Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ53HJRXMP2NHNK4NF97C49

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Aion 3.0
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53.0s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts. She'd undone all three before registering the knock pattern that wasn't Eva's. Aurora pulled the door open, and Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway of Eva's Brick Lane flat, tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the late hour, his ivory-handled cane planted on the worn floorboards like he owned the building. Ptolemy wound between his ankles, purring. "Your cat has questionable taste." "He's not my cat." "Ah." Lucien's gaze, one amber and one black, moved past her shoulder into the cluttered flat. Books and scrolls covered every surface. "Eva's, then. Where is our esteemed researcher?" "You could try calling first." "Could." Lucien's gaze settled on her, lingering on a spot just below her collarbone. Aurora felt the weight of that stare like a physical touch, even though she was wearing an old hoodie she'd swiped from Eva's wardrobe, nothing glamorous, nothing worth noticing. Yet he noticed. He always noticed. "Three months." His voice was low, measured. A French accent surfaced on certain words, especially vowels. "That's quite the sabbatical." "I wasn't taking a sabbatical." "What would you call it?" She didn't answer. Instead, she stepped back, not quite an invitation, and he entered anyway. Ptolemy followed at his heels, tail high, the traitor. The flat smelled of old paper and the curry restaurant below. Aurora had been here three days, hiding from an address she no longer recognized as home. Evan had found her new flat. Evan, who was supposed to be in Cardiff. Evan, who had left a note on her pillow at the flat above Silas' bar, folded neatly, with her full name written on the outside in that handwriting she'd once found charming. She hadn't told Lucien. She hadn't told anyone except Eva. "You've been crying." Lucien stated, not asked. "Curry smoke." "Ptolemy doesn't seem bothered." "His eyes water naturally." Lucien's mouth curved, not quite a smile. He moved through the flat with the ease of someone who'd been here before, which he had. Twice. Both times for Eva's research, both times when Aurora had been present, both times they'd ended in arguments she still couldn't explain to herself. He stopped at the window, looking down at the neon signs of Brick Lane. The reflection painted his platinum hair in pink and blue. "The Blackpenny job." His voice was quiet. "I know what you think happened." "I don't think. I know." Aurora crossed her arms. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light, and she tugged her sleeve down. "You fed me to them, Luc." "I fed them false information that you were carrying." "Semantics." "Precision." He turned to face her. "There's a difference. If I'd told you the full scope of the job, you would have refused. You would have been right to refuse. But we needed the false ledger in their hands, and you were the only courier they wouldn't search." "So you used me." "I protected you." "Same result." Lucien set his cane against the windowsill. The movement was deliberate. His hands, gloved in black leather, rested at his sides. Without the cane, he looked younger somehow. Less composed. "You drove to Edinburgh with people who would have killed you for that ledger." "You let me think it was real." "Yes." He didn't flinch. "And I'd do it again. Because you're alive to be angry with me." The honesty disarmed her more than any apology would have. Aurora felt the familiar pull, that dangerous gravity Lucien exerted without effort. She'd felt it the first night they'd met, at a gathering in a Soho basement that Eva had dragged her to. He'd been across the room, speaking Italian to a woman in red, and Aurora had thought: *that man is trouble.* She'd been right. "The ledger was a fake," Lucien continued. "The Blackpenny crew discovered this within forty-eight hours. By then, you were safe in London. They came for me instead." "I heard." "From Eva?" "From the screams. Your building isn't that far from the restaurant." That stopped him. He studied her face with those mismatched eyes, and she felt the heat rise in her cheeks. She'd heard the screams. She'd known what they meant. She'd stayed in her flat above Silas' bar, clutching a kitchen knife, wondering if she should call someone, anyone. She hadn't. She'd waited for morning, then gone to work as if nothing had happened. "You knew." "I guessed." "And you didn't come." "You didn't ask me to." Lucien moved toward her. Not fast. Deliberate. Each step measured, like he was approaching something that might bolt. Aurora held her ground, though her pulse quickened. The flat felt smaller with him in it. The walls pressed closer. "I'm asking now." Her voice came out steadier than she felt. "Asking what?" "Why you're here. Why you're not at your flat. Why Eva called me three hours ago, said you needed help, and hung up before I could ask questions." Eva. Of course. Aurora closed her eyes briefly. Her friend meant well. Eva always meant well. But Eva didn't understand that involving Lucien in anything was like adding fuel to a fire you were trying to contain. "Evan found me." Lucien went still. Not the stillness of surprise. The stillness of something darker. "Found you where?" "My flat. Above Silas'." "How?" "I don't know." Her voice cracked on the last word. She hated it. Hated that he was here to see her like this, off-balance and scared. She'd left Cardiff to escape this feeling. London was supposed to be different. "He left a note." "Show me." "It's just a note." "Show me, Aurora." The use of her full name felt like a slap. He never used it. Always Rory, or Carter, or that annoying pet name he'd invented once, *chérie*, which she'd told him she hated. He'd used it more after that. She reached into the hoodie pocket and pulled out the folded paper. She'd been carrying it since she'd fled, unable to leave it behind, unable to throw it away. It felt like evidence, or a curse, or both. Lucien took it. His gloved fingers brushed hers, and she felt the contact like a current. He unfolded the note, read it once, then again. "This is a threat." "It's Evan being Evan." "This is a threat, Aurora." He looked up from the paper. "He's not in Cardiff." "I know." "He's in London. He's been in London. The note isn't a warning. It's an announcement." The words settled into her stomach like stones. She'd suspected, of course. The note had been too specific, too aware of her routines, her new life. Evan knew things he shouldn't know. "He's been watching you." Lucien folded the note and slipped it into his jacket. "For how long, I don't know. But this isn't sudden. This is patient." "Why are you here, Luc?" "Because Eva called." "Before that." Lucien was silent for a moment. He retrieved his cane from the windowsill, his movements controlled. "I have resources. I have contacts. I can find him before he finds you." "That's not what I asked." He met her eyes. The amber one caught the neon glow from outside, and it looked almost golden. "Three months ago, you walked out of my office without a word. You didn't answer my calls. You didn't respond to the messages I left with Eva." "You left seventeen messages." "I'm aware." "I counted." His jaw tightened. "I was concerned." "You were controlling." The word hung between them. Lucien absorbed it without flinching, but something shifted behind his eyes. The black one seemed darker, the amber one warmer. "Perhaps." "Definitely." "You were in danger." "I'm always in danger. That's the job." "The job doesn't include ex-partners who threaten you in your own home." Aurora opened her mouth to respond, but a sound from the hallway stopped her. Footsteps. Heavy. Deliberate. Coming up the stairs that led to Eva's front door. Lucien's hand moved to his cane. The blade hidden within caught a sliver of light. "Expecting someone?" "No." "Lock the door." She reached for the deadbolts, but it was too late. The handle turned. The door swung open. And Evan smiled at her from the threshold, holding a bottle of wine and wearing a Cardiff University sweatshirt like he'd just come from a reunion. "Surprise, Rory. Miss me?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1386
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1386
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"measured"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"measured"
2"familiar"
3"pulse"
4"quickened"
5"stomach"
6"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences176
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1386
ratio0.004
matches
0"that man is trouble."
1"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
57.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount916
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva10
Lucien17
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
Books1
French1
Cardiff3
Aurora10
Soho1
Italian1
Rory1
Carter1
Evan5
University1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
4"Rory"
5"Carter"
6"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
3"Soho"
globalScore0.572
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"not quite an invitation, and he entered anyway"
1"not quite a smile"
2"felt like a slap"
3"felt like evidence, or a curse, or both"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1386
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences176
matches
0"thought: *that man"
1"Hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean14.9
std16.11
cv1.081
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145
25
34
429
55
61
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820
95
105
1124
1273
1310
147
152
164
174
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1924
2013
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229
231
2448
254
263
272
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2914
307
3117
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333
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352
362
3711
3848
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402
412
424
435
4438
453
4610
4728
4837
493
98.83% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences109
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was supposed"
46.74% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was wearing"
1"was approaching"
2"was like adding"
3"were trying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences176
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount492
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.034552845528455285
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0040650406504065045
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences176
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences176
mean7.88
std7.03
cv0.893
sampleLengths
02
112
239
36
45
54
616
76
87
95
101
1113
1229
133
143
157
169
174
185
195
203
2112
229
2311
2416
256
268
2732
284
296
307
312
324
334
347
3517
361
3724
3814
3910
407
416
429
4316
446
459
461
476
4842
494
50.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.35795454545454547
totalSentences176
uniqueOpeners63
68.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"Instead, she stepped back, not"
1"Always Rory, or Carter, or"
ratio0.021
63.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences97
matches
0"She'd undone all three before"
1"He always noticed."
2"His voice was low, measured"
3"She didn't answer."
4"She hadn't told Lucien."
5"She hadn't told anyone except"
6"He moved through the flat"
7"He stopped at the window,"
8"His voice was quiet"
9"He turned to face her"
10"His hands, gloved in black"
11"He didn't flinch"
12"She'd felt it the first"
13"He'd been across the room,"
14"She'd been right."
15"He studied her face with"
16"She'd heard the screams."
17"She'd known what they meant."
18"She'd stayed in her flat"
19"She'd waited for morning, then"
ratio0.392
6.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences97
matches
0"She'd undone all three before"
1"Aurora pulled the door open,"
2"Ptolemy wound between his ankles,"
3"Lucien's gaze, one amber and"
4"Books and scrolls covered every"
5"Lucien's gaze settled on her,"
6"Aurora felt the weight of"
7"He always noticed."
8"His voice was low, measured"
9"A French accent surfaced on"
10"She didn't answer."
11"Ptolemy followed at his heels,"
12"The flat smelled of old"
13"Aurora had been here three"
14"Evan had found her new"
15"Evan, who was supposed to"
16"Evan, who had left a"
17"She hadn't told Lucien."
18"She hadn't told anyone except"
19"Lucien stated, not asked"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien stated (state)"
1"Lucien continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.026
leniency0.051
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.051
82.0967%