| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1702 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1702 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "glinting" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "dance" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "lurched" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "etched" | | 14 | "velvet" | | 15 | "footsteps" | | 16 | "crystal" | | 17 | "echoes" | | 18 | "cascading" | | 19 | "silk" | | 20 | "flickered" | | 21 | "anticipation" | | 22 | "beacon" | | 23 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | | |
| 8.40% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 72 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1686 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1233 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.38 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 12 | | Shade | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 17 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Veil | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Warden | 1 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Warden" |
| | places | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.811 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "quite align with the shadows they passed through" | | 1 | "felt like falling" | | 2 | "patterns that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly" | | 3 | "as if listening" | | 4 | "silk that seemed to be woven from mist, and her bare feet left no mark on the flower-carpeted ground" | | 5 | "quite a bow" |
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| 81.38% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.186 | | wordCount | 1686 | | matches | | 0 | "not the gnarled, weathered trees of Richmond Park, but something older" | | 1 | "not quickly, but with the slow, patient crawl of growing things" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 29.07 | | std | 20.63 | | cv | 0.71 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 66 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 56 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 62 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 54 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 63 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 63 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 36 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "were moving" | | 1 | "was carving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt it first in her chest—a subtle pressure, like the moment before a storm broke." | | 1 | "Even in the dimming light of Richmond Park's late afternoon, they moved wrong—a smear of darkness that didn't quite align with the shadows they passed through." | | 2 | "The path they'd been following—little more than a deer track through the underbrush—abruptly ended at a wall of hawthorn." | | 3 | "Beyond them, the air shimmered—a distortion like heat haze, but cold." | | 4 | "She stood in a perfect circle of ancient oaks—not the gnarled, weathered trees of Richmond Park, but something older." | | 5 | "The ambient light seemed to give them substance—she could make out the suggestion of features on their face, the curve of shoulders, the line of a jaw." | | 6 | "One brushed her ankle—a silken touch that sent a shiver up her spine." | | 7 | "The carvings on their surfaces were moving—not quickly, but with the slow, patient crawl of growing things." | | 8 | "She thought of the codex's warning—that an hour inside could be minutes or days outside—and felt the weight of that knowledge settle into her bones." | | 9 | "Her eyes—pale lavender, almost luminous in the grove's twilight—regarded Aurora with an expression that was both ancient and eerily youthful." | | 10 | "\"Shadow-walker.\" Isolde's gaze flickered to Nyx, and a smile touched her lips—a ghost of expression that vanished before it could settle." | | 11 | "The grove held its breath around them—the flowers stilled, the mushrooms dimmed, and even the air seemed to thicken with anticipation." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1255 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.03187250996015936 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00796812749003984 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 16.21 | | std | 10.06 | | cv | 0.62 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 53.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.36538461538461536 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 43.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the darkness of their" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 90.13% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 1 | "She still didn't fully understand" | | 2 | "They reached out a hand" | | 3 | "They pressed deeper, and the" | | 4 | "It had been a faint" | | 5 | "She stepped through the gap" | | 6 | "Her stomach lurched, her ears" | | 7 | "She stood in a perfect" | | 8 | "Their trunks were wider than" | | 9 | "She turned in a slow" | | 10 | "Their violet eyes glowed brighter" | | 11 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 12 | "She looked down and saw" | | 13 | "They paused, tilting their head" | | 14 | "She watched a spiral unfurl" | | 15 | "They studied the shifting symbols" | | 16 | "They reached out and touched" | | 17 | "She thought of the codex's" | | 18 | "she said, turning away from" | | 19 | "It came from everywhere and" |
| | ratio | 0.325 | |
| 5.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed before the" | | 1 | "Aurora felt it first in" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant beneath her" | | 3 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 4 | "The Shade had solidified into" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered, their voice the" | | 6 | "Aurora nodded, her fingers finding" | | 7 | "The moonsilver was cold even" | | 8 | "She still didn't fully understand" | | 9 | "The path they'd been following—little" | | 10 | "The branches were woven so" | | 11 | "Aurora said, but the pendant" | | 12 | "Nyx moved past her, their" | | 13 | "They reached out a hand" | | 14 | "Nyx said, their whisper carrying" | | 15 | "They pressed deeper, and the" | | 16 | "The branches began to writhe," | | 17 | "Aurora had seen it only" | | 18 | "It had been a faint" | | 19 | "This was different." |
| | ratio | 0.909 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the dimming light" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 28.06% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt pulsed with slow, rhythmic warmth against her collarbone, a heartbeat that wasn't her own." | | 1 | "Even in the dimming light of Richmond Park's late afternoon, they moved wrong—a smear of darkness that didn't quite align with the shadows they passed through." | | 2 | "Her stomach lurched, her ears popped, and the light shifted from the grey-gold of a London autumn evening to a soft, perpetual twilight that came from no discer…" | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion: bluebells that glowed with their own faint light, roses that bloomed in shades of silver and deep viole…" | | 4 | "One brushed her ankle—a silken touch that sent a shiver up her spine." | | 5 | "She watched a spiral unfurl across a slab of grey stone, the lines deepening as if an invisible hand was carving them in real time." | | 6 | "They studied the shifting symbols for a long moment, and when they spoke, their voice carried an edge of something that might have been reverence." | | 7 | "Her eyes—pale lavender, almost luminous in the grove's twilight—regarded Aurora with an expression that was both ancient and eerily youthful." | | 8 | "She wore a gown of grey silk that seemed to be woven from mist, and her bare feet left no mark on the flower-carpeted ground." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice the rustle of dead leaves across pavement" | | 1 | "Nyx said, their whisper carrying a note of ancient amusement" | | 2 | "Nyx emerged, their form more solid than she'd ever seen it" | | 3 | "They reached out, and the carvings seemed to brighten at their touch" | | 4 | "Nyx withdrew, and the carvings dimmed" | | 5 | "Isolde's gaze flickered, and a smile touched her lips—a ghost of expression that vanished before it could settle" |
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| 71.05% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Isolde continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.316 | | leniency | 0.632 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.158 | |