Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ5MWGZAH26NQKYEW5W2Q2Z

Run Details

Duration:
1m
Cost:
$0.004856
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairwell smelled of damp earth and rusted iron. Detective Harlow Quinn descended into Camden's forgotten underbelly, her leather-soled shoes finding purchase on grime-caked concrete. The emergency lighting the forensics team had strung up cast long, jaundiced shadows across walls covered in Victorian tilework—faded advertisements for tonics and tobaccos promising cures and comforts long since obsolete. The abandoned Tube station had been sealed off in 1972. Or so the official records claimed. Quinn had learned years ago that official records were often the least reliable source of information. "Down here, Detective." She followed the voice toward the old northbound platform. A figure in white coveralls straightened up from beside a makeshift examination table—Dr. Priya Sharma, the night shift medical examiner, gloved hands hovering over a sheet-draped form. The body had been discovered by a homeless man seeking shelter from the rain. That was the official version. Quinn glanced at the far wall, where a series of strange symbols had been carved into the brick. They weren't graffiti. The lines were too deliberate, too precise. "What have we got, Priya?" "Male, mid-thirties. No identification. No wallet. No phone." Sharma pulled back the sheet, revealing a face that might have been handsome once. The skin had taken on a waxy pallor, the eyes frozen in an expression that Quinn couldn't quite place. Not fear. Not surprise. Recognition, maybe. "Time of death?" "Six to eight hours ago. I'll have a firmer number after the post-mortem." Quinn circled the table, taking in the details. Expensive shoes. A watch that cost more than her monthly salary. Hands that had never done a day of manual labor. "Someone's going to miss him. Probably already has. No missing persons reports matching this description came through dispatch." "The uniform who found him said the same thing. Money but no paperwork." Quinn crouched, examining the victim's hands. Clean nails. No defensive wounds. No bruising on the knuckles. "He didn't fight back." "Tox screens will tell us more, but I'm not seeing signs of a struggle anywhere on the body." "Which means either he knew his killer or he was incapacitated before he could react." Quinn stood, brushing dust from her knees. "Or he was dead before he hit the ground." "Vic's been dead awhile, but I can tell you what killed him wasn't natural causes. Not in the traditional sense." Quinn's jaw tightened. "Define 'traditional sense.'" Sharma pointed at the victim's chest. "No visible wounds. No signs of blunt force trauma. No ligature marks. But when I pressed on the sternum..." She pressed two fingers against the dead man's chest, and Quinn watched the skin dimple in a way that made her stomach turn. The bone gave way like wet cardboard. "His ribs are powdered," Sharma said. "Every single one. From the inside out." Quinn let that settle. She had seen violence in all its forms—knives, bullets, fists, even a strangulation once with piano wire. But this was something else. Something that didn't fit. Through the archway leading to the opposite platform, movement caught her eye. A figure stood near the edge of the light, arms crossed, watching. Red curls caught the fluorescent glow. "Who's that?" Sharma followed her gaze. "Says her name's Eva Kowalski. Works at the British Museum. She was the one who called it in." "Not the homeless man?" "There is no homeless man, Detective. Ms. Kowalski made the discovery. She's been waiting to speak with you." Quinn crossed the platform, her footsteps echoing in the empty station. The woman pushed her round glasses up her nose as she approached, a worn leather satchel clutched against her chest like a shield. "Ms. Kowalski." "Detective Quinn." Her voice carried the slight tremor of someone who had seen something they weren't meant to. "I know what you're going to ask me." "Then you can save us both some time. What were you doing in an abandoned Tube station at two in the morning?" Eva's hand went to her hair, tucking a strand behind her left ear. "I wasn't here to buy anything. I was here to study." "Study what, exactly?" "The market." Eva gestured vaguely at the empty platform. "It moves every full moon. Different locations. I've been tracking its patterns for months. Documenting the stalls, the goods, the people who trade here." Quinn studied her. The woman was telling the truth, or at least a version of it. "And what kind of market moves locations every full moon?" "The kind that sells things you can't find on Amazon." Eva met her eyes. "I know how that sounds. I know you think I'm either lying or delusional. But I've been documenting the supernatural black market in London for two years. I have journals. Photographs. Trade manifests." "Supernatural black market." "Enchanted goods. Banned alchemical substances. Information that doesn't exist in any database you have access to." Eva pulled a small brass compass from her satchel. The casing was etched with symbols Quinn recognized from the wall behind them—protective sigils, now that she looked closer. The face had a patina of verdigris, aged and worn. "What's that?" "A Veil Compass. It points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal." Eva held it out. Quinn took it, feeling the weight in her palm. The needle spun counterclockwise once, then settled, pointing directly at the victim. "Your man there," Eva said. "He was a practitioner. The compass doesn't point at bodies. It points at rifts. He was carrying one." Quinn turned the compass over in her hands. The craftsmanship was extraordinary—not mass-produced, not machine-made. Human hands had shaped this, worked the metal, etched the symbols. "Where did you get this?" "The market. Last month. Different location, same vendors." Eva took a breath. "The man on the table—I've seen him before. He sells. Or sold, I suppose. He dealt in classified texts. Forbidden knowledge. I tried to buy a grimoire from him three weeks ago. He turned me away. Said I didn't have the right currency." "What currency does he accept?" "Not money." Eva's green eyes held Quinn's gaze. "He trades in secrets. Memories. Pieces of people's lives." Quinn looked from the compass to the body, to the sigils on the wall, to the dead man's powdered ribs. The pieces weren't fitting together because she was trying to force them into a shape they didn't belong to. This wasn't a mugging gone wrong. It wasn't a drug deal turned violent. It wasn't anything she had a case file for. She looked back at the victim's face. That expression. Not fear. Not surprise. Recognition. Like he had seen something coming and couldn't look away. "You said he dealt in forbidden knowledge," Quinn said slowly. "What kind of knowledge?" "Depends on the buyer. Spells. Rituals. Locations of hidden artifacts." Eva paused. "Methods of killing that leave no trace." Quinn's blood went cold. She turned back to Sharma. "Priya, check his back. Between the shoulder blades." Sharma turned the body, pulling the sheet down. There it was—a small mark just below the base of the skull. A brand, maybe. Perfectly circular, about the size of a coin. She touched it gently. "Heat source. Recent. This was done post-mortem." "Not a brand," Eva said, her voice barely above a whisper. "It's a seal. Whoever killed him didn't just want him dead. They wanted him silenced. Erased. The broken ribs aren't evidence of violence, Detective. They're evidence of extraction. Someone took something from him." Quinn stared at the mark, at the sigils on the wall, at the compass still warm in her palm. The pieces shifted, rearranged themselves into a pattern she couldn't quite see but felt nonetheless. A supernatural black market. A dealer in forbidden knowledge. A killer who left no physical trace. A detective whose partner died three years ago under circumstances no one could explain. "What did they take?" Eva shook her head. "I don't know. But I know who might."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
86.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Sharma pulled back [back]"
1"Eva gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"Quinn said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.566
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.113
84.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1323
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
2"gently"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1323
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"database"
count1
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"footsteps"
2"echoing"
3"database"
4"etched"
5"weight"
6"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1316
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
19.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount768
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.6
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn20
Camden1
Victorian1
Tube1
Dr1
Sharma7
Eva11
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Dr"
4"Sharma"
5"Eva"
places
0"Victorian"
globalScore0.198
windowScore0.333
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite place"
1"quite see but felt nonetheless"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1316
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"let that settle"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean23.09
std16.67
cv0.722
sampleLengths
056
132
23
336
447
55
647
73
813
947
1013
1120
1218
1331
1420
156
1655
1713
1830
1930
202
2122
224
2318
2434
252
2626
2722
2824
293
3033
3126
3247
333
3454
352
3637
3723
3826
395
4055
415
4217
4361
4413
451
4610
4714
4819
4917
89.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences89
matches
0"been sealed"
1"been discovered"
2"been carved"
3"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs142
matches
0"was telling"
1"was trying"
7.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences127
ratio0.047
matches
0"The emergency lighting the forensics team had strung up cast long, jaundiced shadows across walls covered in Victorian tilework—faded advertisements for tonics and tobaccos promising cures and comforts long since obsolete."
1"A figure in white coveralls straightened up from beside a makeshift examination table—Dr."
2"She had seen violence in all its forms—knives, bullets, fists, even a strangulation once with piano wire."
3"The casing was etched with symbols Quinn recognized from the wall behind them—protective sigils, now that she looked closer."
4"The craftsmanship was extraordinary—not mass-produced, not machine-made."
5"There it was—a small mark just below the base of the skull."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount779
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03594351732991014
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010269576379974325
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean10.36
std7.95
cv0.767
sampleLengths
09
116
231
310
46
516
63
79
813
914
1014
115
1218
133
147
155
1622
1719
182
192
202
213
2213
238
242
259
2610
2718
2813
296
302
313
325
334
3418
3522
369
3720
383
393
406
4142
427
436
447
454
4617
475
484
4912
64.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4330708661417323
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners55
43.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Perfectly circular, about the size"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences77
matches
0"She followed the voice toward"
1"They weren't graffiti."
2"She pressed two fingers against"
3"She had seen violence in"
4"Her voice carried the slight"
5"It wasn't a drug deal"
6"It wasn't anything she had"
7"She looked back at the"
8"She turned back to Sharma."
9"She touched it gently."
ratio0.13
18.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences77
matches
0"The stairwell smelled of damp"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended into"
2"The emergency lighting the forensics"
3"The abandoned Tube station had"
4"Quinn had learned years ago"
5"She followed the voice toward"
6"A figure in white coveralls"
7"Priya Sharma, the night shift"
8"The body had been discovered"
9"That was the official version."
10"Quinn glanced at the far"
11"They weren't graffiti."
12"The lines were too deliberate,"
13"Sharma pulled back the sheet,"
14"The skin had taken on"
15"Quinn circled the table, taking"
16"A watch that cost more"
17"Hands that had never done"
18"Quinn crouched, examining the victim's"
19"Quinn stood, brushing dust from"
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva said, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.094
leniency0.189
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.038
81.2339%