Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ5JAT5QCN08MRZF3FN1103

Run Details

Duration:
41.5s
Cost:
$0.003003
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the last tangle of brambles and stepped into the Fae Grove. The air changed immediately. The city sounds—distant traffic, the hum of Richmond Park's nocturnal life—cut off as if someone had pressed a mute button. Silence pressed against her eardrums, thick and cloying. The Heartstone Pendant rested warm against her sternum, a steady pulse of heat she'd grown accustomed to during her earlier visits. But tonight, that warmth felt different. Insistent. Almost urgent. She'd come here because Isolde had promised to meet her. Something about the Fae Court's growing interest in the pendant, about danger that was "circling like carrion birds." Rory checked her phone. No signal. Not that she'd expected one—time inside the Grove moved at its own rhythm, and technology refused to cooperate with whatever rules governed this place. The moon hung fat and low through the canopy of oaks, casting silver-blue light across the standing stones. They jutted from the earth like ancient teeth, moss-covered and patient. Wildflowers dotted the clearing, their petals closed for the night. A gentle breeze stirred the grass, but Rory felt no wind. When she'd first discovered the Grove months ago, it had felt magical. Sacred. A hidden pocket where the world thrummed with possibility. Now, standing alone in the darkness, she noticed other things. The way her footsteps made no sound on the grass. The way the shadows between the trees seemed deeper than they should be, refusing to yield when she stared directly at them. "Isolde?" Her voice came out flat, absorbed by the stillness. No echo. Nothing answered. Rory walked to the center of the clearing, where a flat stone sat worn smooth by countless visitors. She ran her fingers along its surface. Cold. Colder than it should be on a summer night. The pendant pulsed again, harder, and she pressed her palm against it. The air shifted. Not temperature change, but something beneath. A vibration she felt in her molars. The wildflowers at her feet trembled, their petals quivering as if stirred by an unfelt wind. Rory turned in a slow circle, scanning the treeline. Movement. Peripheral. The corner of her eye caught something slipping between two oaks, but when she snapped her head toward it, nothing moved. Just bark and shadow and the patient stillness of old trees. "Okay." She said it louder this time, trying to anchor herself with the sound of her own voice. "Not creepy at all." The Grove had never felt hostile before. Strange, yes. Disorienting when the time slippage hit and she emerged to find three hours had passed instead of one. But never threatening. Now, though, some fundamental quality had changed. The stones felt less like guardians and more like bars of a cage. The canopy overhead pressed closer, blotting out patches of sky that had been visible moments ago. Rory checked her watch. Nine forty-seven. She'd entered at nine-thirty. Seventeen minutes, then. She waited, counting seconds in her head. When she looked again, the watch read nine-fifty-three. Six minutes had passed in what felt like twenty seconds. The Grove was speeding up. Something brushed against her ankle. She jumped, spinning, but found only a patch of moonlit grass. No branches low enough to have touched her. No animal scurrying away. The wildflowers nearby swayed, though the air remained dead still. "Alright." Rory backed toward the treeline, keeping her eyes moving. "Meeting's cancelled. I'm leaving." The path she'd used to enter should be directly behind her. She'd marked it with a strip of red fabric tied to a branch—a trick Eva had taught her for navigating faerie-touched places. But when she turned, the red fabric was gone. The trees stood in a solid wall, their trunks pressed too close together for any person to slip between. She'd entered through a gap between two oaks, one split by lightning and the other leaning at a thirty-degree angle. She'd walked through that gap not twenty minutes ago. Now those two oaks stood side by side, their roots intertwined, no space between them. The pendant burned against her chest. Hot enough that she pulled it away from her skin, hissing. The deep crimson gemstone glowed from within, throwing red light across her shaking hands. "You shouldn't have that, little mortal." The voice came from everywhere and nowhere. Not heard so much as felt, vibrations that crawled up her spine and settled behind her eyes. Rory stumbled backward, her heel catching on the flat stone. She went down hard, the impact jarring up through her wrists. The Grove darkened. The moon above winked out as if cloud-covered, but no clouds had been there seconds ago. The wildflowers shriveled, their petals curling and blackening at the edges. The grass beneath her hands felt brittle, dead. Rory scrambled to her feet, the pendant still blazing. She clutched it in her fist, the heat almost painful now, and the glow spilled between her fingers like liquid fire. "Show yourself." Her voice cracked, but she forced it steady. "What do you want?" The shadows between the trees rippled. Not like fog or mist, but like something alive turning its attention toward her. The darkness took shape—not a figure, not quite. A suggestion of height, of limbs too long and joints that bent wrong. It stood at the treeline, composed of absence, and it regarded her. "You carry the blood-spark of Dymas. The little king's token. And you walk into my grove without invitation." The voice coiled around her, intimate and wrong, a whisper that felt like fingertips trailing down her spine. "Bold. Or foolish. It matters little." "This is Isolde's grove." Rory kept her grip on the pendant, let its light push back the darkness. "I have standing here." The shadow-thing laughed. The sound broke against the stones like splintering glass. "Isolde is not here, little mortal. She has not been here for many of your days. And her protections..." It paused, and the darkness seemed to swell. "Have lapsed." Rory looked past the shadow, into the deeper dark between trees. The path was still gone. The red fabric marker still absent. The oaks had drawn closer, their branches knitting together overhead until only slivers of starless sky remained visible. She had come alone because Isolde had asked. Because she'd trusted the fae woman who had shown her wonder and beauty and power that hummed in her blood. She should have known better. The shadow moved, and the pendant's light flickered. Once. Twice. Then guttered like a candle in a storm.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The voice coiled around [around]"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"navigating"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"footsteps"
4"echo"
5"pulsed"
6"trembled"
7"scanning"
8"navigating"
9"whisper"
10"down her spine"
11"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1085
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1005
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove6
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Isolde2
Court1
Rory11
Eva1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Isolde"
2"Court"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.953
windowScore1
20.13% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"seemed deeper than they should be, refusing to yield when she stared directly at them"
1"felt like twenty seconds"
2"not quite"
3"felt like fingertips trailing down her"
15.67% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.843
wordCount1085
matches
0"Not temperature change, but something beneath"
1"Not like fog or mist, but like something alive turning its attention toward her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean35
std18.17
cv0.519
sampleLengths
014
162
258
350
464
512
62
747
841
934
1022
1166
1243
1338
1414
1561
1644
1731
186
1945
2038
2130
2214
2353
2442
2522
2641
2740
2828
295
3018
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs168
matches
0"was speeding"
38.96% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences110
ratio0.036
matches
0"The city sounds—distant traffic, the hum of Richmond Park's nocturnal life—cut off as if someone had pressed a mute button."
1"Not that she'd expected one—time inside the Grove moved at its own rhythm, and technology refused to cooperate with whatever rules governed this place."
2"She'd marked it with a strip of red fabric tied to a branch—a trick Eva had taught her for navigating faerie-touched places."
3"The darkness took shape—not a figure, not quite."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1020
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03431372549019608
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004901960784313725
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean9.86
std6.63
cv0.673
sampleLengths
014
14
220
38
421
56
61
72
810
922
102
1124
1218
1311
1410
1511
1612
171
189
1910
2010
2122
2210
232
242
2518
267
271
289
2912
303
316
327
3316
349
351
361
3721
3811
3918
404
417
422
4318
443
457
4613
4716
484
492
55.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners44
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"Just bark and shadow and"
1"Then guttered like a candle"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences90
matches
0"She'd come here because Isolde"
1"They jutted from the earth"
2"Her voice came out flat,"
3"She ran her fingers along"
4"She said it louder this"
5"She'd entered at nine-thirty."
6"She waited, counting seconds in"
7"She jumped, spinning, but found"
8"She'd marked it with a"
9"She'd entered through a gap"
10"She'd walked through that gap"
11"She went down hard, the"
12"She clutched it in her"
13"Her voice cracked, but she"
14"It stood at the treeline,"
15"It paused, and the darkness"
16"She had come alone because"
17"She should have known better."
ratio0.2
87.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences90
matches
0"Rory pushed through the last"
1"The air changed immediately."
2"The city sounds—distant traffic, the"
3"The Heartstone Pendant rested warm"
4"She'd come here because Isolde"
5"Something about the Fae Court's"
6"The moon hung fat and"
7"They jutted from the earth"
8"Wildflowers dotted the clearing, their"
9"A gentle breeze stirred the"
10"A hidden pocket where the"
11"The way her footsteps made"
12"The way the shadows between"
13"Her voice came out flat,"
14"Rory walked to the center"
15"She ran her fingers along"
16"The pendant pulsed again, harder,"
17"The air shifted."
18"A vibration she felt in"
19"The wildflowers at her feet"
ratio0.744
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"Now, standing alone in the"
1"Now, though, some fundamental quality"
2"Now those two oaks stood"
3"Because she'd trusted the fae"
ratio0.044
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The city sounds—distant traffic, the hum of Richmond Park's nocturnal life—cut off as if someone had pressed a mute button."
1"The moon above winked out as if cloud-covered, but no clouds had been there seconds ago."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"It paused, and the darkness seemed to swell"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.6699%