Run: 2026-07-08-01KX1KFV3TFD6P2N2DKPJXH29G

Run Details

Duration:
53.2s
Cost:
$0.021290
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones rose from the earth like the ribs of some long-buried giant. Rory stepped between them and the London chill fell away at once. Warm air kissed her cheeks, thick with the perfume of blossoms that had no business opening in winter. Patches of wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colours: deep violet bells that trembled without wind, gold trumpets the size of her fist, and delicate white stars that glowed from within as though each petal held a captured moonbeam. Nyx glided after her, their shadow-form rippleing at the edges. The transition left a faint violet shimmer in the air that faded like smoke. “The stones drink the city’s grey,” Nyx whispered, voice a breeze through dry leaves. “Feel how the ground answers.” Rory crouched and pressed her palm flat. A slow pulse rose through the moss, steady as a sleeping heart. She glanced back. The path they had taken into Richmond Park no longer showed between the oaks. Only a soft wall of light hung there, bent and warped. The Heartstone pendant at her throat warmed against her skin, not with the fierce heat of a Hel rift but with a gentle thrum that matched the earth. She stood. “Time already feels wrong. My watch stopped.” Nyx’s violet eyes flared brighter. “It always does here. Minutes fold. Or stretch. We move while the outside holds still.” They walked deeper along a narrow trail that seemed to choose its own curves. The canopy overhead wove oak leaves with something paler, almost translucent. Light drifted down in slow curtains of green and amber, never quite still, as if the sun itself paced above them. Rory reached up. One beam slid across her fingers like cool silk. When she withdrew her hand the light recoiled, then settled again. A soft chime rang out, high and clear. Then another. Tiny seed-pods hung from slender branches, each one hollow and veined with silver. The faint stirring of air set them swinging against one another. The sound was neither music nor noise; it felt like half-remembered language. Rory tilted her head. “Those pods—they answer rain,” Nyx murmured. “Or footsteps. The Grove listens.” Further on the path opened into a small hollow. A stream cut through black soil. The water ran clear at the edges yet carried threads of molten gold along its centre, swirling and separating without ever muddying. Rory knelt again. She dipped two fingers. The liquid was cold enough to sting, yet left no dampness when she lifted her hand. Tiny golden flecks clung to her skin for a breath before vanishing. “Look.” Nyx pointed with a lengthening shadow-arm. On the far bank a cluster of flowers the colour of fresh bruises opened and closed in slow rhythm, petals flaring wide then folding shut. Each time they opened a puff of crimson pollen rose and hung like mist before drifting sideways against the gentle current of air. Rory watched one blossom swallow a floating mote of gold from the stream and then release a single clear note, pure as struck crystal. Unease pricked beneath her ribs. She kept her voice low. “Nothing here stays dead. Even the stones breathe.” Nyx’s silhouette thinned until the trees showed through. “The pocket feeds. Isolation from both courts. Mortal earth and Fae root tangled. It grows what it chooses.” They left the hollow and climbed a gentle rise. At the crest the trees parted to reveal a broader clearing ringed by more standing stones—these taller, their bark scarred with spirals and branching lines that shifted when the eye left them. In the centre stood a single yew of immense girth, its trunk hollowed enough to walk into. Silvery moss draped its limbs like counsellor robes. From deep within the hollow came a low hum, almost beneath hearing, the sound of roots drinking. Rory circled the tree. Her boots made no mark on the thick carpet of white clover that never crushed. She stopped. A single clear footprint already rested in the moss ahead—toes pointed toward the trunk—bare and perfect. No path led to it. No second print followed. Her crescent scar itched. “Someone walks without weight,” she said. Nyx condensed beside her, edges sharper now. “Her mark. She leaves none of her own yet pets the place so it remembers.” A pale butterfly, wings etched with tiny veined sigils, alighted on Rory’s shoulder. Its antennae brushed the curve of her ear as if tasting thought. Then it lifted again and spiralled toward the yew. Rory reached for the Fae-forged blade she did not yet own, fingers closing empty. The Heartstone pulsed once, harder. She drew a slow breath that smelled of crushed mint and thunder. “Deeper still.” Nyx drifted forward, sliding between shafts of that restless light. The ground sloped downward into a natural amphitheatre of living wood. Roots arched overhead like gothic vaults, every surface furred with luminous lichen. Small orbs of pale lilac light drifted free of the bark, each the size of a thumbnail and cold to the touch when one brushed Rory’s wrist. They left a brief afterimage of stars. She caught one between careful palms and opened her hands: the orb melted into a film of moisture that smelled faintly of old parchment and rain on iron. A single word formed in her mind without sound—listen—then dissolved. Further in, the air thickened. Sound sharpened. Distant laughter like glass bells drifted from somewhere beyond sight. A half-melody threaded between breaths, phrases unfinished. Rory felt her own heartbeat slow to match the Grove’s pulse. Hours might already have slipped past the stones. Her mouth went dry. “Nyx—” “I feel it too.” Their form stretched thin as paper. “The Grove tests the edges. Some who enter chase echoes forever. Others step out and the city has aged a season.” A curtain of hanging vines parted of its own accord. Beyond lay a smaller glade where water from the gold-threaded stream gathered into a shallow basin of polished black stone. The surface showed no reflection of sky or face. Instead scenes shifted beneath the glass-clear skin: a storm-lashed tower Rory did not know, a feathered mask laughing with mouthless joy, an empty road under twin green moons. Each image dissolved the moment she tried to hold it. Rory crouched at the rim. “These are memories. Or warnings.” Nyx hovered at her shoulder, substance almost smoke. “Both. The water keeps what the stones forget.” A soft footfall sounded behind them—light, deliberate, and utterly without imprint. Rory turned. Isolde stood at the edge of the glade, silver hair falling to her waist, pale lavender eyes fixed on the basin. She left the white clover unbent. The air around her felt cooler, thinner, as though she carried a fragment of the true Fae courts in every breath. “You seek the drinker of roots,” Isolde said, voice wrapped in riddle. “Yet the cup is already at your lips. What do you taste, child of two tides?” Rory rose slowly. The Heartstone flared once against her collarbone. Nyx’s form solidified at her side, violet eyes narrowed. Beyond Isolde the Grove continued—further clearings faint through the trees, lights moving in patterns that made no earthly sense. The seed-pods chimed again, softer now, like invitations. Rory took one step past the basin. The ground underfoot warmed. Fresh wildflowers unfurled in her wake, white and trembling. She met Isolde’s gaze and let the wonder and the unease settle into equal weight.
created_at"2026-07-08T19:32:46.343Z" 7/8/2026, 7:32:46 PM
model"x-ai/grok-4.5-20260708"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency443
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time53099
tokens_prompt1816
tokens_completion2450
native_tokens_prompt1906
native_tokens_completion3361
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning1766
native_tokens_cached1792
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"completed"
service_tier"default"
usage0.02129
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"0e927811-b1a8-4604-8b86-db5ce6eaa87c"
id"554aaa60-51a9-9a1f-bdf7-b7f34d21230d"
is_byokfalse
latency114
model_permaslug"x-ai/grok-4.5-20260708"
provider_name"xAI"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.18.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1783539166-J4hOwOFchPwwMkdmDkHT"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1783539166-6C8IQl6kPtKfUFdo2oSE"
upstream_id"554aaa60-51a9-9a1f-bdf7-b7f34d21230d"
total_cost0.02129
cache_discount0.002688
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"xAI"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"crystal"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"echoes"
count1
11
word"footfall"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"trembled"
2"pulse"
3"silk"
4"footsteps"
5"crystal"
6"perfect"
7"weight"
8"etched"
9"pulsed"
10"echoes"
11"footfall"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"listen"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1242
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1091
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Rory16
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone3
Hel1
Further2
Nyx10
Fae-forged1
Grove2
Fae2
Isolde4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Nyx"
3"Grove"
4"Fae"
5"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.767
windowScore0.833
48.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"trail that seemed to choose its own curves"
1"felt like half-remembered language"
2"as if tasting thought"
38.97% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.61
wordCount1242
matches
0"not with the fierce heat of a Hel rift but with a gentle thrum"
1"neither music nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean41.4
std27.85
cv0.673
sampleLengths
085
124
219
375
49
520
669
750
811
972
1079
1118
1226
1383
1450
156
1622
1765
1812
1995
2047
211
2231
2377
2410
2516
2661
2728
2846
2935
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences111
ratio0.054
matches
0"The sound was neither music nor noise; it felt like half-remembered language."
1"At the crest the trees parted to reveal a broader clearing ringed by more standing stones—these taller, their bark scarred with spirals and branching lines that shifted when the eye left them."
2"A single clear footprint already rested in the moss ahead—toes pointed toward the trunk—bare and perfect."
3"A single word formed in her mind without sound—listen—then dissolved."
4"A soft footfall sounded behind them—light, deliberate, and utterly without imprint."
5"Beyond Isolde the Grove continued—further clearings faint through the trees, lights moving in patterns that made no earthly sense."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1109
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.0369702434625789
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005410279531109108
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean11.19
std7.17
cv0.641
sampleLengths
016
112
218
339
410
514
614
75
87
912
103
1114
1211
1328
142
157
165
1715
1814
1911
2021
213
229
2311
248
252
2613
2711
2812
294
306
315
329
336
3422
353
364
3716
3812
397
4025
4123
4224
435
445
458
468
4718
489
4932
69.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.43243243243243246
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences92
matches
0"Only a soft wall of"
1"Further on the path opened"
2"Then it lifted again and"
3"Further in, the air thickened."
4"Instead scenes shifted beneath the"
ratio0.054
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences92
matches
0"She glanced back."
1"They walked deeper along a"
2"She dipped two fingers."
3"She kept her voice low."
4"They left the hollow and"
5"Her boots made no mark"
6"Her crescent scar itched."
7"Its antennae brushed the curve"
8"She drew a slow breath"
9"They left a brief afterimage"
10"She caught one between careful"
11"Her mouth went dry."
12"Their form stretched thin as"
13"She left the white clover"
14"She met Isolde’s gaze and"
ratio0.163
74.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences92
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Rory stepped between them and"
2"Patches of wildflowers carpeted the"
3"Nyx glided after her, their"
4"The transition left a faint"
5"Nyx whispered, voice a breeze"
6"Rory crouched and pressed her"
7"A slow pulse rose through"
8"She glanced back."
9"The path they had taken"
10"The Heartstone pendant at her"
11"Nyx’s violet eyes flared brighter."
12"They walked deeper along a"
13"The canopy overhead wove oak"
14"Light drifted down in slow"
15"Rory reached up."
16"A soft chime rang out,"
17"The faint stirring of air"
18"The sound was neither music"
19"Rory tilted her head."
ratio0.772
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Warm air kissed her cheeks, thick with the perfume of blossoms that had no business opening in winter."
1"Patches of wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colours: deep violet bells that trembled without wind, gold trumpets the size of her fist, and delicate…"
2"The Heartstone pendant at her throat warmed against her skin, not with the fierce heat of a Hel rift but with a gentle thrum that matched the earth."
3"Light drifted down in slow curtains of green and amber, never quite still, as if the sun itself paced above them."
4"The water ran clear at the edges yet carried threads of molten gold along its centre, swirling and separating without ever muddying."
5"At the crest the trees parted to reveal a broader clearing ringed by more standing stones—these taller, their bark scarred with spirals and branching lines that…"
6"Beyond Isolde the Grove continued—further clearings faint through the trees, lights moving in patterns that made no earthly sense."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Isolde said, voice wrapped in riddle"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.211
79.3452%