Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ4QJ5HAK7MVV5XQ9AXHDWP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 15s
Cost:
$0.005030
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the pavement as Detective Harlow Quinn rounded the corner, her boots splashing through a shallow puddle that had gathered on the cracked concrete. The figure ahead was nothing but a blur of dark fabric and rapid movement, darting between the handful of umbrellas that dotted the Soho streets. Quinn's breath came in sharp bursts, fogging the air in front of her face as she pushed herself harder. The suspect moved with the kind of familiarity that spoke of someone who knew these streets intimately. He ducked into an alleyway between a shuttered bookshop and a late-night kebab stand, the greasy neon light catching the back of his jacket for just a moment before darkness swallowed him. Quinn skidded on the wet pavement as she followed, her left hand brushing against the brick wall for balance. The leather watch on her wrist scraped against the rough surface. She'd been watching The Raven's Nest for three hours when he'd slipped out of the side entrance, not through the main bar. That alone had been enough to make her follow. The green neon sign still burned in her peripheral vision as she plunged into the alley. The alley was narrow, barely wide enough for two people to walk side by side. Overflowing bins lined both walls, and the stench of rotting vegetables and damp cardboard filled her nostrils. Water cascaded from a broken gutter pipe, creating a curtain of droplets that caught the distant streetlights in fractured patterns. The suspect had stopped running. Quinn saw him standing at the far end, his silhouette outlined against a dim orange glow that seemed to come from nowhere. He turned his head, and for a split second, their eyes met. She caught the glint of something metallic in his hand before he dropped out of sight. Quinn drew her weapon, the Sig Sauer cold and familiar in her grip. She moved forward with measured steps, her shoulders pressed against the wall, keeping her profile small. Ten feet from where the man had disappeared, she saw it: a circular manhole cover had been pulled aside, revealing a ladder descending into darkness. The orange glow came from below, faint and flickering as if from gas lamps. She crouched at the edge, listening. The rain hammered against the metal cover behind her. Below, she could hear something else—a low hum of voices, the clink of glass, footsteps echoing on stone. The sound carried up through the shaft like breath from a buried lung. Her thumb traced the edge of her watch. Eighteen years on the force. She'd seen things that defied explanation, things that had killed DS Morris and left her with nothing but questions and a file she kept locked in her desk drawer. The department called it an unsolved homicide. Quinn called it the moment she stopped believing in the world she'd sworn to protect. This was the same feeling. The same wrongness that crawled under her skin like a living thing. The voices below grew louder, someone laughed, a sharp sound that cut through the murmur. She could still catch the suspect. He'd gone down here for a reason. Maybe it was a meeting. Maybe it was a hideout. But the way he'd moved, the way he'd disappeared without hesitation, told her this was expected. This was his territory. Quinn holstered her weapon and grabbed the top rung of the ladder. The metal was slick with moisture, cold against her palm. She descended, her boots finding each rung with the precision of someone who'd climbed worse in worse conditions. The shaft opened into a wider tunnel after about fifteen feet, and the orange light grew stronger. The air changed—lost the rain and rot, took on a dusty warmth that smelled of incense and something metallic, like old blood. She stepped off the ladder onto solid ground. The tunnel stretched ahead, its walls lined with brick that had been blackened by age and smoke. String lights hung from the ceiling, bulbs casting amber pools that illuminated makeshift stalls and tables. People moved between them, their faces obscured by hoods and shadows. Some wore masks, bone-white and featureless. Others had the kind of stillness that made Quinn's hand itch for her weapon. This was not an abandoned Tube station. This was something else entirely. The air vibrated with energy, a low thrum that she felt in her chest. The market extended as far as she could see, branching into side tunnels and alcoves where candles flickered and whispered conversations took place. She spotted the suspect disappearing down a passage to her left, his dark jacket the only familiar thing in this strange place. She moved after him, keeping close to the wall, her footsteps silent against the stone floor. A vendor called out to her in a language she didn't recognize, his voice oily and inviting. She didn't look his way. The passage narrowed, the ceiling dropped, and Quinn found herself in a chamber where the walls held tapestries woven with symbols she'd seen before—in her partner's case file, sketched on pages that had made her superiors uncomfortable. The suspect stopped in the center of the room, turning to face her. "You should not have followed me here, Detective." His accent was polished, the words clipped with the precision of someone who chose them carefully. He let his hood fall back, revealing a face she didn't recognize. Young, maybe early thirties, with a scar running along his jawline. "Where's the girl?" Quinn asked, keeping her hand near her weapon. "The girl is safe. Safer than you are right now." The chamber had other exits, three passages that led deeper into darkness. The voices from the market faded into a muted hum, like hearing a party from underwater. Quinn could feel the weight of unseen eyes on her, watching from the shadows. "I'm not leaving without her." The man smiled, but there was no warmth in it. "You don't even know what world you've stepped into. Your rules don't apply here." He turned and walked down the rightmost passage, his footsteps echoing with the confidence of someone who knew every inch of this place. Quinn stood at the intersection, the decision pressing against her chest like a physical weight. Behind her, the tunnel led back to the ladder, back to the rain and the familiar streets of London. Ahead lay unknown territory, a world that operated outside every law she'd ever sworn to uphold. She followed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count3
5
word"echoing"
count2
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"fractured"
1"glint"
2"familiar"
3"measured"
4"footsteps"
5"echoing"
6"traced"
7"warmth"
8"vibrated"
9"flickered"
10"could feel"
11"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
84.15% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1080
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1040
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn12
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Sig1
Sauer1
Morris1
Tube1
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.923
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"glow that seemed to come from nowhere"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1080
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean45
std25.47
cv0.566
sampleLengths
070
149
277
379
428
568
646
764
817
958
1079
1172
1249
1360
1450
158
1639
1711
1810
1942
205
2124
2273
232
90.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences73
matches
0"been pulled"
1"been blackened"
2"was polished"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
31.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences77
ratio0.039
matches
0"Below, she could hear something else—a low hum of voices, the clink of glass, footsteps echoing on stone."
1"The air changed—lost the rain and rot, took on a dusty warmth that smelled of incense and something metallic, like old blood."
2"The passage narrowed, the ceiling dropped, and Quinn found herself in a chamber where the walls held tapestries woven with symbols she'd seen before—in her partner's case file, sketched on pages that had made her superiors uncomfortable."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1045
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Ahead lay unknown territory,"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.01722488038277512
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0066985645933014355
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean14.03
std6.84
cv0.488
sampleLengths
026
125
219
317
432
519
611
722
89
916
1015
1117
1220
135
1422
1512
1616
1713
1816
1925
2014
216
229
2318
2413
258
265
2729
287
2915
305
3112
3215
336
347
355
365
3716
384
3912
4010
4118
4217
4322
448
4517
4616
4711
486
4914
45.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.35064935064935066
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners27
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"Maybe it was a meeting."
1"Maybe it was a hideout."
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences72
matches
0"He ducked into an alleyway"
1"She'd been watching The Raven's"
2"He turned his head, and"
3"She caught the glint of"
4"She moved forward with measured"
5"She crouched at the edge,"
6"Her thumb traced the edge"
7"She'd seen things that defied"
8"She could still catch the"
9"He'd gone down here for"
10"She descended, her boots finding"
11"She stepped off the ladder"
12"She spotted the suspect disappearing"
13"She moved after him, keeping"
14"She didn't look his way."
15"His accent was polished, the"
16"He let his hood fall"
17"He turned and walked down"
ratio0.25
29.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences72
matches
0"Rain lashed against the pavement"
1"The figure ahead was nothing"
2"Quinn's breath came in sharp"
3"The suspect moved with the"
4"He ducked into an alleyway"
5"Quinn skidded on the wet"
6"The leather watch on her"
7"She'd been watching The Raven's"
8"That alone had been enough"
9"The green neon sign still"
10"The alley was narrow, barely"
11"Water cascaded from a broken"
12"The suspect had stopped running."
13"Quinn saw him standing at"
14"He turned his head, and"
15"She caught the glint of"
16"Quinn drew her weapon, the"
17"She moved forward with measured"
18"The orange glow came from"
19"She crouched at the edge,"
ratio0.861
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"Rain lashed against the pavement as Detective Harlow Quinn rounded the corner, her boots splashing through a shallow puddle that had gathered on the cracked con…"
1"The figure ahead was nothing but a blur of dark fabric and rapid movement, darting between the handful of umbrellas that dotted the Soho streets."
2"Water cascaded from a broken gutter pipe, creating a curtain of droplets that caught the distant streetlights in fractured patterns."
3"Quinn saw him standing at the far end, his silhouette outlined against a dim orange glow that seemed to come from nowhere."
4"The orange glow came from below, faint and flickering as if from gas lamps."
5"She'd seen things that defied explanation, things that had killed DS Morris and left her with nothing but questions and a file she kept locked in her desk drawe…"
6"The same wrongness that crawled under her skin like a living thing."
7"She descended, her boots finding each rung with the precision of someone who'd climbed worse in worse conditions."
8"The air changed—lost the rain and rot, took on a dusty warmth that smelled of incense and something metallic, like old blood."
9"Others had the kind of stillness that made Quinn's hand itch for her weapon."
10"The passage narrowed, the ceiling dropped, and Quinn found herself in a chamber where the walls held tapestries woven with symbols she'd seen before—in her part…"
11"He turned and walked down the rightmost passage, his footsteps echoing with the confidence of someone who knew every inch of this place."
12"Ahead lay unknown territory, a world that operated outside every law she'd ever sworn to uphold."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.2665%