| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.367 | | leniency | 0.733 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1410 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1410 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "quickened" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "resonance" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "desire" | | 14 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 121 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1418 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1046 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.91 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | November | 2 | | Rory | 20 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Isolde | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "November" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.544 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a silhouette cut from shadow" | | 1 | "reds that seemed to glow from within, yellows that caught the light like stained glass" | | 2 | "seemed distant" | | 3 | "Patterns that seemed to shift and breathe" | | 4 | "looked like she’d been there all along an" | | 5 | "looked like grief" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.705 | | wordCount | 1418 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the amber of the grove, but something darker" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 24.45 | | std | 18.56 | | cv | 0.759 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 56 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 40 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 42 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 31 | | 43 | 75 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 66 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.62% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "was learning" | | 2 | "was turning" |
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| 1.18% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 121 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colours that hurt to look at — blues so deep they verged on purple, reds that seemed to glow from within, yellows that caught the light like stained glass." | | 1 | "When they spoke, there was something in their voice that hadn’t been there before — a thread of unease." | | 2 | "Her lavender eyes found Rory’s, and something in them glimmered — recognition, amusement, sorrow." | | 3 | "Her fingers closed around the hilt, and she felt something inside the weapon — a presence, ancient and watchful." | | 4 | "Isolde’s gaze shifted to them, and for a moment, something flickered in her eyes — recognition, perhaps, or pity." | | 5 | "Not the amber of the grove, but something darker — a warm, hungry amber that smelled of roasted meat and honey and spices that should not exist in the same world." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1043 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.032598274209012464 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003835091083413231 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 121 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 121 | | mean | 11.72 | | std | 8.45 | | cv | 0.721 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 42.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.32231404958677684 | | totalSentences | 121 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.91% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her hand pressed" | | 1 | "Their violet eyes flickered, scanning" | | 2 | "Their voice was a scrape" | | 3 | "They were not placed by" | | 4 | "Their surfaces swirled with grain" | | 5 | "She stepped through." | | 6 | "It wasn’t a question." | | 7 | "They simply moved, then settled" | | 8 | "She knelt and touched a" | | 9 | "They seemed to press back" | | 10 | "She looked up and saw" | | 11 | "They were faint, barely visible" | | 12 | "She stepped from between two" | | 13 | "Her robes were the colour" | | 14 | "Her feet hovered a fraction" | | 15 | "Her lavender eyes found Rory’s," | | 16 | "Her voice was low and" | | 17 | "It had stopped pulsing, settling" | | 18 | "It was not a comforting" | | 19 | "She extended her hand, and" |
| | ratio | 0.315 | |
| 36.09% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s pendant had been pulsing" | | 1 | "She kept her hand pressed" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted beside her, a" | | 3 | "Their violet eyes flickered, scanning" | | 4 | "Their voice was a scrape" | | 5 | "Rory pushed through a curtain" | | 6 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 7 | "They were not placed by" | | 8 | "Their surfaces swirled with grain" | | 9 | "Moss grew in patterns that" | | 10 | "She stepped through." | | 11 | "The change hit her like" | | 12 | "The temperature rose ten degrees." | | 13 | "The scent of damp November" | | 14 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 15 | "Rory turned back." | | 16 | "The same trees." | | 17 | "The same grass." | | 18 | "It wasn’t a question." | | 19 | "Nyx stepped through beside her." |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s pendant had been pulsing for the last quarter mile, a steady warmth against her collarbone that quickened with every step deeper into Richmond Park." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colours that hurt to look at — blues so deep they verged on purple, reds that seemed to glow from within, yellows that caught…" | | 2 | "Rory walked forward, her boots sinking into soil that gave like memory foam." | | 3 | "It had stopped pulsing, settling into a steady warmth that felt almost like a heartbeat." | | 4 | "And somewhere beneath her feet, Rory felt the earth shift, as if the entire grove was turning, reorienting itself around a point she couldn’t see." | | 5 | "Not the amber of the grove, but something darker — a warm, hungry amber that smelled of roasted meat and honey and spices that should not exist in the same worl…" |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde placed, and the tree creaked" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |