| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1250 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1250 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "trembled" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "crystal" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "echoes" | | 11 | "footfall" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1242 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1091 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Further | 2 | | Nyx | 10 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Isolde | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.767 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 48.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "trail that seemed to choose its own curves" | | 1 | "felt like half-remembered language" | | 2 | "as if tasting thought" |
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| 38.97% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.61 | | wordCount | 1242 | | matches | | 0 | "not with the fierce heat of a Hel rift but with a gentle thrum" | | 1 | "neither music nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 41.4 | | std | 27.85 | | cv | 0.673 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 69 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 72 | | 10 | 79 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 83 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 65 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 95 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 77 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 46 | | 29 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The sound was neither music nor noise; it felt like half-remembered language." | | 1 | "At the crest the trees parted to reveal a broader clearing ringed by more standing stones—these taller, their bark scarred with spirals and branching lines that shifted when the eye left them." | | 2 | "A single clear footprint already rested in the moss ahead—toes pointed toward the trunk—bare and perfect." | | 3 | "A single word formed in her mind without sound—listen—then dissolved." | | 4 | "A soft footfall sounded behind them—light, deliberate, and utterly without imprint." | | 5 | "Beyond Isolde the Grove continued—further clearings faint through the trees, lights moving in patterns that made no earthly sense." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1109 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.0369702434625789 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005410279531109108 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 11.19 | | std | 7.17 | | cv | 0.641 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 69.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.43243243243243246 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a soft wall of" | | 1 | "Further on the path opened" | | 2 | "Then it lifted again and" | | 3 | "Further in, the air thickened." | | 4 | "Instead scenes shifted beneath the" |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back." | | 1 | "They walked deeper along a" | | 2 | "She dipped two fingers." | | 3 | "She kept her voice low." | | 4 | "They left the hollow and" | | 5 | "Her boots made no mark" | | 6 | "Her crescent scar itched." | | 7 | "Its antennae brushed the curve" | | 8 | "She drew a slow breath" | | 9 | "They left a brief afterimage" | | 10 | "She caught one between careful" | | 11 | "Her mouth went dry." | | 12 | "Their form stretched thin as" | | 13 | "She left the white clover" | | 14 | "She met Isolde’s gaze and" |
| | ratio | 0.163 | |
| 74.13% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Rory stepped between them and" | | 2 | "Patches of wildflowers carpeted the" | | 3 | "Nyx glided after her, their" | | 4 | "The transition left a faint" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered, voice a breeze" | | 6 | "Rory crouched and pressed her" | | 7 | "A slow pulse rose through" | | 8 | "She glanced back." | | 9 | "The path they had taken" | | 10 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 11 | "Nyx’s violet eyes flared brighter." | | 12 | "They walked deeper along a" | | 13 | "The canopy overhead wove oak" | | 14 | "Light drifted down in slow" | | 15 | "Rory reached up." | | 16 | "A soft chime rang out," | | 17 | "The faint stirring of air" | | 18 | "The sound was neither music" | | 19 | "Rory tilted her head." |
| | ratio | 0.772 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 38.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Warm air kissed her cheeks, thick with the perfume of blossoms that had no business opening in winter." | | 1 | "Patches of wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colours: deep violet bells that trembled without wind, gold trumpets the size of her fist, and delicate…" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant at her throat warmed against her skin, not with the fierce heat of a Hel rift but with a gentle thrum that matched the earth." | | 3 | "Light drifted down in slow curtains of green and amber, never quite still, as if the sun itself paced above them." | | 4 | "The water ran clear at the edges yet carried threads of molten gold along its centre, swirling and separating without ever muddying." | | 5 | "At the crest the trees parted to reveal a broader clearing ringed by more standing stones—these taller, their bark scarred with spirals and branching lines that…" | | 6 | "Beyond Isolde the Grove continued—further clearings faint through the trees, lights moving in patterns that made no earthly sense." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, voice wrapped in riddle" |
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| 44.74% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.211 | | leniency | 0.421 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.211 | |