| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "They turned slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.523 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.087 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 84.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1878 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.41% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1878 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "furrowed" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "wavering" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "sentinels" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "echoes" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 145 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 165 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1901 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1490 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 1.28 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | December | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 19 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Come | 2 | | London | 4 | | Silas | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | English | 1 | | Nyx | 13 | | Fae | 1 | | Amusement | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Seer | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei" | | 6 | "Nyx" | | 7 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "December" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.862 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 94.44% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed more present" | | 1 | "something like wonder" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.104 | | wordCount | 1901 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the sparse, windburned blooms of an English winter, but thick clusters of colour" | | 1 | "not into earth but into darkness" | | 2 | "not a sky but a ceiling of woven light, fraying at its edges" | | 3 | "not growing but remembering" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 37.27 | | std | 27.4 | | cv | 0.735 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 82 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 75 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 73 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 72 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 103 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 72 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 63 | | 31 | 55 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 92 | | 35 | 58 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 44 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 77 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 87 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 57 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "being made" | | 1 | "were gone " |
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| 95.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 254 | | matches | | 0 | "was reaching" | | 1 | "was reaching" | | 2 | "was breathing" | | 3 | "was running" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 21 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 18 | | totalSentences | 165 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "Never once felt the pull she felt now — a low, insistent tug behind her sternum, like a hook set deep in bone." | | 1 | "It pulsed against her skin — slow, warm, deliberate." | | 2 | "In daylight, they were barely a suggestion — a darkness that had no source, a shape the eye refused to hold." | | 3 | "The space between them shimmered — a distortion she might have dismissed as heat haze if it hadn't been December, if the air hadn't been sharp enough to sting her cheeks." | | 4 | "The next, she was elsewhere — and the elsewhere was impossibly, quietly alive." | | 5 | "Their scent was sweet but not cloying — green and cool, like springwater over stone." | | 6 | "There was no sun that she could find, yet light came from everywhere at once — soft, diffuse, sourceless." | | 7 | "They were tall — fully six foot two — and their edges were clean." | | 8 | "The standing stones were gone — or rather, they formed the boundary now, visible only as dark shapes at the edge of her vision, circling the grove like sentinels." | | 9 | "They chimed when they moved — a high, clear sound like crystal struck with a fingernail." | | 10 | "Somewhere — she couldn't tell if it was near or far — water was running." | | 11 | "The blade caught the strange light and glowed — a faint, silvery luminescence that made the wildflowers nearest to her recoil." | | 12 | "She was small — no taller than Rory — with silver hair that fell past her waist like water." | | 13 | "It was a strange expression — warm and distant at once, like sunlight through stained glass." | | 14 | "Isolde's gaze moved to Nyx, and for a moment, something passed between them — a recognition that had nothing to do with names or faces." | | 15 | "The Heartstone blazed — a flare of crimson light that lit the grove and sent shadows scattering." | | 16 | "The flowers not growing but remembering — echoes of a spring that had never ended because it had never truly begun." | | 17 | "Behind her, the standing stones faded into the London dark, and the Veil between worlds shivered — thin, patient, and waiting." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1416 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03036723163841808 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009180790960451978 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 165 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 165 | | mean | 11.52 | | std | 8.12 | | cv | 0.705 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 54.34% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3696969696969697 | | totalSentences | 165 | | uniqueOpeners | 61 | |
| 56.98% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere — she couldn't tell" | | 1 | "Then the light faded, and" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 83.25% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd walked this section of" | | 1 | "Their voice came as it" | | 2 | "Her hand went to her" | | 3 | "It pulsed against her skin" | | 4 | "Their violet eyes caught the" | | 5 | "They extended one hand toward" | | 6 | "She pulled the pendant free" | | 7 | "She stepped closer." | | 8 | "She thought of Evan." | | 9 | "She thought of Silas and" | | 10 | "she said, and stepped between" | | 11 | "It was not a violent" | | 12 | "Their scent was sweet but" | | 13 | "It wasn't the pale grey" | | 14 | "It cast no shadows." | | 15 | "It cast one shadow." | | 16 | "They were tall — fully" | | 17 | "Their violet eyes burned brighter" | | 18 | "They turned slowly, taking in" | | 19 | "She tucked it back beneath" |
| | ratio | 0.342 | |
| 62.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory counted seven of them" | | 2 | "The oaks formed a rough" | | 3 | "She'd walked this section of" | | 4 | "Their voice came as it" | | 5 | "Her hand went to her" | | 6 | "It pulsed against her skin" | | 7 | "Nyx moved beside her, their" | | 8 | "Here, as the sun dipped" | | 9 | "Their violet eyes caught the" | | 10 | "They extended one hand toward" | | 11 | "She pulled the pendant free" | | 12 | "The deep crimson gemstone glowed" | | 13 | "Nyx's whisper carried a note" | | 14 | "Rory looked at the stones" | | 15 | "The space between them shimmered" | | 16 | "She stepped closer." | | 17 | "The shimmer intensified." | | 18 | "The pendant's pulse quickened against" | | 19 | "She thought of Evan." |
| | ratio | 0.795 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 36.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "She thought of Silas and his bar, of Yu-Fei's knowing smile when he handed her deliveries bound for addresses that didn't appear on any map." | | 1 | "Of every small strangeness that had led her here, to a circle of stones in a London park at dusk, standing beside a being made of shadow." | | 2 | "Not the sparse, windburned blooms of an English winter, but thick clusters of colour that had no business existing in December." | | 3 | "Small white blossoms she couldn't name, growing in spirals that seemed too deliberate to be natural." | | 4 | "The warmth had climbed from pleasant to insistent, and she could feel it spreading up her wrist, into her forearm, as though the stone was reaching for somethin…" | | 5 | "Its trunk was white as bone, its branches spreading in shapes that reminded her of hands reaching for something just out of grasp." | | 6 | "Parting before her footsteps and closing behind, as though the ground itself was breathing her in and out." | | 7 | "The blade caught the strange light and glowed — a faint, silvery luminescence that made the wildflowers nearest to her recoil." | | 8 | "Her eyes were pale lavender, and they held Rory's gaze with a stillness that felt ancient." | | 9 | "Two beings who had been cast out of different worlds and found themselves standing in the same small space." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.82% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.341 | | leniency | 0.682 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.136 | |