Run: 2026-07-08-01KX1KNFW10QMR275CKMT208N7

Run Details

Duration:
2m 29s
Cost:
$0.011666
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement in Soho as Detective Harlow Quinn cut through the throng of late-night stragglers. Her boots slapped against the slick concrete, salt-and-pepper hair plastered flat to her scalp. The suspect darted left down a narrow alley, black coat flapping like a wounded bird. Harlow’s lungs burned. She vaulted a overturned bin, arms pumping, eyes locked on the fleeing figure. The man glanced back once, face half-hidden under a sodden hood. He vaulted a low fence into a rear courtyard behind shuttered shops. Harlow scrabbled over after him, leather watch strap biting her wrist. Water sheeted from drainpipes, turning every surface treacherous. Her shoulder clipped a protruding pipe; she spun off it and kept going. He hit the street again, weaving between parked vans that glowed under sodium lamps. Harlow closed the gap by half a dozen paces. The man yanked open a wrought-iron gate and plunged down a flight of stone steps that vanished under the street. She followed without slowing, palms scraping the mildewed rail. The steps emptied into a service tunnel thick with the reek of stagnant water and diesel. Far ahead the suspect’s footsteps echoed, then vanished under a burst of distant music—discordant, half-heard. Harlow drew her baton. Light strips flickered overhead. She rounded a curve and nearly collided with a padlocked gate that hung open on broken hinges. Beyond it the tunnel forked. Wet footprints veered left. She took the turn at speed, coat flapping. The walls narrowed; old Tube tiles dripped black mould. A single bare bulb swung on a frayed cord, throwing shadows that leapt like living things. The suspect stood twenty metres ahead, panting, one hand braced against a rusted turnstile. He yanked something small and pale from his pocket—an irregular shard that caught the light. He pressed it against a riveted panel set into the wall. A low grinding noise rose. The stone face split along an invisible seam and slid sideways, revealing darkness that smelled of incense and cold iron. Harlow lunged. The man slipped through. The opening began to close. She jammed her baton into the gap, muscles straining. Stone scraped metal. With a final shove she squeezed after him into a vast subterranean cavern lit by oil lamps and guts of neon scribbled across vaulted brick. Stalls crowded the old platform edge. Figures wrapped in cloaks bargained over glass jars that glowed from within. The air hummed with low voices and the sharp clink of coin. The suspect sprinted along the ticket hall’s cracked tiles, weaving between tables stacked with dried herbs and black-market crystals. Harlow’s shout cut through the murmur. “Stop! Metropolitan Police!” Heads turned. Someone laughed, short and mean. The man risked a look over his shoulder and shouted back via a stall-keeper. “You need a bone token to walk here! Without it the market itself will spit you out!” The message carried, half-lost under the ambient roar of haggling. Harlow slowed three paces. Her brown eyes flicked across the throng—vendors with mirrored eyes, buyers counting out teeth instead of currency. She had no token. Memories of DS Morris’s empty desk stabbed sharp as glass; she shoved them down. Unfamiliar ground waited, walls that moved according to rules she had never studied. Her free hand brushed the baton at her hip. She tightened her grip, spat rainwater from her lip, and pushed forward. Footwear slapped wet stone behind a curtain of hanging cured skins. The suspect dove between two heavy-set sellers arguing over a cage of something that hissed with too many throats. Harlow vaulted a crate of bottled smoke. A hand closed on her coat sleeve—she twisted free without glance. Ahead the tunnel opened into a wider concourse where the old tracks lay filled with market litter. A lean man with short curly hair and olive skin blocked the path, Saint Christopher medallion resting against his collarbone. Thin scar tissue ridged his left forearm. Tomás Herrera stepped sideways, arms out, cursing in rapid Spanish under his breath before switching to English that carried the lilt of Seville. “Back off, detective. This isn’t your ground.” Harlow halted two strides short. Her jaw set sharp. Rainwater dripped from her cropped hair onto the cracked tiles. The suspect slipped past Tomás and vanished under an archway strung with dried bat wings. “Move, Herrera.” Harlow’s voice stayed flat, even. Tomás kept his arm raised. His warm brown eyes tracked her face. “He’s under my care. Whatever he took won’t kill anyone tonight. Walk away.” She closed the distance another step. Her baton tip tapped once against her thigh. “You’re harbouring a theft suspect from a double homicide. Last chance.” He’d already half-turned, body shielding the arch. Harlow feinted left. When Tomás shifted she ducked under his arm and slammed her shoulder into his ribs. Air exploded from him. They staggered together against a trestle table; glass bottles rattled and one cracked open, releasing a purple fog that smelled of rotting orchids. Tomás shoved back hard, medallion swinging. His scarred forearm barred her throat for a heartbeat before she levered free and twisted his wrist. He hissed through his teeth and drove a knee toward her midsection; she rode the blow sideways and used the momentum to spin him into a stack of canvas sacks. Loose powder erupted in a chalk-white cloud. Market stalls erupted into startled shouts. Harlow broke free and sprinted through the settling dust. Tomás recovered fast, boots ringing behind her. The suspect’s silhouette flickered under hanging lanterns further along the garage-like bay of former tracks. Vendors scrambled clear. Someone hurled a knife that clanged off an iron pillar inches from Harlow’s ear. She never slowed. The deeper market swallowed her—narrower corridors of brick arched overhead, walls lined with cages that rattled when she passed. Lamps burned lower here, flame blue and cold. The air thickened with the copper taste of spent spells. Tomás called after the detective, voice echoing from the ceiling vents. “You’ll get lost down here without a guide!” She answered only with footsteps. The suspect had slowed, limping now, left boot trailing dark droplets that might have been blood or something that glowed faintly green. He ducked right into a side tunnel where water sheets ran down narrow grooves in the floor. Harlow followed, breath steady in her chest. Tomás’s outline appeared at the tunnel mouth a second later, wet medallion glinting under a swinging bulb. He matched her pace at a slight lag, scarred arm cradled against his ribs where she’d struck him. Harlow vaulted a fallen beam. The passage twisted left, then down a brief ramp into a disused platform pavilion crowded with empty tables. Further along the rails the suspect scrambled over rusted tracks toward a spiral staircase of iron that rose into denser gloom. Lanterns dotted the higher tiers among stalls that sold locked journals and mirrored cards. The chase pressed deeper without break, rain-soaked city far above, every footfall sacred with threat.
created_at"2026-07-08T19:35:51.432Z" 7/8/2026, 7:35:51 PM
model"x-ai/grok-4.5-20260708"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency96933
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time137400
tokens_prompt1140
tokens_completion1935
native_tokens_prompt1186
native_tokens_completion1837
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning345
native_tokens_cached1152
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"completed"
service_tier"default"
usage0.011666
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"0e927811-b1a8-4604-8b86-db5ce6eaa87c"
is_byokfalse
latency294
model_permaslug"x-ai/grok-4.5-20260708"
provider_name"xAI"
status(null)
1
endpoint_id"78a73286-52c4-4d1d-9d13-c1870c25b143"
id"28bc0284-14f0-97e7-bab8-ee27dfb5dd4e"
is_byokfalse
latency104
model_permaslug"x-ai/grok-4.5-20260708"
provider_name"xAI"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.18.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1783539351-4GI3n0AbShImTDi2PJLx"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1783539351-mDII9HrBwBLCHJEAsrOH"
upstream_id"28bc0284-14f0-97e7-bab8-ee27dfb5dd4e"
total_cost0.011666
cache_discount0.001728
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"xAI"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1161
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1161
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pumping"
count1
1
word"treacherous"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"glinting"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"footfall"
count1
highlights
0"pumping"
1"treacherous"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"flickered"
5"flicked"
6"lilt"
7"echoing"
8"glinting"
9"gloom"
10"footfall"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1156
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.94% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1095
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Detective1
Harlow16
Quinn1
Tube1
Morris1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera1
Spanish1
English1
Seville1
Tomás8
persons
0"Detective"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Tube"
4"Morris"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Herrera"
8"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"English"
2"Seville"
globalScore0.769
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1156
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean44.46
std30.57
cv0.688
sampleLengths
062
155
283
367
465
578
625
73
821
917
1083
1148
1267
137
1434
157
1612
1713
1814
1911
20105
2164
2248
238
2486
2573
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs207
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences105
ratio0.095
matches
0"Her shoulder clipped a protruding pipe; she spun off it and kept going."
1"Far ahead the suspect’s footsteps echoed, then vanished under a burst of distant music—discordant, half-heard."
2"The walls narrowed; old Tube tiles dripped black mould."
3"He yanked something small and pale from his pocket—an irregular shard that caught the light."
4"Her brown eyes flicked across the throng—vendors with mirrored eyes, buyers counting out teeth instead of currency."
5"Memories of DS Morris’s empty desk stabbed sharp as glass; she shoved them down."
6"A hand closed on her coat sleeve—she twisted free without glance."
7"They staggered together against a trestle table; glass bottles rattled and one cracked open, releasing a purple fog that smelled of rotting orchids."
8"He hissed through his teeth and drove a knee toward her midsection; she rode the blow sideways and used the momentum to spin him into a stack of canvas sacks."
9"The deeper market swallowed her—narrower corridors of brick arched overhead, walls lined with cages that rattled when she passed."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1113
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.017070979335130278
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0035938903863432167
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean11.01
std5.94
cv0.539
sampleLengths
017
114
215
33
413
511
612
711
88
913
1014
119
1220
139
1416
1515
164
174
1817
195
204
218
229
2316
2414
2515
2611
275
2820
292
304
315
329
333
3425
356
3612
3712
3819
396
403
412
425
4314
4417
4510
464
4717
484
4914
59.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.37142857142857144
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners39
34.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Further along the rails the"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences97
matches
0"Her boots slapped against the"
1"She vaulted a overturned bin,"
2"He vaulted a low fence"
3"Her shoulder clipped a protruding"
4"He hit the street again,"
5"She followed without slowing, palms"
6"She rounded a curve and"
7"She took the turn at"
8"He yanked something small and"
9"He pressed it against a"
10"She jammed her baton into"
11"Her brown eyes flicked across"
12"She had no token."
13"Her free hand brushed the"
14"She tightened her grip, spat"
15"Her jaw set sharp."
16"His warm brown eyes tracked"
17"She closed the distance another"
18"Her baton tip tapped once"
19"He’d already half-turned, body shielding"
ratio0.278
21.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences97
matches
0"Her boots slapped against the"
1"The suspect darted left down"
2"Harlow’s lungs burned."
3"She vaulted a overturned bin,"
4"The man glanced back once,"
5"He vaulted a low fence"
6"Harlow scrabbled over after him,"
7"Water sheeted from drainpipes, turning"
8"Her shoulder clipped a protruding"
9"He hit the street again,"
10"Harlow closed the gap by"
11"The man yanked open a"
12"She followed without slowing, palms"
13"The steps emptied into a"
14"Harlow drew her baton."
15"Light strips flickered overhead."
16"She rounded a curve and"
17"She took the turn at"
18"The walls narrowed; old Tube"
19"A single bare bulb swung"
ratio0.876
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.09% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"A single bare bulb swung on a frayed cord, throwing shadows that leapt like living things."
1"He yanked something small and pale from his pocket—an irregular shard that caught the light."
2"The stone face split along an invisible seam and slid sideways, revealing darkness that smelled of incense and cold iron."
3"Unfamiliar ground waited, walls that moved according to rules she had never studied."
4"The suspect dove between two heavy-set sellers arguing over a cage of something that hissed with too many throats."
5"Tomás Herrera stepped sideways, arms out, cursing in rapid Spanish under his breath before switching to English that carried the lilt of Seville."
6"They staggered together against a trestle table; glass bottles rattled and one cracked open, releasing a purple fog that smelled of rotting orchids."
7"Someone hurled a knife that clanged off an iron pillar inches from Harlow’s ear."
8"The deeper market swallowed her—narrower corridors of brick arched overhead, walls lined with cages that rattled when she passed."
9"The suspect had slowed, limping now, left boot trailing dark droplets that might have been blood or something that glowed faintly green."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.4769%