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Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ5W4NNDV40QW0HDTW1PR70
Run Details
Model:
Aion 3.0 Mini
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
56.9s
Cost:
$0.006661
Provider:
AionLabs
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
87.36%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
81.04%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
98.38%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
54.35%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
38.76%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
94.70%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
84.5973%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The knock came at half
past two in the morning. Three sharp raps. Measured. Deliberate.
The kind of knock that
knew exactly who it would find on the other side.
Aurora set down her copy
of the *
Evening Standard
* and crossed the worn floorboards of her flat.
The chain caught on the
first deadbolt, then the second. She cracked the door open, keeping the chain on.
Lucien Moreau leaned against the
doorframe, one hand resting on his ivory-handled cane, the other tucked into the pocket of his charcoal overcoat.
His platinum blond hair was
slicked back as always, but a single strand had broken free and fell across his forehead.
The amber eye caught the
weak hallway light.
The black one was lost
in shadow. "Laila."
His voice rolled the syllables
like honey over gravel. "It's been a while." She didn't unlock the chain. "You have the wrong flat. Aurora's upstairs."
A ghost of a smile
tugged at his lips. "I know exactly which flat you're in, *
Rory
*. I've always known."
The use of her childhood
nickname hit somewhere behind her ribs.
She'd told him that name
over glasses of wine at a bar in Soho, three months ago, when things were still good between them. When she still trusted the information he sold, when she still believed the half-truths he whispered against her skin. "What do you want, Lucien?" "To come inside."
He tilted his head, the
motion fluid and predatory. "It's rather cold out here." "London in November. Terrible weather."
She made no move to
open the door. "Say what you need to say." "A woman could freeze to death on your doorstep."
He pulled his collar closer
with his free hand. "Though I suppose that would solve a few problems for you." "More than a few."
They stared at each other
through the gap in the door.
The curry house below had
closed hours ago, and the only sound was the distant hum of a night bus grinding gears on Brick Lane. Lucien sighed. "There's a shipment coming through Tilbury tomorrow night. Weapons. Old ones. Antiques that sing the kind of songs you don't want sung in the wrong key." "Not my problem." "It is when the buyer is Silas's brother."
The name hit her like
cold water. Silas. The man whose bar she lived above. The man who'd given her a job when she'd fled Cardiff with nothing but a duffel bag and a black eye. The man who'd introduced her to Lucien in the first place. She unchained the door. Lucien stepped inside, bringing the scent of expensive cologne and cold rain with him.
He moved slowly, his cane
tapping against the floorboards as he surveyed her flat. The stack of delivery menus on the kitchen counter. The single mug of tea going cold beside the newspaper. The narrow bed in the corner, still unmade from the night before. "Cozy," he said. "Functional."
She closed the door but
didn't lock it. "Silas's brother went back to Portugal six months ago. He swore off the family business." "People change their minds. Especially when money's involved." Lucien set his cane against the wall and shrugged off his coat, revealing the impeccable charcoal suit beneath. "The shipment arrives at midnight. It docks at Berth 47. The buyer is using a shell company registered to a Sofia Mendes." "That's Silas's mother." "Precisely why I came to you."
He draped his coat over
the back of her only chair. "You have a relationship with the family. You can talk to Silas without raising suspicion." "I haven't spoken to Silas in two weeks. Since the Cutter family business." "Ah." Lucien's lips pressed into a thin line. "The Cutter family." "You told me it was a simple extraction. Walk in, grab the package, walk out."
Her voice stayed level, but
her hands had
started to
tremble.
She shoved them into the
pockets of her jeans. "You didn't mention the three armed men guarding the warehouse. You didn't mention the *
ghouls
*." "I thought you knew." "You thought."
She laughed, the sound brittle
and hollow. "You thought a lot of things, Lucien. You thought I wouldn't find out about the bounty on your head. You thought I wouldn't notice the lies piling up like bodies. You thought I'd just... go along with whatever scheme you'd cooked up because I was *
useful
*." "Is that what you think?"
His voice dropped low
. "I know."
She stepped closer, close enough
to see the faint lines at the corners of his eyes. "I know you trade in secrets. I know you don't have a single loyal bone in your body. And I know that whatever you're selling tonight, it isn't worth the price." "You're wrong." "About which part?" "About not having a single loyal bone."
His hand came up, fingers
brushing against her cheek, feather-light. She should have pulled away. She didn't. "I came here, didn't I?" "To use me." "To *
warn
* you." His thumb
traced
the curve of her jaw. "The shipment isn't weapons. It's bodies. Fresh ones. Thirty-seven souls bound for the auction houses of Avaros." The words landed like stones in her
stomach
. "That's... that's trafficking. That's a daylight crime. The council would-" "The council is who's selling them." His hand dropped. "Silas's brother isn't the buyer. He's the delivery boy. And Silas himself? He's neck deep." She stared at him. The flat felt smaller
suddenly
, the walls pressing in. "Why should I believe you?" "Because I've never lied to you." His eyes held hers. "I've omitted. I've misdirected. I've let you assume what you wanted to assume. But I have never, not once, told you a direct untruth." "That's a lawyer's distinction." "I was raised by a demon. We're particular about semantics." A half-smile crossed his face, there and gone. "I'm telling you the truth now,
Rory
. Because I need you to trust me. Just this once." "Trust you." She shook her head. "You broke that. You ground it into dust and walked away." "I know." He reached into his jacket and pulled out a slim envelope, cream-coloured and unmarked. "Which is why I brought this." "What is it?" "A way out." He pressed it into her palm. His fingers lingered against hers. "Passport. New identity. Enough cash to get you to Barcelona. A friend who owes me a favour, who can get you settled somewhere the Council's reach doesn't extend." Her throat tightened. "You want me to run." "I want you to *
live
*." His voice cracked on the last word. "The shipment arrives tomorrow. Silas will know by morning that someone talked. And when he starts looking for who... you're the only connection between the docks and me." "And if I stay?" "You die." He said it simply, without drama. "I won't let that happen. Not again." "Again?" She looked up at him. His jaw tightened. "There was a woman. Before. In Marseille. I chose the job over her. She ended up in the Thames. I couldn't-" He stopped. Swallowed. "I couldn't
live
through that again,
Rory
. I *
can't
*." Something shifted in her chest. A crack in the wall she'd built between them. "What do you get out of this?" "A clean conscience for the first time in thirty-two years." He
let out a breath
. "And perhaps the chance to see you smile. One more time." She looked down at the envelope in her hands. The paper was warm from his body heat. She
could feel
his gaze on her, waiting. "One more time," she repeated. "If you'd like." She looked up at him. The amber eye glowed faintly in the dim light of her flat. The black one was a pit of shadow. He was half-monster and half-lie and all trouble. She smiled. Lucien's breath caught. Something
flickered
in his eyes. Hope. Fear. Hunger. "
Rory
-" "No." She tucked the envelope into her back pocket. "I'm not running. If thirty-seven souls are going to auction, someone needs to stop it. And if Silas is involved, someone needs to put him down." "
Rory
, that's suicide-" "It's what I do." She stepped past him, grabbing her leather jacket from the hook by the door. "And if you're going to stand there and watch me walk into danger, you should know one thing." "What's that?" She turned back at the door, her hand on the knob. "I don't trust you. But I believe you. And right now, that's enough." She opened the door and stepped into the hallway. Behind her, she heard him pick up his cane. The tap of it against the floorboards followed her down the stairs. "Where are we going?" he asked. "Berth 47." She didn't look back. "If we're going to burn this whole thing down, I want to see the look on Silas's face when it happens." "
Rory
." His hand caught her arm at the bottom of the stairs. She turned. He was close, too close. "If we do this, there's no going back. You understand that? You'll be a target for the rest of your life. The Council won't stop. Silas's family won't stop." "I know." He searched her face. Whatever he found there made him nod
slowly
. "Then I suppose I'm along for the ride." "Good." She pulled her arm free. "Try to keep up." She pushed through the door into the cold London night.
Somewhere in the distance, a
church bell struck three. The city stretched out before her, dark and full of teeth. She smiled. Let the hunt begin.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
33
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
88
tagDensity
0.375
leniency
0.75
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
87.36%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1582
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
1
adverb
"precisely"
count
1
2
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"precisely"
2
"suddenly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
81.04%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1582
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"measured"
count
1
1
word
"standard"
count
1
2
word
"traced"
count
1
3
word
"stomach"
count
1
4
word
"could feel"
count
1
5
word
"flickered"
count
1
highlights
0
"measured"
1
"standard"
2
"traced"
3
"stomach"
4
"could feel"
5
"flickered"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"let out a breath"
count
1
highlights
0
"let out a breath"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
102
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
102
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"started to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
157
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
46
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
7
markdownWords
8
totalWords
1582
ratio
0.005
matches
0
"Evening Standard"
1
"Rory"
2
"ghouls"
3
"useful"
4
"warn"
5
"live"
6
"can't"
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
19
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
14
wordCount
818
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
0.86
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau
1
Soho
1
Brick
1
Lane
1
Cardiff
1
Lucien
7
Swallowed
1
London
1
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Lucien"
places
0
"Soho"
1
"Brick"
2
"Lane"
3
"Cardiff"
4
"London"
globalScore
1
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
63
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1582
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
157
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
81
mean
19.53
std
16.22
cv
0.83
sampleLengths
0
10
1
20
2
36
3
59
4
14
5
12
6
20
7
54
8
5
9
17
10
19
11
29
12
4
13
36
14
28
15
3
16
8
17
47
18
4
19
59
20
3
21
24
22
48
23
3
24
32
25
13
26
11
27
50
28
4
29
55
30
9
31
49
32
2
33
3
34
29
35
3
36
28
37
18
38
24
39
13
40
5
41
34
42
4
43
35
44
17
45
22
46
3
47
42
48
8
49
40
98.38%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
102
matches
0
"was slicked"
1
"was lost"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
129
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
157
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
825
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
23
adverbRatio
0.027878787878787878
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.009696969696969697
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
157
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
157
mean
10.08
std
7.51
cv
0.746
sampleLengths
0
10
1
3
2
1
3
1
4
15
5
17
6
10
7
9
8
23
9
21
10
8
11
7
12
10
13
4
14
5
15
7
16
9
17
11
18
11
19
24
20
19
21
5
22
12
23
5
24
13
25
6
26
18
27
11
28
4
29
11
30
25
31
2
32
26
33
3
34
8
35
7
36
1
37
7
38
21
39
11
40
4
41
14
42
14
43
9
44
10
45
12
46
3
47
9
48
15
49
26
54.35%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
13
diversityRatio
0.37579617834394907
totalSentences
157
uniqueOpeners
59
38.76%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
86
matches
0
"Somewhere in the distance, a"
ratio
0.012
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
48
totalSentences
86
matches
0
"She cracked the door open,"
1
"His platinum blond hair was"
2
"His voice rolled the syllables"
3
"She didn't unlock the chain."
4
"She'd told him that name"
5
"He tilted his head, the"
6
"She made no move to"
7
"He pulled his collar closer"
8
"They stared at each other"
9
"She unchained the door."
10
"He moved slowly, his cane"
11
"She closed the door but"
12
"He draped his coat over"
13
"Her voice stayed level, but"
14
"She shoved them into the"
15
"She laughed, the sound brittle"
16
"His voice dropped low"
17
"She stepped closer, close enough"
18
"His hand came up, fingers"
19
"She should have pulled away."
ratio
0.558
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
81
totalSentences
86
matches
0
"The knock came at half"
1
"The kind of knock that"
2
"Aurora set down her copy"
3
"The chain caught on the"
4
"She cracked the door open,"
5
"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
6
"His platinum blond hair was"
7
"The amber eye caught the"
8
"The black one was lost"
9
"His voice rolled the syllables"
10
"She didn't unlock the chain."
11
"A ghost of a smile"
12
"The use of her childhood"
13
"She'd told him that name"
14
"He tilted his head, the"
15
"She made no move to"
16
"He pulled his collar closer"
17
"They stared at each other"
18
"The curry house below had"
19
"The name hit her like"
ratio
0.942
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
86
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
23
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"The man who'd given her a job when she'd fled Cardiff with nothing but a duffel bag and a black eye."
94.70%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
33
uselessAdditionCount
2
matches
0
"Her voice stayed, but her hands had started to tremble"
1
"His hand came up, fingers brushing against her cheek, feather-light"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"Lucien's lips pressed (press)"
1
"She laughed (laugh)"
2
"He pressed (press)"
3
"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences
88
tagDensity
0.08
leniency
0.159
rawRatio
0.571
effectiveRatio
0.091
84.5973%