| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 798 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 798 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 29 | | totalWords | 802 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "Foolish to come here at midnight." | | 1 | "Wrong direction then." | | 2 | "Just an owl. A fox. London’s full of them." | | 3 | "Wrong wrong wrong." | | 4 | "They were here the whole time." | | 5 | "Breathing." | | 6 | "saw" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.82% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 801 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | North | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Queen | 1 | | Ride | 1 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | South | 1 | | Circular | 1 | | November | 1 | | London | 2 | | Rory | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Gate" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Queen" | | 3 | "Ride" | | 4 | "Circular" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "North" | | 2 | "Isabella" | | 3 | "Plantation" | | 4 | "South" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.938 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed reluctant to spread tonight, clustering close to their poles as if frightened of the dark between them" | | 1 | "directions that seemed to shift when she blinked" | | 2 | "lichen that seemed to glow in the dark" | | 3 | "seemed almost deliberate" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 802 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 20.05 | | std | 16.22 | | cv | 0.809 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.44% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing — bluebells and foxgloves and something purple she couldn’t name — all blooming out of season in the November chill." | | 1 | "Tall and thin and wrong — their proportions twisted like a child’s drawing of people, arms too long, heads too small, their faces smooth and featureless as stones." | | 2 | "The moonlight caught its face — smooth, featureless skin where eyes and mouth should be." |
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| 89.53% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 798 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "*Wrong wrong wrong.* Every" |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.045112781954887216 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0037593984962406013 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 7.71 | | std | 6.73 | | cv | 0.873 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 62.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4230769230769231 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Just shadows pooling beneath the" | | 1 | "*Just an owl." | | 2 | "Even her footsteps quieted, the" | | 3 | "Just stood there at the" |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Her trainers met gravel." | | 1 | "She’d walked this route three" | | 2 | "She kept walking." | | 3 | "She stepped through the gap" | | 4 | "Her voice sounded wrong in" | | 5 | "She gasped and grabbed at" | | 6 | "Her heel caught a root" | | 7 | "*They were here the whole" | | 8 | "They had always been here," | | 9 | "Her hands shook as she" | | 10 | "She looked down." | | 11 | "They were red." | | 12 | "It stepped forward." |
| | ratio | 0.16 | |
| 95.80% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park’s North Gate groaned" | | 1 | "Rory pushed through the rusted" | | 2 | "Her trainers met gravel." | | 3 | "The crunch sounded too loud." | | 4 | "The path snaked through moonlit" | | 5 | "Street lamps dotted the main" | | 6 | "She’d walked this route three" | | 7 | "A pleasant enough stroll through" | | 8 | "A bench she remembered sat" | | 9 | "A signpost pointed in directions" | | 10 | "The pendant pulsed again." | | 11 | "Rory touched it through her" | | 12 | "The crimson stone felt almost" | | 13 | "Something moved in her peripheral" | | 14 | "London’s full of them.*" | | 15 | "She kept walking." | | 16 | "The air changed twenty paces" | | 17 | "The distant hum of traffic" | | 18 | "The pendant’s warmth had spread" | | 19 | "The grove stood ahead." |
| | ratio | 0.728 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 50.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Street lamps dotted the main route but their orange pools seemed reluctant to spread tonight, clustering close to their poles as if frightened of the dark betwe…" | | 1 | "The distant hum of traffic from the South Circular faded to nothing, swallowed by a silence that felt thick and deliberate." | | 2 | "Ancient oaks arranged in a rough circle, their bark covered in luminous green lichen that seemed to glow in the dark." | | 3 | "Rory watched the bluebells sway, their petals brushing against each other in a pattern that seemed almost deliberate." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |