| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1074 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1074 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "wavered" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "dance" | | 14 | "throbbed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 183 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 183 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 188 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1074 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "Find the source. Isolde's grove. Midnight." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1056 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.76 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Park" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 68.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like rotting fruit" | | 1 | "as if watching something" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.931 | | wordCount | 1074 | | matches | | 0 | "Not painfully, but with a heat" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 188 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 26.2 | | std | 17.29 | | cv | 0.66 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 46 | | 31 | 50 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 46 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.42% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "were moving" | | 1 | "was warming" | | 2 | "was singing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 188 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1058 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.02930056710775047 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004725897920604915 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 188 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 188 | | mean | 5.71 | | std | 5.06 | | cv | 0.885 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 48.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.3617021276595745 | | totalSentences | 188 | | uniqueOpeners | 68 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Always seven, according to the" | | 1 | "Just the pendant and the" | | 2 | "Just the flowers, swaying." | | 3 | "Just the oppressive silence of" | | 4 | "Then she heard it." | | 5 | "Just the twisted oaks and" | | 6 | "Just a blackness that pressed" | | 7 | "Just the humming, starting again," |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed through the boundary." | | 1 | "She pressed her palm over" | | 2 | "She'd come because the note" | | 3 | "She took a step forward." | | 4 | "Her voice died in the" | | 5 | "She checked her phone." | | 6 | "She'd entered at midnight exactly." | | 7 | "It was warming." | | 8 | "She followed it because there" | | 9 | "It vibrated in her chest," | | 10 | "She traced it with her" | | 11 | "She looked down." | | 12 | "It was subtle." | | 13 | "It had to be." | | 14 | "She stepped closer." | | 15 | "She gasped at the heat." | | 16 | "Her heart hammered." | | 17 | "She scanned the grove." | | 18 | "It was soft." | | 19 | "She should leave." |
| | ratio | 0.214 | |
| 86.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 94 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory counted the steps between" | | 1 | "She pushed through the boundary." | | 2 | "The air tasted of copper" | | 3 | "Richmond Park lay behind her," | | 4 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 5 | "A shade of crimson that" | | 6 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed." | | 7 | "A faint warmth against her" | | 8 | "She pressed her palm over" | | 9 | "She'd come because the note" | | 10 | "Midnight.* No signature." | | 11 | "The clearing stretched wider than" | | 12 | "Richmond Park was maybe half" | | 13 | "The standing stones had vanished" | | 14 | "Something rustled to her left." | | 15 | "The air hung still and" | | 16 | "Something that smelled like rotting" | | 17 | "She took a step forward." | | 18 | "The flowers bent away from" | | 19 | "Her voice died in the" |
| | ratio | 0.746 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "As if they were moving" | | 1 | "If it burns, you've found" | | 2 | "If it goes cold, run." |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 43.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The path curved between two ancient oaks, their trunks twisted into shapes that resembled spines, ribs, reaching hands." | | 1 | "A perfect circle of bare earth, ringed by flowers that grew in a pattern too deliberate to be natural." | | 2 | "A deep crimson light that pulsed in time with her heartbeat, faster now, quicker, as if the stone was afraid of what lay ahead." | | 3 | "A darkness that wasn't just absence of light but absence of everything." | | 4 | "The flowers on either side of her leaned away, their petals closing, their stems drooping." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |