| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1838 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1838 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "quivered" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "measured" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "shattered" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 191 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 191 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1829 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.48% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1809 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.05 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Heartstone | 10 | | Rory | 19 | | Moonlight | 1 | | London | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Eva | 1 | | Giggling | 1 | | Red | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Frost | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Moonlight" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Giggling" | | 7 | "Carter" | | 8 | "Frost" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.975 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 49.19% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "as if closing a fist" | | 1 | "as if listening" | | 2 | "sounded like water pouring into a metal pa" | | 3 | "looked like breached seals" | | 4 | "appeared inside this new circle, larger now, a ragged doorway of pure black" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1829 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 1.90% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 79.52 | | std | 12.46 | | cv | 0.157 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 86 | | 5 | 102 | | 6 | 73 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 78 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 76 | | 12 | 88 | | 13 | 66 | | 14 | 83 | | 15 | 78 | | 16 | 90 | | 17 | 76 | | 18 | 98 | | 19 | 99 | | 20 | 100 | | 21 | 78 | | 22 | 52 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 191 | | matches | | 0 | "been chained" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 325 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.19% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 191 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere beyond the stones a twig snapped—once, clean, deliberate." | | 1 | "That was the reason she had come—to feel the stone wake and map the nearest one before the frost sealed the ground until spring." | | 2 | "Rory eased her torch free of her pocket and rolled the beam across the trunk without switching it on—just the cold cylinder of metal for weight." | | 3 | "Matches sparked at the edge of sight—brief orange flares that died before the mind could decide what they lit." | | 4 | "It came from behind her now—impossibly behind her—though she had not heard the thing circle." | | 5 | "Then footsteps started inside the stones—soft, measured, coming straight toward her." | | 6 | "Inside the nearest hollow of bark a pale oval twin mwatched her—eyes without lids, set too wide." | | 7 | "She felt it the way one feels a storm roll in—pressure shift, hairs rising." |
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| 91.50% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 70 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "usual faint inner glow" |
| | adverbCount | 3 | | adverbRatio | 0.04285714285714286 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014285714285714285 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 191 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 191 | | mean | 9.58 | | std | 6.72 | | cv | 0.702 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 53.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.35602094240837695 | | totalSentences | 191 | | uniqueOpeners | 68 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the crunch of her" | | 1 | "Somewhere beyond the stones a" | | 2 | "Then footsteps started inside the" | | 3 | "Only the second set of" | | 4 | "Only the impression of a" | | 5 | "Somewhere the tear yawned wider." | | 6 | "Then the night closed cold" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come for the" | | 1 | "She stepped between two standing" | | 2 | "She walked to the centre" | | 3 | "She reached for the Heartstone," | | 4 | "She stared until the silence" | | 5 | "Her breath fogged in a" | | 6 | "She let it fade before" | | 7 | "She held it higher." | | 8 | "It circled the clearing at" | | 9 | "It moved sunwise, slow, patient." | | 10 | "She turned with it, matching" | | 11 | "Her throat clicked." | | 12 | "She pieced together the last" | | 13 | "She had not noticed any" | | 14 | "She noticed now." | | 15 | "She watched until her eyes" | | 16 | "She whispered to the pendant," | | 17 | "She blinked hard." | | 18 | "Her heel struck something soft" | | 19 | "She kicked it away." |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 49.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 138 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate of Richmond" | | 1 | "She had come for the" | | 2 | "The pendant rested cold against" | | 3 | "Yu-Fei had closed the restaurant" | | 4 | "Moonlight turned the gravel path" | | 5 | "Wildflowers dotted the grass even" | | 6 | "An hour inside the Grove" | | 7 | "She stepped between two standing" | | 8 | "She walked to the centre" | | 9 | "The stones loomed taller here," | | 10 | "She reached for the Heartstone," | | 11 | "The silver was cold enough" | | 12 | "A dry leaf skittered across" | | 13 | "The leaf vanished under a" | | 14 | "She stared until the silence" | | 15 | "Another snap answered it, closer" | | 16 | "Her breath fogged in a" | | 17 | "She let it fade before" | | 18 | "The Heartstone gave a single" | | 19 | "She held it higher." |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 29.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 89.29% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone gave a single weak pulse against her palm, a stutter of warmth that died almost at once." | | 1 | "She pieced together the last hour: the empty streets leading to the park, the unlocked side gate that should have been chained, the complete absence of the park…" | | 2 | "Brambles blocked it, thick as wire, their thorns already beaded with frost that gleamed like glass." | | 3 | "Cold poured out in a concentrated stream that smelled of iron and damp earth." | | 4 | "To her right a stone tilted of its own accord, leaning toward her as if listening." | | 5 | "The tear that had opened earlier appeared inside this new circle, larger now, a ragged doorway of pure black." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |