| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.98% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1657 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.72% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1657 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "navigate" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "resolved" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "intensity" | | 10 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1648 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.41% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1193 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Pen | 1 | | Ponds | 1 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | November | 1 | | Rory | 24 | | Shade | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Fae | 3 | | Isolde | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Pen" | | 3 | "Isabella" | | 4 | "Plantation" | | 5 | "November" |
| | globalScore | 0.494 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "quite sunlight and wasn't quite moonlight either" | | 1 | "quite moonlight either" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1648 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 28.41 | | std | 21.83 | | cv | 0.768 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 84 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 66 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 65 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 71 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 61 | | 34 | 38 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 50 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 55 | | 41 | 37 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 52 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 74 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 42 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 125 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "And the air—the air tasted different, heavy with the scent of flowers that shouldn't bloom in November." | | 1 | "The crimson stone sat cool against her collarbone—no pulse, no warmth." | | 2 | "Bluebells, primroses, foxgloves—flowers that had no business growing side by side, let alone in late autumn." | | 3 | "Rory stood and wiped the dirt from her knees—except the dirt wasn't dirt." | | 4 | "Not birdsong, though it started that way—a cascade of notes that resolved into something almost like a voice." | | 5 | "The trees grew closer together, their branches interlocking overhead until the sky disappeared and the only light came from the ground itself—veins of luminescence running through the earth like a circulatory system, pulsing with a slow rhythm that matched Rory's heartbeat." | | 6 | "The stream's silver surface rippled, and Rory caught her reflection again—the crowned version of herself, the one with sharp teeth." | | 7 | "She stepped into the stream, and the water—impossibly—held her weight like frozen glass." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1213 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "strange silver-green light" |
| | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.026380873866446827 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004122011541632316 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 125 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 125 | | mean | 13.18 | | std | 9.44 | | cv | 0.716 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 41 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 56.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.384 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 38.31% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Just silence, and the pulse" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She had walked through Richmond" | | 1 | "It pooled on the ground" | | 2 | "Their colours struck the eye" | | 3 | "It was dark and fine," | | 4 | "She rubbed her thumb against" | | 5 | "It rose, fell, then broke" | | 6 | "She drew it, the blade" | | 7 | "They walked deeper into the" | | 8 | "They pulsed again, on her" | | 9 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 10 | "She didn't press." | | 11 | "She pulled back." | | 12 | "Her smile widened." | | 13 | "She stepped into the stream," | | 14 | "She reached the far bank." | | 15 | "They fell into step behind" |
| | ratio | 0.184 | |
| 23.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory counted seven standing stones" | | 1 | "She had walked through Richmond" | | 2 | "The oaks had given way" | | 3 | "Nyx's whisper carried from Rory's" | | 4 | "The Shade drifted between two" | | 5 | "Rory touched the pendant at" | | 6 | "The crimson stone sat cool" | | 7 | "Rory turned in a slow" | | 8 | "The clearing stretched wider than" | | 9 | "It pooled on the ground" | | 10 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground between" | | 11 | "Bluebells, primroses, foxgloves—flowers that had" | | 12 | "Their colours struck the eye" | | 13 | "A foxglove the size of" | | 14 | "The words came out sharper" | | 15 | "Nyx materialised beside her, their" | | 16 | "Rory knelt, keeping her hands" | | 17 | "The foxglove leaned toward her," | | 18 | "Rory stood and wiped the" | | 19 | "It was dark and fine," |
| | ratio | 0.874 | |
| 57.47% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Wherever this was, it wasn't" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks had given way to something older, their bark pale as bone, their branches twisted into shapes that hurt to look at for too long." | | 1 | "And the air—the air tasted different, heavy with the scent of flowers that shouldn't bloom in November." | | 2 | "The clearing stretched wider than a football pitch, ringed by the bone-white oaks whose canopy filtered the light into something that wasn't quite sunlight and …" | | 3 | "Nyx materialised beside her, their shadow-form rippling with something that might have been amusement." | | 4 | "She drew it, the blade catching that strange silver-green light and throwing it back in patterns that moved wrong." | | 5 | "The wildflowers gave way to tall grasses that whispered against each other in a language Rory almost understood." | | 6 | "The trees grew closer together, their branches interlocking overhead until the sky disappeared and the only light came from the ground itself—veins of luminesce…" | | 7 | "On the far bank, a willow tree hung its branches into the water, each leaf trailing a strand of pale light that dissolved the moment it touched the surface." | | 8 | "The silver water reflected her face back at her, except the reflection wore a crown of flowers she didn't recognize and smiled with teeth that were slightly too…" | | 9 | "Isolde stepped out of the willow tree as though it were a doorway, her bare feet touching the grass without bending a single blade." | | 10 | "No footprints marked her passage as she crossed to the stream's edge and stood on the opposite bank, watching Rory with an expression that held the weight of th…" | | 11 | "The Shade had gone still, their violet eyes fixed on Isolde with an intensity that made their shadow-form denser, more solid." | | 12 | "The moonsilver dimmed the moment it left her grip, as if the grove had swallowed its light." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde's voice carried, several tones braided into one" | | 1 | "Isolde tilted, and the light shifted around her, casting shadows in directions that contradicted the light sources" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.068 | | leniency | 0.136 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |