Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ52AWZYTQ03XDQGNJR4C5F

Run Details

Duration:
40.7s
Cost:
$0.002940
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory checked her phone as she passed through Richmond Gate. Ten minutes past midnight. She pocketed the device and adjusted the strap of her satchel, the Heartstone pendant warm against her collarbone beneath her jacket. She had no good reason to be here. The grove had called to her in dreams for three nights now. A pull she couldn't shake, a wordless summons that drew her out of bed, into the car, through the empty streets of London to this place. The pendant had pulsed hot against her skin each time she'd tried to ignore it, until sleep became impossible. The park lay dark and still under a moonless sky. Street lamps pooled light along the main path, but she left them behind after the first hundred yards, navigating by memory and the faint glow of her phone's torch. The grass was wet with dew. Her trainers squelched with each step. She'd walked this route twice before in daylight, during Eva's lunch breaks. A hidden clearing marked by ancient oaks, the standing stones that pushed up from the earth like old teeth. Isolde's grove, Eva called it. A place that didn't quite belong to either world. The air changed when she reached the treeline. Thicker. Warmer against her face, despite the autumn chill. Rory paused at the edge of the path, one hand braced against the trunk of an oak, and listened. Nothing. The park had been alive with night sounds minutes ago — foxes barking in the distance, the rustle of small creatures in the underbrush. Now there was only the hollow thump of blood in her ears and the wet rasp of her own breathing. The pendant burned hot against her sternum. She pushed forward. The grove opened around her without warning, as though the trees simply stopped existing in a perfect circle fifty feet across. The standing stones jutted from the earth in a loose ring, each one carved with spirals that seemed to drink the darkness. Wildflowers covered the ground — bluebells, cowslips, wood anemones — all of them pale and luminous in the absence of moonlight, as if they generated their own glow. Rory stopped at the boundary where grass gave way to flower petals. Nothing moved. The silence pressed against her eardrums with physical weight. She'd expected… something. Answers, maybe. A sign. The sense that coming here had been the right choice. Instead she stood at the edge of a pocket of impossible stillness, and every instinct she possessed screamed at her to turn around and walk back the way she came. The pendant pulsed. Once. Twice. A third time, in rhythm with her heartbeat. Rory stepped onto the flowers. The change was immediate and subtle — a shift in pressure, like descending into deep water. The air grew colder but carried a sweet scent she couldn't place, floral and cloying, something between honey and rot. She moved toward the center of the grove, her footsteps silent on the carpet of petals. One of the standing stones flickered. Rory stopped. She turned her head slowly, tracking the stone at the northeast edge of the ring. It sat solid and unmoving, carved spirals catching the bioluminescent glow of the flowers. She stared at it for a full thirty seconds. Nothing. She took another step. The flowers at her feet rustled. A sound like whispered syllables, like paper crumpling in a closed fist. She looked down. The anemones lay still, pressed flat beneath her trainers, but the petals of the flowers she hadn't touched rippled in waves, as though stirred by a breeze that didn't touch her skin. The pendant flared. Hot enough to hurt through her shirt. Something moved at the edge of her vision. Rory snapped her gaze to the left. Nothing there. Just stones and flowers and the dark wall of trees beyond. But the sensation lingered — the certainty that she'd caught a shape in her peripheral vision, tall and thin and wrong, standing between two of the standing stones. Not anymore. But it had been there. She was sure of it. Her breath came faster now. She forced herself to slow it, to think, to remember why she'd come. The dreams. The pull. The pendant that had been warm ever since she found it pinned to her door three weeks ago, no note, no explanation, just a deep crimson gem on a silver chain that hummed against her skin whenever she passed certain places in the city. The grove was one of those places. The strongest one. She'd thought there would be answers here. Instead she stood in a flower-ringed clearing that refused to hold still, where shadows lengthened and shortened without a sun to cast them, where the weight of unseen eyes pressed against her from every direction. "Hello?" she said. The word hung in the air, flat and swallowed, as though the grove absorbed sound instead of carrying it. A whisper rose from the flowers at her feet. Not the rustle of petals this time — something articulated, something shaped by a mouth. A single word, repeated three times, too quiet to parse. Rory's hand went to the pendant. The gem burned against her palm. The whispering stopped. The silence that followed felt alive. Breathing. Waiting. She turned in a slow circle, scanning the treeline, the stones, the luminous petals that carpeted the ground. Nothing moved. Nothing changed. But the certainty grew with each passing second, settling into her bones like cold water: She was not alone. Something stood at the edge of the grove. Something that had always been there, woven into the space between the stones, patient and still and aware. It had watched her step inside. It had listened to her call out. It had drawn her here through three nights of restless dreams, and now it had her. The pendant pulsed. The wildflowers went dark. Every petal in the grove closed simultaneously, curling inward, their bioluminescence snuffing out like candles doused by an unseen hand. The darkness crashed over Rory in a wave, absolute and suffocating, thick enough to taste. She stood blind in the center of the grove, the pendant cold against her chest for the first time since she'd put it on, and something breathed against the back of her neck.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1042
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1042
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"navigating"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"navigating"
2"chill"
3"perfect"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"footsteps"
7"flickered"
8"whisper"
9"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1048
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount1047
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Gate1
Heartstone1
London1
Eva2
Rory8
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
32.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite belong to either world"
1"spirals that seemed to drink the darkness"
2"something between honey and rot"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1048
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean24.95
std20.76
cv0.832
sampleLengths
035
18
257
351
445
536
645
77
83
971
1012
1111
1247
1313
145
1552
166
1740
181
194
2053
2110
228
2348
2412
2566
2610
277
2835
293
3019
3134
3212
333
348
3537
364
3755
383
394
4035
4133
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences100
ratio0.05
matches
0"The park had been alive with night sounds minutes ago — foxes barking in the distance, the rustle of small creatures in the underbrush."
1"Wildflowers covered the ground — bluebells, cowslips, wood anemones — all of them pale and luminous in the absence of moonlight, as if they generated their own glow."
2"The change was immediate and subtle — a shift in pressure, like descending into deep water."
3"But the sensation lingered — the certainty that she'd caught a shape in her peripheral vision, tall and thin and wrong, standing between two of the standing stones."
4"Not the rustle of petals this time — something articulated, something shaped by a mouth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1042
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02399232245681382
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003838771593090211
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean10.48
std9.08
cv0.866
sampleLengths
010
14
221
38
412
526
619
710
829
96
106
1112
1219
135
149
158
161
178
1819
191
2024
2120
227
233
2421
2522
2628
2712
282
299
302
311
322
332
3410
3530
363
371
381
398
405
4116
4220
4316
446
452
4615
4714
489
491
34.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.28
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"Instead she stood at the"
1"Just stones and flowers and"
2"Instead she stood in a"
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences80
matches
0"She pocketed the device and"
1"She had no good reason"
2"Her trainers squelched with each"
3"She'd walked this route twice"
4"She pushed forward."
5"She moved toward the center"
6"She turned her head slowly,"
7"It sat solid and unmoving,"
8"She stared at it for"
9"She took another step."
10"She looked down."
11"She was sure of it."
12"Her breath came faster now."
13"She forced herself to slow"
14"She'd thought there would be"
15"She turned in a slow"
16"She was not alone."
17"It had watched her step"
18"It had listened to her"
19"It had drawn her here"
ratio0.263
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences80
matches
0"Rory checked her phone as"
1"She pocketed the device and"
2"She had no good reason"
3"The grove had called to"
4"A pull she couldn't shake,"
5"The pendant had pulsed hot"
6"The park lay dark and"
7"Street lamps pooled light along"
8"The grass was wet with"
9"Her trainers squelched with each"
10"She'd walked this route twice"
11"A hidden clearing marked by"
12"Isolde's grove, Eva called it."
13"A place that didn't quite"
14"The air changed when she"
15"Rory paused at the edge"
16"The park had been alive"
17"The pendant burned hot against"
18"She pushed forward."
19"The grove opened around her"
ratio0.85
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now there was only the"
ratio0.013
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A hidden clearing marked by ancient oaks, the standing stones that pushed up from the earth like old teeth."
1"Wildflowers covered the ground — bluebells, cowslips, wood anemones — all of them pale and luminous in the absence of moonlight, as if they generated their own …"
2"The anemones lay still, pressed flat beneath her trainers, but the petals of the flowers she hadn't touched rippled in waves, as though stirred by a breeze that…"
3"The pendant that had been warm ever since she found it pinned to her door three weeks ago, no note, no explanation, just a deep crimson gem on a silver chain th…"
4"Every petal in the grove closed simultaneously, curling inward, their bioluminescence snuffing out like candles doused by an unseen hand."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.8636%