Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ5X27SH4SMAJ2YNA72DE6F

Run Details

Duration:
47.1s
Cost:
$0.003731
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory entered Richmond Park through the Kingston Gate at half past eleven. The gates would lock at dusk but the park never truly closed if you knew the gaps in the fencing. She knew them. She'd mapped them out over three separate visits, each time telling herself she was being thorough, sensible, preparing in case she ever needed to come here at night. The Heartstone Pendant lay warm against her sternum. It had been pulsing since she left the flat, a slow heartbeat of heat that she could feel even through her jacket. She'd tried ignoring it. Tried telling herself it was just her body temperature, the walk, the anxiety. But the warmth only grew as she cut across the dark grass toward the ancient oaks that marked the boundary of the Grove. The moon was a thin sliver, barely enough to navigate by. She'd brought a torch but didn't want to use it. Something about lighting up the darkness felt like announcing herself, like knocking on a door she wasn't sure she wanted opened. The first standing stone emerged from the gloom like a tooth. Grey and lichen-crusted, it stood twice her height, its surface catching what little starlight bled through the canopy. She stopped at the threshold between the park and the circle of stones. The silence was wrong. She'd walked through Richmond Park countless times. There were always sounds: foxes barking, owls calling, the distant hum of traffic from the South Circular. Now there was nothing. Not even the wind through the leaves. The pendant pulsed harder. She pressed her palm against it and felt the warmth seep into her skin. "You're here now," she whispered to herself. "Turn around and go home." But her feet stayed planted. She'd come because of the pendant, because of the dreams she'd been having since she found it. Dreams of standing in this circle while something watched from between the trees. Dreams where she couldn't move, couldn't speak, could only feel that gaze on her like a physical weight. The rational part of her mind insisted this was all coincidence. Stress. The aftermath of leaving Evan, of starting over in London, of taking delivery shifts for Yu-Fei at all hours. Her mind was trying to make sense of the chaos by constructing patterns where none existed. The pendant pulsed again. Warmer this time. She stepped through the gap between two of the standing stones. The change was immediate. The air grew thick, heavy, like walking into a room with no windows. The temperature dropped but not with a chill — it was the absence of warmth, a sudden hollow cold that had nothing to do with the autumn night. Rory stopped in the centre of the clearing. Wildflowers bloomed at her feet, pale shapes in the darkness, their petals closed against the night. They shouldn't be here. Not in October. Not in London. Something moved at the edge of her vision. She snapped her head toward it, heart hammering. There was nothing there. Just the dark shapes of trees, the grey standing stones, the closed flowers. But she'd seen it. A tall shadow, barely visible, standing among the oaks. She'd felt it more than seen it, a piece of darkness that was darker than the rest. "Hello?" Her voice came out flat, deadened by the thick air. No echo. It was like speaking into cotton wool. The pendant blazed against her chest. She looked down and saw it was glowing, a deep red light pulsing through the fabric of her shirt. The rhythm matched her heartbeat. She should leave. She knew she should leave. But she'd come for answers. She'd come because the dreams were getting worse, because she couldn't keep waking up in cold sweats, because something in her gut insisted this was the only way to make it stop. A sound. Low. Rhythmic. Like breathing. It came from behind her, close enough that she felt the air move against her neck. Warm, damp breath that smelled of earth and wet stone. Rory didn't move. Couldn't move. Her muscles locked, her spine rigid, her eyes fixed on the standing stone in front of her. She could see her own reflection in the polished granite, pale face, wide eyes, mouth open in a silent cry. The breathing continued. Slow. Patient. Mocking. She counted seconds. One. Two. Three. Four. Five. The pendant's glow intensified, casting red shadows across the clearing. In that light, she saw something in her reflection that wasn't her. A shape behind her, taller than any man, thinner, with limbs that bent in ways that broke the human silhouette. Her breath caught. Her chest seized. The breathing stopped. The silence that followed was worse. It pressed against her eardrums, filled her mouth, coated her tongue. She tasted copper. The pendant went cold. The sudden absence of warmth was like falling. She gasped, stumbled forward, caught herself against the standing stone. The granite was slick with moisture, cold as grave dirt against her palms. She forced herself to turn around. The clearing was empty. But the shadows were wrong. They pooled in places they shouldn't, gathered in corners of the circle that should have been illuminated by starlight. And they were moving. Shifting. Not with the breeze — there was no breeze — but with purpose. Beyond the standing stones, deeper in the trees, she saw shapes that didn't match the trunks. Long, thin figures that swayed without moving, that watched without eyes. The pendant warmed again. A single throb of heat against her throat. Then footsteps. Not behind her. Not in the clearing. They came from all directions at once, a soft pat-pat-pat on damp earth, circling the Grove, coming closer with each circuit. Rory backed toward the gap between the standing stones. The entrance. The way out. The footsteps quickened. She turned and ran. The gap was right there, a darker space between two grey pillars. She dove through it, her shoulder scraping against stone, her feet finding the grass of the park beyond the circle. She kept running. The sounds of the park returned gradually. An owl called somewhere to her left. Traffic hummed in the distance. The wind rustled through the branches overhead. She didn't stop until she reached the Kingston Gate, gasping, her hands shaking as she gripped the cold iron. The pendant was still warm. And in the darkness of the park behind her, something watched from the edge of the trees. She didn't see it. She felt it. Felt its attention like a needle pressed against the back of her neck. She walked home without looking back. She could feel it following her the whole way.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1111
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1111
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"could feel"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count4
2
word"navigate"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"aftermath"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"grave"
count1
13
word"throb"
count1
14
word"footsteps"
count2
15
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"could feel"
1"warmth"
2"navigate"
3"gloom"
4"silence"
5"pulsed"
6"weight"
7"aftermath"
8"sense of"
9"chill"
10"echo"
11"rhythmic"
12"grave"
13"throb"
14"footsteps"
15"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1114
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1105
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"London"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Kingston2
Gate2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Grove2
South1
Circular1
Evan1
London2
Yu-Fei1
October1
Rory4
persons
0"Gate"
1"Pendant"
2"Grove"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Kingston"
3"South"
4"London"
5"October"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like announcing herself, like knoc"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1114
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"feel that gaze"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean20.63
std17.37
cv0.842
sampleLengths
063
170
242
342
44
535
618
712
85
948
1047
117
1211
1345
1434
158
1625
1730
181
1919
2030
213
225
2337
242
254
2626
2742
286
298
3042
316
323
3320
344
3531
366
374
3842
3927
4012
412
4228
4314
443
454
4632
473
4826
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"been illuminated"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs190
matches
0"was being"
1"was trying"
2"was like speaking"
3"was glowing"
4"were getting"
5"was like falling"
98.56% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences129
ratio0.016
matches
0"The temperature dropped but not with a chill — it was the absence of warmth, a sudden hollow cold that had nothing to do with the autumn night."
1"Not with the breeze — there was no breeze — but with purpose."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1106
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay warm against her"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.022603978300180832
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006329113924050633
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean8.64
std6.82
cv0.789
sampleLengths
012
120
23
328
48
522
64
713
823
911
1010
1121
1211
1318
1413
154
167
1717
184
197
204
2114
227
235
245
2517
2613
2718
2811
291
3019
3116
324
333
3411
354
3613
3728
388
3916
404
413
423
438
448
454
4613
474
489
4917
46.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3488372093023256
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners45
30.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"Just the dark shapes of"
ratio0.009
69.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences109
matches
0"She knew them."
1"She'd mapped them out over"
2"It had been pulsing since"
3"She'd tried ignoring it."
4"She'd brought a torch but"
5"She stopped at the threshold"
6"She'd walked through Richmond Park"
7"She pressed her palm against"
8"she whispered to herself"
9"She'd come because of the"
10"Her mind was trying to"
11"She stepped through the gap"
12"They shouldn't be here."
13"She snapped her head toward"
14"She'd felt it more than"
15"Her voice came out flat,"
16"It was like speaking into"
17"She looked down and saw"
18"She should leave."
19"She knew she should leave."
ratio0.376
74.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences109
matches
0"Rory entered Richmond Park through"
1"The gates would lock at"
2"She knew them."
3"She'd mapped them out over"
4"The Heartstone Pendant lay warm"
5"It had been pulsing since"
6"She'd tried ignoring it."
7"The moon was a thin"
8"She'd brought a torch but"
9"Something about lighting up the"
10"The first standing stone emerged"
11"She stopped at the threshold"
12"The silence was wrong."
13"She'd walked through Richmond Park"
14"The pendant pulsed harder."
15"She pressed her palm against"
16"she whispered to herself"
17"She'd come because of the"
18"Dreams of standing in this"
19"Dreams where she couldn't move,"
ratio0.771
45.87% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"Now there was nothing."
ratio0.009
99.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A shape behind her, taller than any man, thinner, with limbs that bent in ways that broke the human silhouette."
1"She dove through it, her shoulder scraping against stone, her feet finding the grass of the park beyond the circle."
2"She didn't stop until she reached the Kingston Gate, gasping, her hands shaking as she gripped the cold iron."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
81.8123%