Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ54XVCA5D8E5RB9B6DYCG3

Run Details

Model:
Aion 3.0
Duration:
43.7s
Cost:
$0.015526
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came sideways off the Thames, slicing through Soho's narrow streets like a blade. Harlow Quinn pressed her back against the damp brick of a kebab shop, the neon glow of The Raven's Nest three doors down painting the wet pavement green. She checked her watch—worn leather, the face cracked in two places from a case file she'd thrown across her desk last March. Eleven forty-seven. The informant had promised the runner would appear at midnight. Thirteen minutes of standing in piss-scented alleys while her knees reminded her she wasn't twenty-five anymore. A figure emerged from the mouth of the alley opposite. Hood up, head on a swivel. Young, quick-footed, carrying a flat package wrapped in brown paper pressed against the chest. The runner. Quinn pushed off the wall. Her boots hit the cobblestones and the figure's head snapped toward her. For a breath they stared at each other across the rain. Then the runner bolted north, splashing through puddles that erupted like small depth charges. "Damn it." She tore after him. Eighteen years of chasing people through London's arteries had taught her body the rhythm of pursuit even as her lungs protested the abuse. The runner cut left on Dean Street, nearly colliding with a cluster of drunks stumbling out of a club. One of them yelled something profane. The runner vaulted a low wall between two buildings and vanished. Quinn reached the wall and hauled herself over. Her wrist twinged where the leather band dug into skin. On the other side, a service corridor stretched into darkness, the distant rumble of Tube trains vibrating through the brick. The runner's trainers slapped wet concrete thirty meters ahead, the brown package still clutched like a newborn. "You're only making this harder on yourself!" No response. Of course not. They never talked. They ran until they couldn't, and then they talked or they didn't. DS Morris had been the one who could coax a confession from a lamppost. Quinn was the one who caught them. Different skills, same result—until three years ago when Morris chased someone down a alley in Whitechapel and never came out the other side. No body. No trail. Just his warrant card in a puddle and a case file stamped UNSOLVED that sat on her desk like a tumor. The runner ducked right. Quinn followed, her torch beam catching the wet ground in staccato bursts. They were heading toward Camden now, the streets emptying as the rain intensified. The few people out at this hour huddled under awnings or staggered between pub and taxi, paying no attention to a woman sprinting through the deluge. The runner disappeared down a set of iron stairs. Quinn skidded to a halt at the top. A Tube entrance—abandoned, from the look of it. The sign had been pried from the wall, leaving four bolt-holes like bullet wounds in the tilework. Yellow tape across the turnstiles, faded and torn. A skull-and-crossbones graffiti'd on the tile beside the stairs, its eye sockets filled with something dark that had dripped down like tears. She descended. The stairs spiraled, and the sound of the city above faded until only her breathing and the drip of water off the curved ceiling remained. Her torch caught the runner's wet footprints on the dusty platform, leading toward the black mouth of a tunnel. Emergency lights had been strung along the wall—crude, battery-powered, casting the tunnel in a sick amber glow that made the moisture on the walls look like blood. Quinn drew her baton but left her firearm holstered. Whatever was down here, she needed information more than she needed a body. The informant's words rattled in her skull: "They've got a whole world down there, Detective. Things you ain't supposed to see. Things that ain't supposed to exist." The tunnel curved and opened into what had once been a platform. But the tracks had been ripped up and replaced with wooden stalls, canvas awnings, and—she stopped. Candles. Hundreds of them, floating in glass jars suspended from the ceiling on fishing line, casting the space in warm, flickering light. The walls had been draped in dark fabric. Incense thickened the air until she could taste it on her tongue, sweet and copper-edged. A market. An entire market, operating beneath Camden like a tumor on the city's underbelly. And it was occupied. People moved between the stalls, their faces half-hidden. Some wore masks—Venetian, leather, animal. Others showed their faces openly, and Quinn's stomach dropped. A woman with scales covering her jaw. A man whose eyes reflected the candlelight like a cat's. A figure in a long coat, browsing a table of glass bottles that pulsed with inner light. The runner had reached a stall near the far end. Quinn watched as he passed the brown package to a man behind the counter. Something exchanged—coins, a small pouch. The runner turned and melted into the crowd, gone before she could track him. Quinn pressed herself against the tunnel wall, her heart hammering. She counted at least thirty people in the market, maybe more. The exit was behind her—a straight shot back up the stairs and out. But the runner had disappeared, and with him her only link to whatever the clique was moving through the city. The package. The goods. The network she'd spent six months trying to map. The Saint Christopher medallion caught the light first. Then the face—olive skin, short dark curls, a scar running the length of a forearm as the man rolled up his sleeves at a nearby stall. Quinn recognized him from the file: Tomás Herrera. Former paramedic, lost his NHS license under circumstances that made her captain's eyebrow climb to his hairline. The file had flagged him as a person of interest six weeks ago. He was leaning against a stall, speaking in low tones to a woman whose fingers glittered with rings that caught the candlelight in colors that shouldn't exist. Herrera was here. The runner was here. The market itself was evidence of something massive, organized, and hidden in plain sight. If she went in, she was alone, unarmed in any way that mattered, surrounded by people who belonged to a world she didn't understand. The last time she'd pursued something supernatural, Morris had vanished. But if she turned back now, the market would move. Her informant had been clear on that point—every full moon, a new location. She'd never find this place again. Herrera would disappear. The runner would report back to whoever sent him, and six months of work would dissolve like the steam rising off her damp jacket. She looked at the market. At the floating candles. At Herrera's profile, his scar catching the amber light as he handed something to the ring-fingered woman. At the tunnel behind her, dark and wet and safe. Her hand found her warrant card in her jacket pocket. Morris's face stared up at her from the photograph she kept tucked behind it—smiling, infuriating, gone. Quinn stepped into the light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1178
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1178
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"pulsed"
2"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1167
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1138
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Thames1
Soho1
Quinn12
Raven1
Nest1
March1
London1
Dean1
Street1
Tube2
Morris4
Whitechapel1
Camden2
Venetian1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás1
Herrera4
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Tube"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
7"Herrera"
places
0"Thames"
1"Soho"
2"London"
3"Dean"
4"Street"
5"Whitechapel"
globalScore0.973
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1167
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"bottles that pulsed"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean53.05
std26.71
cv0.503
sampleLengths
093
132
242
32
463
555
67
789
855
972
1073
1149
1273
1375
1443
1567
1699
1755
1856
1936
2026
215
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences99
matches
0"been pried"
1"been ripped"
2"been draped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs191
matches
0"were heading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences101
ratio0.109
matches
0"She checked her watch—worn leather, the face cracked in two places from a case file she'd thrown across her desk last March."
1"Different skills, same result—until three years ago when Morris chased someone down a alley in Whitechapel and never came out the other side."
2"A Tube entrance—abandoned, from the look of it."
3"Emergency lights had been strung along the wall—crude, battery-powered, casting the tunnel in a sick amber glow that made the moisture on the walls look like blood."
4"But the tracks had been ripped up and replaced with wooden stalls, canvas awnings, and—she stopped."
5"Some wore masks—Venetian, leather, animal."
6"Something exchanged—coins, a small pouch."
7"The exit was behind her—a straight shot back up the stairs and out."
8"Then the face—olive skin, short dark curls, a scar running the length of a forearm as the man rolled up his sleeves at a nearby stall."
9"Her informant had been clear on that point—every full moon, a new location."
10"Morris's face stared up at her from the photograph she kept tucked behind it—smiling, infuriating, gone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1160
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.022413793103448276
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004310344827586207
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean11.55
std7.18
cv0.622
sampleLengths
015
128
222
32
410
516
610
76
814
92
105
1112
1211
1314
142
154
1623
1719
186
1911
208
2110
2220
2317
247
252
263
273
2812
2914
307
3123
322
332
3421
354
3612
3713
3826
399
408
418
4217
438
4422
452
4625
4719
4827
499
57.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4158415841584158
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences89
matches
0"Then the runner bolted north,"
1"Of course not."
2"Just his warrant card in"
3"Then the face—olive skin, short"
ratio0.045
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences89
matches
0"She checked her watch—worn leather,"
1"Her boots hit the cobblestones"
2"She tore after him."
3"Her wrist twinged where the"
4"They never talked."
5"They ran until they couldn't,"
6"They were heading toward Camden"
7"Her torch caught the runner's"
8"She counted at least thirty"
9"He was leaning against a"
10"Her informant had been clear"
11"She'd never find this place"
12"She looked at the market."
13"Her hand found her warrant"
ratio0.157
77.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences89
matches
0"The rain came sideways off"
1"Harlow Quinn pressed her back"
2"She checked her watch—worn leather,"
3"The informant had promised the"
4"A figure emerged from the"
5"Hood up, head on a"
6"Quinn pushed off the wall."
7"Her boots hit the cobblestones"
8"She tore after him."
9"The runner cut left on"
10"The runner vaulted a low"
11"Quinn reached the wall and"
12"Her wrist twinged where the"
13"The runner's trainers slapped wet"
14"They never talked."
15"They ran until they couldn't,"
16"DS Morris had been the"
17"Quinn was the one who"
18"The runner ducked right."
19"Quinn followed, her torch beam"
ratio0.764
56.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"If she went in, she"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Emergency lights had been strung along the wall—crude, battery-powered, casting the tunnel in a sick amber glow that made the moisture on the walls look like bl…"
1"Former paramedic, lost his NHS license under circumstances that made her captain's eyebrow climb to his hairline."
2"He was leaning against a stall, speaking in low tones to a woman whose fingers glittered with rings that caught the candlelight in colors that shouldn't exist."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
92.3585%