Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ4KE6XRRC7NCJC837PJVFN

Run Details

Model:
Aion 3.0
Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.021604
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory counted seven standing stones before the light changed. She had walked through Richmond Park dozens of times on delivery runs, knew the paths by muscle memory, could navigate the whole stretch from the Pen Ponds to the Isabella Plantation with her eyes shut. But this wasn't Richmond Park anymore. The oaks had given way to something older, their bark pale as bone, their branches twisted into shapes that hurt to look at for too long. And the air—the air tasted different, heavy with the scent of flowers that shouldn't bloom in November. "Seven stones. Full circle." Nyx's whisper carried from Rory's left, though she hadn't seen them move. The Shade drifted between two of the standing oaks, their violet gaze sweeping the treeline. "The boundary holds. We're inside." Rory touched the pendant at her throat. The crimson stone sat cool against her collarbone—no pulse, no warmth. Wherever this was, it wasn't Hel. Small mercies. "I thought Isolde's grove would be smaller." "You thought it would be a grove." Rory turned in a slow circle. The clearing stretched wider than a football pitch, ringed by the bone-white oaks whose canopy filtered the light into something that wasn't quite sunlight and wasn't quite moonlight either. It pooled on the ground in silver-green patches, shifting as a breeze that Rory couldn't feel moved through the branches above. Wildflowers carpeted the ground between the stones. Bluebells, primroses, foxgloves—flowers that had no business growing side by side, let alone in late autumn. Their colours struck the eye too vividly, too saturated, as if someone had turned up the contrast on the world. A foxglove the size of her hand swayed as she stepped past it, petals brushing her ankle like a cat asking for attention. "Don't touch anything." The words came out sharper than she intended. Nyx materialised beside her, their shadow-form rippling with something that might have been amusement. "Wisdom from the woman who touched the standing stone after I told her not to." "That was different. The stone was calling to the pendant. These flowers are..." Rory knelt, keeping her hands tucked close. The foxglove leaned toward her, its throat pulsing with a faint bioluminescence. "Did you see that? It glowed." "Plants in the Fae realm often carry light in their veins. The soil here remembers starlight that predates your sun." "That's either beautiful or terrifying." "Why not both?" Rory stood and wiped the dirt from her knees—except the dirt wasn't dirt. It was dark and fine, almost like ash, and it left no residue on her fingers. She rubbed her thumb against her index finger, frowning at the clean skin. The ground beneath the flowers felt springy, alive, like stepping on a mattress made of moss. A sound reached them from deeper in the grove. Not birdsong, though it started that way—a cascade of notes that resolved into something almost like a voice. It rose, fell, then broke into a laugh that echoed from no particular direction. Nyx's form went rigid. "We're not alone." "Isolde?" "The Seer does not laugh like that." The sound came again, closer this time, and Rory's hand found the Fae blade at her hip. The moonsilver handle bit cold into her palm. She drew it, the blade catching that strange silver-green light and throwing it back in patterns that moved wrong. They walked deeper into the grove. The terrain shifted as they moved. The wildflowers gave way to tall grasses that whispered against each other in a language Rory almost understood. The trees grew closer together, their branches interlocking overhead until the sky disappeared and the only light came from the ground itself—veins of luminescence running through the earth like a circulatory system, pulsing with a slow rhythm that matched Rory's heartbeat. She stopped. The veins pulsed. She waited. They pulsed again, on her rhythm. "Nyx." "I see it." "Is it reading my heartbeat, or am I reading its?" Nyx's form stretched upward, their shadow-body thinning until they could peer through the canopy. When they settled back down, their violet eyes had dimmed. "The grove breathes with you. It has been waiting." The unease settled into Rory's chest like cold water. She adjusted her grip on the blade and kept walking. The whispering grasses parted ahead of her, creating a path where none had been. Behind her, the grasses closed the path, swallowing their footsteps. "Isolde said the grove existed between realms," Rory said. "Between Earth and the Fae. How old is this place?" "Older than the stones. Older than the park that surrounds it. Old enough that your people forgot it existed, which is the only reason it survived." Nyx drifted beside her, their form flickering between solid and incorporeal as they passed through patches of shadow. "Aldric heard of it when he was still flesh. A place where the boundary between worlds wore thin, where the Fae could cross without the Veil tearing." "You came here before." "I tried. The stones turned me away. I was already... changed." Rory caught something in Nyx's whisper-voice—a fracture, an old wound reopened. She didn't press. The grove provided enough pressure without adding to it. The path opened into a second clearing, smaller than the first. A stream cut through the center, its water black as ink until it caught the light and turned to liquid silver. On the far bank, a willow tree hung its branches into the water, each leaf trailing a strand of pale light that dissolved the moment it touched the surface. Rory crouched at the stream's edge. The silver water reflected her face back at her, except the reflection wore a crown of flowers she didn't recognize and smiled with teeth that were slightly too sharp. She pulled back. "Don't look too long at anything here," Nyx said from behind her. "The grove shows you what you want to see. That's how it keeps you." "The reflection wasn't what I wanted to see." "Then perhaps it showed you what you need to see." A second laugh echoed through the clearing, but this time it carried words tangled inside it, syllables that wrapped around the sound and gave it shape. The willow's branches stirred, though the air remained still. The light-strands trailing from its leaves brightened, and in that brightness, a figure took form. Silver hair. Pale lavender eyes. A face that belonged to no century and every century at once. Isolde stepped out of the willow tree as though it were a doorway, her bare feet touching the grass without bending a single blade. No footprints marked her passage as she crossed to the stream's edge and stood on the opposite bank, watching Rory with an expression that held the weight of three hundred years. "The delivery girl and the shadow who used to be a man." Isolde's voice carried the same layered quality as the grove's laughter, several tones braided into one. "You found the door. I wondered if you would." "Your instructions were clear enough." "Were they? I told you to seek the seven oaks where the wildflowers never fade. I said nothing of doors or paths." Isolde tilted her head, and the light shifted around her, casting shadows in directions that contradicted the light sources. "The grove decides who enters. I merely left the gate unlocked." Rory sheathed the blade but kept her hand near the handle. "You said you had information about the pendant. About where it came from." "I said many things. Which thing brought you here on a night when the Veil holds strong and the cold would keep lesser seekers by their fires?" Isolde smiled, and the flowers around her feet bloomed taller, turning their faces toward her like sunflowers following the sun. "Come across the water. The grove will not harm you while you walk with my blessing. But leave your blade on the bank. Moonsilver offends the tree." Rory looked at Nyx. The Shade had gone still, their violet eyes fixed on Isolde with an intensity that made their shadow-form denser, more solid. "She cannot lie," Nyx whispered, and the sound carried only to Rory. "But she can shape truth into cages. Be careful what you accept." Isolde heard it anyway. Her smile widened. "And the shadow remembers the old rules. Good. This conversation will be more interesting if you both understand the game." The stream's silver surface rippled, and Rory caught her reflection again—the crowned version of herself, the one with sharp teeth. This time, the reflection held up a hand, fingers spread, and mouthed a single word that Rory couldn't hear but understood anyway. *Ready?* Rory laid the Fae blade on the grass. The moonsilver dimmed the moment it left her grip, as if the grove had swallowed its light. She stepped into the stream, and the water—impossibly—held her weight like frozen glass. Each step produced no splash, no sound. Just silence, and the pulse of the ground beneath her feet matching the beat of her heart. She reached the far bank. Isolde stood three paces away, and up close, the half-Fae woman's edges blurred, her silhouette flickering between human and something taller, wilder, with too many joints in its fingers. "The Heartstone." Isolde's gaze dropped to Rory's throat. "You wear it openly. Either you trust its protection or you don't understand what it is." "Tell me what it is, then." "All things in their time." Isolde turned toward the willow. "Walk with me. The grove has something to show you, and I have riddles enough to fill the journey." Nyx crossed the stream without touching it, their shadow-form passing over the surface like smoke over water. They fell into step behind Rory, and the three of them walked toward the willow tree, toward the light that hung from its branches like discarded stars. The grove breathed. Rory breathed with it. And somewhere beneath the silver water, the reflection smiled.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1657
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1657
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"navigate"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"resolved"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count2
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"navigate"
1"whisper"
2"pulse"
3"warmth"
4"resolved"
5"echoed"
6"pulsed"
7"footsteps"
8"weight"
9"intensity"
10"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1648
ratio0.001
matches
0"Ready?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1193
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Pen1
Ponds1
Isabella1
Plantation1
November1
Rory24
Shade2
Hel1
Nyx10
Fae3
Isolde9
persons
0"Rory"
1"Shade"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Pen"
3"Isabella"
4"Plantation"
5"November"
globalScore0.494
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite sunlight and wasn't quite moonlight either"
1"quite moonlight either"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1648
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"started that way"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean28.41
std21.83
cv0.768
sampleLengths
09
184
236
326
47
57
656
766
811
929
1038
1120
125
133
1458
1541
167
171
187
1944
206
2165
2213
231
243
2510
2633
2743
2819
2971
304
3111
3223
3361
3438
3526
368
3710
3850
3917
4055
4137
425
4352
4424
4574
4625
4724
4827
4942
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs210
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences125
ratio0.064
matches
0"And the air—the air tasted different, heavy with the scent of flowers that shouldn't bloom in November."
1"The crimson stone sat cool against her collarbone—no pulse, no warmth."
2"Bluebells, primroses, foxgloves—flowers that had no business growing side by side, let alone in late autumn."
3"Rory stood and wiped the dirt from her knees—except the dirt wasn't dirt."
4"Not birdsong, though it started that way—a cascade of notes that resolved into something almost like a voice."
5"The trees grew closer together, their branches interlocking overhead until the sky disappeared and the only light came from the ground itself—veins of luminescence running through the earth like a circulatory system, pulsing with a slow rhythm that matched Rory's heartbeat."
6"The stream's silver surface rippled, and Rory caught her reflection again—the crowned version of herself, the one with sharp teeth."
7"She stepped into the stream, and the water—impossibly—held her weight like frozen glass."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1213
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"strange silver-green light"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.026380873866446827
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004122011541632316
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean13.18
std9.44
cv0.716
sampleLengths
09
135
26
326
417
516
615
75
87
911
106
112
127
137
146
1529
1621
177
1816
1920
2023
2111
2214
2315
2420
2512
266
2720
285
293
3013
3116
3213
3316
349
3518
3614
374
383
391
407
4117
428
4319
446
456
4618
4741
482
493
56.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.384
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners48
38.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Just silence, and the pulse"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences87
matches
0"She had walked through Richmond"
1"It pooled on the ground"
2"Their colours struck the eye"
3"It was dark and fine,"
4"She rubbed her thumb against"
5"It rose, fell, then broke"
6"She drew it, the blade"
7"They walked deeper into the"
8"They pulsed again, on her"
9"She adjusted her grip on"
10"She didn't press."
11"She pulled back."
12"Her smile widened."
13"She stepped into the stream,"
14"She reached the far bank."
15"They fell into step behind"
ratio0.184
23.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences87
matches
0"Rory counted seven standing stones"
1"She had walked through Richmond"
2"The oaks had given way"
3"Nyx's whisper carried from Rory's"
4"The Shade drifted between two"
5"Rory touched the pendant at"
6"The crimson stone sat cool"
7"Rory turned in a slow"
8"The clearing stretched wider than"
9"It pooled on the ground"
10"Wildflowers carpeted the ground between"
11"Bluebells, primroses, foxgloves—flowers that had"
12"Their colours struck the eye"
13"A foxglove the size of"
14"The words came out sharper"
15"Nyx materialised beside her, their"
16"Rory knelt, keeping her hands"
17"The foxglove leaned toward her,"
18"Rory stood and wiped the"
19"It was dark and fine,"
ratio0.874
57.47% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Wherever this was, it wasn't"
ratio0.011
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"The oaks had given way to something older, their bark pale as bone, their branches twisted into shapes that hurt to look at for too long."
1"And the air—the air tasted different, heavy with the scent of flowers that shouldn't bloom in November."
2"The clearing stretched wider than a football pitch, ringed by the bone-white oaks whose canopy filtered the light into something that wasn't quite sunlight and …"
3"Nyx materialised beside her, their shadow-form rippling with something that might have been amusement."
4"She drew it, the blade catching that strange silver-green light and throwing it back in patterns that moved wrong."
5"The wildflowers gave way to tall grasses that whispered against each other in a language Rory almost understood."
6"The trees grew closer together, their branches interlocking overhead until the sky disappeared and the only light came from the ground itself—veins of luminesce…"
7"On the far bank, a willow tree hung its branches into the water, each leaf trailing a strand of pale light that dissolved the moment it touched the surface."
8"The silver water reflected her face back at her, except the reflection wore a crown of flowers she didn't recognize and smiled with teeth that were slightly too…"
9"Isolde stepped out of the willow tree as though it were a doorway, her bare feet touching the grass without bending a single blade."
10"No footprints marked her passage as she crossed to the stream's edge and stood on the opposite bank, watching Rory with an expression that held the weight of th…"
11"The Shade had gone still, their violet eyes fixed on Isolde with an intensity that made their shadow-form denser, more solid."
12"The moonsilver dimmed the moment it left her grip, as if the grove had swallowed its light."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Isolde's voice carried, several tones braided into one"
1"Isolde tilted, and the light shifted around her, casting shadows in directions that contradicted the light sources"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.068
leniency0.136
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.045
80.3195%