Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ4ZHXSCF1Q7G7WHR9VQ8D6

Run Details

Duration:
51.4s
Cost:
$0.003972
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pulled her coat tighter as she ducked through the gap in the fence, the rusted wire snagging at her sleeve. Richmond Park stretched before her, all rolling darkness and skeletal trees. The streetlights behind her painted the grass in sickly orange, but ahead lay nothing but shadow. She checked her phone. Eleven forty-seven. The text had come three hours ago, from an unknown number: *I know who gave you the pendant. Midnight. The grove. Come alone or it stays buried.* Stupid. She knew it was stupid. But the pendant had grown warm against her chest the moment she stepped through the fence, a steady thrum like a second heartbeat. Whoever had sent her here knew about it. Knew about her. She followed the familiar path through the trees, her trainers crunching on fallen leaves. She'd been to the grove before, with Silas, back when he'd first shown her the hidden pocket in the park. That visit had felt peaceful, almost sacred. The standing stones had seemed like old friends, the wildflowers impossibly bright. Tonight felt different. The silence hit first. One step she could hear the distant hum of London traffic, the rumble of a night bus, the drone of a plane overhead. The next step, nothing. Absolute stillness. No wind. No insects. No rustle of small animals in the undergrowth. Just the wet crunch of her own footsteps and the ragged sound of her breathing. She stopped. The air felt thick, heavy against her skin, like walking through water. She turned in a slow circle. The city sounds hadn't faded — they'd vanished. Erased. The darkness around her wasn't normal night-dark. It pressed in, a physical weight against her eyes. The pendant pulsed once, sharp and hot against her collarbone. "Right," she muttered, the word too loud in the silence. "Definitely not creepy at all." She kept walking. The grove materialised without warning. One moment she was pushing through a tangle of hawthorn branches, the next the trees opened and she stood at the edge of the clearing. The standing stones ringed the space, seven of them, their surfaces slick with moisture despite the dry night. The wildflowers carpeted the ground — bluebells, foxgloves, poppies — all in full bloom, their colours too vivid in the dark. They shouldn't have been visible. There was no moon tonight, the sky a solid slab of cloud. But the flowers glowed, each petal faintly luminescent, painting the clearing in soft shades of blue and red and violet. The pendant burned. Not painfully, but insistently, a constant pulse of heat that demanded attention. Rory pressed her hand against it through her shirt and felt its shape — thumbnail-sized, smooth, impossibly warm. She was early. Whoever had texted her wasn't here yet. She crossed to the central stone, the largest of the seven, and pressed her back against its cool surface. From here she could see the entire clearing, every approach. Nothing moved. For five minutes she watched. Ten. The wildflowers swayed in a breeze she couldn't feel. The stones cast shadows at angles that didn't match. The pendant kept its steady rhythm. At fifteen minutes, she felt it. A presence. Not seen, not heard, but sensed — a weight in the air, a pressure behind her eyes. She turned sharply, scanning the tree line at the edge of the clearing. Nothing. Just darkness between trunks, absolute and impenetrable. The flowers had stopped moving. She looked down. Every bloom had turned toward her, their faces angled as if watching. The bluebells, the foxgloves, the poppies — all oriented toward the centre of the clearing. Toward her. Rory's mouth went dry. "Hello?" The word fell flat, swallowed by the silence. No echo. No response. The stillness felt wrong in her ears, a void where sound should live. Something flickered at the edge of her vision. She snapped her head left. Nothing. But the standing stone closest to the tree line looked different than she remembered. She'd counted seven when she arrived, arranged in a loose circle. That one — the one with the crack running down its face — had been at the north-east point. Now it sat at the east, rotated maybe a metre from where it had stood. She stared at it, willing her memory to be wrong. It had to be wrong. Stones didn't move on their own. The pendant pulsed. Hot. Insistent. A sound broke the silence. Soft. Rhythmic. Like breathing, but not quite — the cadence was wrong, too slow, too even, each inhale lasting twice as long as the exhale. It came from behind the standing stones, from the darkness beyond them. Rory's hand drifted to the pendant, her fingers wrapping around its warmth. She took a step backward, toward the path she'd come from. The path wasn't there. Behind her, where the hawthorn thicket should have opened into a narrow track, she faced only more trees. More darkness. More of the same impossible wildflowers, glowing in silent accusation. She turned slowly, forcing herself to breathe. The breathing sound continued, steady, unhurried. Whatever it was, it knew she was here. It knew she had nowhere to run. "Show yourself," she said, and her voice didn't tremble. Not much. The breathing stopped. In the silence that followed, Rory heard something else. A whisper, so faint it might have been the wind, except there was no wind. It came from everywhere at once — from the stones, from the flowers, from the darkness between the trees. A dozen voices speaking in a language she didn't know, their words sliding against her skull like oil on water. She felt them watching. Not one thing. Many. The grove was alive with them, crowded with presences that pressed against the edges of her awareness. They moved through the corners of her vision, dark shapes that dissolved when she tried to look at them directly. One behind the cracked stone. Two between the oaks. More in the shadows above, clinging to branches that shouldn't have held their weight. The pendant throbbed, hot enough to sting. A voice spoke directly into her mind. Not in words, but in meaning — a concept unfolded behind her eyes, too vast to fit, too alien to fully grasp. She understood fragments: *key*. *Door*. *Blood*. The pendant. The grove. *You shouldn't have come.* She felt the thought press against her consciousness, cold and ancient and amused. It didn't belong to one speaker. It belonged to the grove itself, to the stones and the flowers and the darkness between them. Rory's fingers tightened on the pendant. She could feel it responding to her touch, pulsing in time with her heartbeat now, its warmth spreading through her chest. The wildflowers turned away from her, all at once, their faces dropping to face the earth. The breathing resumed, closer this time. So close she felt the displaced air against her cheek. Something cold brushed her neck. She spun, her hand shooting out, grabbing nothing but shadow. The laughter that followed wasn't human. It came from the stones, from the sky, from the ground beneath her feet — a chorus of dry, cracking sounds that might have been amusement. Rory backed away, her heel catching on a root. She stumbled, caught herself, and ran. The trees closed around her. The path didn't open. Every direction looked the same — darkness and flowers and stones that shifted when she wasn't looking. She crashed through undergrowth, branches scraping her arms, the pendant burning against her chest. The whispers grew louder, following her. The breathing stayed at her shoulder, always one step behind. And in the distance, deeper in the grove than she'd ever gone before, something ancient began to stir.
created_at"2026-07-07T20:40:43.731Z" 7/7/2026, 8:40:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1272
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1272
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silence"
count5
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count2
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"footsteps"
3"weight"
4"pulsed"
5"pulse"
6"scanning"
7"echo"
8"flickered"
9"rhythmic"
10"warmth"
11"whisper"
12"throbbed"
13"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences146
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords23
totalWords1285
ratio0.018
matches
0"I know who gave you the pendant. Midnight. The grove. Come alone or it stays buried."
1"key"
2"Door"
3"Blood"
4"You shouldn't have come."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount1276
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
Stupid1
Silas1
London1
Rory7
One3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"One"
globalScore1
windowScore1
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if watching"
1"not quite the cadence was wrong, too slow, too even, each inhale lasting twice as long as the exhale"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.113
wordCount1285
matches
0"Not painfully, but insistently, a constant pulse of heat"
1"Not seen, not heard, but sensed"
2"not heard, but sensed"
3"Not in words, but in meaning"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean27.34
std22.13
cv0.809
sampleLengths
048
133
240
353
43
560
645
710
815
93
10106
1133
1239
132
1430
156
1640
175
1832
194
201
2125
228
2365
2421
255
2642
2723
284
2930
3028
3111
323
3363
3468
357
3639
374
3836
3927
4032
415
4242
4315
4440
4516
4618
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs199
matches
0"was pushing"
1"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences148
ratio0.074
matches
0"The city sounds hadn't faded — they'd vanished."
1"The wildflowers carpeted the ground — bluebells, foxgloves, poppies — all in full bloom, their colours too vivid in the dark."
2"Rory pressed her hand against it through her shirt and felt its shape — thumbnail-sized, smooth, impossibly warm."
3"Not seen, not heard, but sensed — a weight in the air, a pressure behind her eyes."
4"The bluebells, the foxgloves, the poppies — all oriented toward the centre of the clearing."
5"That one — the one with the crack running down its face — had been at the north-east point."
6"Like breathing, but not quite — the cadence was wrong, too slow, too even, each inhale lasting twice as long as the exhale."
7"It came from everywhere at once — from the stones, from the flowers, from the darkness between the trees."
8"Not in words, but in meaning — a concept unfolded behind her eyes, too vast to fit, too alien to fully grasp."
9"It came from the stones, from the sky, from the ground beneath her feet — a chorus of dry, cracking sounds that might have been amusement."
10"Every direction looked the same — darkness and flowers and stones that shifted when she wasn't looking."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1267
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, heavy against her"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03314917127071823
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.010260457774269928
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean8.68
std6.46
cv0.744
sampleLengths
021
111
216
34
42
518
61
72
86
91
105
1123
128
133
1414
1520
167
1712
183
194
2023
214
222
232
242
258
2615
272
2812
296
308
311
327
339
3410
3510
365
373
385
3925
4018
4121
425
4312
4420
453
4612
4718
483
497
50.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3581081081081081
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners53
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences118
matches
0"Just the wet crunch of"
1"Just darkness between trunks, absolute"
2"More of the same impossible"
3"More in the shadows above,"
4"So close she felt the"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences118
matches
0"She checked her phone."
1"She knew it was stupid."
2"She followed the familiar path"
3"She'd been to the grove"
4"She turned in a slow"
5"It pressed in, a physical"
6"she muttered, the word too"
7"She kept walking."
8"They shouldn't have been visible."
9"She was early."
10"She crossed to the central"
11"She turned sharply, scanning the"
12"She looked down."
13"She snapped her head left."
14"She'd counted seven when she"
15"She stared at it, willing"
16"It had to be wrong."
17"It came from behind the"
18"She took a step backward,"
19"She turned slowly, forcing herself"
ratio0.297
87.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences118
matches
0"Rory pulled her coat tighter"
1"Richmond Park stretched before her,"
2"The streetlights behind her painted"
3"She checked her phone."
4"The text had come three"
5"She knew it was stupid."
6"She followed the familiar path"
7"She'd been to the grove"
8"That visit had felt peaceful,"
9"The standing stones had seemed"
10"Tonight felt different."
11"The silence hit first."
12"The next step, nothing."
13"The air felt thick, heavy"
14"She turned in a slow"
15"The city sounds hadn't faded"
16"The darkness around her wasn't"
17"It pressed in, a physical"
18"The pendant pulsed once, sharp"
19"she muttered, the word too"
ratio0.746
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences118
matches
0"Whoever had sent her here"
1"Whoever had texted her wasn't"
2"Now it sat at the"
ratio0.025
90.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Not painfully, but insistently, a constant pulse of heat that demanded attention."
1"A dozen voices speaking in a language she didn't know, their words sliding against her skull like oil on water."
2"She could feel it responding to her touch, pulsing in time with her heartbeat now, its warmth spreading through her chest."
3"She spun, her hand shooting out, grabbing nothing but shadow."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she muttered, the word too loud in the silence"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
80.7257%