| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.515 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 88.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1778 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tightly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 74.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1778 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "unreadable" | | 7 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 123 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 58 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1759 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1372 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | December | 2 | | Park | 1 | | London | 3 | | Isolde | 14 | | Helpful | 1 | | Aurora | 21 | | Fae | 3 | | Nyx | 7 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Fae-touched" |
| | globalScore | 0.735 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed almost translucent" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 9 | | per1kWords | 5.117 | | wordCount | 1759 | | matches | | 0 | "Not gradual, not a slow fading of one world into another, but a clean break" | | 1 | "not a slow fading of one world into another, but a clean break" | | 2 | "Not wrong in the way a thing is broken, but wrong in the way a thing is more true than it should be" | | 3 | "not crushed but displaced, opening small pathways" | | 4 | "not cruel, but it is curious" | | 5 | "not in wrinkles or grey hair, but in the depth behind her eyes, the weight of centuries pressi" | | 6 | "not what it senses, but what it is leading you toward" | | 7 | "not the clean silver shimmer of moonlight but something else, something" | | 8 | "not just the hum but the pull, a gentle but insistent drag in her chest, right" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 41.88 | | std | 29.6 | | cv | 0.707 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 72 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 91 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 87 | | 13 | 68 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 100 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 88 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 54 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 46 | | 31 | 56 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 60 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 62 | | 37 | 76 | | 38 | 46 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 39 | | 41 | 14 |
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| 98.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "been forged" | | 1 | "was forged" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | | 0 | "was recognising" | | 1 | "were—passing" | | 2 | "was listening" | | 3 | "was reacting" | | 4 | "wasn't just sensing" | | 5 | "was resonating" | | 6 | "was leading" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 123 | | ratio | 0.106 | | matches | | 0 | "Ancient oak, every one of them—or what had once been oak, before something older than oak had sunk its roots into the grain and reshaped them into something else entirely." | | 1 | "In the darkness beneath the oaks, they were more present—sharper, denser, the faint violet glow of their eyes the only colour in their silhouette." | | 2 | "Not gradual, not a slow fading of one world into another, but a clean break—one breath London, the next somewhere else entirely." | | 3 | "She'd carried it for weeks now and the moonsilver never warmed to her touch—Isolde had warned her it wouldn't—but here, in this place, the cold felt intentional." | | 4 | "The moon hung lower on the horizon, fuller than she'd ever seen it, and its light didn't fall straight—it drifted, pooling in the clearing like liquid silver." | | 5 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in defiance of every season Aurora understood—she could see cornflowers and foxgloves and something she didn't have a name for, deep purple and bell-shaped, swaying in a breeze she couldn't feel." | | 6 | "Here, surrounded by so much ambient light—moonlight, wildflower-glow, the faint luminescence of the oaks themselves—they seemed almost translucent." | | 7 | "Aurora watched them reach toward one of the standing stones, their fingers—such as they were—passing through the surface before solidifying again." | | 8 | "\"Dymas, Hel, the Fae Realms—they are not so separate as mortals imagine. The Veil is one barrier, but it separates many things from many things.\" Isolde tilted her head, and for a moment her age showed—not in wrinkles or grey hair, but in the depth behind her eyes, the weight of centuries pressing against the present." | | 9 | "It pulsed again—warm, warm, warm against her sternum." | | 10 | "The air above the mound shimmered faintly—not the clean silver shimmer of moonlight but something else, something that bent the light in ways that made her eyes water." | | 11 | "She could feel it now—not just the hum but the pull, a gentle but insistent drag in her chest, right where the pendant sat." | | 12 | "She thought of what Isolde had said—that the Heartstone was forged in gluttony, that it answered to proximity, that it was leading her." |
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| 86.72% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1399 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same bone-pale oaks." | | 1 | "warm, warm, warm against her" |
| | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.04145818441744103 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012866333095067906 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 123 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 123 | | mean | 14.3 | | std | 10.8 | | cv | 0.755 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 51.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.35772357723577236 | | totalSentences | 123 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 70.18% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the sky, raw and" | | 1 | "Somewhere beneath the mound, the" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "They said nothing, but Aurora" | | 1 | "It hit the back of" | | 2 | "She'd carried it for weeks" | | 3 | "They were brighter, closer, arranged" | | 4 | "she said, and the words" | | 5 | "She turned, her silver hair" | | 6 | "Their edges bled into the" | | 7 | "Their violet eyes turned toward" | | 8 | "She stood with her hands" | | 9 | "It had been doing that" | | 10 | "She hadn't told anyone." | | 11 | "It pulsed again—warm, warm, warm" | | 12 | "She'd assumed it was reacting" | | 13 | "they said, their whisper carrying" | | 14 | "She stepped forward." | | 15 | "She stopped at the edge" | | 16 | "It wasn't a sound, exactly." | | 17 | "It was more like a" | | 18 | "She paused, and the not-breeze" | | 19 | "She could feel it now—not" |
| | ratio | 0.242 | |
| 49.47% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "The bark had gone the" | | 2 | "Aurora stopped at the edge" | | 3 | "Richmond Park lay behind them," | | 4 | "These trees were too tall," | | 5 | "Isolde said from somewhere behind" | | 6 | "The half-fae woman moved without" | | 7 | "Aurora had been traveling with" | | 8 | "Isolde's pale lavender eyes caught" | | 9 | "Nyx materialized at Aurora's left," | | 10 | "They said nothing, but Aurora" | | 11 | "Shade recognised old magic the" | | 12 | "Aurora said, and stepped between" | | 13 | "The change was immediate." | | 14 | "The temperature shifted first." | | 15 | "The December cold didn't vanish" | | 16 | "The air tasted different." | | 17 | "It hit the back of" | | 18 | "The Fae blade at her" | | 19 | "She'd carried it for weeks" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 65.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, the standing stones formed an irregular circle maybe twenty feet across, their tops lost in the low-hanging branches of oaks that had no business growing…" | | 1 | "Isolde smiled, and it was the smile of someone who could not lie but had learned every other trick in three hundred years of exile." | | 2 | "The grass beneath her feet was thicker here, almost spongy, and it gave slightly with each step, as if something hollow lay beneath the soil." | | 3 | "It was more like a vibration that bypassed her ears entirely and went straight into her bones, her teeth, the small crescent scar on her left wrist." | | 4 | "The air above the mound shimmered faintly—not the clean silver shimmer of moonlight but something else, something that bent the light in ways that made her eyes…" |
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| 7.35% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, and the words came out half a question" | | 1 | "She turned, her silver hair catching the moonlight like wire" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, and their voice was exactly what it always was: a sound like wind through a crack in a door, carrying words from somewhere else" | | 3 | "they said, their whisper carrying an edge Aurora hadn't heard before" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.061 | |