| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.298 | | leniency | 0.596 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1296 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1296 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "wavered" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "newfound" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "resolved" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "stomach dropped" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 170 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1313 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1043 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Rory | 13 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Recognition | 1 | | Pure | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Sunday | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Veil" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.877 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 81.51% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like cool water" | | 1 | "tasted like every meal she'd ever craved" |
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| 47.68% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.523 | | wordCount | 1313 | | matches | | 0 | "not neat rows of trellised vines, but trees" | | 1 | "not steam, but gold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 20.84 | | std | 17.07 | | cv | 0.819 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 68 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 50 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 43 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 51 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "was meant" | | 1 | "being swallowed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 170 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson gem pulsed - a steady heartbeat beneath silver chain." | | 1 | "Their form wavered at the edges - smoke given shape, vague suggestion of features where a face should be." | | 2 | "The half-Fae's pale lavender eyes reflected something beyond the trees - a shimmer in the air itself." | | 3 | "Not a door - more like the air itself remembered it was meant to be something else." | | 4 | "\"I remember this place.\" The whisper carried something Rory hadn't heard before - not fear." | | 5 | "Not sunlight - nothing so ordinary." | | 6 | "Grass - no, not grass." | | 7 | "She could almost make out features - the suggestion of cheekbones, the hollows where eyes would be." | | 8 | "\"This place feeds on hunger.\" Nyx extended a hand - the first time they'd ever touched her." | | 9 | "Her lavender eyes widened - the first expression of genuine surprise Rory had seen from the half-Fae." | | 10 | "Vineyards covered the slopes - not neat rows of trellised vines, but trees." | | 11 | "The breath left her lungs in a visible cloud - not steam, but gold." | | 12 | "Rory felt it on her skin - warmth that seeped through cloth, through flesh, settling in her stomach." | | 13 | "Openings gaped at their bases - doorways that breathed." | | 14 | "Not the amber of the sky - deeper." | | 15 | "In the amber light, her agelessness showed its seams - something old behind those eyes." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1032 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.023255813953488372 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 170 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 170 | | mean | 7.72 | | std | 5.58 | | cv | 0.723 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 65.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4235294117647059 | | totalSentences | 170 | | uniqueOpeners | 72 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 1 | "She met Nyx's violet gaze" | | 2 | "Their form wavered at the" | | 3 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 4 | "Her ears popped." | | 5 | "She caught herself on one" | | 6 | "She could almost make out" | | 7 | "Their violet glow burned brighter" | | 8 | "Their grip felt like cool" | | 9 | "Her lavender eyes widened -" | | 10 | "She didn't look down." | | 11 | "They stood on a hillside." | | 12 | "She felt it pull her" | | 13 | "Their bark shifted like skin." | | 14 | "She watched a low branch" | | 15 | "They reached the valley floor." | | 16 | "Her mouth watered." | | 17 | "She hadn't felt hungry before." | | 18 | "She pressed her palm harder" | | 19 | "Her bare feet hovered a" |
| | ratio | 0.205 | |
| 49.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone flared hot against" | | 1 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 2 | "The crimson gem pulsed -" | | 3 | "Each beat sent warmth radiating" | | 4 | "She met Nyx's violet gaze" | | 5 | "Nyx solidified from the shadows" | | 6 | "Their form wavered at the" | | 7 | "The wind carried their whisper:" | | 8 | "A pressure behind her eardrums." | | 9 | "The air tasted of copper" | | 10 | "Isolde stood at the edge" | | 11 | "The half-Fae's pale lavender eyes" | | 12 | "The Veil, distorted." | | 13 | "Isolde tilted her head" | | 14 | "Rory's hand went to the" | | 15 | "The leaf-shaped dagger hummed beneath" | | 16 | "Isolde's bare feet left no" | | 17 | "The shimmer widened." | | 18 | "Colors bled through: amber, gold," | | 19 | "The smell hit them full" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 44.64% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "That endless golden haze, pulsing with a rhythm that might have been a heartbeat." | | 1 | "A ground cover of tiny leaves that curled away from her touch, unfurling again once she lifted her palm." | | 2 | "Each grape hummed at a different pitch, creating a harmony that sat outside what her ears expected." | | 3 | "Rory felt it on her skin - warmth that seeped through cloth, through flesh, settling in her stomach." | | 4 | "Warm air rushed out, carrying scents that made her vision blur at the edges." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |