| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1272 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1272 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 146 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 148 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 23 | | totalWords | 1285 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "I know who gave you the pendant. Midnight. The grove. Come alone or it stays buried." | | 1 | "key" | | 2 | "Door" | | 3 | "Blood" | | 4 | "You shouldn't have come." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 1276 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.55 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Stupid | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 93.18% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if watching" | | 1 | "not quite the cadence was wrong, too slow, too even, each inhale lasting twice as long as the exhale" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.113 | | wordCount | 1285 | | matches | | 0 | "Not painfully, but insistently, a constant pulse of heat" | | 1 | "Not seen, not heard, but sensed" | | 2 | "not heard, but sensed" | | 3 | "Not in words, but in meaning" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 27.34 | | std | 22.13 | | cv | 0.809 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 106 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 65 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 63 | | 34 | 68 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 32 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 42 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 40 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 199 | | matches | | 0 | "was pushing" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 148 | | ratio | 0.074 | | matches | | 0 | "The city sounds hadn't faded — they'd vanished." | | 1 | "The wildflowers carpeted the ground — bluebells, foxgloves, poppies — all in full bloom, their colours too vivid in the dark." | | 2 | "Rory pressed her hand against it through her shirt and felt its shape — thumbnail-sized, smooth, impossibly warm." | | 3 | "Not seen, not heard, but sensed — a weight in the air, a pressure behind her eyes." | | 4 | "The bluebells, the foxgloves, the poppies — all oriented toward the centre of the clearing." | | 5 | "That one — the one with the crack running down its face — had been at the north-east point." | | 6 | "Like breathing, but not quite — the cadence was wrong, too slow, too even, each inhale lasting twice as long as the exhale." | | 7 | "It came from everywhere at once — from the stones, from the flowers, from the darkness between the trees." | | 8 | "Not in words, but in meaning — a concept unfolded behind her eyes, too vast to fit, too alien to fully grasp." | | 9 | "It came from the stones, from the sky, from the ground beneath her feet — a chorus of dry, cracking sounds that might have been amusement." | | 10 | "Every direction looked the same — darkness and flowers and stones that shifted when she wasn't looking." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1267 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, heavy against her" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03314917127071823 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010260457774269928 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 148 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 148 | | mean | 8.68 | | std | 6.46 | | cv | 0.744 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 50.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3581081081081081 | | totalSentences | 148 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wet crunch of" | | 1 | "Just darkness between trunks, absolute" | | 2 | "More of the same impossible" | | 3 | "More in the shadows above," | | 4 | "So close she felt the" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her phone." | | 1 | "She knew it was stupid." | | 2 | "She followed the familiar path" | | 3 | "She'd been to the grove" | | 4 | "She turned in a slow" | | 5 | "It pressed in, a physical" | | 6 | "she muttered, the word too" | | 7 | "She kept walking." | | 8 | "They shouldn't have been visible." | | 9 | "She was early." | | 10 | "She crossed to the central" | | 11 | "She turned sharply, scanning the" | | 12 | "She looked down." | | 13 | "She snapped her head left." | | 14 | "She'd counted seven when she" | | 15 | "She stared at it, willing" | | 16 | "It had to be wrong." | | 17 | "It came from behind the" | | 18 | "She took a step backward," | | 19 | "She turned slowly, forcing herself" |
| | ratio | 0.297 | |
| 87.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled her coat tighter" | | 1 | "Richmond Park stretched before her," | | 2 | "The streetlights behind her painted" | | 3 | "She checked her phone." | | 4 | "The text had come three" | | 5 | "She knew it was stupid." | | 6 | "She followed the familiar path" | | 7 | "She'd been to the grove" | | 8 | "That visit had felt peaceful," | | 9 | "The standing stones had seemed" | | 10 | "Tonight felt different." | | 11 | "The silence hit first." | | 12 | "The next step, nothing." | | 13 | "The air felt thick, heavy" | | 14 | "She turned in a slow" | | 15 | "The city sounds hadn't faded" | | 16 | "The darkness around her wasn't" | | 17 | "It pressed in, a physical" | | 18 | "The pendant pulsed once, sharp" | | 19 | "she muttered, the word too" |
| | ratio | 0.746 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever had sent her here" | | 1 | "Whoever had texted her wasn't" | | 2 | "Now it sat at the" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 90.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Not painfully, but insistently, a constant pulse of heat that demanded attention." | | 1 | "A dozen voices speaking in a language she didn't know, their words sliding against her skull like oil on water." | | 2 | "She could feel it responding to her touch, pulsing in time with her heartbeat now, its warmth spreading through her chest." | | 3 | "She spun, her hand shooting out, grabbing nothing but shadow." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, the word too loud in the silence" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |