| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.097 | | leniency | 0.194 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1487 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1487 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "beacon" | | 2 | "dance" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "echoes" | | 8 | "resolve" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "fractured" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1503 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.28% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1183 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | London | 2 | | November | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | August | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Dymas | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Dymas" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "August" |
| | globalScore | 0.993 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 45.83% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite decide which world it belonged to" | | 1 | "symbols that seemed to writhe when she looked at them directly" | | 2 | "something close to fear" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.327 | | wordCount | 1503 | | matches | | 0 | "not vanished, but absorbed, swallowed by the space between the oaks" | | 1 | "not the grey London overcast she'd walked under minutes ago but a deep violet twilight scattered with stars she didn't recog" | | 2 | "Not painfully, but with an insistence" | | 3 | "not a figure, not a shadow, but a presence" | | 4 | "not a shadow, but a presence" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 25.05 | | std | 21.79 | | cv | 0.87 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 79 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 93 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 55 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 45 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 46 | | 41 | 35 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 56 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 52 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 42 |
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| 98.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone " | | 1 | "was forged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 125 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "The rhythm had been off since they'd crossed the park's northern gate — slower than before, almost peaceful." | | 1 | "The air between the stones shimmered — a faint distortion, like heat haze rising from tarmac in August, except it was barely above freezing." | | 2 | "One moment she stood among the standing stones, the next she was gone — not vanished, but absorbed, swallowed by the space between the oaks." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in every direction — cornflowers, foxgloves, bluebells, wild roses — species that had no business growing together, let alone in November." | | 4 | "The pendant pulsed against her chest — faster now, the warmth building." | | 5 | "\"The stones are warded. Old magic. The kind that predates the Courts, predates the Veil.\" Nyx's whisper carried an edge Rory had never heard before — something close to fear." | | 6 | "The hum of the grove — a sound she hadn't noticed until it stopped — fell silent." | | 7 | "The image of Dymas sharpened — she could make out individual grapes on a distant vine, could see the steam rising from a feast table laden with dishes she couldn't name." | | 8 | "The half-Fae had vanished from sight, though her footprints — her absence of footprints — still marked where she'd stood." | | 9 | "One figure raised a hand — whether in greeting or warning, she couldn't tell." | | 10 | "Between those trunks, something moved — not a figure, not a shadow, but a presence that displaced the air and bent the moonlight around itself." | | 11 | "The amber sky and the watching figures vanished, leaving only her own reflection staring up at her from the still surface — except her reflection's eyes weren't blue." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 902 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.02106430155210643 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005543237250554324 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 125 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 125 | | mean | 12.02 | | std | 8.43 | | cv | 0.701 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 35.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.304 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 1 | "She left no footprints in" | | 2 | "She glanced over her shoulder," | | 3 | "Their form flickered violently, edges" | | 4 | "She gripped it anyway." | | 5 | "It folded around her like" | | 6 | "They tilted their head, studying" | | 7 | "They turned, the way a" | | 8 | "She pulled back." | | 9 | "She pulled it free and" | | 10 | "Their shadow-form parted the stems" | | 11 | "They stopped at the edge" | | 12 | "They were looking back at" | | 13 | "Their violet eyes flared." | | 14 | "They were violet." |
| | ratio | 0.169 | |
| 33.03% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks of Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant hung warm" | | 3 | "The rhythm had been off" | | 4 | "Nyx materialized from the shadow" | | 5 | "The silhouette of their form" | | 6 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver" | | 7 | "She left no footprints in" | | 8 | "She glanced over her shoulder," | | 9 | "The path had vanished." | | 10 | "The carvings settled into stillness" | | 11 | "The air between the stones" | | 12 | "Their form flickered violently, edges" | | 13 | "Rory's hand drifted to the" | | 14 | "The moonsilver handle bit into" | | 15 | "She gripped it anyway." | | 16 | "The weight grounded her." | | 17 | "Isolde stepped through the shimmer" | | 18 | "Rory squared her shoulders and" | | 19 | "The shimmer didn't resist so" |
| | ratio | 0.854 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 46.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The silhouette of their form shifted, solid one moment and translucent the next, a humanoid shape made of living darkness that couldn't quite decide which world…" | | 1 | "She left no footprints in the frost-covered grass, her bare feet skimming the earth as though the ground itself refused to touch her." | | 2 | "In its place stood a ring of ancient oak standing stones, their surfaces carved with symbols that seemed to writhe when she looked at them directly." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in every direction — cornflowers, foxgloves, bluebells, wild roses — species that had no business growing together, let alone in…" | | 4 | "The air smelled of honey and cut grass and something older underneath, something that reminded her of old libraries and church incense." | | 5 | "Beyond the standing stones, deeper into the grove, the wildflowers gave way to ancient trees whose trunks twisted in spirals that made her eyes ache." | | 6 | "Between those trunks, something moved — not a figure, not a shadow, but a presence that displaced the air and bent the moonlight around itself." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |