| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1579 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1579 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "comfortable" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 215 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 215 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 219 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1594 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1571 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.27 | | worstName | "Tap" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 6 | | worstWindowName | "Tap" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Grove | 6 | | November | 2 | | October | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | Tap | 20 | | Tap-tap | 5 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.863 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 71.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like honey and copper" | | 1 | "smelled like wet earth and something else" | | 2 | "Something like fingernails on a desk, or tee" |
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| 74.53% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.255 | | wordCount | 1594 | | matches | | 0 | "not the comfortable quiet of sleep, but the held-breath hush of something waiting" | | 1 | "not the tapping of nails on stone, but the soft drag of something heavy moving through grass" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 219 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 25.3 | | std | 20.5 | | cv | 0.81 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 68 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 62 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 52 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 55 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 55 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 46 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 55 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 215 | | matches | | 0 | "being blown" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was flattened" |
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| 80.95% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "was not coming" | | 1 | "was coming" | | 2 | "was circling" | | 3 | "was pacing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 219 | | ratio | 0.055 | | matches | | 0 | "Silence pressed against her ears — not the comfortable quiet of sleep, but the held-breath hush of something waiting." | | 1 | "She had found it once before, months ago, by accident — a wrong turn during a delivery that should have taken twenty minutes but stole four hours from her afternoon." | | 2 | "Her phone's flashlight carved a pale cone through the darkness, catching the shapes of oak trees — ancient things, gnarled and hunched, their branches twisted into shapes that looked almost deliberate." | | 3 | "The path she followed was not a path — just a gap between trees that might have been a deer trail or might have been nothing at all." | | 4 | "Not gradually — a wall of cold that hit her face and chest and made her gasp." | | 5 | "The Heartstone's crimson surface glowed with a light of its own — a deep, arterial red that pulsed in time with her heartbeat." | | 6 | "Something tapping against wood — or stone — or bone — in a pattern that was too even to be accidental." | | 7 | "She could hear it more clearly — not wood, not stone." | | 8 | "Her boots crushed flowers that made no sound — not even the soft whisper of petals against leather." | | 9 | "She could hear its footsteps now — not the tapping of nails on stone, but the soft drag of something heavy moving through grass." | | 10 | "The wildflowers rustled — but there was no wind." | | 11 | "The cold wall slapped her face again — that instant, brutal winter — and then she was through, stumbling on the grass of Richmond Park, the November air freezing against her sweat-damp skin." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1568 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 61 | | adverbRatio | 0.0389030612244898 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006377551020408163 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 219 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 219 | | mean | 7.28 | | std | 6.9 | | cv | 0.949 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 30.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 49 | | diversityRatio | 0.3150684931506849 | | totalSentences | 219 | | uniqueOpeners | 69 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Almost like reaching arms." | | 1 | "Almost like fingers." | | 2 | "Then it passed, and the" | | 3 | "Just the circle of standing" | | 4 | "Just the clearing, empty and" | | 5 | "Just darkness, absolute and patient." | | 6 | "Then it went cold." | | 7 | "Even the insects had gone" | | 8 | "Even the breeze had died." | | 9 | "Too many joints in each" |
| | ratio | 0.065 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "It had been doing that" | | 2 | "She had found it once" | | 3 | "She remembered the standing stones." | | 4 | "She remembered the wildflowers." | | 5 | "She remembered the way the" | | 6 | "She did not remember the" | | 7 | "Her phone's flashlight carved a" | | 8 | "she muttered, and her voice" | | 9 | "She walked for ten minutes." | | 10 | "It thickened, taking on that" | | 11 | "She swept her flashlight left," | | 12 | "They stood in a rough" | | 13 | "She stepped between two of" | | 14 | "She remembered that." | | 15 | "They covered the ground in" | | 16 | "Her flashlight caught something moving." | | 17 | "She whipped the beam toward" | | 18 | "She crossed to the center" | | 19 | "She stood on it and" |
| | ratio | 0.29 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 111 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "The taxi dropped her at" | | 1 | "Rory paid the driver, stepped" | | 2 | "The night swallowed the sound" | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "The Heartstone's faint warmth bled" | | 5 | "It had been doing that" | | 6 | "Tonight it had burned hot" | | 7 | "The Grove was somewhere in" | | 8 | "She had found it once" | | 9 | "She remembered the standing stones." | | 10 | "She remembered the wildflowers." | | 11 | "She remembered the way the" | | 12 | "She did not remember the" | | 13 | "The park stretched before her," | | 14 | "Grass whispered against her boots" | | 15 | "Her phone's flashlight carved a" | | 16 | "she muttered, and her voice" | | 17 | "The pendant pulsed against her" | | 18 | "She walked for ten minutes." | | 19 | "The path she followed was" |
| | ratio | 0.716 | |
| 96.77% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Either explanation felt equally true" | | 1 | "As though it had all" | | 2 | "As though, in that place" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 79.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The park stretched before her, black and vast under a moon that hung crooked in the sky." | | 1 | "Her phone's flashlight carved a pale cone through the darkness, catching the shapes of oak trees — ancient things, gnarled and hunched, their branches twisted i…" | | 2 | "White and purple and gold, tiny blossoms that should not have survived past October, that should not have survived past the first frost." | | 3 | "Something tapping against wood — or stone — or bone — in a pattern that was too even to be accidental." | | 4 | "But the grass just beyond the stone circle was bent, as though something heavy had pushed through it." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |