08.381Z" 7/7/2026, 8:33:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.439
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.049
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount934
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount934
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"coded"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"weight"
2"flickered"
3"coded"
4"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords928
ratio0.001
matches
0"let"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"A car accident, they said."
98.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount579
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Brick2
Lane2
Moreau1
Marseille1
Ptolemy2
Lucien5
Brendan1
Carter1
Eva3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Brendan"
5"Carter"
6"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
globalScore0.982
windowScore1
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like he'd come straight from where"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount928
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean20.62
std14.69
cv0.712
sampleLengths
023
155
21
315
420
54
61
730
815
919
1037
118
1216
1346
144
153
164
1723
1825
195
2044
216
2219
2332
242
2535
2619
271
2849
2913
3031
3110
3234
3329
3425
3529
3632
372
3814
3911
4034
4150
4228
4314
4411
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"been ten"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs97
matches
0"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences88
ratio0.057
matches
0"His amber eye—the human one—held her gaze while the black one remained unreadable, a polished obsidian bead in the dim hall light."
1"He looked past her into the flat—the chaos of scrolls pinned to the walls, the chalk diagrams on the hardwood floor, the overflowing ashtray on the windowsill."
2"His gaze dropped to her wrist—to the small crescent scar peeking out from under her rolled-up shirtsleeve."
3"\"Vauquelin had eyes on you from the moment you started asking questions about your father's death.\" His voice stayed even, but something flickered in his amber eye—a fracture in his composure she'd only seen once before."
4"She studied him—the sharp cut of his jaw, the way his fingers curled around the cane handle, the rain still dripping from his collar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount587
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02555366269165247
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005110732538330494
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean10.55
std7.26
cv0.688
sampleLengths
014
12
27
320
423
512
61
712
83
914
106
114
121
133
1422
155
1612
173
1813
194
202
213
224
2314
2416
258
2612
274
2827
2919
304
313
324
337
3416
353
3616
376
385
3918
4017
419
422
434
447
4512
4612
4720
482
4913
62.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.38636363636363635
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners34
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Of course he remembered."
ratio0.019
38.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences53
matches
0"She pulled the door open"
1"Her name in that Marseille"
2"She hated that."
3"She kept her voice flat"
4"He didn't flinch."
5"His amber eye—the human one—held"
6"She shifted her weight, blocking"
7"She'd learned to read those"
8"She crossed her arms"
9"He looked past her into"
10"His gaze dropped to her"
11"She pulled her arm back,"
12"he said quietly"
13"Her breath caught, but she"
14"Her voice dropped, low and"
15"His voice stayed even, but"
16"He moved forward, and the"
17"He smiled, but it was"
18"She didn't step aside, but"
19"She'd been ten when Brendan"
ratio0.453
7.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences53
matches
0"The deadbolt scraped against brass"
1"Eva's paranoia had rubbed off"
2"She pulled the door open"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"Rain clung to his platinum"
5"Her name in that Marseille"
6"She hated that."
7"She kept her voice flat"
8"He didn't flinch."
9"His amber eye—the human one—held"
10"She shifted her weight, blocking"
11"The cat hated strangers."
12"Lucien's jaw tightened."
13"A micro-movement, barely there."
14"She'd learned to read those"
15"The way his knuckles whitened"
16"She crossed her arms"
17"He looked past her into"
18"Eva's research had expanded since"
19"Rory laughed, the sound hollow"
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Eva's cat liked everyone who smelled of secrets and foreign places."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.049
leniency0.098
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.1893%