Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ5JKJRPBZDZ91JEHDB1NZP

Run Details

Duration:
1m
Cost:
$0.004632
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow Quinn killed the torch on her mobile, letting the darkness settle around her. The tunnel breathed damp and rot, the smell of old London clay and something fouler underneath. She adjusted the leather strap on her wrist, felt the familiar pressure against her skin, and listened. Water dripped somewhere to her left. A train rumbled overhead, distant, muffled by thirty feet of earth and concrete. "Down here, Detective." PC Dawes's voice echoed from the bend ahead. She followed it past defunct signal boxes and walls plastered with advertisements from the 1970s, their colours faded to brown ghosts. A blue tarpaulin caught her light, rigged between two support pillars to create a workspace. Dawes held up his phone, illuminating a body sprawled across the tracks. Male, late forties, expensive shoes. The soles had been cleaned recently. His overcoat was open, the lining slashed in three precise vertical cuts. "Who found him?" Quinn crouched, not touching anything. "A woman from the museum. Says she was tracking something called a Veil Compass." Dawes's tone carried the weight of a man who had stopped questioning things. "She's waiting by the exit. Name's Kowalski. Says she knows you." Eva. Of course Eva would be here. Quinn had known her for five years through Aurora, watched her fill that worn satchel with books about things Quinn didn't believe in. Until three years ago, when DS Morris had walked into a warehouse and never walked out, and the pathologist had used words like *exsanguination* and *impossible wound geometry* in the same sentence. "Leave her there. I want to see this first." She pulled on nitrile gloves, the latex snapping against her wrists. The body lay supine, arms at his sides, palms up. No defensive wounds on the hands. The cuts on his chest had bled heavily, but the blood had pooled strangely — thick around the torso, thin and watery around the neck and head. Something didn't add up. "Forensics sent anyone yet?" she asked. "Stuck at the entrance. This section's unstable, they're waiting for structural clearance." Which gave her maybe thirty minutes before the scene turned into a circus of white suits and clipboards. She took out her own light, a proper Maglite with a steel casing, and played the beam across the walls. Brickwork, pipework, a graffiti tag that read *MIDNIGHT STANDARD* in curling script. Someone had been here recently. The tag was fresh, the paint still sharp. "The victim," she said. "ID?" "Walter Gresham. Antiques dealer with a shop in Bloomsbury. Two prior convictions for receiving stolen goods, both overturned on appeal." An antiques dealer in an abandoned Tube station at midnight. The pieces didn't fit, but they pointed in a direction she didn't like. She leaned closer to the wounds. The slashes were clean, deep, but something about the edges troubled her. They didn't look like a blade cut. The skin had retracted slightly, curling at the margins like paper touched by a flame. She'd seen knife wounds, gunshot wounds, wounds from broken bottles and shattered bones. She'd never seen skin that looked *dried* around a cut. "Detective, the blood—" "I see it." The pool around the torso was too thick. Almost gelatinous. She pressed her gloved finger against the edge of the stain and felt resistance, a tacky texture like old jam. Blood didn't do that. Not in the time frame implied by the body temperature. Not unless— She stood, stepped back, and studied the scene from a different angle. The body lay in the centre of the tracks. The three cuts aligned perfectly with the gaps between the rails. Someone had staged this. Placed him here, arranged the coat, made sure the wounds faced upward. But the blood told a different story. Most of it had pooled underneath him, seeping into the gravel between the ties. The thick coagulum was concentrated around the upper torso. The thinner liquid had spread outward in a rough halo, stopping at the edge of the rail. She traced the halo's boundary with her light. There were no drag marks. No signs of a struggle. The man had died exactly where he lay. And yet— "The light at the exit hit his open eyes when we found him," Dawes said. "Pupils were fixed. No reaction." So death was recent. Within the hour. The body was still warm when Dawes arrived. She touched the victim's cheek. Room temperature, but not cold. Less than sixty minutes. Yet the blood had the consistency of a three-hour-old clot. "Bring Kowalski down." She heard footsteps, quick and sharp. Eva appeared between two pillars, her round glasses catching the torchlight. She clutched her leather satchel against her chest, her curls springing wild from her ponytail. "Quinn." She tucked a strand behind her ear, a gesture Quinn had seen a hundred times over dinners at Aurora's flat. "I found him. I didn't touch anything, I swear. I used my phone to call it in and waited by the grate." "You said you were tracking a compass." Eva's green eyes flickered to the body. "The Veil Compass. It's a tool that points to rifts. Supernatural gateways. Walter Gresham sold one to the wrong person three weeks ago. I've been trying to trace it." "Trace it where?" "Here. To this station." Eva stepped closer, her expression shifting from anxiety to something analytical. "But that's not what killed him." "Dawes said you had a theory." "No theory. Observation." She knelt opposite Quinn, her satchel resting on her thigh. "Look at the wounds. Really look." Quinn had looked. Already she'd noted the curled edges, the dried texture. But she wanted to hear what Eva saw. "There's no secondary haemorrhage," Eva said. "No bruising around the cuts. The blood vessels didn't rupture. They sealed." "Sealed?" "Like cauterisation without heat." Eva's voice was steady. "He was cut by something that doesn't obey normal physics. A blade made of shadow. A Shade weapon." Quinn wanted to dismiss it. Three years ago, she would have. But the memory of Morris, the impossible wound geometry, the clean edges and dried skin—the same pattern she'd seen on his body, burned into her mind during the night shift she still couldn't shake. She pushed the thought aside and focused on the details. "The blood," Quinn said. "It's too thick for a death this recent." "It's also too dark. There's no arterial spray. His heart wasn't pumping when the cuts were made." Quinn froze. She looked at the wound pattern again. Three parallel lines, straight and even. No slashes, no ragged edges. Each cut began and ended at the same depth. "He was already dead," she said. "Killed somewhere else, then brought here and cut post-mortem." Eva nodded. "The blood on the tracks is staged. Someone arranged him to look like a murder victim. The actual killing happened in a different place, probably the Veil Market. The Market is currently anchored ten feet below this station." "You're saying someone murdered him in a hidden supernatural market, carried his body through a secret tunnel, and laid him out on the tracks?" "Yes." "And then what? They called the police?" "They wanted him found. They wanted the compass found." Eva reached into her satchel, pulled out a brass object Quinn recognised from Aurora's descriptions. A small compass with verdigris patina and protective sigils etched into the face. "This is what I was tracking. A secondary compass. Gresham had a copy in his shop. When I followed the trail, it led here." "Show me." Eva held the compass flat in her palm. The needle spun once, twice, and settled pointing directly at the body. "Look at his left hand," Eva said. Quinn leaned closer. The victim's left palm was clenched into a fist, something dark visible between his fingers. She carefully pried the fingers apart, using the edge of her Maglite to avoid disturbing trace evidence. A small brass disc fell free. Same patina. Same sigils. The matching compass to the one in Eva's hand. "He was holding it when he died," Quinn said. "He kept it with him even after selling the other." "Which means he knew someone was coming for him. He carried insurance." Quinn turned the disc over in her gloved hand. The backing was smooth except for a single engraved word: *KOWALSKI*. Her throat tightened. Eva read it over her shoulder and went very still. "I never met him," Eva said. "I didn't even know he had this." "That's not the question." Quinn stood, her joints cracking. "The question is why someone killed a man, stole a compass that points to supernatural portals, left a body in an abandoned station, and engraved your name on the evidence." She stared at the walls, the graffiti, the fresh paint of *MIDNIGHT STANDARD*. The tag wasn't just vandalism. It was a signature. "Someone wanted you here," Quinn said. "They knew you'd follow the trail. They knew you'd bring me." Eva's face had gone pale, her freckles standing out like ink on paper. "The Market moves every full moon. That's three days from now. Whoever killed Gresham wants me—wants us—to find them before it shifts." Quinn looked at the body, the staged blood, the mirror image of everything she'd seen three years ago. She'd been looking for patterns in the wrong places. The crime scene wasn't about the victim. It was about the response. The killer hadn't tried to hide the body. They'd displayed it, timed it, orchestrated it. She pulled out her phone, ignoring the missed calls from dispatch. "Let them clear the tunnel," she said. "Let them run their tests and take their photos. But I'm not working this case anymore." "What are you doing?" Quinn met Eva's green eyes, saw the fear she refused to show. "I'm following the evidence that matters." She pocketed the brass disc. "You said the Market is ten feet below us. Show me how to get in."
created_at"2026-07-07T20:51:08.008Z" 7/7/2026, 8:51:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.328
leniency0.655
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1650
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
2"really"
3"carefully"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1650
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"carried the weight"
count1
3
word"standard"
count2
4
word"shattered"
count1
5
word"aligned"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"pumping"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"echoed"
2"carried the weight"
3"standard"
4"shattered"
5"aligned"
6"traced"
7"footsteps"
8"flickered"
9"pumping"
10"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences124
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords10
totalWords1648
ratio0.006
matches
0"exsanguination"
1"impossible wound geometry"
2"MIDNIGHT STANDARD"
3"dried"
4"KOWALSKI"
5"MIDNIGHT STANDARD"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1109
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Quinn18
London1
Dawes5
Eva17
Aurora3
Morris2
Which1
Maglite2
Tube1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Dawes"
2"Eva"
3"Morris"
4"Which"
places
0"London"
1"Aurora"
globalScore0.688
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1648
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean21.4
std16.68
cv0.779
sampleLengths
047
119
23
344
412
523
68
738
862
99
1054
114
126
1312
1463
155
1620
1723
1863
193
203
2146
2212
2336
247
2540
268
2720
2820
2929
3010
313
3232
3343
347
3536
363
3721
386
3919
4020
4118
421
4326
4445
4510
4612
4717
4829
4915
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"been cleaned"
1"was clenched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
72.31% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences162
ratio0.025
matches
0"The cuts on his chest had bled heavily, but the blood had pooled strangely — thick around the torso, thin and watery around the neck and head."
1"Not unless—"
2"And yet—"
3"But the memory of Morris, the impossible wound geometry, the clean edges and dried skin—the same pattern she'd seen on his body, burned into her mind during the night shift she still couldn't shake."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1111
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.0279027902790279
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008100810081008101
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean10.17
std6.96
cv0.684
sampleLengths
014
116
217
36
413
53
68
721
815
912
105
116
1212
138
1427
1511
161
176
1823
1932
209
2111
2210
236
2427
254
266
2712
2818
2920
3012
315
328
334
341
3520
3610
3713
386
3912
407
4115
4213
4310
443
453
468
472
4820
494
59.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3950617283950617
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners64
63.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"Of course Eva would be"
1"Already she'd noted the curled"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences105
matches
0"She adjusted the leather strap"
1"She followed it past defunct"
2"His overcoat was open, the"
3"She pulled on nitrile gloves,"
4"She took out her own"
5"She leaned closer to the"
6"They didn't look like a"
7"She'd seen knife wounds, gunshot"
8"She'd never seen skin that"
9"She pressed her gloved finger"
10"She stood, stepped back, and"
11"She traced the halo's boundary"
12"She touched the victim's cheek."
13"She heard footsteps, quick and"
14"She clutched her leather satchel"
15"She tucked a strand behind"
16"She knelt opposite Quinn, her"
17"She pushed the thought aside"
18"She looked at the wound"
19"She carefully pried the fingers"
ratio0.267
55.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences105
matches
0"Harlow Quinn killed the torch"
1"The tunnel breathed damp and"
2"She adjusted the leather strap"
3"Water dripped somewhere to her"
4"A train rumbled overhead, distant,"
5"PC Dawes's voice echoed from"
6"She followed it past defunct"
7"A blue tarpaulin caught her"
8"Dawes held up his phone,"
9"The soles had been cleaned"
10"His overcoat was open, the"
11"Quinn crouched, not touching anything"
12"Dawes's tone carried the weight"
13"Quinn had known her for"
14"She pulled on nitrile gloves,"
15"The body lay supine, arms"
16"The cuts on his chest"
17"Something didn't add up."
18"She took out her own"
19"Brickwork, pipework, a graffiti tag"
ratio0.81
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Brickwork, pipework, a graffiti tag that read *MIDNIGHT STANDARD* in curling script."
19.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn crouched, not touching anything"
1"Eva stepped, her expression shifting from anxiety to something analytical"
2"She knelt, her satchel resting on her thigh"
3"Quinn stood, her joints cracking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.379
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.5068%