Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ5YSRH0BKD3W6DQP0RZ6ZM

Run Details

Model:
Aion 3.0
Duration:
59.5s
Cost:
$0.021319
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts clicked in succession, each one heavier than the last. Rory pulled the door open just enough to see through the gap, and her knuckles went white on the edge of the wood. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim corridor with rain dripping from the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair had come loose from its careful slick, a strand falling across his forehead. He held his ivory-handled cane in his right hand. His mismatched eyes, one amber and one black as pitch, caught the dim light from the hallway bulb. "You changed the locks." "That's generally what people do when someone leaves and doesn't come back for six weeks." "Six weeks, three days." He tilted his head. "But who's counting?" Ptolemy wound between Rory's ankles, tail flicking against her bare shin. She didn't move from the doorway. The smell of curry from the restaurant below had seeped into everything, even her vest top and joggers. She crossed her arms over her chest, suddenly aware of the domesticity of her appearance. "It's midnight." "Is it?" He glanced at his wrist, where a watch sat beneath his shirt cuff. "I lose track." "What do you want, Lucien?" His jaw tightened. He looked past her shoulder into the flat where towers of books leaned against walls and scrolls covered every surface of the kitchen counter. A candle burned on the side table, its flame wavering in the draft from the door. "May I come in?" "No." He exhaled through his nose. Rain continued to drip from his suit onto the cracked linoleum of the corridor. He made no move to step closer. "You look well." "You look wet." "I am wet. It's raining." "Observant." "Always." They stared at each other through the narrow gap of the door. Six weeks hadn't changed the geography of his face, the sharp line of his jaw, the way his mouth sat somewhere between a smile and a grimace. But something had shifted behind those mismatched eyes. A darkness that hadn't been there before. Or maybe it had been there all along, and she'd refused to see it. "Eva will be back soon." "No, she won't. She's working a double at the hospital." Rory's stomach dropped. "How do you know that?" "I'm an information broker, Aurora. It's what I do." "And you thought you'd just show up here, in the middle of the night, because you know Eva's schedule?" "I thought I'd show up here because we need to talk." "We had our talk. Six weeks, three days ago. In that alley behind Silas's bar. Do you remember? You said some things. I said some things. Then you walked away." "You walked away first." "I walked away because you told me to." "I told you it wasn't safe." "Same thing." "It's not the same thing, and you know it." Ptolemy meowed, loud and insistent. The cat butted his head against the door, trying to push it wider. Lucien looked down at the tabby, and for a moment, something cracked in the careful mask of his expression. "Hello, Ptolemy." The cat chirped in response, rubbing against Lucien's trouser leg when Rory's grip on the door loosened. "He misses you," Rory said. "He keeps sleeping on the windowsill waiting for someone who isn't coming." "That's not fair." "You want to talk about fair?" She pushed the door wider, and the chain caught with a rattle. "You disappeared. No calls. No messages. I thought something had happened to you. I thought the Avaros lot had finally gotten to you, or that you'd been arrested, or—" "I told you to stay out of it." "You told me a lot of things." The candle on the side table guttered. Shadows jumped across the wall behind Rory, casting the stacks of books into strange shapes. From somewhere below came the clatter of pots and the smell of cardamom. Lucien's hand tightened on his cane. "There's been a development. In the supernatural community. Something that affects you directly." "Me specifically? Or me as in, general humanity?" "You specifically. Aurora Carter, born in Cardiff, works for Yu-Fei Cheung's restaurant, lives above Silas's bar, and is currently staying at her friend Eva's flat on Brick Lane because someone torched her flat last week." The words landed like a punch to the sternum. Rory's hand found the doorframe. "How do you know about that?" "I know about everything that happens in this city. It's my job." "Is that why you're here? Professional obligation?" "Would you believe me if I said yes?" She searched his face. The amber eye caught the candlelight; the black one swallowed it. His expression had that quality she remembered, the one that made her feel like she was standing at the edge of a cliff, wanting to jump even as every nerve in her body screamed at her to step back. "Come in. But you're sitting on the opposite end of the sofa." He raised an eyebrow. "Noted." Rory closed the door to release the chain, then pulled it open wide enough for him to pass. As he stepped past her, the cold rain on his suit brushed against her arm. He smelled of wet wool and something else. Sandalwood, maybe. Something old and warm. Ptolemy wound between Lucien's legs as he surveyed the flat. Books had multiplied since he'd last been here. Eva's research covered the kitchen counter in drifts of paper and ink. A half-eaten bowl of ramen sat on the coffee table next to an open copy of "The Lesser Key of Solomon." Lucien picked up the book, turned it over in his hands, and set it back down. "You've been reading." "Eva's been reading. I've been listening." "And what has she learned?" "That summoning circles are more complicated than they look, and that demons lie." "Not all of us." Rory dropped onto one end of the sofa, tucking her feet beneath her. She gestured to the other end with a sharp wave. Lucien settled there, resting his cane across his knees. The sofa wasn't large. Three cushions separated them, but it felt like nothing. Ptolemy jumped up between them and settled in Lucien's lap. He stroked the cat's striped fur with long, careful fingers. "Someone's been asking about you," Lucien said. "In the supernatural community. Someone with connections to Avaros." "My father's realm?" "Not your father. Someone else. Someone who's been looking for a specific type of person. A human with connections to both worlds." "I don't have connections to both worlds. I'm a delivery person. I'm nobody." "You're not nobody. You're the woman who helped me steal the Codex from Malphas's territory. You're the woman who read passages from it that no human should have been able to translate. You're the woman who walked through a ward barrier that should have stopped you cold." Rory's pulse quickened. "That was luck." "Neither of us believes that." The candle on the side table flickered. Ptolemy purred in Lucien's lap, oblivious to the tension. From below, the sound of dishes being stacked echoed up through the floor. "What do they want with me?" "I don't know yet." "Then why are you here?" Lucien looked at her. The words hung in the air between them, heavy with all the things neither of them had said six weeks ago in that alley behind Silas's bar. She'd wanted to go with him. He'd told her to stay behind. She'd said she didn't need his protection. He'd said it wasn't about protection. She'd asked what it was about then, and he hadn't answered. "Because I made a promise," he said. "To myself. That I would keep you safe, even if you didn't want me to." "I don't need you to keep me safe." "I know." "Then why—" "Because someone torched your flat, Aurora. Someone who knew where you lived. Someone who wanted to flush you out. And it worked. You're staying at Eva's. You've changed your routine. You're scared." "I'm not scared." "Your hand is shaking." Rory looked down. Her fingers trembled against her knee. She pressed them flat to stop the tremor. "Who did it?" "I'm still working on that." "Then what good are you?" The words came out sharper than she intended. Lucien's expression didn't change, but something flickered in his amber eye. A flash of hurt, there and gone. "I came to warn you. That's all. I came to tell you to be careful. To watch your back. To not trust anyone who approaches you about the Codex or about what happened in Avaros." "And then? You'll disappear again for another six weeks?" He didn't answer. Ptolemy stretched in his lap, claws catching on his trousers. Lucien didn't flinch. "Rory." The familiar sound of the name caught her off guard. He'd always called her Aurora. Formal, distant. The name he used when she was a contact, a job, a responsibility. Rory was what Eva called her. What Silas called her. What her mother called her on the phone. Rory was the name for people who knew her. "I didn't want to leave." "But you did." "Because staying would have put you in danger. The kind of danger I couldn't protect you from." "And now?" He looked at her, really looked at her, and she saw it: the six weeks of silence weren't indifference. They were restraint. Every day he'd stayed away had cost him something. She could see it in the tightness around his eyes, the careful control of his expression. "Now I don't have a choice. Because whoever's looking for you knows about the Codex. They know about the wards. They know things they shouldn't. And I need to figure out how before they find you." Ptolemy rolled onto his back, exposing his belly. Lucien's fingers traced the soft fur. "You can't stay here." "Eva would kill me." "Eva would kill both of us. She's been wanting to kill you since you left." "She told you that?" "She told me that the next time she saw you, she'd remove your tongue with a spoon." Lucien's lips quirked. "She always did have a way with words." "Don't smile. She's serious. And she's right. You hurt me." His expression sobered. "I know." "You knew, and you did it anyway." "Would you have let me go if I'd told you the truth? That every moment I spent near you made you a target? That the people hunting me would have used you to get to me? That I couldn't focus on what needed to be done because every time you walked into a room, all I could think about was how much I wanted—" He stopped. His jaw worked. Ptolemy looked up at him, sensing the shift in his mood. "How much you wanted what?" "Rory." "Finish the sentence." "It doesn't matter." "It matters to me." Lucien set the cat aside and stood. He moved to the window, looking out at the rain-slicked street below. Brick Lane at midnight was a collage of neon and shadow, the curry houses closing up, last customers stumbling home. "I wanted to stay. Every day. Every hour. I wanted to walk up to that flat above Silas's bar and knock on your door and tell you that none of it mattered. Not the Codex, not Avaros, not my father's mess. Just you. Just us." Rory's breath caught. "But wanting things doesn't make them safe. And you deserve safe." "I don't want safe. I want honest." He turned from the window. The amber eye and the black eye held her with an intensity that made the air feel thin. "What do you want, Aurora?" She stood. Her feet were cold against the floor. Ptolemy watched from the sofa, tail twitching. The candle flame stretched between them, casting long shadows. "I want to know who burned my flat. I want to know why someone from Avaros is looking for me. I want to understand why I could read passages from the Codex. And I want—" She stopped. Her hand found the crescent scar on her left wrist, an old habit. She forced her arm back to her side. "You want." "I want you to stop deciding what's best for me. I want you to stop pushing me away because you think it's noble. I want you to treat me like I can handle the truth." "Can you?" "Try me." The rain intensified outside, drumming against the window. Lucien reached into his jacket and produced a folded piece of paper. He held it out to her. She took it, their fingers brushing for just a moment. The contact sent a jolt through her chest. She unfolded it. A sketch. A symbol she recognized but couldn't name, drawn in careful lines. Below it, a single word in a language that should have been unfamiliar but wasn't. "Malphora," she read aloud. Lucien's expression tightened. "You can read that." "Of course I can read it. It says Malphora. What does that mean?" "It's a name. An old one. From before the split between the realms." "Before the split? How old are we talking?" "Old enough that no human should be able to pronounce it, let alone read it." Rory looked at the paper again. The symbol seemed to pulse in the candlelight, the lines shifting in her vision. Something deep inside her responded to it. A recognition that went beyond memory. "Why does that name feel familiar?" "That's what I need to find out."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she read aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences112
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.018
95.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2243
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2243
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"wavering"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count2
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count2
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"wavering"
1"stomach"
2"eyebrow"
3"pulse"
4"quickened"
5"flickered"
6"tension"
7"echoed"
8"trembled"
9"familiar"
10"silence"
11"traced"
12"intensity"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
3
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
1"stomach dropped"
2"hung in the air"
3"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences126
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences230
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2243
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1185
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Ptolemy9
Rory15
Lucien18
Silas2
Aurora1
Eva2
Lane1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
places
0"Lane"
globalScore0.741
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like nothing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2243
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences230
matches
0"had that quality"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs138
mean16.25
std16.38
cv1.008
sampleLengths
034
160
24
315
411
550
62
718
85
943
104
111
1226
133
143
155
161
171
1868
195
2010
218
229
2319
2411
2530
264
278
286
292
309
3137
322
3317
3417
353
3647
378
387
3935
4019
418
4235
4314
446
4512
467
478
4854
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"being stacked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs201
matches
0"was standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences230
ratio0.004
matches
0"The amber eye caught the candlelight; the black one swallowed it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1188
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.016835016835016835
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0025252525252525255
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences230
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences230
mean9.75
std8.79
cv0.901
sampleLengths
011
123
217
316
49
518
64
715
88
93
1011
116
1218
1315
142
1515
163
175
183
1924
2016
214
221
235
2414
257
263
273
285
291
301
3112
3227
338
347
3514
365
3710
383
395
409
4119
4211
4330
444
458
466
472
489
495
45.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.28695652173913044
totalSentences230
uniqueOpeners66
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences117
matches
0"His platinum hair had come"
1"He held his ivory-handled cane"
2"His mismatched eyes, one amber"
3"He tilted his head"
4"She didn't move from the"
5"She crossed her arms over"
6"He glanced at his wrist,"
7"His jaw tightened."
8"He looked past her shoulder"
9"He exhaled through his nose."
10"He made no move to"
11"They stared at each other"
12"She pushed the door wider,"
13"She searched his face."
14"His expression had that quality"
15"He raised an eyebrow."
16"He smelled of wet wool"
17"She gestured to the other"
18"He stroked the cat's striped"
19"She'd wanted to go with"
ratio0.359
7.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences117
matches
0"Rory pulled the door open"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2"His platinum hair had come"
3"He held his ivory-handled cane"
4"His mismatched eyes, one amber"
5"He tilted his head"
6"Ptolemy wound between Rory's ankles,"
7"She didn't move from the"
8"The smell of curry from"
9"She crossed her arms over"
10"He glanced at his wrist,"
11"His jaw tightened."
12"He looked past her shoulder"
13"A candle burned on the"
14"He exhaled through his nose."
15"Rain continued to drip from"
16"He made no move to"
17"They stared at each other"
18"A darkness that hadn't been"
19"Rory's stomach dropped."
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Below it, a single word in a language that should have been unfamiliar but wasn't."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She pushed, and the chain caught with a rattle"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences112
tagDensity0.027
leniency0.054
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.2704%