| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2452 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.06% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2452 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "wavered" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "crystal" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "echoes" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "footfall" | | 9 | "scanned" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "desire" | | 13 | "flicked" | | 14 | "shimmered" | | 15 | "gloom" | | 16 | "tapestry" | | 17 | "perfect" | | 18 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 175 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 175 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 199 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2444 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 2059 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | London | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Nyx | 17 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel-rift | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Rory | 21 | | Varga | 1 | | Rutherford | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 12 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.99 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 128 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "figures that seemed to scream in silence" |
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| 77.25% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.227 | | wordCount | 2444 | | matches | | 0 | "neither led nor" | | 1 | "neither smiling nor" | | 2 | "not ceiling at all but open night filled with strange constellations" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 199 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 42.88 | | std | 29.88 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 107 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 97 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 85 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 87 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 66 | | 18 | 102 | | 19 | 55 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 81 | | 24 | 48 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 65 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 57 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 56 | | 34 | 94 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 80 | | 37 | 45 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 50 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 66 | | 42 | 61 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 39 | | 45 | 90 | | 46 | 66 | | 47 | 57 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 36 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 175 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 351 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 13.64% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 199 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers exploded across the floor of the clearing in colours that had no name in any florist’s book—deep indigo veined with gold, petals of pure dust-rose, stalks that glowed faint as embers at their core." | | 1 | "The path unrolled of its own will—flat white stones half-sunk in moss, each etched with lines that rearranged themselves the moment her gaze slipped." | | 2 | "Water ran over pebbles striped in colours that belonged under glass—sapphire, copper, milk-white." | | 3 | "When she looked full at them they showed spirals and moons; when she glanced aside the patterns became open-mouthed figures that seemed to scream in silence." | | 4 | "Short snatches of melody rode it—half a Welsh nursery rhyme her mother once hummed, twisted into rising minor notes that scraped the base of her skull." | | 5 | "On the third circuit she noticed the absence of her own shadow—hers and Nyx’s both failed to fall across the moss." | | 6 | "No scent of earth or perfume came with her—only the faint ozone prickle of magic held in check." | | 7 | "Wind rose again and brought a fresh wave of blossoms scent—sweeter, sharp with the promise of storm that never broke." | | 8 | "The tower grew until its base filled the horizon of the grove and the music became almost physical—vibration that filled lungs and ears and the spaces behind Rutherford." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 875 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "left faint golden dust" |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.037714285714285714 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0034285714285714284 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 199 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 199 | | mean | 12.28 | | std | 8.13 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 67.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.41708542713567837 | | totalSentences | 199 | | uniqueOpeners | 83 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a low, continuous thrum" | | 1 | "Once she caught her own" | | 2 | "Then a flicker, a second" | | 3 | "Then unease climbed after it," | | 4 | "Somewhere behind them the first" | | 5 | "Once she spoke again, her" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "Their outline wavered like heat" | | 1 | "Their scent hit her full" | | 2 | "She swallowed and found her" | | 3 | "She kept her attention fixed" | | 4 | "They followed the chimes." | | 5 | "It tasted of cold metal" | | 6 | "She stood, wiped her hand" | | 7 | "They moved on." | | 8 | "Their bark held faces half-formed-mouths" | | 9 | "Her pulse kicked hard against" | | 10 | "It spun slowly, shedding motes" | | 11 | "They moved in purposeful little" | | 12 | "She forced her eyes forward" | | 13 | "She shook her head and" | | 14 | "She rolled her shoulders and" | | 15 | "Her bare feet left the" | | 16 | "She raised one slender hand" | | 17 | "She stepped nearer" | | 18 | "They advanced past the pedestal." | | 19 | "She simply walked beside them," |
| | ratio | 0.203 | |
| 61.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 126 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks stood in a" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter paused at the" | | 2 | "The wood lived under her" | | 3 | "Nyx rose from the lengthening" | | 4 | "Their outline wavered like heat" | | 5 | "The words arrived thin and" | | 6 | "Rory stepped between two pillars." | | 7 | "The ground under her trainers" | | 8 | "Warmth slid across her cheeks." | | 9 | "The light changed without warning:" | | 10 | "Wildflowers exploded across the floor" | | 11 | "Their scent hit her full" | | 12 | "She swallowed and found her" | | 13 | "Nyx drifted past her, form" | | 14 | "The path unrolled of its" | | 15 | "She kept her attention fixed" | | 16 | "Blossoms brushed her ankles and" | | 17 | "A faint shimmer ran along" | | 18 | "A sound rose ahead: a" | | 19 | "Nyx’s edges frayed and then" |
| | ratio | 0.797 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 3.11% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | technicalSentenceCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx rose from the lengthening shade of her boots, a humanoid darkness that ran taller than her by half a head." | | 1 | "The ground under her trainers shifted from packed London clay to something softer, springier, as if roots knit a different soil." | | 2 | "Wildflowers exploded across the floor of the clearing in colours that had no name in any florist’s book—deep indigo veined with gold, petals of pure dust-rose, …" | | 3 | "The path unrolled of its own will—flat white stones half-sunk in moss, each etched with lines that rearranged themselves the moment her gaze slipped." | | 4 | "Blossoms brushed her ankles and left faint golden dust that stayed luminous for a beat before sinking into fabric." | | 5 | "A faint shimmer ran along the margins of vision where the Veil still clung, a distortion like heat-haze that revealed nothing and hid everything." | | 6 | "Water ran over pebbles striped in colours that belonged under glass—sapphire, copper, milk-white." | | 7 | "Fish darting beneath flashed scales that held their own internal light." | | 8 | "Cold washed through her chest and out to her fingertips, leaving a bright residual spark that made the scar on her wrist feel alive." | | 9 | "Their bark held faces half-formed—mouths that opened and shut without sound, eyes that tracked her progress and then vanished." | | 10 | "When she looked full at them they showed spirals and moons; when she glanced aside the patterns became open-mouthed figures that seemed to scream in silence." | | 11 | "Images bloomed and died in the space of a breath: a black gate wreathed in heat, a dining hall that stretched forever under amber sky, a leaf-shaped blade that …" | | 12 | "The shade had gone almost fully incorporeal, edges frayed into the surrounding gloom as if the grove itself tested their cohesion." | | 13 | "The tower grew until its base filled the horizon of the grove and the music became almost physical—vibration that filled lungs and ears and the spaces behind Ru…" | | 14 | "Carvings on nearby stones now showed interlocking circles that matched the scars of old loopways Rory had once seen chalked in abandoned underground stations." | | 15 | "The final stretch of path shone with dew that formed words if she tilted her head." | | 16 | "Pillars of pale stone rose to a ceiling that was not ceiling at all but open night filled with strange constellations that drifted and rearranged." | | 17 | "Images accelerated: a woman with her face running through smoke-thick corridors, a leaf-shaped dagger resting across upturned palms, the Veil itself flexing thi…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.152 | | leniency | 0.303 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |