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Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ55XKBQ6S38X354587KDDA
Run Details
Model:
Aion 3.0
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
44.7s
Cost:
$0.025256
Provider:
AionLabs
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
89.33%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
89.33%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
78.20%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
58.33%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
68.03%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
85.31%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
36.53%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
90.1686%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The knock came three times. Heavy. Deliberate.
The kind that didn't ask
permission so much as announce intent.
Rory's hand hesitated over the
worn brass handle. She
knew that rhythm
. Three knocks, pause, two more.
A pattern she'd taught herself
to forget, filed alongside the scent of bergamot and the particular way lamplight caught on mismatched eyes. She opened the door.
Lucien Moreau stood in the
narrow corridor, his charcoal suit immaculate despite the late hour.
Water darkened the shoulders where
rain had found him.
The ivory-handled cane hung from
his right wrist by its loop, and his left hand held a manila folder against his chest like a shield. "Delivery hours ended at ten, Moreau." "You should check your locks. The one on the bottom doesn't catch properly." She didn't step aside. "Didn't ask for a security audit." "Someone left a message at the Golden Empress. For you."
He extended the folder
. "Specifically. By name." "Yu-Fei didn't mention anything." "Yu-Fei isn't the one who received it."
His amber eye caught the
corridor light. The black one stayed dark, absorbing everything. "May I come in? Or shall we discuss this where your landlord's patrons can overhear?"
The bar below had been
rowdy tonight.
Silas kept irregular hours and
irregular clientele. Through the floor, someone laughed too loud, and glass cracked against wood.
Music with too much bass
thumped up through the floorboards. Rory stepped back. Just enough.
Lucien moved past her, and
for a moment the corridor shrank. Bergamot and something sharper underneath, smoke or ash or whatever filled the air in Avaros.
She caught the scent and
felt something behind her ribs shift. An old ache finding its place again. "Sit anywhere you like. Excuse the mess." The flat above Silas' bar was small: one room that served as bedroom, living space, and kitchenette combined. A narrow window overlooked the back alley where Silas dumped empty bottles.
Her delivery bag hung on
a hook by the door beside her jacket. The bed
was unmade
. She hadn't expected company. Lucien didn't sit. He stood near the window, angled so he could see both her and the door. Old habits.
She wondered if he'd ever
walked into a room without mapping his exits.
He set the folder on
her kitchen table. The only clear surface. "You look well." "You look like you haven't slept in days." "Three. But who's counting."
He allowed himself a smile
that didn't reach either eye. "The message mentioned Cardiff." The word landed like a stone in water. Ripples spread through her chest, touching things she'd sunk deep. "What about Cardiff?" "Someone's been asking questions. At the university, the courthouse, your father's chambers."
His fingers tapped the folder
once. "Professional questions. The kind someone pays for." "My father's a barrister. People ask him questions for a living." "Not the sort of questions that include your mother's maiden name, your secondary school records, and the dates you worked at that café in Cardiff Bay." She kept her face still. A skill she'd learned young, perfected under Evan's gaze, and never quite unlearned. But her hand moved to her left wrist. The small crescent scar sat there, faded white against her skin. "Who?" "That's what I'm here to find out." Lucien turned from the window. "That's what I do, Rory. I find things. And right now, I need you to tell me who in Cardiff would want to find you badly enough to pay for it." "Nothing happens in Cardiff. That's why I left." "Cardiff is where you left traces. Traces lead to now. Now, someone's pulling those threads."
He took a step closer
. "This isn't about your ego or your pride or whatever wall you've built between yourself and your past. This is about someone with resources and patience digging into your life. And they're getting close." "My life is here. London. Deliveries for Yu-Fei. Pints at Silas'. That's not a life anyone digs into." "And Evan?" The name hit harder than Cardiff.
She'd expected it eventually, the
way you expect a wave to break, but expectation didn't soften impact. "What about him?" "The questions started at the station where you filed your report. The one you never followed through on." Lucien's voice softened. Just a fraction. "The desk sergeant remembered you. Said you had a cut above your eye. Said you couldn't stop shaking." "I don't need you to remind me of my own history." "Then stop pretending it's history."
He pulled a photograph from
his inner pocket. Slid it across the table. "This was taken outside Silas' bar. Four days ago." The image showed the alley below her window. A man stood in shadow, face turned toward the camera that shouldn't have been there. Tall. Dark-haired. The build was wrong for Evan. Too broad. Too still. She didn't recognise him. "I don't know who that is." "No. But I do." Lucien's jaw tightened. "He works for someone I thought I'd handled three years ago. Someone who shouldn't have any interest in you. Unless." "Unless what?" "Unless you're the message. Not the recipient." Rory moved to the sink. Filled the kettle.
Her hands didn't shake, but
she felt them wanting to. The muscle memory of fear, stored in her fingers. "You disappeared," she said. "Three years ago. One night you're feeding me information about a missing girl in Lambeth, the next you're gone. Flat cleared. Number disconnected. Your contact at the Met pretending he'd never heard of you." The kettle clicked off. She didn't pour. "Three years, Lucien. And now you knock on my door with a folder and a photograph and expect me to trust you?" "I didn't say trust. I said I need you to talk to me." "Why? Why me? Why now?" "Because whoever's digging into your past, they're using your connection to me to do it." She turned. He stood close. Closer than she'd realised. The flat
suddenly
felt
very
small. "What connection? You vanished. There's no connection." "You know that isn't true." The
silence
stretched. She could hear Silas' bar below, the muffled sounds of lives being lived without complication. Ptolemy would be asleep on Eva's bed right now, curled into a
familiar
shape. Eva would have her nose in some grimoire, safe among her books and deadbolts. "I don't know what you want from me." Lucien reached toward her. Slowly. His fingers brushed the edge of her jaw, and she felt the heat of his skin like a brand. Three years collapsed into the space between them. She didn't move. Didn't breathe. Couldn't. "I want you to tell me what you told Evan. The night he hit you. The night you left Cardiff." His voice dropped. "I want to know what he was looking for." Her hand found his wrist. The one that held the cane. She meant to push him away. She didn't. "He wanted to know who my father's clients were. Specific ones. He wanted to know about a case from before I was born. Something my father worked on. Something sealed." Lucien's mismatched
eyes widened
. Just a fraction. But she caught it. "What case?" "I don't know. He never said. He just kept asking, and when I couldn't answer." Her grip tightened on his wrist. "He found other ways to ask." Lucien exhaled. The sound carried
weight
. He turned his hand, not pulling away, and his fingers curled around hers. The touch felt like a question neither of them had words for. "Your father sealed a case thirty years ago. The client was a woman named Seraphina Moreau." The name hit her like cold water. His mother's name. She'd heard it once, years ago, in a conversation she wasn't supposed to overhear. Lucien speaking to his contact at the Met, voice low and raw in a way she'd never heard before or since. "My father never talked about his work." "Your father defended my mother." His grip tightened. "Against charges that should have destroyed her. And he won. Somehow. Against evidence that should have been airtight." Lucien's other hand came up. He held her face between his palms. "And someone wants to know how." The knock came again. Not from the corridor. From the window behind them. Rory's phone buzzed against the table, lighting up with a message from Eva: *Don't answer your door. Don't answer your door. Someone just asked Silas which flat is yours. Don't answer your door.* The glass cracked. </u
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
16
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
57
tagDensity
0.281
leniency
0.561
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
89.33%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1406
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"suddenly"
1
"very"
2
"slowly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
89.33%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1406
totalAiIsms
3
found
0
word
"silence"
count
1
1
word
"familiar"
count
1
2
word
"weight"
count
1
highlights
0
"silence"
1
"familiar"
2
"weight"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
114
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
114
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
156
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
38
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
1
markdownWords
20
totalWords
1406
ratio
0.014
matches
0
"Don't answer your door. Don't answer your door. Someone just asked Silas which flat is yours. Don't answer your door."
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
17
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
78.20%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
29
wordCount
766
uniqueNames
11
maxNameDensity
1.44
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau
1
Avaros
1
Silas
3
Evan
2
Cardiff
1
Slid
1
Rory
4
Ptolemy
1
Eva
3
Lucien
11
Met
1
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Silas"
2
"Evan"
3
"Rory"
4
"Ptolemy"
5
"Eva"
6
"Lucien"
places
0
"Avaros"
1
"Cardiff"
globalScore
0.782
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
52
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"felt like a question neither of them ha"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1406
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
156
matches
0
"knew that rhythm"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
72
mean
19.53
std
15.93
cv
0.816
sampleLengths
0
18
1
39
2
4
3
49
4
6
5
13
6
10
7
17
8
4
9
36
10
36
11
5
12
44
13
7
14
51
15
33
16
12
17
3
18
8
19
18
20
18
21
3
22
25
23
11
24
26
25
37
26
1
27
43
28
8
29
54
30
18
31
2
32
23
33
3
34
42
35
11
36
27
37
35
38
4
39
6
40
27
41
2
42
7
43
27
44
67
45
13
46
5
47
15
48
15
49
7
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
114
matches
0
"was unmade"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
139
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
156
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
636
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
23
adverbRatio
0.036163522012578615
lyAdverbCount
3
lyAdverbRatio
0.0047169811320754715
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
156
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
156
mean
9.01
std
7.1
cv
0.787
sampleLengths
0
5
1
1
2
1
3
11
4
8
5
4
6
5
7
22
8
4
9
15
10
9
11
25
12
6
13
13
14
4
15
6
16
14
17
3
18
4
19
14
20
7
21
15
22
7
23
7
24
12
25
10
26
3
27
2
28
11
29
15
30
11
31
7
32
7
33
18
34
12
35
13
36
4
37
4
38
3
39
15
40
2
41
13
42
8
43
4
44
3
45
8
46
14
47
4
48
8
49
10
58.33%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.38461538461538464
totalSentences
156
uniqueOpeners
60
68.03%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
98
matches
0
"Just a fraction."
1
"Just a fraction."
ratio
0.02
85.31%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
33
totalSentences
98
matches
0
"She knew that rhythm."
1
"She opened the door."
2
"She didn't step aside."
3
"He extended the folder"
4
"His amber eye caught the"
5
"She caught the scent and"
6
"Her delivery bag hung on"
7
"She hadn't expected company."
8
"He stood near the window,"
9
"She wondered if he'd ever"
10
"He set the folder on"
11
"He allowed himself a smile"
12
"His fingers tapped the folder"
13
"She kept her face still."
14
"He took a step closer"
15
"She'd expected it eventually, the"
16
"He pulled a photograph from"
17
"She didn't recognise him."
18
"Her hands didn't shake, but"
19
"She didn't pour."
ratio
0.337
36.53%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
83
totalSentences
98
matches
0
"The knock came three times."
1
"The kind that didn't ask"
2
"Rory's hand hesitated over the"
3
"She knew that rhythm."
4
"A pattern she'd taught herself"
5
"She opened the door."
6
"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
7
"Water darkened the shoulders where"
8
"The ivory-handled cane hung from"
9
"She didn't step aside."
10
"He extended the folder"
11
"His amber eye caught the"
12
"The black one stayed dark,"
13
"The bar below had been"
14
"Silas kept irregular hours and"
15
"Music with too much bass"
16
"Rory stepped back."
17
"Lucien moved past her, and"
18
"Bergamot and something sharper underneath,"
19
"She caught the scent and"
ratio
0.847
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
98
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
27
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
16
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
57
tagDensity
0.018
leniency
0.035
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
90.1686%