| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1083 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.28% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1083 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "glint" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "measured" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "echoing" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "vibrated" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.15% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1080 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1040 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 12 | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Sig | 1 | | Sauer | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.923 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "glow that seemed to come from nowhere" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1080 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 45 | | std | 25.47 | | cv | 0.566 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 79 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 79 | | 11 | 72 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 73 | | 23 | 2 |
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| 90.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "been pulled" | | 1 | "been blackened" | | 2 | "was polished" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 31.54% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "Below, she could hear something else—a low hum of voices, the clink of glass, footsteps echoing on stone." | | 1 | "The air changed—lost the rain and rot, took on a dusty warmth that smelled of incense and something metallic, like old blood." | | 2 | "The passage narrowed, the ceiling dropped, and Quinn found herself in a chamber where the walls held tapestries woven with symbols she'd seen before—in her partner's case file, sketched on pages that had made her superiors uncomfortable." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1045 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "Ahead lay unknown territory," |
| | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.01722488038277512 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0066985645933014355 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 14.03 | | std | 6.84 | | cv | 0.488 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 45.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.35064935064935066 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 92.59% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Maybe it was a meeting." | | 1 | "Maybe it was a hideout." |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "He ducked into an alleyway" | | 1 | "She'd been watching The Raven's" | | 2 | "He turned his head, and" | | 3 | "She caught the glint of" | | 4 | "She moved forward with measured" | | 5 | "She crouched at the edge," | | 6 | "Her thumb traced the edge" | | 7 | "She'd seen things that defied" | | 8 | "She could still catch the" | | 9 | "He'd gone down here for" | | 10 | "She descended, her boots finding" | | 11 | "She stepped off the ladder" | | 12 | "She spotted the suspect disappearing" | | 13 | "She moved after him, keeping" | | 14 | "She didn't look his way." | | 15 | "His accent was polished, the" | | 16 | "He let his hood fall" | | 17 | "He turned and walked down" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 29.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain lashed against the pavement" | | 1 | "The figure ahead was nothing" | | 2 | "Quinn's breath came in sharp" | | 3 | "The suspect moved with the" | | 4 | "He ducked into an alleyway" | | 5 | "Quinn skidded on the wet" | | 6 | "The leather watch on her" | | 7 | "She'd been watching The Raven's" | | 8 | "That alone had been enough" | | 9 | "The green neon sign still" | | 10 | "The alley was narrow, barely" | | 11 | "Water cascaded from a broken" | | 12 | "The suspect had stopped running." | | 13 | "Quinn saw him standing at" | | 14 | "He turned his head, and" | | 15 | "She caught the glint of" | | 16 | "Quinn drew her weapon, the" | | 17 | "She moved forward with measured" | | 18 | "The orange glow came from" | | 19 | "She crouched at the edge," |
| | ratio | 0.861 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain lashed against the pavement as Detective Harlow Quinn rounded the corner, her boots splashing through a shallow puddle that had gathered on the cracked con…" | | 1 | "The figure ahead was nothing but a blur of dark fabric and rapid movement, darting between the handful of umbrellas that dotted the Soho streets." | | 2 | "Water cascaded from a broken gutter pipe, creating a curtain of droplets that caught the distant streetlights in fractured patterns." | | 3 | "Quinn saw him standing at the far end, his silhouette outlined against a dim orange glow that seemed to come from nowhere." | | 4 | "The orange glow came from below, faint and flickering as if from gas lamps." | | 5 | "She'd seen things that defied explanation, things that had killed DS Morris and left her with nothing but questions and a file she kept locked in her desk drawe…" | | 6 | "The same wrongness that crawled under her skin like a living thing." | | 7 | "She descended, her boots finding each rung with the precision of someone who'd climbed worse in worse conditions." | | 8 | "The air changed—lost the rain and rot, took on a dusty warmth that smelled of incense and something metallic, like old blood." | | 9 | "Others had the kind of stillness that made Quinn's hand itch for her weapon." | | 10 | "The passage narrowed, the ceiling dropped, and Quinn found herself in a chamber where the walls held tapestries woven with symbols she'd seen before—in her part…" | | 11 | "He turned and walked down the rightmost passage, his footsteps echoing with the confidence of someone who knew every inch of this place." | | 12 | "Ahead lay unknown territory, a world that operated outside every law she'd ever sworn to uphold." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |