Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ56W7180PVPK8FXQQE6SB9

Run Details

Duration:
52.3s
Cost:
$0.004387
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pressed her palm against the bark of the gnarled oak, tracing the spiral carved deep into the wood. The symbol glowed faintly under her fingertips, a soft phosphorescence that pulsed once, twice, then faded. Nyx stood at her shoulder, their shadow form rippling at the edges. Faint violet glimmers danced in the depths where their eyes should have been. "It's warded." Rory pulled her hand back. The air here felt wrong in the way being underwater felt wrong—pressure against the eardrums, the sense of things happening at the wrong speed. Richmond Park had looked normal enough when they'd entered. Dog walkers, joggers, a man flying a kite. Then they'd stepped between two oaks that shouldn't have been on the park map and the world had tilted sideways. The trees around them now were wrong. Not rotten or diseased, but ancient in a way that ordinary trees had no right to be. Their trunks twisted in spirals, branches reaching toward each other like clasped hands. Moss hung in long curtains, silver and blue instead of green. The ground underfoot had changed from grass to something springy and dark, littered with petals that never wilted. "How old is this place?" "Older than London." Nyx's voice came from everywhere and nowhere, that wind-whisper quality making the words hard to pin down. "Older than the people who built the stones." Rory spotted them then—the standing stones. They emerged from the ground at odd angles, not arranged in a neat circle like Stonehenge but scattered like dropped teeth. Each one was massive, easily twice her height, covered in carvings that shifted when she looked directly at them. Letters that weren't letters. Patterns that suggested motion. Her Heartstone Pendant pulsed warm against her collarbone. She touched it instinctively, the deep crimson gemstone smooth under her fingers. "It's reacting to something." Nyx drifted forward, their form stretching and narrowing as they passed between two stones. Where their shadow-body touched the ancient rock, the carvings flared bright silver before settling. "The boundary between realms is thin here. The Veil breathes." They turned back to face her, a silhouette against the amber-tinged light. "Your trinket was made for navigating such places." The air smelled wrong too. Sweet, but too sweet. Overripe fruit and honey and something metallic underneath. Rory took a step and the ground gave slightly, like walking on a sponge. Tiny mushrooms sprouted in rings around her feet, their caps glowing pale blue. She crouched down, studying them. The mushrooms pulsed in rhythm with her heartbeat. "Don't eat anything here." Nyx's warning came without urgency. They'd drifted further ahead, examining a cluster of flowers that bloomed in shades of purple Rory had never seen—deep indigos with veins of gold, petals that shed light rather than reflected it. "I wasn't planning to." "You'd be surprised what hunger does to travelers in Fae-touched places. Time works differently here. An hour becomes a day. A day becomes a year. You grow thirsty. You find fruit. The fruit tastes divine. You eat it." Nyx's form shifted, head tilting in what might have been a shrug. "Then you belong to the land." Rory stood, brushing dirt from her knees. The gesture felt futile. The air itself seemed to cling to her skin, leaving traces of pollen and something that might have been starlight. "Then let's not stay long." She pushed forward, past the ring of standing stones, into the heart of the grove. The change was immediate. The wildflowers parted to reveal a clearing absolutely still. No breeze touched the grass here. No bird sang. The silence had weight, pressing against her ears until she could hear her own blood moving through her veins. At the center of the clearing stood a woman. She was tall, silver-haired, dressed in robes that seemed woven from moonlight and spider silk. Her eyes were pale lavender, almost white in the strange light, and she left no footprints in the damp earth beneath her feet. Rory's hand went to the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt. The moonsilver weapon was cold through the leather of its sheath, the leaf-shaped dagger humming with a frequency she felt in her teeth. "You found me." The woman's voice carried no inflection. No warmth. No threat either. Just statement. "Are you Isolde?" "Names have power here, little mortal. Speak mine too freely and you invite binding." Rory kept her hand on the knife. "I was told you could help me." "Was told?" A smile crossed Isolde's face, there and gone. The expression didn't reach her lavender eyes. "By whom? In the world outside, a whisper travels from mouth to ear to mouth. By the time it reaches its destination, it carries the weight of a dozen intentions, none of them pure." Nyx materialized at Rory's side, their shadow form solidifying into something resembling human shape. Violet eyes met pale lavender. Neither spoke. "You bring a Shade into my grove." Isolde's voice dropped, the first hint of something dangerous threading through it. "A creature between worlds. A soul that refused to finish dying." "A soul that refused to be bound," Nyx corrected. The wind carried their words, scattering them through the clearing. "Semantics. You are what you are." "As are you, half-blood." The air crackled. The wildflowers bent away from Isolde as if pushed by an invisible hand. Rory's pendant blazed hot against her chest, then cold, then hot again. "I didn't come here for a fight." Isolde's attention shifted back to her. The weight of it was physical, pressing against Rory's chest like a hand. "No. You came because something is hunting you. Something that walks between realms. Something that your little trinket cannot deflect and your little knife cannot cut." Rory's throat went dry. "You've already seen." "Time moves differently here. I see many things. The future is a river with a thousand tributaries. I cannot tell you which current you will follow, but I can show you the shape of the water." Isolde extended her hand. Her palm was empty, but the air above it shimmered, coalescing into shapes. Rory saw herself reflected in the shimmer—but wrong. Older. Wearing armor she'd never seen. Standing in a wasteland of amber sand beneath a sky the color of dying embers. "Is that Dymas?" "Prince Belphegor's domain, yes. A place you will visit. A place you may not leave." The image shifted. Rory saw the city of London, but twisted. Familiar streets rendered in nightmare architecture. Shadows moving where shadows had no right to move. "The Veil is tearing. You have been chosen to mend it, though you did not ask for the task. You carry a Heartstone, though you do not know who gave it to you. You carry a Fae blade, though you have never drawn blood with it." Isolde's hand closed. The images vanished. "You are standing at a threshold, Aurora Carter. The grove is merely the first door."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"They turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.387
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.065
95.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1155
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1155
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"depths"
count1
3
word"sense of"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"tinged"
count1
6
word"navigating"
count1
7
word"absolutely"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"weight"
count3
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"shimmered"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"pulsed"
2"depths"
3"sense of"
4"whisper"
5"tinged"
6"navigating"
7"absolutely"
8"silence"
9"weight"
10"silk"
11"warmth"
12"shimmered"
13"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1151
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount805
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.74
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
Rory14
Stonehenge1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde6
Nyx7
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Pendant"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Park"
1"Fae-Forged"
2"London"
globalScore0.63
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed woven from moonlight and spider silk"
26.24% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.738
wordCount1151
matches
0"Not rotten or diseased, but ancient in a way"
1"not arranged in a neat circle like Stonehenge but scattered like dropped teeth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean23.02
std17.65
cv0.767
sampleLengths
035
125
22
366
466
55
628
754
820
94
1028
1130
1244
1313
144
1537
164
1756
1831
195
2015
2141
229
2338
2433
253
2613
273
2814
2914
3051
3121
3230
3319
346
354
3628
377
3819
3926
404
413
4236
4346
443
4515
4626
4746
486
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
34.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences105
ratio0.038
matches
0"The air here felt wrong in the way being underwater felt wrong—pressure against the eardrums, the sense of things happening at the wrong speed."
1"Rory spotted them then—the standing stones."
2"They'd drifted further ahead, examining a cluster of flowers that bloomed in shades of purple Rory had never seen—deep indigos with veins of gold, petals that shed light rather than reflected it."
3"Rory saw herself reflected in the shimmer—but wrong."
93.57% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount815
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"physical, pressing against Rory's"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.04049079754601227
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007361963190184049
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean10.96
std8.87
cv0.809
sampleLengths
019
116
212
313
42
55
624
79
88
920
107
1117
1213
1311
1418
155
1620
178
186
1921
2019
214
224
238
2412
254
2614
2714
2822
298
305
314
328
3314
3413
355
368
374
385
3932
404
4150
426
437
444
4520
465
4715
484
499
67.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.44761904761904764
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners47
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Then they'd stepped between two"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences75
matches
0"Their trunks twisted in spirals,"
1"They emerged from the ground"
2"Her Heartstone Pendant pulsed warm"
3"She touched it instinctively, the"
4"They turned back to face"
5"She crouched down, studying them."
6"They'd drifted further ahead, examining"
7"She pushed forward, past the"
8"She was tall, silver-haired, dressed"
9"Her eyes were pale lavender,"
10"Her palm was empty, but"
ratio0.147
53.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences75
matches
0"Rory pressed her palm against"
1"The symbol glowed faintly under"
2"Nyx stood at her shoulder,"
3"Rory pulled her hand back."
4"The air here felt wrong"
5"Richmond Park had looked normal"
6"Dog walkers, joggers, a man"
7"The trees around them now"
8"Their trunks twisted in spirals,"
9"Moss hung in long curtains,"
10"The ground underfoot had changed"
11"Nyx's voice came from everywhere"
12"Rory spotted them then—the standing"
13"They emerged from the ground"
14"Each one was massive, easily"
15"Letters that weren't letters."
16"Patterns that suggested motion."
17"Her Heartstone Pendant pulsed warm"
18"She touched it instinctively, the"
19"Nyx drifted forward, their form"
ratio0.813
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"They'd drifted further ahead, examining a cluster of flowers that bloomed in shades of purple Rory had never seen—deep indigos with veins of gold, petals that s…"
1"She was tall, silver-haired, dressed in robes that seemed woven from moonlight and spider silk."
2"The wildflowers bent away from Isolde as if pushed by an invisible hand."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.032
leniency0.065
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.065
81.9616%