Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ57T6A3PBY4S8M34GEWA1N

Run Details

Duration:
51.2s
Cost:
$0.003950
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air changed before her eyes adjusted. Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the lip of the abandoned Tube station, her torch beam cutting through dust that hung thick as theatre fog. The stairs descended into Camden's forgotten underbelly, each step marked with decades of neglect. Graffiti crawled up the tiled walls, layered so deep the original white had become a palimpsest of tags and slogans. "You sure about this, guv?" DC Miller's voice echoed from behind her. Quinn didn't answer. She'd learned to trust the knot that formed in her stomach, the way her skin tightened when something was off. Tonight, every nerve in her body was singing. The station had been closed since the seventies, sealed off during the construction of the new line. But someone had been using it. Fresh footprints disturbed the settled grime on the steps. Melted candle wax pooled in corners. The air carried something metallic beneath the damp concrete smell. She found the body at the bottom, sprawled where the ticket hall used to be. Male, mid-thirties. Dark suit, expensive shoes, a watch that cost more than Quinn's monthly salary. He lay on his back, arms spread, eyes open and fixed on the mouldering ceiling. No blood. No obvious trauma. Just a man who'd stopped living mid-stride. Miller crouched beside her, playing his torch over the victim's face. "No ID. No wallet. Pockets empty." "Then he wasn't robbed." "How do you figure?" Quinn gestured at the watch. "That's a Patek Philippe. Retail value north of thirty grand. No thief walks past that." She studied the man's hands. Clean nails, soft palms. No defensive wounds. No sign he'd seen his death coming. "Looks like a overdose," Miller said. "See the track marks?" She saw them. Two fresh punctures in the crook of the left elbow, neat as a nurse's work. But the skin around them had greyed, a mottled discolouration that spread in tendrils up the forearm. "Heroin doesn't do that." "Maybe something cut with fentanyl. Those street batches are—" "I know what fentanyl does, constable." She kept her voice level. "I've scraped enough junkies off pavements to recognise an overdose. This isn't one." Miller fell silent. He was good, three years on the job, eager but green. Still believed in tidy answers and straightforward cases. Quinn rose, sweeping her torch in a slow arc. The ticket hall opened into a larger space, the old platforms stretching into darkness. Benches lay overturned. A vendor's cart had been pushed against the wall, its surface covered in empty glass jars and dried herbs. Someone had been here recently, trading in things that didn't belong above ground. She'd received the tip two hours ago. Anonymous call, voice distorted, claiming there'd be a body at the Veil Market. She'd dismissed it as crank until dispatch confirmed a 999 call from the same coordinates. The brass compass caught her attention from across the room. It lay near the victim's outstretched hand, small and unassuming. She picked it up, feeling the weight of it, the patina of verdigris against her palm. Protective sigils marked the face, intricate symbols she didn't recognise but knew the shape of. The needle spun in lazy circles, never settling. "Evidence bag," she said. Miller fumbled in his kit. "What is it?" "Something that doesn't belong in a police file." She dropped the compass into the bag, watching the needle continue its dance through the clear plastic. The sigils caught the light, almost black against the weathered brass. "Looks like antique shop rubbish." "Does it?" Quinn turned back to the body. The man's jacket had pulled open, revealing a shirt pocket with a folded receipt. She retrieved it, careful not to disturb anything else. Dried cleaning ticket, dated three days ago. A London address in Kensington. She tucked it into her own pocket and returned to studying the body. The grey discolouration had spread. She was certain it hadn't been that far up the arm when she first arrived. The tendrils had thickened, reaching toward the shoulder like slow vines. "Miller, take a photo of his arm. Then another one in thirty seconds." "Guv?" "Just do it." She moved to the other side of the body, examining the right hand. No track marks there. But the fingers were stained, a faint residue between the pads of the index and thumb. She leaned closer. The smell hit her—something burned, but not smoke. Sharper. Metallic and organic at the same time. "What do you see?" she asked. Miller looked up from his phone. "Dead bloke in a tunnel." "Look closer." He studied the victim's face, the stillness of the features. "No struggle. Peaceful expression. Like he just... stopped." "Exactly." Quinn straightened. "No panic. No fear. He lay down and died mid-breath, flat on his back, arms at his sides. That's not an overdose. Overdoses are messy. People fight, they thrash, they vomit." "So what killed him?" She picked up one of the glass jars from the vendor's cart, sniffing the rim. Dried lavender and something else, something that made her sinuses tingle. She set it down carefully. "The Veil Market—have you heard of it?" Miller shook his head. "It's a rumour. An underground bazaar that moves locations every full moon. Sells things that aren't supposed to exist." She watched his expression shift from confusion to concern. "Our victim came here to buy something. He found it." "You believe that? Ghost stories and fairy markets?" Quinn held up the evidence bag containing the compass. "This isn't a ghost story. It's evidence. And evidence tells me our victim touched something that killed him without leaving a mark." She gestured at the arm again. "Take that photo now. Compare it to the first one you took." Miller pulled out his phone, snapped the image, and scrolled back. His face went pale. "The discolouration—it's bigger." "Things that don't leave marks often leave traces." Quinn knelt beside the body one last time. She looked at the man's face, at the peace frozen there, and felt the familiar chill of a case that wouldn't fit neatly into a file. She checked his shoes. Expensive leather, but the soles were worn unevenly, more on the right than the left. A habitual pattern, the gait of someone who favoured one side. Inside the left shoe, tucked beneath the insole, she found what the others had missed. A single bone token. Small, carved, warm to the touch despite the cold air. She slipped it into her pocket alongside the receipt and stood, brushing the dust from her knees. "Call it in, Miller. I want forensics here, every scrap of evidence bagged and catalogued. And find out who owned the Kensington address." "What are you going to do?" Quinn looked at the compass in the evidence bag, at the needle that still refused to settle. "I'm going to find out what the Veil Market sold to a dead man."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.649
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.054
95.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1153
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1153
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"intricate"
count1
4
word"dance"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"stomach"
2"weight"
3"intricate"
4"dance"
5"familiar"
6"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1150
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount852
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn10
Tube1
Camden1
Miller8
Clean1
Veil1
Market1
London1
Kensington1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Miller"
4"Clean"
places
0"Veil"
1"London"
2"Kensington"
globalScore0.913
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1150
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean21.3
std16.75
cv0.786
sampleLengths
07
158
212
331
448
515
642
717
84
94
1039
1110
1235
134
149
1524
1622
1758
1835
1910
2049
214
228
2336
245
2543
2613
2731
2813
291
303
3152
326
3311
342
3518
3634
374
3831
397
404
4138
428
4349
4415
453
4642
4745
4814
4917
89.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"been closed"
1"been pushed"
2"were stained"
3"were worn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was singing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences115
ratio0.009
matches
0"The smell hit her—something burned, but not smoke."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount855
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.022222222222222223
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007017543859649123
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean10
std6.39
cv0.639
sampleLengths
07
124
214
320
412
53
620
78
817
96
109
116
1210
1315
142
1513
1615
172
183
197
2011
216
224
234
245
2520
264
273
287
296
304
313
3215
3317
344
359
3611
3713
383
3911
408
419
4214
433
4419
4513
467
4713
4815
4910
74.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.46956521739130436
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners54
80.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"Just a man who'd stopped"
1"Still believed in tidy answers"
ratio0.024
94.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences83
matches
0"She'd learned to trust the"
1"She found the body at"
2"He lay on his back,"
3"She studied the man's hands"
4"She saw them."
5"She kept her voice level"
6"He was good, three years"
7"She'd received the tip two"
8"She'd dismissed it as crank"
9"It lay near the victim's"
10"She picked it up, feeling"
11"She dropped the compass into"
12"She retrieved it, careful not"
13"She tucked it into her"
14"She was certain it hadn't"
15"She moved to the other"
16"She leaned closer."
17"He studied the victim's face,"
18"She picked up one of"
19"She set it down carefully."
ratio0.313
92.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences83
matches
0"The air changed before her"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at"
2"The stairs descended into Camden's"
3"Graffiti crawled up the tiled"
4"DC Miller's voice echoed from"
5"Quinn didn't answer."
6"She'd learned to trust the"
7"Tonight, every nerve in her"
8"The station had been closed"
9"The air carried something metallic"
10"She found the body at"
11"He lay on his back,"
12"Miller crouched beside her, playing"
13"Quinn gestured at the watch."
14"She studied the man's hands"
15"She saw them."
16"She kept her voice level"
17"Miller fell silent."
18"He was good, three years"
19"Quinn rose, sweeping her torch"
ratio0.735
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the lip of the abandoned Tube station, her torch beam cutting through dust that hung thick as theatre fog."
1"Dark suit, expensive shoes, a watch that cost more than Quinn's monthly salary."
2"Dried lavender and something else, something that made her sinuses tingle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.081
leniency0.162
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.5970%