| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She hesitated then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.407 | | leniency | 0.815 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.074 | |
| 89.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1952 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1952 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "crystal" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "unreadable" | | 8 | "footfall" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "reminder" | | 11 | "lilt" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "throb" | | 14 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 141 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 157 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1941 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 65 | | wordCount | 1621 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.17 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | December | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 2 | | London | 4 | | Aurora | 19 | | Silas | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Isolde | 8 | | Hel-directed | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Taff | 1 | | Canary | 1 | | Wharf | 1 | | Unease | 2 | | Nyx | 9 | | Shade | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Dusk | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Unease" | | 6 | "Nyx" | | 7 | "Shade" | | 8 | "Dusk" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "Canary" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.914 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "glow that seemed to rise from the ground itself" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.515 | | wordCount | 1941 | | matches | | 0 | "not the Hel-directed heat she had felt before, but something cooler, older" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 49.77 | | std | 27.95 | | cv | 0.562 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 89 | | 5 | 82 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 77 | | 8 | 69 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 88 | | 13 | 86 | | 14 | 65 | | 15 | 84 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 68 | | 20 | 71 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 75 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 74 | | 25 | 54 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 95 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 64 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 68 | | 34 | 50 | | 35 | 62 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 43 | | 38 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 271 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 157 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones—thick trunks carved into rough pillars, leaves still clinging despite the season—formed a crooked circle." | | 1 | "Sound arrived first—an impossible chorus of insects and birdsong layered over water that did not exist on the London side." | | 2 | "Trees she had no names for arched overhead—trunks pale as bone, leaves like hammered copper that chimed when they shifted." | | 3 | "Somewhere distant, crystal struck crystal; the sound rolled through the grove like laughter caught in a jar." | | 4 | "Something small and luminous darted between the copper leaves—wings like pure light, body no larger than her thumb." | | 5 | "Cardiff lecture halls, London rain, the flat above Silas’s bar—all of it belonged to another planet." | | 6 | "Only her own blurred reflection stared back—straight black hair, bright blue eyes, the small crescent scar pale on her left wrist where childhood had left its quiet reminder." | | 7 | "She lifted one hand and the Heartstone at Aurora’s throat answered with a single slow throb of warmth—not the Hel-directed heat she had felt before, but something cooler, older." | | 8 | "Aurora felt the same restlessness climbing her spine—the sense that wonder could tip into trap if she lingered." | | 9 | "Nyx touched her elbow—barely weight, a memory of pressure—and the phantom voice faded." |
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| 88.02% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1644 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "white star-shaped blooms," |
| | adverbCount | 77 | | adverbRatio | 0.04683698296836983 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009732360097323601 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 157 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 157 | | mean | 12.36 | | std | 8.3 | | cv | 0.672 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 71.97% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4394904458598726 | | totalSentences | 157 | | uniqueOpeners | 69 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere distant, crystal struck crystal;" | | 1 | "Instead her fingers found empty" | | 2 | "Only her own blurred reflection" | | 3 | "Instead she saw London streets" | | 4 | "Somewhere near Canary Wharf a" | | 5 | "Then the surface cleared and" | | 6 | "Once she thought she heard" | | 7 | "Then they crossed the threshold" | | 8 | "Somewhere a dog barked, earthbound" | | 9 | "Only the moonsilver dagger at" |
| | ratio | 0.078 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Their voice came soft as" | | 1 | "She swallowed, fingers brushing the" | | 2 | "They stepped through together." | | 3 | "She turned a slow circle." | | 4 | "She tasted pollen on her" | | 5 | "Her hand drifted to her" | | 6 | "She had come armed with" | | 7 | "They moved deeper along a" | | 8 | "She jerked back." | | 9 | "She let that hang and" | | 10 | "It circled once, close enough" | | 11 | "Her pulse kicked hard." | | 12 | "She forced herself to breathe" | | 13 | "They crossed a low bridge" | | 14 | "She waited, half-hoping, half-dreading another" | | 15 | "She left no mark on" | | 16 | "Her voice carried the lilt" | | 17 | "She hesitated, then added" | | 18 | "She lifted one hand and" | | 19 | "She turned and walked beneath" |
| | ratio | 0.248 | |
| 80.16% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pressed her palm against" | | 1 | "The standing stones—thick trunks carved" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted at her shoulder," | | 3 | "Their voice came soft as" | | 4 | "She swallowed, fingers brushing the" | | 5 | "The Heartstone lay cool and" | | 6 | "Whatever waited ahead was not" | | 7 | "They stepped through together." | | 8 | "Sound arrived first—an impossible chorus" | | 9 | "Warmth followed, soft as bathwater," | | 10 | "Aurora’s boots sank into moss" | | 11 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riot: white" | | 12 | "Petals brush her calves as" | | 13 | "She turned a slow circle." | | 14 | "The oak pillars now stood" | | 15 | "Trees she had no names" | | 16 | "Nyx solidified enough for their" | | 17 | "Aurora nodded, throat tight." | | 18 | "Every sense felt scrubbed raw." | | 19 | "She tasted pollen on her" |
| | ratio | 0.76 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 62.37% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Sound arrived first—an impossible chorus of insects and birdsong layered over water that did not exist on the London side." | | 1 | "Trees she had no names for arched overhead—trunks pale as bone, leaves like hammered copper that chimed when they shifted." | | 2 | "They moved deeper along a path that chose itself under their feet, moss parting to reveal pale stone slabs etched with spirals so old the edges blurred." | | 3 | "The stone thrummed under her skin, a low vibration that travelled up her arm and settled behind her eyes." | | 4 | "Clusters of flowers opened as they passed, releasing puffs of glowing pollen that drifted upward instead of down, forming temporary constellations between the b…" | | 5 | "The moss parted of its own accord, revealing dark soil that smelled of wet iron and crushed starlight." | | 6 | "The dagger rose free as though the earth itself surrendered it: slender, leaf-shaped, forged of moonsilver that held a faint luminescence even here where true m…" | | 7 | "Once she thought she heard her own name spoken in a voice that belonged to Evan, thin and far away, and she gripped the Fae blade until the cold steadied her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "they observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |