| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.441 | | leniency | 0.882 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1559 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.72% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1559 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "comforting" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 123 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1580 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.26% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 1254 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.59 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | Kingston | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Aurora | 20 | | December | 3 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Nyx | 10 | | Isolde | 10 | | Richmond | 2 | | London | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "December" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Kingston" | | 2 | "Road" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Fae-forged" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.703 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a compass" | | 1 | "seemed diminished a silhouette pressed thin, their violet eyes the brightest thing about them" | | 2 | "felt like grief, like she was seeing so" | | 3 | "as though seeking shade" | | 4 | "felt like minutes ago and what might ha" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.165 | | wordCount | 1580 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the false warmth of a heated room, but the warmth of a summer evening, gentle" | | 1 | "Not the faint pulse she'd grown used to, but a steady, deep radiance" | | 2 | "not painful, but insistent, like a hand pressing against her chest" | | 3 | "no leaves but" | | 4 | "not comforting either,\" Aurora said, but her voice came out softer than she intended" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 38.54 | | std | 29.24 | | cv | 0.759 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 113 | | 3 | 96 | | 4 | 64 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 103 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 73 | | 17 | 49 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 60 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 46 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 83 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 67 | | 30 | 67 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 59 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 51 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 46 | | 40 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 209 | | matches | | 0 | "was glowing" | | 1 | "was seeing" | | 2 | "was smoothing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 123 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park stretched behind her, all manicured paths and joggers and the distant whine of traffic from Kingston Road, but here — here, where the oaks grew too close together and their roots buckled the ground into ridges — the air tasted different." | | 1 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed against her collarbone — faint, warm, a heartbeat that wasn't hers." | | 2 | "In daylight — even this dim December daylight — they seemed diminished, a silhouette pressed thin, their violet eyes the brightest thing about them." | | 3 | "Their voice sounded the way smoke smells — present and vanishing at once." | | 4 | "One moment she stood at the boundary, and the next she was gone — not walking, not running, simply absent, as though the air had closed over her like water." | | 5 | "Not its color — still grey, still winter — but its depth." | | 6 | "It was December in London, and yet wildflowers carpeted the ground — tiny white blooms and pale blue bells and something vivid and purple that Aurora had never seen before, growing in spirals that seemed too deliberate to be natural." | | 7 | "They had materialized fully inside the grove, and here — away from direct light — they were more substantial than she'd ever seen them." | | 8 | "It pulsed with heat against her skin — not painful, but insistent, like a hand pressing against her chest." | | 9 | "Its bark was the color of bone, smooth and faintly luminescent, and its branches held no leaves but seemed to hold light instead — clusters of soft white luminescence that drifted down like snow and dissolved before they touched the ground." | | 10 | "They stopped beside a pool of water that Aurora hadn't noticed — perfectly still, perfectly clear, reflecting a sky that didn't match the one above them." | | 11 | "The amber sky reflected in the pool's surface, and she could see — or thought she could see — vineyards stretching beneath a warm sun, orchards heavy with fruit, tables laden with feasts that never ended." | | 12 | "Not violently — gently, like a sigh." | | 13 | "And Aurora felt the Heartstone pulse — slow, deep, certain — like a heartbeat that had been waiting for this moment since before she was born." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1238 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slow, deep, certain — like" |
| | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.03715670436187399 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007269789983844911 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 123 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 123 | | mean | 12.85 | | std | 9.82 | | cv | 0.764 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 40 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 39.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3170731707317073 | | totalSentences | 123 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.51% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the edge" | | 1 | "She'd been walking ahead of" | | 2 | "She turned, pale lavender eyes" | | 3 | "Her hand found the Heartstone" | | 4 | "It had been doing that" | | 5 | "She didn't know what it" | | 6 | "She didn't know who had" | | 7 | "They had been quieter since" | | 8 | "It was caution." | | 9 | "Their voice sounded the way" | | 10 | "She stepped forward." | | 11 | "It stretched higher than any" | | 12 | "It was December in London," | | 13 | "She could smell honey and" | | 14 | "They had materialized fully inside" | | 15 | "Their shadow-form had depth and" | | 16 | "Their violet eyes burned bright" | | 17 | "She looked down." | | 18 | "It pulsed with heat against" | | 19 | "It wasn't anything Aurora could" |
| | ratio | 0.384 | |
| 41.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Aurora counted seven of them," | | 2 | "Richmond Park stretched behind her," | | 3 | "Copper and green." | | 4 | "She stood at the edge" | | 5 | "The half-fae woman wore no" | | 6 | "She'd been walking ahead of" | | 7 | "She turned, pale lavender eyes" | | 8 | "Her hand found the Heartstone" | | 9 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed" | | 10 | "It had been doing that" | | 11 | "She didn't know what it" | | 12 | "She didn't know who had" | | 13 | "Nyx moved through the shadow" | | 14 | "They had been quieter since" | | 15 | "Aurora had learned to read" | | 16 | "This one wasn't contemplation." | | 17 | "It was caution." | | 18 | "Their voice sounded the way" | | 19 | "Isolde stepped between the stones" |
| | ratio | 0.837 | |
| 58.14% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed against her collarbone — faint, warm, a heartbeat that wasn't hers." | | 1 | "One moment she stood at the boundary, and the next she was gone — not walking, not running, simply absent, as though the air had closed over her like water." | | 2 | "It stretched higher than any sky had a right to, infinite and close at once, like looking up from the bottom of a well that had no top." | | 3 | "It was December in London, and yet wildflowers carpeted the ground — tiny white blooms and pale blue bells and something vivid and purple that Aurora had never …" | | 4 | "Not the faint pulse she'd grown used to, but a steady, deep radiance that turned the crimson gem almost orange at its core." | | 5 | "Its bark was the color of bone, smooth and faintly luminescent, and its branches held no leaves but seemed to hold light instead — clusters of soft white lumine…" | | 6 | "The grove was beautiful in a way that made her chest hurt, the kind of beauty that felt like grief, like she was seeing something she would lose the moment she …" | | 7 | "Their shadow-form seemed to drink the ambient light, and where they passed, the flowers leaned toward them as though seeking shade." | | 8 | "They stopped beside a pool of water that Aurora hadn't noticed — perfectly still, perfectly clear, reflecting a sky that didn't match the one above them." | | 9 | "And Aurora felt the Heartstone pulse — slow, deep, certain — like a heartbeat that had been waiting for this moment since before she was born." |
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| 91.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora said, but her voice came out softer than she intended" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.412 | | leniency | 0.824 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |